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Synopsis
When tiny Jeremy falls out of his nest and is brought home by the family cat, he is only a few days
old. Luckily, Jeremy is a fighter and as the weeks go by he grows stronger and stronger, until the
time comes when he must say goodbye.
Summary of task
Students had previously learned how to write a recount, learning about the structure and features of
this type of text. In particular, the importance of giving details about what happened, including who
was involved, when and where the event took place, and what may have resulted.
Students were read the story Jeremy and asked to write a recount retelling the series of events
that happened in the story. Before writing, students were read the story twice and engaged in a
think-pair-share discussion about what happened in the beginning, middle and end of the story.
The parts of the achievement standard targeted in the assessment task have been highlighted.
Writing
Students create a range of imaginative, informative and persuasive texts including pictorial
representations, short statements, performances, recounts and poetry.
When writing, students use familiar words and phrases and images to convey ideas. Their writing
shows evidence of letter and sound knowledge, beginning writing behaviours and
experimentation with capital letters and full stops. They correctly form all upper- and lower-
case letters.
Foundation
Above Satisfactory ANNOTATIONS
Comments:
This writing sample demonstrates a good understanding of the structure and features of a recount. Details
about when, where, who and what have been provided in sequential order. The student has demonstrated
the ability to add meaning to a sentence using an adverb, eg. finally. To progress further, the student could
include more descriptive detail and focus on when to use capital letters (ie using the M.I.N.T.S acronym).
This writing sample demonstrates characteristics of work typically produced by a student performing above
the expected standard.
ANNOTATIONS
Foundation
Satisfactory/ At level
Comments:
This writing sample demonstrates a sound understanding of the structure and features of a recount. Some
details about who, where and what have been included but not expanded upon. Attempts at using full stops
and capital letters have been made. To progress further, the student could develop their writing by placing
text on the lines and revising their use of capital letters. This sample demonstrates characteristics of work
typically produced by a student performing at the expected standard.
ANNOTATIONS
Foundation
Below Satisfactory
Comments:
This writing sample demonstrates no awareness of the features of a recount. There is some sense of
directionality in the writing, but the letters are unclear and there is no spacing. There is no evidence of
capital letters or punctuations. This work sample demonstrates characteristics of work typically produced by
a student performing below the expected standard.
Reflective Statement:
Applying criteria and standards when making judgments and how judgements were made:
When designing the assessment task, I front-ended the task, constructively aligning the curriculum,
learning outcomes and the assessment. Research posits this approach as ensuring that valid and
reliable assessment tasks are connected with learning outcomes when planning a learning
sequence (Biggs & Tang, 2010). I created a rubric as an assessment instrument which
encompassed targeted areas of the English curriculum that the students would be required to meet.
These descriptions outlined the expected qualities of student work below level, at level and above
level and was the basis for judging how well the students can demonstrate what they know,
understand and can do. During this process I collaborated with my mentor teacher to ensure that
the developed assessment task would provide reliable evidence of student learning and that it was
sequenced as a part of their overall learning continuum.
The below standard sample of work demonstrated that the student was unable to meet the criteria in
the rubric and when comparing these results since the start of term two it was evident that there had
been little progress. This resulted in a discussion with my mentor teacher about measures to be
undertaken to personalise the learning for this student and the potential for an ILP to be created to
attempt to increase his progress with basic writing skills (i.e. letter formation, pencil grip, spacing
etc.). On the opposite end of the spectrum, the above achievement level students work
demonstrated a significant increase in student learning over a short period of time. This identified
areas where this students learning could be accelerated and measures taken to ensure that their
needs were being met.
The assessment data for the student who was below level provided clear evidence that little
progress had been made since the last writing sample. Next steps included ensuring that the
student has additional support when attempting writing (THRASS charts, writing prompts etc.),
discussing the possibility of developing an ILP with discussions with parents. Using intervention
processes that the school has to meet the students needs and assist in targeting letter formation
and sounds (interventions such as LLI).
References
Biggs, J., & Tang, C. (2010). Applying constructive alignment to outcomes-based teaching and
learning. In Training material for quality teaching for learning in higher education workshop
for master trainers, Ministry of Higher Education, Kuala Lumpur (pp. 23-25).
Hattie, J., & Timperley, H. (2007). The power of feedback. Review of educational research, 77(1),
81-112.
Klenowski and Wyatt Smith (2014): Ch. 4: Alignment and front-ending assessment, p. 50-71
Klenowski, V., & Wyatt-Smith, C. (2014). Assessment for Education: Standards, Judgement
and Moderation. London, Los Angeles, New Delhi, Singapore: Sage