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measure.The quantitativemeasureis perfectly Pound commentson his own linesas "cross cut"
regular,and accent is used melodicallyin oc- and says theyare "totallydifferent, and a differ-
casional opposition to the meter.16"The light entmovementofthewater,and inferior."'2'
therealmost solid"'7 formshalf a line of iambic The standard which Pound was trying to
trimeter(countingin the Greek way), with a break, a standarddeterminedby the singleele-
dactyl in the thirdplace. Pound's very famous mentof accent,did not comeinto Englishverse-
line "What thou lovestwellis thytrueheritage" writinguntil fairlylate, one supposes shortly
(Canto LXXXI) plays its accentual rhythmoff after the "bump" began to assert its pre-emi-
against the quantitativemeter: the accents all nence in musical execution.Musicians for 150
fall on shortsyllables.The meterof the line is years after1750 played the musicof J. S. Bach
regulariambic,witha spondee,and the tribrach and his predecessorswithtotal disregardforthe
in the last place. conventionsof its redaction,in spite of ample
How welldid the moreliberalmediumassume contemporary explanationof these conventions,
a traditionalpoetic function?A distinctionthat viz., the writingsof Quantz. J. S. Bach and his
the poets have traditionallysoughtis to approxi- predecessorsdistinguishedmainnotesfrompass-
mate in their own tongues Homer's onomato- ing notes by lengtheningthe main note. As per
poetic 7rapa'tlva 7roXv46Lof8o0Loo
iaXaofo-s (Iliad GiulioCaccini:
I.34). We mayconsidera briefcatalogueofimita- Written: Played:22
tionand variation.Virgil:
qualisubi alternoprocurrens
gurgitepontus
nuncruitad terram scopulosque
superiacit unda
spumeusextremamque sinuperfundit harenam,
nuncrapidusretroatqueaesturevoluta resorbens
soxafugitlitusquevado labenterelinquit... RenaissanceEurope and ElizabethanEngland
(Aeneid,xi.624-628) wereveryconsciousofthe practicesofthe classi-
Gavin Douglas: cal poets.Shakespearemusthave been at least as
Lykeas theflowand sey,wythfludisrude acutely aware of the quantity of words as of
Nowruschisto thelandas it warwode, theiraccent.
Andon theskelleisat thecostisbay Andsucha floodofgreatness
fellonyou
Vpswakis fastthefomywallisgray, (I HenryIV v.i.48)
Andwythhisjawpiscoverisin and out
The farsandisourthebayabout; An ifwelive,we liveto treadon kings;
Nowwythswyft fardgoisebbandfastabak, Ifdie,bravedeath,whenprinces diewithus!
That withhisbulrandjaschisand outswak (1 HenryIV v.ii.86-87)
Wythhimhe sowkisand drawismonystane,
Andlevisthestrandis schaldandsandisplane.'8 The tideofbloodin me
Hathproudly flowedin vanitytillnow:
Browning: Nowdothit turnand ebbbackto thesea,
Andwhenwavebrokeand overswarmed, and,sucked Whereitshallminglewiththestateoffloods
To boundsback,multitudinously
ceased... 19 Andflowhenceforthinformal majesty.
(2 HenryIV v.ii.129-133)
Yeats:
Whopacedin theeve by thenetson thepebbly I havelongdream'dofsucha kindofman,
shore.20 so old and so profane
So surfeit-swell'd,
(2 HenryIV v.ii.53-54)
Shakespearewrote"multitudinousseas incarna-
dine," but that rathermore suggeststhe huge,
16 "Rememberthe SWAT muststrainagainsttheduration
now and again, to maintain the tension," Letters,p. 262.
slow-breathing movementof the sea, if it be in- 17 "Canto 93," Section: Rock-Drill85-95 de los Cantares
tended at all for marine onomatopoeia. Yet (Milano: Vanni Scheiwiller,1955), p. 88.
Shakespearealso discovered 18 PoeticalWorks(Edinburgh,1874), iv, 57.
19 "Aristophanes'Apology,"Poems (Boston,1895), p. 629.
Themurmuring surge 20 "The MeditationoftheOld Fisherman,"Collected
Poems
That on theunnumber'didlepebbleschafes (New York: Macmillan,1956),p. 21.
(Lear,iv.vi.20-21) 21 Letters,
pp. 274-275. Pound giveshis owninterpretation
Pound's linesrun of the originalHomericeffect:"the turnofthe wave and the
scutterofrecedingpebbles."
theimaginary 22 ArnoldDolmetsch,The Interpretation oftheMusic ofthe
Auditionofthephantasmalsea-surge XVII & XVIII Centuries(London: Oxford Univ. Press,
("HughSelwynMauberley," Personae, p. 202) 1946),p. 71.
