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cover image: Grampians (Gariwerd) National Park, Victoria | Michael Boniwell

THE WILDERNESS SOCIETY STYLE GUIDE — CONTENTS 1

Table of 1 Introduction
1.1  Our identity
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3.4  Standard spelling
3.4.1 Accents
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contents
1.2  Our history, purpose and values 3 3.4.2 Capitalisation 26
1.3  Our communication principles 4 3.4.3 Prefixes 28
3.5 Language 28
2  Visual style guide 7 3.5.1 Acronyms 28
2.1  Our logo 7 3.5.2 Ampersand 28
2.2  Our images 12 3.5.3  Collective nouns 28
2.3  Our colours 16 3.5.4 Contractions 29
2.4  Our font 17 3.5.5  Have or has 29
2.5  Our production principles 18 3.5.6  Over, more than 29
2.6  Our templates 19 3.5.7 Places 29
3.5.8 Trademarks 30
3  Written style guide 21 3.5.9  Web and email addresses 30
3.1  Top 10 points 21 3.6  Dates, time, numbers, measurements 30
3.2  Document standards 22 3.6.1 Dates 30
3.2.1 Bolding 22 3.6.2 Time 31
3.2.2  Digital text 22 3.6.3 Measurements 31
3.2.3 Italics 22 3.6.4 Numbers 31
3.2.4  Line and paragraph spacing 22 3.7  TWS-specific terminology 33
3.2.5  Text alignment 22 3.7.1  Talking about ourselves 33
3.2.6 Underlining 22 3.7.2  Talking about others 33
3.2.7  Widows and orphans 22 3.7.3  Talking about the government 34
3.2.8  Word spacing 22 3.7.4  Talking about plants and animals 34
3.3 Punctuation 23 3.7.5  Talking about places 34
3.3.1 Apostrophes 23 3.7.6  Talking about the Indigenous 36
3.3.2  Bulleted lists and numbered lists 23 culture
3.3.3 Colons 24
3.3.4 Commas 24 4 Annexes 45
3.3.5  Ellipsis points 24 Commonly misspelt words 45
3.3.6  Exclamation marks 24
3.3.7  Full stops 24
3.3.8 Hyphens 25
3.3.9  Quotation marks 25
3.3.10 Semicolons 26
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image: Former Wilderness Society Director, Bob Brown, at a protest action against the Franklin Dam. | The Wilderness Society archive
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1 Introduction 1.1 Our identity 1.2 Our history, purpose


and values
Communication is about more than just words
and pictures — it’s about identity.
Our history
At The Wilderness Society, we know that effective
communication is about making a connection The Wilderness Society was formed in 1976 by a
with our audience — a connection that lets them small group of volunteers committed to protecting
share our ‘idea of nature’ and identify with our the ‘wilderness’ values of south-west Tasmania. Our
vision for Australia’s natural places. involvement in the campaign against plans to dam
Tasmania’s Franklin River soon saw our group — and
The Wilderness Society is a one-of-a-kind our ‘idea of wilderness’ — gain a national profile.
organisation. We all have a stake in defending its
image, safeguarding its legacy and expressing its As our first director, Kevin Kiernan, once said,
unique identity in the best way possible. “There was a sort of gut feeling about what
wilderness was. There was a sense of not being
“The idea of wilderness needs no defence. It only constrained, of being able to climb to the top of the
needs more defenders.”— Edward Abbey, American nearest hill and look out across a landscape where
essayist and author. you didn’t see damage.”

This guide is designed to help you create written By 1980, under the directorship of Dr Bob Brown,
and visual content that follows The Wilderness we extended our reach and began campaigning for
Society approved style for images, spelling, the protection of natural places all over Australia.
grammar and punctuation. Bob was later elected to the Tasmanian Parliament
and is best known for his role as leader of the
Our aim is to help you communicate with Australian Greens.
stakeholders and the broader public in an
effective and consistent way which compliments The Wilderness Society has been a key player in
brand guidelines. Australia’s most famous environmental campaigns,
including old-growth forest protection in Tasmania,
Wild Rivers legislation in Queensland, and
opposition to Woodside’s proposed gas hub in the
Kimberley region of Western Australia.
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Today, with member and supporter numbers in 1.3 Our communication • We’re responsive and strategic.
the tens of thousands, our organisation is one of
the biggest and best-known environmental NGOs principles • We ensure that all our communication is
in line with The Wilderness Society’s
in the country. overarching objectives.

