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Structure of a Personal Narrative Essay

Narrative is a term more commonly known as story. Narratives written for college or personal
narratives, tell a story, usually to some point, to illustrate some truth or insight. Following are some
tools to help you structure your personal narrative, breaking it down into parts.
The Hook Start your paper with a statement about your story that catches
the readers attention, for example: a relevant quotation, question, fact, or
definition.
Set the Scene Provide the information the reader will need to understand the
story: Who are the major characters? When and where is it taking place? Is it a
Introduction story about something that happened to you, the writer, or is it fiction?

Thesis Statement The thesis of a narrative essay plays a slightly different

role than that of an argument or expository essay. A narrative thesis can begin
the events of the story: It was sunny and warm out when I started down the
path; offer a moral or lesson learned: Ill never hike alone again; or
identify a theme that connects the story to a universal experience: Journeys
bring both joy and hardship.

Show, Dont Tell Good story telling includes details and descriptions that
help the reader understand what the writer experienced. Think about using all
five sensesnot just the sense of sightto add details about what you heard,
saw, and felt during the event. For example, My heart jumped as the dark
shape of the brown grizzly lurched toward me out of the woods provides
more information about what the writer saw and felt than, I saw a bear when
I was hiking.

Supporting Evidence In a personal narrative, your experience acts as the

evidence that proves your thesis. The events of the story should demonstrate
Body the lesson learned, or the significance of the event to you.
Paragraph
Passage of Time Writing about the events of your experience using time
chronologically, from beginning to end, is the most common and clear way to
tell a story. Whether you choose to write chronologically or not, use transition
words to clearly indicate to the reader what happened first, next, and last.
Some time transition words are next, finally, during, after, when, and later.

Transitions In a narrative essay, a new paragraph marks a change in the

action of a story, or a move from action to reflection. Paragraphs should
connect to one another. For example, the end of one paragraph might be: I
turned and ran, hoping the bear hadnt noticed me, and the start of the next
might be: There are many strategies for surviving an encounter with a bear;
turn and run is not one of them. The repetition of words connects the
paragraphs. (What does the change in verb tense indicate?)*

The Moral of the Story The conclusion of a narrative include the closing
Conclusion action of the event, but also should include some reflection or analysis of the
significance of the event to the writer. What lesson did you learn? How has
what happened to you affected your life now?

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Outlining Your Narrative
Try applying this structure to your own writing: write sentences for the corresponding
elements of your introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion in the space provided below.
Introduction:
Begin your paper with a
As a girl, have you ever had a childhood dream about finally becoming
hook that catches the
P an adult? Like a fairy godmother waving her magic wand, transforming
readers attention and set the Cinderella into a magnificent princess? For as long as I could remember,
A scene. Where is the event set? I always dreamed of having a bigdebut party for my 18th birthdaya
R What time of year? How old traditional Filipino rite of passage.
A were you when this happened?
.
1 State your thesis: what you You do not need a fancy party to feel special on your birthday. As long
learned, or how the event is as you have loving and supportive family and friends, your life feels
significant to you. complete.

Body paragraphs: write three significant moments from the beginning, middle, and end of the event.
Para. 1: Topic sentence: I had a long held dream of having a fancy debut party. Note:
P Beginning Detail 1. Dont forget
A Action
Attending my cousins and friends debut parties to Show,
R
A Detail 2. Dont Tell:
. Planning my party theme and who would be in my entourage List sounds,
2 Detail 3. smells,
Asking my parents for a party as my 18th birthday came closer sights, tastes,
Para. 2: Topic sentence: My family and friends surprised me in school. and textures
P Middle Detail 1. that you
A Action remember.
Unsuspectedly attended the weekly NHS meeting
R Your
A Detail 2.
My family and friends in the classroom with a balloon and flowers
experience is
.
3 Detail 3. your
Watching a homemade video and receiving flowers from friends evidence.
Use
Para 3: Topic sentence: I appreciated the surprise my family and friends made for me. transition
P End Detail 1.
A Action words to
Crying while watching the video and receiving flowers mark the
R
A Detail 2.
passage of
. Thanked everyone for the surprise time.
4 Detail 3.
My family and friends were happy that they pulled off the surprise

P
Conclusion:
A Analyze and reflect on the
I realized that I may have been selfish in not thinking about how expensive
R action of the story, including a debut party would have been for my family. I loved the simple surprise
A how the events are significant from my family and would not have changed it for the world. Having
. to you. wonderful family and friends is all a person needs.
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*Verb Tense: Reporting vs. Reflecting The events of
Writing Strategies to Consider
most narratives are told in past tense: As I hiked, I felt
First Person vs. Third Person Narratives are a mode of the warm sun on my back. Use present tense when
writing in which writers often use first person perspective reflecting on the events: Now I know how unprepared I
(I saw, I did). Check with your instructor to determine was. Notice the change in tense in this sentence as the
whether you can use I when telling your story. writer reflects on the past event, from the present.