Nguyen Thanh Son Ga chien 9

Topic : Parents expect their children to spend long time studying both in and
after school and have less free time.What are the positive and negative effects
on children and society ?
Nowadays, in several countries, parents want their children to use the majority of
their time studying and have less leisure time. I ??? sao em ko vit nt m bi??? Formatted: English (United States)

Spending long time studying is beneficial for children. Hard-working students will
defenitely be likely to have a great performance at school and can easily achieve
high scores in exams or earn good credits from their teachers. Learning will not be
a burden for them and they will go to school with confidence and happiness, while
other classmates are struggling to understand what the teacher is saying or
finishing their homework. Furthermore, spending a great deal of time on studying
also means that children will not have time for their bad habbits such as playing
video games, and watching TV, which parents really expect their children to avoid.
Getting used to non-stop studying from a young age are thought to be crucial for
childrens future because it will help them better adapt to the pressure of learning
in the university as well as working in big companies.
Besides some undeniable benefits, long time studying can have negative effects on
children. Children will be vulnerable to eye vision problems if they come to
closely to their book while studying. Also, children who only know to study will Commented [H1]: Awkward!

find it difficult to communicate with others or make develop/establish relationships

because they lack social skills. Isolating children from the world outside for too
long can lead to mental problems such as overstres ands, autism. Take Japan as a Commented [H2]: Autism thng th do gen di truyn
hn l do mi trng!
typical example for this. Every year, many Japanese young students commit
suicide because they have to much stress and pressure with their learning and
exams.
In conclusion, I think it is necessary for children to spend more time studying but
they should have a balance between learning and outdoor activities. Commented [H3]: Em cha thc s ni l c c li v hi
m thy c cm gic em a ra solution th ng hn!
Well-done!