Our purpose and values We are passionate


We are accessible
• We communicate with energy, honesty
The Wilderness Society’s long-term vision is to
and passion. • We never hide behind hyperbole, ‘campaigner-
transform Australia into a society that protects,
• We strive to convey the revelatory, wondrous speak’, or confusing acronyms — our powers of
respects and connects with the natural world
and awe-inspiring nature of the Australian persuasion lie in our ability to be honest and
that sustains us. Our conservation framework is
environment. clear.
a science-based, long-term initiative to maintain
and restore ecological connections, flows and • We appeal to people’s emotions and inspire • We choose simple words over complicated
processes across the entire Australian continent. them to act. We really care. language to ensure readability and
comprehension.
This involves protecting the best of what is left • We use images to ‘reach out’ and tell our story.
We are credible
of Australia’s natural environment, restoring • We make sure what we say is logical and
important wilderness areas, and promoting • We’re proudly independent. We act on our complete, but we believe that less is more — 
understanding about the connections that principles and put our ‘money where our if we can sum it up using fewer words, we do.
exist between species, climate, people and the mouth is’.
landscape. • People trust us. We maintain a professional,
consistent style and use Australian (as opposed We are united
The Wilderness Society is founded on peaceful to American) spelling. We use language that • We’re champions of grassroots and
direct action and the power of people to make is respectful, culturally sensitive and gender community-based change, but we’re united
change. We are committed to success when it neutral. as a single organisation with a national brand,
comes to protecting Australia’s environment.
• We produce all our communication materials narrative and agenda.
in a sustainable, ethical manner. • We strive to maintain a strong and consistent
We value our organisational independence and
we believe in compassion when dealing with visual identity across our whole organisation.
stakeholders and each other. Our organisation We are purposeful We are quick to protect our organisational
supports Indigenous people’s land and sea rights, reputation and the integrity of our brand.
• We choose action over complacency and we
and we’re committed to proper and detailed
frame our work in a positive way. We have clear We speak with a single voice.
consultation with Traditional Owners before and
science-based objectives and we’re
during our campaigns.
focused on solutions.
image: Volunteer Geraldine | The Wilderness Society by Jerry Galea
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2 Visual style 2.1 Our logo


guide Our logo is steeped in history.

The ‘green triangle’ is a widely recognised symbol


for environmental work, while the silhouettes
of native flora and fauna mark us as a distinctly
Australian organisation.

Our logo is our most important visual asset.


It’s our organisation’s signature and acts as a
guarantee of credibility and integrity.

Print Digital

7mm 30 px

PMS 356C or C100 M0 Y100 K40 #006600 or R0 G102 B0


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1. Reproducing our logo 2. Sub-brands


Our logo is a Registered Trademark that is used
under licence. It can only appear on publications Official sub-brands of The Wilderness Society like
or material produced by us or on external ‘Forever Wild’, ‘Wild Endurance’, etc., are always
materials with our permission. passed through the proper approval processes.

We’re careful to maintain the integrity of our logo:  We include The Wilderness Society logo to the
right of any sub-brand logo with approximately
• We never change or alter it. half the triangle’s width space between them.
• We maintain our unified, national identity by
Example:
avoiding ‘state-specific’ versions of our logo.
• We only reproduce our logo in black, white or
The Wilderness Society green (PMS 356C).
• Wherever possible, we try to include our
website address alongside our logo. (We print
our website address in Source Sans Pro Bold).

Example:
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3. Incorrect use of the logo


The following are examples of incorrect use of the
logo. Do not use the logo as displayed here:

Do not use green logo on green. Poor logo treatment over image.

Logo has been modified/distorted. Logo has been modified/distorted.


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4. Correct use of the logo


The following are examples of correct use of
the logo across a spectrum of applications —
on colour, black and white, and photography:

The logo on The Wilderness Society colours The logo on photography


Please ensure the white or reverse logo is used Please ensure the white or reverse logo is used
when colour printing the logo on The Wilderness and placed in a corner where there is a strong
Society colours (Ref: Section 2.3, Our colours). contrast between the logo and the image.

