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Evaluate the lesson plan according to the following Australian Professional Standards for
Teachers. Only standards directly addressed in Designing Teaching & Learning that are
relevant to this assignment have been included. However, this does not mean the other
standards are irrelevant to lesson planning and evaluation more generally.
1.4 Strategies for teaching Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander students
1 2 3 4 Comments: This lesson in no way addresses the strategies to teach Indigenous
5 students. It shows equality but not equity.
1.5 Differentiate teaching to meet the specific learning needs of students across the full range
of abilities
1 2 3 4 Comments: According to the lesson plan, every single student in the class is
5 given the same task to complete based on the two speeches by Martin Luther
King Jr and Richard Gill.
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Evaluate the lesson plan according to the following NSW Quality Teaching model elements.
Evaluation score refer to NSW QTM Classroom Practice Guide for each element
Comments incl. evidence for evaluation score (2 sentences)
1 Intellectual quality
1.1 Deep knowledge
1 2 3 4 Comments: This refers to pedagogy focused on producing deep
5 understanding of important, substantive concepts, skills and ideas. Such
pedagogy treats knowledge as something that requires active construction and
requires students to engage in higher-order thinking and to communicate
substantively about what they are learning. The discussion, before the start of
the videos and the discussion after the Venn diagram requires deep knowledge
by the students.
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3.4 Inclusivity
1 2 3 4 Comments: The lesson includes the participation of all students across the
5 social and cultural backgrounds represented in the classroom.
3.5 Connectedness
1 2 3 4 Comments: This particular lesson shows a connectedness to school
5 knowledge that students can use in real life contexts.
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3.6 Narrative
1 2 3 4 Comments: The use of both the speeches shows the content is used to enrich
5 students understanding.
Identify the two APST standards and two NSW QT model elements you are targeting for
improvement.
APST
1) Manage Challenging behaviour 2) Assess student learning
QT model
1) High Expectation 2) Explicit Quality Criteria
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Lesson
Responds to and composes Assessment Students Student:
increasingly sophisticated responds to and
Engage personally with
and sustained texts for Formal composes increasingly
understanding, texts.
Assessment via sophisticated and
interpretation, critical Essay choices sustained texts for
Appreciate, explain and
analysis, imaginative understanding,
expression and pleasure respond to
Discussions interpretation, critical
the aesthetic qualities analysis, imaginative
EN5-1A and the power of expression and
Informal Give a language in an pleasure EN5-1A
interpret, analyse and moving speech increasingly
evaluate how about certain effectively uses and
sophisticated range of
different perspective of social justice issue critically assesses a
plaguing school. A texts wide range of
issue, event, situation, choice of many processes, skills,
individuals or groups are Develop and apply
issues. strategies and
constructed to serve specific contextual knowledge knowledge for
purposes in texts responding to and
Analyse and explain the composing a wide
(ACELY1742) ways language forms range of texts in
and features, different media and
ideas, perspectives and technologies EN5-2A
originality are used to
review, edit and refine selects and uses
shape meaning. language forms,
students' own and others'
texts for control of content, features and structures
Analyse ideas,
of texts appropriate to
organisation, sentence information, a range of purposes,
structure, vocabulary, perspectives, contexts audiences and
and/or visual features to and ideologies and the contexts, describing
achieve particular purposes ways they are presented and explaining their
and effects effects on meaning
in increasingly EN5-3B
demanding, sustained i
(ACELY1747,
maginative, informative effectively transfers
ACELY1757)
and persuasive texts. knowledge, skills and
understanding of
Explore real and language concepts
imagined (including into new and different
contexts EN5-4B
virtual) worlds through
close and wide reading
and viewing of
increasingly demanding
texts.
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Cross Curriculum themes & General capabilities Explicit subject specific concepts and skills
Indigenous Studies (Stan Grants moving speech Students are completing a unit on speeches to
about the environment and Indigenous people on identify and explore the purpose and effects of
YouTube) different text structures and language features.
Sustainability (Stan Grants speech on the Students will have prior knowledge of types of
environment and its impact on Indigenous people. texts and their purpose.
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13 mins Richard Gills Teacher: Observes students. Walks around to make Teacher
speech is played sure everyone is focused
Conclusion A recap of Teacher: A recap of what the purpose of the video Teacher
whats been was. Students work in groups on the Venn diagram.
10 mins covered today. Students are told about the assessment.
A Venn diagram Student: Group work. Students choose their
with discussion assessment questions and participate in the
in groups. discussion via the Venn Diagram.
Explanation of Resources: Books and pens
the assessment
choices and
students pick
their assessment
and inform the
teacher what they
intend to do. Let
the students
know the teacher
has high
expectations
from the
assessment.
