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Kati Vaughan
Abstract
Academic disciplines can tackle the same topic; however, they would do so from
different perspectives and utilize different forms of evidence. When looking at the topic of social
media, the article “The Relation between Media Multitasking, Intensity of Use, and Well-Being
perspective while the article “Election Campaigning on Social Media: Politicians Audience, and
the Mediation of Political Communication on Facebook and Twitter” by Sebastian Stier analyzes
social media in the political realm. After analyzing both pieces of academia, it is evident that the
types of conventions and evidence used in Hatchel’s article creates a better argument as a whole
rather than Stiers. Both are exemplary pieces of work for their field of academia and analyzing
them along their fields guidelines, one cannot say one or t ether is better, however from an
Just like a song writer has a purpose behind his or her lyrics or a children’s author has a
purpose behind the lesson he or she is trying to convey to the audience, works in academic
disciplines have a purpose behind their writing as well. Whether it is to persuade or inform, each
academic discipline states a claim or argument that they present to their peers and support it
through a plethora of evidence. The chosen evidence reflects the priorities and conventions
utilized in the given academic field which, as a whole, creates a reliable, credible and valid
argument that other scholars in that field of study will agree with. Furthermore, it is evident that
academic disciplines take different angles of approach to a topic even when they are analyzing
the same one. This idea is apparent in the psychology article “The Relation between Media
Adults” by Tyler Hatchel where the topic of social media is brought to the surface and analyzed
through a psychological lens while the political science article “ Election Campaigning on Social
Media: Politicians Audience, and the Mediation of Political Communication on Facebook and
Twitter” by Sebastian Stier analyzes social media in a political realm. However, when looking
through a critical lens, Hatchel’s work has a more thorough argument than Stier’s due to the
Professionals in the field of psychology tend to observe the behavior of individuals along
with looking deeper into the mind and thinking behind that said behavior. Psychology primarily
relies on studies which further theories that explain our cognitive and behavioral actions. When
called to study the topic of social media, professionals in this field looked into the question of the
what effects social media have on emerging adults in our society. In the article “The Relation
Diverse Emerging Adults.” by Tyler Hatchel, the author utilizes statistical and theoretical
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evidence to attack the question at hand. They came to the conclusion that “intense digital media
use may be problematic for some youth's psychological well-being, but also beneficial for other
youth” (Hatchel, 2018). To attempt to answer this, these scholars set up a study which questioned
a diverse group of college students to see the correlation of social media use and the well-being
of oneself; They came to conclude “intense digital media use may be problematic for some
youth's psychological well-being, but also beneficial for other youth” (Hatchel, 2018). By
utilizing countless charts and graphs which highlight their data they thoroughly supported their
finding. For this specific scientific discipline, statistical evidence is the logical path to follow
because it clearly outlines the data produced from the study. Other psychologists reading this
work can easily analyze the data and make sense of what it says along with knowing its valid and
reliable. A sense of reliability and validation are established due to the utilization of concrete
facts which can be referred to if needed. Not only does the statistical evidence create validation
and credibility, it is also established through the author’s use of theoretical evidence that calls
upon other psychologist’s work and theories proven. Solely looking at the reference pages
(Hatchel, 2018, p.122-123), the audience can see that the ideas and theories presented in the
article are backed up by countless other psychologists who also studied and proved their claim to
be true. For instance, the author pulls information from J. J. Arnett’s book “Emerging adulthood:
A theory of development from the late teens through the twenties” which gives their claim a little
more backbone and strengthen. For the specific field of psychology, utilizing theoretical and
statistical evidence poses a hard argument to disagree with and makes it harder to disprove if
Professionals in the field of history and political science tend to analyze political theory
and behavior throughout history and use it in today’s political realm; A wide array of evidence is
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utilized in this discipline to support the arguments being made. In the article “Election
Communication on Facebook and Twitter” by Sebastian Stier, it addresses the question of how
social media platforms interact with political campaigns and what topics are proposed to the
public. To attempt to answer this question, Stier and his colleagues knit picked social media
sites, such as Twitter and Facebook, and closely look at the language presented and created a
study just as the psychology discipline had done. Even though this discipline also utilizes
statistical analysis, the main two pieces of evidence found in this source are analytical and
textual evidence which prove to be more effective for their audience of politicians who heavily
rely on the idea of “who said what”. On page 64, they have a whole section of research dedicated
to “Analysis at the Word level” which delves into the deeper meaning behind the words, phrases,
and language utilized by politicians on social media. They directly pulled common words from
these sources, found on pages 60-61, which revealed how politicians use Twitter and Facebook
to draw in different crowds and try to gain support from the mass audience (Stier, 2018). Along
with analytical evidence, the author also uses textual evidence to gain more credibility for their
claims and findings in the study. Stier makes his findings stronger by directly quoting other
politicians, researchers, and a plethora of researches which delve into social media in a political