Pound foundinternalrhymeagain in the ancient souls whomno change can invade"-"The Ex-
Chinese Shih Ching songs which he translated, tasie.")
and the styleradicallyaffectedthe techniqueof Yet in theClassicAnthology Pound is verysure
his versification.Often enough the poets who of his closingrhythms.In the poem beginning
composedthose old odes, many of whichare in "Pheasant cock flieson easy wing" (p. 15), the
lines of four syllables,rhymedon the thirdor meteris regularfor the firstthree stanzas; the
penultimatesyllable. When Pound went on to sixthand tenthlinesare used likemonometer in a
"english" Sophocles' Womenof Trachis,he at- Greeksong.The poet identifies his closeby alter-
temptedto capturesomeofthelyricchorusesin a ing that meter in "conscienceless" and "not
modifiedChinesepattern: covets."It preparestheauditor'sear and thereby
KUPRIS bearstrophies away. bringsthe ode to a moresatisfyingconclusion.63
Kronos'Son,Dis and Poseidon, Such anticipationof the close is an essential
Thereis no one device in the art of song writing.ArnautDaniel
shakerunshaken. variesthefifthand eighthlinesto markthe close
Intodustgo theyall. ofthestanza in "Lancan son passat li giure":
NeathHer theymust Sus el entrecimon poma,
giveway. La florse li chaneil clarquil
TWO godsfought fora girl,
Battleand dust!
Mightofa Riverwithhorns M'enseignon c'ab joi m'apoigna,
crashing. Sai al tempsdel'intran d'april."
Fourbullstogether (The troubadoursachievedthefinalcloseoftheir
Shallno mantether, longersongs with codas.) The Greek poets, in
Akheloosneither,
lashingthrough Oneudai. assemblingsystemsof trochaic,iambic, or ana-
pesticmetersacatalectic,closedthesystemwitha
Kuprisdecides catalecticline: the catalexiswas used to indicate
To whombrides the close,to solve the song.In the strophein the
fall. Frogs beginning raTcra/Lv irpos&v6p's 'fo-, Aris-
tophanesendswiththelines:
Whoshallhaveher? lrbt7rar6tas
juoQ(ZbcoiP
To staveherandproveher, roVs xopoVS roVS7rpoYOloVS.
Cowlesscalflost,
Hurtledaway, (11.533-549)
prizedfora day? Campion indicatesthe approach of his close in
(WOT,pp. 23-24). "Fain would I mylove disclose" by varyingthe
meteras Daniel did:
Closingrhythms. Shelley,writingwitha work-
man's ease ofhis craft,definedthefunctionofthe Wisesheis,and needsmustknow
Allth'attempts thatbeautymoves:
regular plan of metric "which would include Fayresheis,and honoured so
underdeterminateformsthe varied pauses" of a That she,sure,hathtryedsomeloves.
style.5"Pound once emergedfromhis door in If withloveI temptherthen,
Washington,the rapid beating of a stripped- T'is butherduetobedesired:
down metronomeaudible behind him. "God Whatwouldwomenthinkofmen
damn it," he said to his visitors,"I've wasted If their werenotadmired?
deserts
fortyyears listeningto the clicks that thing Total Sound of the Poem
makes, instead of the pauses between the
clicks."52 Pound has, as a criticremarked,devotedmost
Pound had serious trouble with his middle
51 "A Defenceof Poetry,"Prose Works,ed. H. B. Foreman
closes in Langue d'Oc: "Defeat / Or luck,I must
(London: 1880),iii, 107.
have myfill";" . . . thatLove goes out,Leaving 52 Anecdotetoldby Rudd Fleming.
me no powerto hold him"; " . . . Wantingonly 63 Anotherindicationof the translation'smusicalqualities
what/ No man can get or has got." (We are able is to be foundin the excellenceof the terminalsounds: tone
in Donne to hearthemiddlecloseswhereverthey ..., moon, pain,... -the use of consonance across the
rhymes.The rhymeswereevidentlyplannedout in advance,
should occur: "Might thence a new concoction as therhymeswerein ArnautDaniel's songs.
take / And part far purer than they came"; "1U. A. Canello, La Vita e le Operedel TrovatoreArnaldo
" . . . For th'anatomiesof whichwe grow/ Are Daniello (Halle, 1883),p. 98.