The logo on black to dark grey The logo on white to light greys
Please ensure the white or reverse logo is used Please ensure the black logo is used when
when printing in black and white on black to dark printing in black and white on white to light grey
grey backgrounds. backgrounds.
image: Wilcannia, New South Wales | Peter Elfes
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2.2 Our images 1. Choosing an image about any artwork images you want to use.
Generally, it is fine to reproduce artwork that is
• We know that images have the power to photographed in a public space/tourist area.
The old cliché is true — a picture really is worth convey complex issues clearly and quickly; so
a thousand words. we don’t address images as an afterthought.
• If we have a strong image, we show it off and
2. Finding the image
At The Wilderness Society, we’ve been using
use it big — we’re not afraid to let an image
images as a way to iconise wild places ever since • When it comes to sourcing images, we
take up a whole page of a document.
Peter Dombrovskis’ Rock Island Bend was chosen ‘shop local’ as a first port-of-call by using
as a symbol for the Franklin campaign. • If we have a less than strong image we use it our online Resource Library
anyway. We believe that pictures are better (resources.wilderness.org.au),
Decades on, big and beautiful wilderness images than no pictures. However, quality is always especially useful for great landscape shots.
are still the cornerstone of our visual identity. important.
• Another useful hint is to ask our contacts and
• We think about writing text for the image, talking to people on the ground.
rather than the other way around.
• We sometimes use stock photography, but
• Use people in pictures, not just visual terra we’re alert to anything that is too expensive,
nullius — landscapes devoid of humans. cheesy or inadequate.
• Ideally, we commission professional photogra-
• Demonstrate that people are part of the
phers to take shots for us. Some are willing to
solution to environmental issues.
donate their time and art for the cause or give
• Every time we use a picture of nature, we us a generous discount — but we never expect
are using a picture of someone’s traditional this or take it for granted. (The Communica-
country. While we can’t always know tions Team can make photographer recom-
the details, it is worth checking with The mendations).
Wilderness Society’s Indigenous Conservation
• We always ensure we have permission to
Team. There might be a cultural story behind it
reproduce other people’s work, and we dou-
that may add weight to our communications.
ble-check facts to ensure our sources
• When using images of artwork there are two are reliable.
Intellectual Property contexts — traditional
and contemporary. Check with The Wilderness
Society’s Indigenous Conservation Team
image: Australia’s stunning Top End | Glenn Walker
image: Bird migration, Cape York, Queensland | Kerry Trapnell
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3. Writing a caption 4. A word of caution reproduced (e.g. ‘in all Wild Rivers materials’ or
‘in all TWS materials’ etc.).
• After the headline, captions are the most-read • Using images of Indigenous people can be
• Do name and locate any artwork (e.g. rock art)
element of any communications piece, so we a sensitive issue. We only use images of
that you reproduce.
believe in investing some time in them. Indigenous people in cases where we have a
signed model release. When in doubt, we opt • Do use Resource Library images marked
• Many wonderful photographers donate their
to use images that depict Indigenous culture ‘general Indigenous use’.
work to The Wilderness Society, so we always
generally, rather than an identifiable person.
make sure they’re credited properly. • Don’t use images of people who have died,
• We’re wary of reproducing images taken from without a disclaimer (see disclaimer below).
• We format our captions as shown below:
the web as they’re generally not the right
• Don’t use images of special or sacred places
IMAGE: Title | Photographer’s name quality for print (images require a resolution of
without permission.
300dpi for printing).
Note: A caption starts with the word IMAGE • Using any images (from the web or otherwise)
in bold and small caps (print) or bold and without explicit permission can constitute a 6. Image disclaimer
upper case (online) followed by a colon. breach of copyright, so we always ensure that
The title of an image and the photographer’s we have ‘usage rights’ from the photographer Use this image disclaimer wherever applicable:
name are separated by a vertical bar. (particularly for wildlife photography).
If unsure, find another image. Advice: Aboriginal and Torres Strait
Example: Islander viewers are advised that this [web
• We avoid using pictures of dead animals,
IMAGE: Mount Wellington, Tasmania | Creative page/booklet/brochure etc.] may contain
as many people find them distasteful and
Commons images, names (and voices) of people who
distressing. When we do use dead animal
are deceased.
images it is to illustrate a specific threat (e.g.
• If there is a complete sentence in the caption,
fish caught in a trawling net).
then use full stop at the end of this sentence.

Example: 5. Image dos & don’ts


IMAGE: A group of volunteers protesting
at Mount Wellington, Tasmania. | Creative • Do make sure you have the consent of any
Commons identifiable people to use their image.
• Do make sure you are clear in what context(s)
the person is happy to have their image
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2.3 Our colours Primary green

The wilderness is a colourful place, and we


use our Wilderness Society colour palette
to complement the hues of the magnificent
Australian bush, not compete with them.

C100 M0 Y100 K40 PMS 356C #006600 or R0 G102 B0

Secondary green

C71 Y0 M98 K2 PMS 368C #69be28 or R105 G190 B40

Supporting orange

C0 Y68 M98 K0 PMS 165C #ff6600 or R255 G102 B0


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2.4 Our font


Heading 1, Source Sans
Using consistent fonts across all our
communication materials gives us credibility
and strengthens our visual identity. We have a
Pro Black, 30pt
responsibility to ensure that our messages are Heading 2, Source Sans Pro Black, 18pt
accessible, so our core font has been chosen for
optimal legibility. Heading 3, Source Sans Pro Black, 12 pt
Source Sans Pro and Source Serif Pro are open- Introduction paragraph, Source Sans Pro Bold, 12pt
source fonts. They can be downloaded at the
following links; Source Sans Pro and Source Pull quotes, Source Sans Pro Bold Italic, 12pt
Serif Pro.
Sub-heading in body text, Source Sans Pro Bold, 9pt
Important points:
Body text, Source Sans Pro Regular, 9pt
• For body copy, we use a 9–12 point font size.
Quotes or scientific names, Source Sans Pro Italic, 9pt
• We use variable heading sizes, depending on
the document format and design.
Higlighted body text, Source Sans Pro Bold, 9pt
• Headings for articles (print and web) should
only be capitalised on the first word and any Body text on colour/imagery, Source Sans Pro Regular, 9pt
proper nouns.
image: Title | Photographer’s name, Source Sans Pro Regular, 7pt
• Capitalisation works for short headings, but is
very hard to read in longer blocks.
For large official documents please use Source Serif Pro, 9pt.
• We use italics for scientific names, names of
publications and acts e.g. Wild Rivers Act 2005.
• When using reversed-out text (white text on a
dark background or image) we ensure enough
contrast to allow the text to ‘punch out’ and be
easily readable.
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2.5 Our production For in-house printing 4. Quantities and transportation


