On the other hand er por e ak side er manus jon ki logic dey seita bola lagbe , tumi ak ta side er manus

der chinta vabnar description diso but eita to already introduction e bola hoye gese. Tomar uchit chilo
oi side e jara ase tader akta logic dewa. Thn oi logic ta k explain dewa. Furthermore and in addition
diye notun point add kore, but seita kore only akta point 3/ 4 line e explain kora hoye gele er por jokhn
arekta sister point add kore tokhn. Look at my body paragraph. I used all the info u gave but arranged it
in a nice way.

On the other hand, supporter of the formal teaching of values and morals to school children focus on
the standardized teaching and comfortable environment school provides. By this we mean that, in a
school, experienced and qualified teacher can teach norms and social rules to all the children
irrespective of their social background . students can practice their skills such as taking responsibility ,
working in a a group etc in the comfortable environment of school which may not be available in some
homes due to unstable family or other issues . thus school can play a vital role by preparing the future
citizens of a country by teaching them in a standard way in a comfortable environment .
Ai paragraph ta aktu guchano hoyeche. First dui ta line fix korte hobe. “ on the other hand, those who
support home schooling of manners and ideals consider parents to be the role model of a child “ ai vabe
dui ta line k choto kore ami akta line banaisi, and ai ta akta topic sentence . akhon ami eita explain
korbo je ken tara role model. Why parents role model ?? reason gula hoilo child onk time spend kore
parents der sathe, ak dom baccha kal theke parents der dekhe dkhe boro hoi , emotional support . so
aita kivabe lekha jai ? ……… since birth , a child learn about the world and the society by copying their
parents , and this trends continues when a child enters social life and start to incorporate the culture
and norms of the society , rules and regulation and social values. As children spend most of their time
with their parents, parents are the first and most influential teacher of a child who can help them to
become a responsible citizen of a country. For example, many social scientist believe that, the
Scandinavian tradition of teaching a child about social values first and then sending them to formal
school is the main reason of the high success rate of these countries in many social and economic
parameters . this certainly seem to support the view that parents are best suited to teach their children
about being a good member of the society. ( AI Line ta onk valo hoise )