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number of advantages to host country. However, some claimed that this trend
lead to tension rather than mutual understanding between people from various Commented [AL2]: subject-verb agreement
culture. In my opinion, I agree with this opinion. Commented [AL3]: various cultures
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There are a huge of negative sides that global tourism causes tension for host opinion twice.
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country. Firstly, language barriers are biggest problems when travelling abroad. followed it a huge amount
Also you made mistake of subject-verb agreement.
For instance, if visitors who are not able to speak English travel from Asia to
Western countries and they find difficult to express their desire to foreigners Commented [AL6]: find it difficult to do something
To begin with, cultural clashes can occur due to the differences in languages,
lifestyles and values, cultures, ethnic and religious groups, and levels of prosperity.
Comprehend a culture is a matter of long time and most of the cases tourists have
limited time to know about the culture of host country. Veiling of women is a
good example here. In Islamic countries, women strictly maintain veil in order to
respect their values and religion. Sometimes this leads to tension when a tourist
mistakenly acts contrary to this norm. Tourists behavior and customs may cause
hostility due they have little knowledge about the communicating pattern of the
local people. For example, Bengali people are very friendly and have a warm
relationship with foreigner and they expect that tourists act as they behave. This
kind of difference causes harm on harmony and creates annoyance to local
people. In addition, difference between languages might translate into
misunderstanding. Moreover, religious groups may violently react when sacred
sites and objects are not be respected as they are perceived as goods to trade.
From what has been discussed above it can be said that international tourism
creates tension rather than celebration for many differences. Personally, I believe
that knowing adequate information about the host country and open minded
attitude can create a friendly atmosphere and enhance international
understanding. Finally, some pigeonholes have to be smashed in order to build
mutual communication.
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