principles • The following papers are acceptable: It’s always cheaper and less resource-intensive to
Vision — Pure White, Fuji — Recycled Pure+, order in bulk. To reduce harmful carbon dioxide
Officemax —100% Recycled emissions and cut down on transport costs
We believe in leading by example when it comes we ensure that items are produced as close as
• For more information, refer to this link:
to sustainable printing and production. We strive possible to where they need to be delivered.
www.wilderness.org.au/sites/default/files/
to source all services and materials from socially
PDFS/paper-guide-09.pdf.
and environmentally responsible suppliers.
With our strong history of forest protection, our 5. Showing-off
supporters expect us to be particularly vigilant
when it comes to paper selection. 2. Printing We think it’s important to show people that
we’re committed to doing the right thing.
We ensure that our print suppliers use waterless We ensure that all our printed material contains
1. Choosing the right paper printing methods and vegetable-based inks. We the line ‘printed on 100% post-consumer recycled
ask our printers not to use UV varnishes or cello paper’ and, where possible, we include the
We only use paper made from 100% post- glaze as these are both extremely toxic (aqueous recycled logo.
consumer recycled waste (PCW). Paper stocks varnish is a good substitute). We avoid metallic
with a percentage of recycled material but some and fluorescent inks.
virgin content are not acceptable.
printed on 100% recycled
The following paper stocks are some of 3. Textiles post-consumer waste paper
our favourites:
When producing t-shirts, hats, banners and
For professional printing other textile products, we avoid PVC and
try to source local materials from socially
• For offset printing (coated): Cyclusprint Matt, and environmentally responsible suppliers.
EcoStar Silk & Gloss, Revive Pure Silk (Companies like www.certton.com.au supply
excellent sweatshop-free organic t-shirts with
• For offset printing (uncoated): Cyclus Offset,
bulk discounts).
Impact, Ecostar
• For digital printing: EcoStar
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2.6 Our templates • Guideline


• Procedure
The Wilderness Society has a range of newly • Operational policy
designed templates for internal and external
• Organisational policy
use. The templates are in Google format (docs or
slides), except for the letterheads which can be The Wilderness Society Newcastle Inc.
PO Box 414 Hamilton, New South Wales 2303, Australia
Telephone: 02 4962 4123

downloaded as PDF. Google Slides:


Email: newcastle@wilderness.org.au
ABN 19 069 545 489

• Presentation
1. Template Gallery
PDF: ​ ​ ​The Wilderness Society ************* Inc

Templates are available from the Template


Gallery: drive.google.com/templates. • Letterheads (all offices) Operational Policy
Policy No. TWS***OpPol- 000
(a policy # will be allocated by the TWS*** Business Manager with a suffix for any subsequent changes)

Select the Official TWS Templates category in the


Title: (a brief title that clearly states the area covered by the policy)

Objective: (describe the matters covered by the policy and what the policy will
achieve)

left-hand column. Search for your template in the Scope:

Policy:
(define who is covered by this policy)

(a series of statements succinctly but clearly stating what will be followed

list, and then click the Use this template button.


for each distinct matter within the area covered by the policy.

These statements are only the ‘rule’, not the procedure that describes how
to achieve it.

If reference to another policy, to legislation or any other document is


needed, give the reference only and never quote from another document as
the reference document may change)

Related documents in the (List only documents at a higher or the same level)
Policy and Procedure
Manual/Legislation:

2. Available templates Issues:


● Name and position of person responsible for each version of policy
● Due date for next review
● Date each version approved by NBOC or NCC (or MC for a local TWS org)
● Date each version issued to all@wilderness.org.au and loaded into policy manual

Google Docs:

• Meeting agenda
Page 1​ of 1

• Meeting minutes
• Brief
• Internal paper
• Letterheads (all offices)
• Media release
• Position description
image: Jack Thompson and John Butler at a protest action to save Victoria’s native forests. | Eli Greig
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3 Written 3.1 Top 10 points 5. Use short, simple sentences with familiar

style guide
everyday words. Less is more: if you can sum
it up using fewer words, do. In most cases,
1. House language for The Wilderness Society is you can provide a weblink for people who are
plain English. interested in the finer details.

2. Use Australian spelling. Refer to one of the 6. Use active language, rather than passive.
following dictionaries:
Example: We must address the problem
• The Macquarie Dictionary is TWS’s standard rather than The problem must be addressed.
for spelling www.macquariedictionary.com.
However, you need a subscription to access 7. Start a new paragraph for a new idea.
the online version.
• The Oxford Dictionary, 8. Define specialist terms, avoid development
www.oxforddictionaries.com. jargon, acronyms and clichés. Aim for a
readership education level of Year 8.
3. Keep language and grammar as plain and
simple as possible. Avoid the temptation The exception is when you write for a specific
to overwrite in an effort to sound more audience such as development professionals
professional. or academics; in this case, adjust the language
to suit the audience.
4. Professional communication doesn’t mean
using long words or formal language but that 9. Avoid metaphors, and do not mix metaphors.
your writing is:
10. Avoid transforming verbs into nouns.
• accurate (always double-check
your sources) Example: The group grows rice and raises
• politically correct (more on this in Section livestock to generate income rather than
3.7, TWS-specific terminology) The group is involved in rice-growing and
• logical and complete livestock-raising for income generation.
• in line with our organisational objectives.
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3.2 Document 2. Italics are also used for foreign words and the 3.2.6 Underlining
titles of publications. Use sparingly if writing
standards for the web. In general, we do not underline text.

There is no clear-cut definition of a foreign 3.2.7 Widows and orphans


3.2.1 Bolding word. If it has become thoroughly anglicised,
such as status quo, ad hoc or apartheid, it A widow is the last line of a paragraph appearing
Bold text is appropriate for headings and can be does not need italics. by itself at the top of the next page. An orphan is
used (sparingly) as a way to emphasise key points the first line of a paragraph appearing by itself at
in general text. the foot of a page.
3.2.4 Line and paragraph spacing
Widows and orphans disrupt the flow of text and
3.2.2 Digital text 1. For online text, always use the non-indented, create readability problems. Make sure that the
single spacing between lines. The single last paragraph on a page has at least two lines
1. URLs (hyperlinks) should be unbroken where spacing should be equivalent to one blank of text or move the entire paragraph to the
possible (not split over two lines). line between paragraphs. following page.

2. Email addresses should be unbroken where 2. For professionally-designed print


possible and not underlined. publications, you can choose any style 3.2.8 Word spacing
but you must use it consistently.
Use just one space after a colon, semicolon,
3.2.3 Italics Example: For a certain publication, we might comma, full stop or other sentence-closing
not leave a blank line between paragraphs punctuation mark.
1. Italics should be used to indicate: instead we indent each new paragraph.

• titles of books, newspapers, magazines,


films or reports 3.2.5 Text alignment
• an act of parliament
• legislation and legal cases Documents should be left-aligned.
• technical terms and terms being defined
• words being used in a special sense or with
a particular tone or emphasis.
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3.3 Punctuation 4. Use only the apostrophe at the end (’) of 3.3.2 Bulleted lists and
singular words ending in s with an s sound. numbered lists
3.3.1 Apostrophes Example: the boss’ car, Prof Cass’ lecture 1. If lists are whole sentences, start each item
with a capital letter and end with a full stop.
The apostrophe is used in English to: 5. Although singular in other respects,
the United States, the United Nations, Example: The study highlighted the
• indicate possession the Philippines etc., have a plural following issues:
• indicate that letters are omitted possessive apostrophe.
• indicate that the word has been contracted. • Strategy 2010 helped focus activities to
Example: The United States’ new training strengthen community-based responses.
Possession centre for first aid. • A regional focus is seen as helpful and has
been successful in some areas.
1. Use the normal possessive (’s) after Omission or contraction • There is a high degree of donor-
singular words. dependency and a lack of effective
1. The apostrophe is also used to show that the marketing to potential donors.
Example: the delegate’s report, the manager’s letter(s) is omitted.
decision, Professor Jacob’s lecture 2. Lists that are not whole sentences should start
Example: it’s (it is), it’ll (it will), I’d (I would) with lower case and only the last point should
2. Use the normal possessive (’s) after plurals end in a full stop.
that do not end in s. 2. Common mistakes: Do not put apostrophes
in decades or abbreviations which are Example: The regional conference is a unique
Example: children’s toys, people’s complaints, straight plurals. opportunity to:
the women’s hats, the
media’s attention Example: NGOs, the 1990s, OSGs, CD-ROMs • identify and analyse major challenges
• pledge to address the determinants of
3. Use the plural possessive (s’) on plurals that 3. Watch out for its and it’s: health and coordinate action
end in s, including plural names that take a • reach out to vulnerable communities
singular verb. It’s = it is or ‘it has’. Example: It’s a nice day. • tackle social exclusion and discrimination.

Example: the bosses’ cars, the Joneses’ Its = possessive. Example: The dog chewed 3. Only number points when you will be
house, Reuters’ data, Barclays’ corporate its bone. referring back to them or if the order of the
responsibility points is important.
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4. Important points when writing a dot point list: 4. Use a colon for antithesis or contrasts. 4. There are exceptions for reasons of sense, in
those cases use the comma before and. This is
• The introductory sentence before the list Example: The rich get richer: the poor called the Oxford comma.
should end with a colon. get poorer.
• All dot points should read on logically from Example:
your introductory sentence. 5. Colons are also used to introduce bulleted • The emergency kit contained jerry cans,
• Dot points should follow a consistent lists and numbered lists (Ref: Section 3.3.2: knives and forks, and blankets.
format; do not mix nouns and verbs if at all Bulleted lists and numbered lists). • I would like to thank my parents, Hillary
possible. So, if the first points starts with a Clinton, and Nelson Mandela.
verb, they all should.
3.3.4 Commas 3.3.5 Ellipsis points
3.3.3 Colons 1. The position of the comma can change the Ellipsis points (three full stops followed by one
meaning of a sentence. space) should only be used to show the omission
1. The colon is often used to introduce further of a word or words from quoted material.
information. This can be a list, explanatory Example: However, we learnt it was going to
information, examples or questions. be a slow process. Example: “Australians all let us rejoice… young
However we learnt, it was going to be a slow and free.”
2. Use a colon to separate a general statement process.
from specifics, usually putting the general
statement first. 2. Use commas after expressions of time when 3.3.6 Exclamation marks
they begin a sentence.
Example: The delegates distributed Do not use exclamation marks in serious, non-
necessary relief items: blankets, stoves Example: Yesterday, the general met a fiction writing.
and hygiene parcels. delegation from the Red Cross Society.