campaign. As seen on pages 58-63, Stier and his colleagues use textual data such as charts in
order to convince the audience that this information is correct and reliable. All of these combined
have the intention to further support the claim “that social media is not an ideal data source for
information to locate parties in an ideological space” (Stier, 2018). By using textual and
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analytical evidence, other politicians who would be reading this are able to trust the findings in
Both of these articles were successful in presenting their information through their chosen
evidence however there are always holes in arguments. Looking from an outside perspective it is
easier for the reader, who is not associated with that scholarly field, to knit pick the work and
find weaknesses that lie within it. As stated above, Hatchel’s article heavily relies on statistics
and theoretical evidence which allows it to gain credibility and validity in the eyes of their peers;
nonetheless, numerous weaknesses can be overlooked with this type of evidence. Despite
statistics presenting hard facts, it can also be deceiving through the way it is presented to its
audience. If an author wants to omit part of the data collected, they could easily cloud it by
providing a plethora of information which can lead the audience to overlook the flaws within the
data. The data is in the palm of the author and they could highlight only the things that agree
with what they are arguing which creates a flawed argument. Also, they could easily skew the
graphs and tables to their liking and convey a different message than what the data actually
presents. Despite these flaws, the information presented still is strong and built upon hard facts
which is hard to deny. Theoretical data is backed up by numerous accredited scholars who came
to the same conclusion which again is very reliable and hard to deny by anyone who reads it. Just
as the psychology article, Stier’s political science article is also successful in the presentation of
its information. As noted above, Stier utilizes statistical data however primarily uses analytical
and textual evidence; By utilizing analytical and textual evidence, the authors claim is more
believable, however this evidence references other professionals in their field whose beliefs can
be biased. It makes sense as to why Stier would quote other professionals in this discipline, for
their views on these topics would prioritize what he is trying to argue versus someone who might
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not in another field of academia. Even though Stier pulls quotes from other pieces of work, at the
end of the day it boils down to the fact that those are merely opinions and bias. Someone can
easily disagree with what they are saying or can easily find another source that says the contrary.
Again, Stier’s argument is well supported for its field however, as a whole, someone reading
from an outside view can easily see that these are opinions and can discredit the argument easier
analyzing social media from numerous outlets and taking on a well-rounded argument with a
plethora of hard evidence. Even when looking at the title of the psychology article, “The
Ethnically Diverse Emerging Adults”, there are three main points that are being analyzed to
come up with a common argument which reveals how well rounded the argument is compared to
Stier’s. The political science article “Election Campaigning on Social Media: Politicians,
Audiences, and the Mediation of Political Communication on Facebook and Twitter” solely is
looking at how election are proposed to different audiences on only two different social media
platforms; Looking at this from a surface level, this is a solid argument however it is attacking
the topic from one perspective versus the three in the psychological article. Stier and his
colleagues analyze an abundance of linguistics and language on each social network site which,
in turn, supports their argument; However, these scholars only do this with Twitter and Facebook
while there are other forms of social media that cover campaigns as well; Branching out could
have brought more support to their argument as a whole and created a more well-rounded
argument with less holes. As previously stated, by utilizing more textual and analytical evidence
a reader could easily disagree with what someone was claiming despite the credibility of them. It
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would be exceptionally easier for someone to find a counterargument to a quote than for concrete
data and statistics. Furthermore, it is evident Hatchel’s article, which utilizes theoretical and
statistical data, creates a more thorough, strong, and reliable argument in comparison to Stier’s.
Again, for each field of academia, Stier and Hatchel create compelling arguments that are
effective and appeal to their intended audience, however from an omniscient point of view there
Hatchels argument in “The Relation between Media Multitasking, Intensity of Use, and
Well-Being in a Sample of Ethnically Diverse Emerging Adults” develops a more thorough and
Audiences, and the Mediation of Political Communication on Facebook and Twitter” primarily
due to the evidence utilized. Though Stiers argument did have a compelling argument supported
through analytical and textual evidence, Hatchel’s argument better supported itself through its
use of statistical and theoretical evidence along with approaching the issue of social media and
how it effects the minds of the youth from different angles. Writing for a specific discipline
poses an unwritten format that scholars in each field follow even if that evidence is not the
strongest in terms of every academic field, however for their own discipline it could speak
wonders. Furthermore, the purpose behind an author’s decision to utilize certain conventions,
which in the readers eyes could strengthen or weaken the argument, is all situational. Looking at
analyzing it from a psychological perspective it may not be as sound as the reader thinks; Again,
it is all situational. It is evident that it all depends on what audience the reader falls into; for the
purpose of this assignment, it is clear that the evidence utilized is the key to a compelling and
solid argument.
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Resources
Hatchel, T., Negriff S., & Subrahmanyam, K. (2018). The relation between media multitasking,
Stier, S., Bleier, A., Lietz, H., & Strohmaier, M. (2018). Election Campaigning on Social Media: