Year 11 Framed Narrative Peer Review:

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Does it follow the positive, negative, positive, or past, present, past, or inside, outside, inside or vice versa structure?
Structure.
Is the middle twice as long as the first and last paragraphs?

Is there a reverie or a flashback to create a snapshot in time?

Does the narrative use sensory imagery? (visual, olfactory, gustatory, audible, tactile/kinaesthetic)
Language:
Does it contain figurative language? (simile, metaphor, personification, alliteration, onomatopoeia)

Is the tense clear?

Tense: Is the tense consistent in each paragraph?

Does it change according to structure?

Mood: Does the framed narrative convey a strong sense of mood?

Style: Is parataxis (a running sentence that uses conjunctions rather than punctuation to give each idea in the sentence equal
importance) used?

What did you enjoy about the story?

What could be improved?