3. Use a colon before a whole quoted sentence, On 26 December 2004, the tsunami struck. 3.3.7 Full stops
but not before a quotation that begins
mid-sentence. 3. Do not use a comma before and in lists. 1. Use full stops in lower case abbreviations
such as e.g. and i.e.
Example: She said: “It will never work.” He Example: The emergency kit contained jerry
retorted that it had “always worked before”. cans, cutlery and blankets.
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2. Do not use full stops in upper case when the last vowel of the prefix is the same 6. The presence of a hyphen can change the
abbreviations and acronyms. as the first letter of the root word: meaning of some words and phrases (this is to
avoid potential confusion):
Example: HCH, UN, ICRC, WHO Example: re-election, part-time
Example:
3. Do not use full stops after titles such as Dr, Mr, 3. However, when a word is well known, the • the little-used car (= the car is not used
Ms, Mrs hyphen may be omitted: often) whereas the little used car (= the
small second-hand car)
4. Do not use full stops at the end of headings. Example: coordinator, cooperate • 30-odd people (= about 30 people) whereas
30 odd people (= 30 people who are odd)
5. Do not use full stops at the end of headers 4. Hyphenate compounds when used • red-and-white flowers (= flowers that have
or footers. attributively (before a noun). When using both red and white in them) whereas red
predicatively (after a noun), insert a space and white flowers (= red flowers and white
6. Do not use full stops when writing units of between words. flowers).
measurements.
Example: 7. Omit the hyphen with adverbs ending in -ly.
Example: 6pm not 6p.m.
• The out-of-date research paper or The Example: the relatively expensive drugs, the
7. Do not use full stops at the end of email research paper is out of date. increasingly active youth program
addresses or web sites except if it is at the end • An 80-year-old woman or The woman is 80
of a sentence. years old.
3.3.9 Quotation marks
5. Hyphenate adjectives composed of two or
3.3.8 Hyphens more words. 1. Use double quotation marks for direct
quotations.
1. There are no simple rules for hyphens in Example: day-to-day problems, up-to-date
English but, as with capital letters, they information, ten-year conflict, Italian- Example: “We welcome the decision,” said
should be used sparingly. However, there are speaking journalists, tsunami-affected Lyndon Schneiders.
some cases where hyphens must be used. countries

2. Hyphens are commonly used to join a prefix


or word to an existing word. Insert a hyphen
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2. Single quotation marks are used for quotes 5. When quoting someone for the first time, 3.4 Standard spelling
within quotes. introduce them before the quote.
Introduction: TWS uses Australian English.
Example: Quotations within quotations take Example: Peter Rees, head of the IFRC
single quotation marks. operations support department, says, “The The Macquarie Dictionary is TWS’s standard
IFRC is independent from the UN and does for spelling. In case this is not available you
He said, “I really meant to say, ‘I’m sorry’.” not appeal via a UN mechanism.” can refer to the Oxford Dictionary, www.
oxforddictionaries.com. If there is more than
3. The placement of question marks with quotes one spelling option, always use the first option.
follows logic. If a question is in quotation 3.3.10 Semicolons
marks, the question mark should be placed Common errors to avoid include: color, realize
inside the quotation marks. 1. A semicolon makes a break stronger than a and organization. The correct spellings are colour,
comma but weaker than a full stop. realise and organisation. To see some commonly
Examples: misspelt words, refer to Section 4, Annexes.
2. The semicolon is used to link two closely
• She asked, “Will you still be my friend?” related sentences.
• Do you agree with the saying, ‘All’s fair in 3.4.1 Accents
love and war’? 3. It can also be used to separate a series of
phrases or clauses that contain commas. Accents should be used on foreign names when
4. Periods and commas always go inside appropriate.
quotation marks, even inside single quotes. Example: The report draws on a number of
sources including: advice from the minister, Example: José Luis Rodríguez Zapatero
Example: The sign changed from ‘Walk,’ who works in Victoria; information from
to ‘Don’t Walk,’ to ‘Walk’ again within 30 The Wilderness Society; an EPA release; and
seconds. feedback from the local community. 3.4.2 Capitalisation
1. There is a trend toward minimal
capitalisation, so try to limit use of capitals to
nationalities, religions, languages, personal
and family names, acts of parliament, and
proper nouns (nouns that name a particular
person, place or thing).
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2. Overcapitalisation is common and is often (Canadian International Development Use upper case for seasons only in the title
used incorrectly for emphasis. Remember that Agency) of a publication. Red Cross Red Crescent
overcapitalisation slows down reading speed, • the Chinese government (but capitalise its Magazine, Spring 2009.
is uncomfortable on the eye, and can appear official name — People’s Republic of China)
pompous. • international humanitarian law 9. Use capitals for titles of people. Use
lower case when referring to the office or
Example: The word delegate is a simple 6. Use upper case for definite geographical appointment.
noun that should not be capitalised. If you places, regions, areas, titles and countries.
capitalise Delegate, for example, why not Example:
Refugee, Survivor, Beneficiary? Example: • He saw Prime Minister Morgan Tsvangirai.
• South East Asia • He saw the Zimbabwean prime minister.
3. Use ‘newspaper style headings’ where only • Mexico City • We met Queen Elizabeth II.
the first letter of the first word is capitalised. • the Hague • We met the queen of England.
• the Middle East • “Welcome, Chancellor Merkel.”
Example: • Western Europe (political concept) but • She was elected chancellor.
• A sustainable future for the Kimberley eastern Europe (general description) • The chief executive of the British Red Cross
• Is your paper use driving extinction? • South Africa but southern Africa is British.
• Traditional Owners: Showing support for • The Nigerian health minister was
the Wild Rivers Act. 7. Use lower case for points of the compass. elected yesterday.