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Academic Justification
The original lesson plan for English was too ambiguous. The lesson was to be taken in two parts,
over two periods yet the lesson plan did not state which bit was to be taken during which period. It
gave a broad overview of the lesson plan. There was scope for improvement especially with
managing challenging behaviour, high expectation, explicit quality criteria and assessing student
learning.
Standard 1.2.1 and Standard 1.2.2 were addressed by incorporating the additional component of
assessments and adding another video. According to Weimer (2011), giving students some choice
about which assignments they will complete or letting the students decide how much the
assignments will count in grading scheme are learner centred strategies that help develop student
responsibility for learning. Students were given a wide range of options to choose from for their
assessment enabling them to have a little control over their learning. Once the assessments have
been graded it is important to provide individualised feedback and not just a generalised comment.
The original lesson plan did not specify any strategies to manage challenging behaviour so in the
new lesson plan has the teacher pausing for short discussions in between videos. The teacher also
observes and moves around during the video as to observe that everyone is focused on their task.
communications, warmth and support and one that is likely to enable productive, enjoyable
activities to occur hence, the discussions amongst peers and with the teacher. Another major
preventive discipline for classroom is inclusivity. Arthur-Kelly (2006), claims that a possible
solution is to plan for diversity, variety and versatility in your lessons. By incorporating an
additional video by an Indigenous person, the lesson can cater for this as well.
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The second area that needed change was assessing student learning. Teachers are advised to use a
number of assessment techniques (Haney & Madaus, 1989). The lesson plan has the direct
observation technique where the teacher observes the students whilst they are working in groups
and whilst watching the video. At the end of the lesson, students choose their assessment which is
performance based. This refers students to a variety of tasks and situations in which students are
given opportunities to demonstrate their understanding and applying knowledge, skills and habits of
The third aspect of the lesson plan that was changed was the high expectation. The lesson plan did
not explain or specify the expectation of what was to be achieved. So the modified lesson plan has
specified in the beginning of the high expectations of all students which are communicated, and
conceptual risk taking is encouraged and rewarded. Teachers must convey confidence in their
students by letting them know that they believes in them and use positive language. According to
the Highly Effective Teacher, teachers must convey their confidence in their students, give them
Another important implementation was the addition of another video by Stan Grant, a recognised
Indigenous person. This video connects with the cross curriculum and shows the power of text and
audio closer to home. This is important because it represents a diverse range of texts and caters to
the diversity of the classroom. Differentiated classrooms is a valuable concept to study ways of
catering for individual differences. A teacher provides specific ways for each individual to learn as
deeply as possible (Tomlinson, 1999). In this aspect the teacher provides equity and not equality.
The final major change in the lesson plan was the explicit quality criteria. Quality learning
environment refers to pedagogy that creates classrooms where students and teachers work
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productively in an environment focused on learning. The lesson plan did not state whether an
explicit criteria was given to students but the modified plan focuses on that when assessments are
chosen by students. The assessment task set for the students should provide explicit criteria for the
quality of work students are expected to produce and those criteria are reference points for
assessing student work. The teacher provides explicit criteria for what is to be produced and the
criteria turns out to be a regular reference point for the development and assessment of student
The lesson plan was modified to make it more interesting and entertaining for students. It was used
to show inclusivity and cater for cross curriculum areas like Indigenous education. The areas that
the original lesson plan was weak in got modified so that the latter plan had more strengths. The
teacher must be responsible in making sure every individual student in her class meets the learning
outcomes. Ignacio Estrada once said, if a child cannot learn the way we teach, maybe we should
teach the way they learn. The lesson plan was modified in order to teach students and as teachers it
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References
Clark, M., & Pittaway, S. (n.d.). Classroom Management. In Marsh's Becoming a Teacher (6th ed., pp.
211-224).
https://syllabus.nesa.nsw.edu.au/assets/englishk10/downloads/englishk10_s5.pdf
Haney, W., & Madaus, G. (1989). Searching for alternatives to standardised tests: Whys, whats and
https://fwpsstage5.wikispaces.com/quality_teaching-framework
Quality Teaching to support the NSW Professional Teaching Standards. (n.d). Retrieved September
p.schools.nsw.edu.au/documents/10079662/10085935/quality_teaching_framework.pdf
Weimer, M. (2011, June 21). A Role for Student Choice in Assessment. Retrieved September 17,
choice-in-assessment/
What does it mean to have high expectations for your students. (n.d.). Retrieved September 17, 2017,
from http://thehighlyeffectiveteacher.com/what-does-it-mean-to-have-high-expectations-for-your-
students/
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