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Pilar Alessandras popular book, Th e C o f f e e B r e a k S c r e e n w r i te r ,
the
was a bestseller because it taught writers how to do something few coffee break
thought possible write a script ten minutes at a time. screenwriter
With this new book, she again shows writers how to expand their skills
by challenging the established rules of screenwriting. In this small
but powerful guide, Pilar discusses every major screenwriting rule,
revealing why it exists and when writers should break it. The result?
Breaks
A script crackling with creative surprises!
the Rules
A succinct, clear guide find and polish the diamond hidden in your script!
Jen Klein, writer / co-producer, Greys Anatomy, Star
Living proof that rules are meant to be broken often and with glee!
Rich Fulcher, writer, Rick and Morty, Snuff Box, The Mighty Boosh, Disenchantment
Pilar Alessandra started her career as a senior story analyst BREAKS THE RULES
at DreamWorks SKG. In 2001, she opened the Los Angelesbased
On the Page Writers Studio, dedicated to consulting with and educating
screenplay and TV writers. Pilar hosts the On the Page Podcast, further
discussing many of the writing tips and techniques covered in her
renowned The Coffee Break Screenwriter. An in-demand speaker, shes
traveled the world teaching writing, and leading seminars at studios
including Disney Animation, ABC, CBS, and MTV. www.onthepage.tv
The author acknowledges the copyright owners of the motion pictures from which single frames
have been used in this book for purposes of commentary, criticism, and scholarship under the
Fair Use Doctrine.
INTRODUCTION xi
CHAPTER 1:
WHERE DO THEY GET THIS STUFF? 1
Where do these rules come from and why are
they there?
CHAPTER 2:
VOICEOVER AND FLASHBACK AND WALL
BREAKING . . . OH MY 4
The Rule: Never use voiceover.
The Rule: Never use flashback.
The Rule: Breaking the fourth wall is a no-no.
Other rules discussed: Dream sequences and fantasy
sequences.
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viii THE COFFEE BREAK SCREENWRITER BREAKS THE RULES
CHAPTER 3:
LETTING YOUR CHARACTERS RUN WILD 14
The Rule: The main character must be likable.
The Rule: Your main character must have an arc.
The Rule: Characters need to verbally reveal their
backstory.
The Rule: Character description must be physical.
Other rules discussed: Only one main character. Main
character must save the day. Main character cant die.
Gay and transgender tropes.
CHAPTER 4:
SAY WHAT YOU MEAN, MEAN WHAT YOU SAY 29
The Rule: Dont write long dialogue scenes.
The Rule: Speaking directly is on the nose.
Other rules discussed: Subtitles and parenthesis.
CHAPTER 5:
FREEDOM FROM FORMAT 41
The Rule: Scenes must begin with proper
scene headers.
The Rule: Never add emotion to action description.
The Rule: Never describe what cant be seen.
Other rules discussed: World-specific terminology.
Naming characters. Camera direction. Script length.
CONTENTS ix
CHAPTER 6:
NEWS FLASH: THERE IS NO STRUCTURE JAIL 56
The Rule: The story must be linear.
The Rule: Act breaks and events must fall on
certain pages.
Other rules discussed: Readers passing on scripts due
to structural issues.
CHAPTER 7:
WHAT NOT TO WRITE... AND OTHER RULES
THAT DONT HOLD UP 65
The Rule: Write what you know.
The Rule: You have to write in one form and
one genre.
The Rule: Producers only want scripts with white,
male, leading characters.
The Rule: Producers only want scripts with characters
under the age of fifty.
Other rules discussed: The need to live in LA. Age
of screenwriters. Period pieces. Writing sequels and
trilogies. Scripts about politics and religion. What
readers want.
CONCLUSION:
RULES ARE MEANT TO BE BROKEN 82
Acknowledgments 84
xiii
xiv THE COFFEE BREAK SCREENWRITER BREAKS THE RULES
1. WHY IT EXISTS
2. WHY YOU SHOULD BREAK IT
3. HOW TO BREAK IT
4. HOW BREAKING IT CAN BREAK BAD
5. WHO BROKE IT BEST
OR
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There are no rules in filmmaking.
Only sins. And the cardinal sin
is dullness.
Frank Capra
CHAPTER 1
1
2 THE COFFEE BREAK SCREENWRITER BREAKS THE RULES
No.
VOICEOVER AND
FLASHBACK AND WALL
BREAKING . . . Oh My
4
VOICEOVE R AND FL ASHBACK AND WALL B RE AK ING . . . Oh My 5
THE RULE:
NEVER USE VOICEOVER
WHY IT EXISTS
WHY BREAK IT
HOW TO BREAK IT
THE RULE:
NEVER USE FLASHBACK
WHY IT EXISTS
WHY BREAK IT
HOW TO BREAK IT
or
THE RULE:
BREAKING THE FOURTH WALL IS A NO-NO
WHY IT EXISTS
HOW TO BREAK IT
FRANCIS
Shes wary. I can see it in her
eyes.
(and now to the camera)
Walkers political capital rises
or falls with the success of this
bill. And I need to be at the
center of it.
From House of Cards by Michael Dobbs
FLEABAG
(to camera)
Shes uptight and beautiful and
probably anorexic, but clothes
look awesome on her.
From Fleabag by Phoebe Waller-Bridge
LETTING YOUR
CHARACTERS RUN WILD
14
LETTING YOUR CHARACTERS RUN WILD 15
THE RULE:
THE MAIN CHARACTER MUST BE LIKABLE
WHY IT EXISTS
WHY BREAK IT
HOW TO BREAK IT
THE RULE:
YOUR MAIN CHARACTER MUST HAVE AN ARC
WHY IT EXISTS
WHY BREAK IT
HOW TO BREAK IT
an agent who kills for his job, but end the movie bent
on avenging the woman he loves. This all proves that
people really can change even though sometimes it
takes forty-four years of movies to get them there.
THE RULE:
CHARACTERS NEED TO VERBALLY
REVEAL THEIR BACKSTORY
WHY IT EXISTS
WHY BREAK IT
HOW TO BREAK IT
THE RULE:
CHARACTER DESCRIPTION
MUST BE PHYSICAL
WHY IT EXISTS
WHY BREAK IT
HOW TO BREAK IT
From Alfred Hitchcock and the Making of Psycho (aka Hitchcock) by John J.
McLaughlin
From Damages by Todd A. Kessler & Glenn Kessler & Daniel Zelman