4. Capitalise the names of books, films and other Example: 10. Use capitals for established labels (-isms, -ists,
major works in the usual way. Capitalise first • east, west, north, south -ites etc.).
words and all words apart from prepositions • Hospitals in the north-west of the country
and conjunctions. These should also be treat more than 1,000 patients a day. Example:
italicised. • Buddhism
8. Seasons • Christian
Example: Gone with the Wind • Hinduism
Do not use capitals for the seasons. • Islam
5. Always use lower case for rough descriptions • Leninist
or references. Example: The spring edition of Wilderness
News is out now.
Example:
• the program
• the Canadian development agency
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11. Direction 3.5 Language Example:


• Standard & Poor’s
Do not use capitals for points of the compass, • The IFRC’s principles and values
unless they are part of the official name of a 3.5.1 Acronyms department
place. Split direction should be hyphenated.
1. An acronym is a word formed from the initials 2. If you choose to use the ampersand in a title,
Example: of words in a longer phrase. When using then ensure it is used in all titles throughout
• The situation is worse in the north-west acronyms, always spell out all the words in the document.
Australia. full in the first instance with the acronym in
• The Kimberley boasts Western Australia’s round brackets at the first mention.
most spectacular coastline. 3.5.3 Collective nouns
2. You can then use the acronym alone from that
3.4.3 Prefixes point onward. 1. Some English writers use a plural verb after
some nouns with a collective sense.
1. The normal rule is to use a hyphen to avoid a 3. Do not use full stops within an acronym.
doubling of the same vowel. Example: ‘The government are...’ This is
Example: The Environment Protection incorrect.
Example: Authority (EPA) is yet to approve the project.
re-elect, pre-empt If the collective noun is a single entity, use a
but readopt, coexist, prearrange 4. Avoid the heavy use of acronyms and singular verb. This is true for all governments,
abbreviations by using words such as ‘the companies and organisations.
2. Usage has changed in recent years so that agency’ or ‘the organisation’ if it is clear what
the Oxford Dictionary and the Modern English is being referred to in the story. Example:
Usage both abandon the hyphen in cooperate, • The IFRC’s General Assembly is…
coordinate, but retain it in words such as co- • The United Nations is…
opt where pronunciation is 3.5.2 Ampersand • The Philippines is…
a problem. • The government has…
1. Do not use the ampersand (&) in general text • The management is…
unless for book titles and authors, or if it
forms part of an organisation’s name. 2. For the word ‘number’ itself.
Use ‘and’ for running text. The number of casualties is increasing by the
hour but A number of villagers are prepared
to relocate.
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3.5.4 Contractions 3.5.5 Have or has 2. Use the new form of spelling in English for
certain place names.
1. A contraction consists of the first and last 1. ‘Have’ is generally the correct word when
letters of a word (and sometimes other letters referring to plural possessives or the singular Example: Beijing not Peking, Mumbai
in between). Contractions don’t require a first person past tense. not Bombay
full stop.
Example: The Wilderness Society and ACF If in doubt, refer to the Macquarie Dictionary.
Example: Dr Lindenmayer has studied the have many shared interests.
possum for many years. 3. Only official place names should be capitalised.
2. ‘Has’ is likely to be correct when referring to a
2. Words such as ‘government’ and ‘department’ singular possessive or possessives pertaining Example:
should be spelled in full and not abbreviated to people or things other than you. • We need to protect James Price Point.
to ‘govt or ‘dept’. • The forests of south-west Tasmania are
Example: The government has strong under threat.
3. Latin shortened forms should be followed objections.
by a single full stop, while ‘e.g.’ and ‘i.e.’ are 4. Wherever possible, state names should be
separated by stops in between letters and spelled out in full and not abbreviated.
after. No comma should be used. 3.5.6 Over, more than
Example:
Example: Use ‘more than’ rather than ‘over’. • The government of New South Wales will
• e.g. (exempli gratia — ‘for example’) meet on Thursday.
• i.e. (id est — ‘that is’) Example: The earthquake affected more than • The Wilderness Society South Australia has
• etc. (et cetera — ‘and so forth’) 75,000 people not The earthquake affected over been campaigning hard.
75,000 people.
4. Watch out for its and it’s:

It’s = it is or it has. Example: It’s a nice day. 3.5.7 Places


Its = possessive. Example: The dog chewed 1. Use the standard English spelling, not the
its bone. original language.

