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Evidence not Pass Learner is Learner is Evidence and General Comments
Unit 1 provided Achieved working at a working at the i.e. Observation, video, essay etc
higher level highest level
R S G E If evidence is missing, note requirements.
You hae submitted a satisfactory weebly page which is good in parts. I like the way you have evaluated throughout, this is particularly
pleasing. You evidence purpose within the groups work and explain and justify your decision making well.
You have also evidence well-presented storyboards and I particularly enjoyed the way you evaluate effectiveness and evidence the things
you have learned from each process.
Your production skills are definitely satisfactory. You benefitted from the scenes being well shot which evidences a group taking care and a
solid thought process behind your work. Your edits cut well and as you have said in your evaluation, run smoothly. They could benefit
though from a bit more adventure with regards to pace, effects, colour and sound. This is absolutely fine though and something you can
improve over the course of the year.
You evaluation is detailed and you have covered every episode well. You have a tendency though to write as you speak and often describe
things as ok and/or alright. These words are difficult to quantify so please avoid using them and try to be succinct and definitive with
regards to the effectiveness of what youve done. Youve also failed to discuss health & safety and risk assessment in enough detail.
That said though James, you have taken care to evaluate throughout and presented a portfolio which evidences the potential you have as
well how much you do care about ensuring the quality of what you do. With further practice you can absolutely achieve excellent results.
Well done.
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Risk Assessment
Location Recce
Development Points
Please ask if you dont understand how to submit your assignments as requested.
Take what you have learned and apply it to an independent project.
Complete Location Recces and Risk assessment to a detailed standard.
Follow Evaluation Guide to ensure you cover whats required.
Continue to practice and experiment more with editing techniques.
Use audio recorders for sound to ensure consistent levels of quality.
Simon Weintroub
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