When Galilei,Corsi, Caccini and Jacopo Peri There should be great national interest in
"invented"the opera,theywereactuallyexperi- Pound's presentationof "the Adams dynasty."
mentingwitha revivalof Greekdrama. But they Yet
(or theirsuccessors)attendedto thesongand did Numbers ofsmallbirdsfromtheshore
not,evidently,perceivethe necessityforkeeping instanttheylighton a ship
up a beat in the non-singingsections.The recita- dropasleepfromexhaustion
tivo is a formaldecadence,and Whitmanshould (CantoLVX, p. 116)
not have imitatedit. To use a predecessor'scom-
promiseas an excuse for not hammeringyour are about the onlylinesin the sectionthat move
own verse into bettershape and more solidity, us immediately,and this may be froma fortui-
whichPound has done in adoptingthis element tous sympathy.Homer's catalogueof the armies
fromWhitman,is not what we expectofa classi- breezesby in comparison(Homer anywayparo-
cal artist.WhenWhitmanactuallywentout and dies the dullnessof his directoryless than 200
heardthe birdssing,the resultsweremuchmore lines later: a&La ri3 ye xcad aiOt7ro-Xot6Tv' 'irovro
interesting: "Soothe! Soothe! Soothe!" in "Out of Iliad iii.143). Pound has providedus with the
thecradle,endlesslyrocking,"is preciseimitation notes of a very eruditeman on Adams' papers;
of bird-song.Whitmanhas foundan effectpar- yetjust to theextentthattheworkfailsto match
ticularto his languageand subject. The secretis his master's definition,it fails as poetry "que
in thediphthongalglide,and the musicaleffect is nichilaliud est quam fictiorethoricamusicaque
posita."I'
about likethis:
Chinese.Later in theCantoswhenPound seems
even more "to be improvisingat sightfroman
unknownGreekmasterpiece,"thereis a principle
of organizationat workwhichretainsour inter-
est,even ifwe do not understandit analytically.
Such an effectwouldbe thedespairoftranslators The precisionsin the later cantos derive more
intoa Continentallanguage. fromthe tension between ideas than between
Pound operated earlierin the Vorticistprin- syllablesor "feet." Pound is movingcloserto the
ciple,"so to concentratethe mindon a particular definition of 'style' as "the absolute subjugation
rhythm,definedplane, or arrangement of colors, of the details of a given workto the dominant
that it becomes more sensitive to all other will; to the centralurgeor impulse";6'he is more
rhythms,definedplanes, etc." For the purposes nearlyrealizingGoethe's maturewish "auf die
of metricalanalysis,this could be the structural Hauptsache losgehen," and he could not have
principleoftheCantos.As a principleit functions done it earlierin thepoem.Pound's studiesofthe
perfectly wellrightup to Canto LXII. The firmer Chineseclassicshave inspiredand sustainedhim
metersof Cantos xvii, xxxvi, xxxix, and XLV in this articulation,and these classics probably
echo across the weaker metersof Cantos xix, gave him the originalidea forthis technique.It
XXXVIII, XLI, and XLVI, and conferon themform fitsin withhis expressedaim as poet "to charge
and validity.The subtlerarticulationsof these words with meaning to the utmost possible
latter cantos would not be possible as poetry degree."62
withoutthe harderarticulationsof xvii, xxxvi, Pound foundin theverbalrelationsof Chinese
XxXIX,and XLV. Yet in theAdamscantos,the a key he had soughtand not foundmanyyears
poet has pushedhis techniquebeyondits durable earlierin Tacitus: Pound imitated Tacitus for
limits. There is no "hardening"in the section, fiveyears,to the "ruin" of his prose,"tryingto
thereis too largea gap fromthelast firmmetrical writeEnglishas Tacitus wroteLatin" (Letters, p.
expression,and our appreciationis confuted: 87) in a search for compression,compactness.
W.A.C.H. Dobson has inventedtheterm"rule of
"TO THE GOVERNOR AND THE COMPANIE
economy"to explainthe compressionin classical
whereon ThomasAdams Chinese. Dobson describesits operationas fol-
19thMarch1628 lows: "One of the most distinctivelinguistic
18thassistant whereofthesaidThomasAdams
(abbreviated) 60 Dante, "De VulgariEloquentia," ii, iv, Le Opere,a cura
MerryMountbecomeBraintree, a plantationnear M. Barbi et al. (Firenze:R. Bemporad& Figlio,1921),p. 341.
Weston's. 61Pound,Gaudier-Brzeska: a Memoir(London: JohnLane,
Capn Wollanston's becameMerrymount." 1916),p. 89.
(CantoLXII, p. 87) 62ABC, p. 36.