Example: Basle, Berne, Lyons, Marseilles,


Antwerp, Hanover
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3.5.8 Trademarks Email addresses 3.6 Dates,


A trademark is a brand, symbol or word registered 1. A person’s name is not always apparent from time, numbers,
and protected by a manufacturer by law in order their email address. When quoting an email
to prevent others from using it. address as a contact, quote the person’s name. measurements
Example: Fibreglass, Land Rover, Scotch Tape Example: For more information, contact
Jessica Rose at jrose@gmail.com. 3.6.1 Dates
1. Do not use trademarks unless they are
important to the text. Use a generic 2. Add a full stop when the email address 1. Use the British date format and not the
equivalent instead. appears at the end of a sentence. American one. Format dates in the following
order and style: day month year.
Example: For more information, contact Jean-
3.5.9 Web and email addresses Charles Chamois at jc.chamois@ifrc.org. Example: 2 May 2006, 12 August 2006 not
2nd May 2006 or 12th August 2006 or August
Web addresses 12, 2006

1. Most (but by no means all) web addresses and Note: 10.12.06 means 10 December 2006 in
the online locations of documents, etc. begin Britain and 12 October 2006 in the United
with http://. Write all such addresses without States.
this prefix as it is generally assumed that the
full address will begin with http://. 2. Dates should be formatted with days and
months spelled out in full. Abbreviations
Example: www.unicef.org not http://www. should only be used in tables/lists.
unicef.org
Example: Wednesday, 12 July 2009 or 12 July
2. Use a full stop after a web address when this 2009 not Wed. 12 July ‘09
appears at the end of a sentence.
3. When using a date range with a preposition,
Example: For more information, visit use an en dash not ‘to’. Write out date ranges
www.unicef.org. in full, using an en dash (–) not a hyphen (-) to
separate the years.
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Example: From 2005–2006 not from 2005 to 3. Say midday and midnight not 12am or 12pm. • We must return 7,000 gigalitres of water to
2006 or 2005-06 the Murray-Darling.
Example: The meeting will begin at midday
The dash should NOT have spaces on not The meeting will begin at 12.00pm. 3. While using abbreviations, there should be no
either side. space between the numbers and the unit of
4. Use an en dash to show duration, not ‘to’. measurement.
Example: 1998–1999 not 1998 – 1999
Example: 2–4pm not 2 to 4pm Example: 300km, 50kg, 20ha
4. Use: the 1990s (or nineties), a woman in her
30s, her 33rd birthday The dash should NOT have spaces on either 4. In a document where a measurement is
side. repeated frequently, it’s acceptable to spell
5. When writing about centuries, use figures. out the measurement in the first instance
Example: 7–8pm not 7 – 8 pm (with the abbreviation in brackets) then use
Example: 7th century, 21st century the abbreviation (preceded by a figure) from
that point onward.
3.6.3 Measurements
3.6.2 Time 1. Except when the specific context demands, 3.6.4 Numbers
use metric forms in the Australian
1. The ‘am’ and ‘pm’ abbreviations are always English spelling. 1. Write out in full numbers from one to nine but
preceded by a figure. They should be written use figures from 10 onwards.
in lower case, without full stops, and there Example:
should be no space between the figure and • metres, litres not meters, liters Example:
the abbreviation. • tonnes not metric tons or MT (Ton = US • There were six refugee camps in the
or Imperial ton) country.
Example: The announcement came at • kilometres (km), kilograms (kg), hectare (ha) • We needed 10 trucks to make the
8.30am. • centimetres (cm), millimetres (mm) deliveries.

2. Use a 12-hour clock for writing the time. Write 2. In general text, it’s best to spell out all
7am or 3.30pm instead of 7.00am or 3:30pm measurements in full.
(don’t use colon). Don’t use the 24-hour clock
(16h30 or 16.30). Example:
• One hundred hectares of wilderness has
been protected.
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2. For millions and billions, use words if referring Example: Less than 1% of Cape York • Use country abbreviation followed by
to people or animals and use figures if Peninsula has been cleared. currency symbol to denote currencies
referring to money or inanimate objects. (A$1,000, US$1,000, NZ$1,000). Note that
6. Never start a sentence with a figure. country abbreviation/symbol to use with
Example: Write the number in words instead, or turn the Australian dollars is A not AUD.
• More than three million sea creatures will sentence round.
be threatened. • Write million in full unless m is obvious
• The $30b gas hub will ruin the landscape. Example: by the context. Use billion or b to mean a
• Seventeen children were rescued. thousand million.
3. Write million in full unless m is obvious by the • The number of children rescued was 17.
context. Use b or billion to mean a thousand Example: The $30b gas hub will ruin the
million. 7. Write out in full numbers used figuratively. landscape.

4. Also, keep in mind that: Example: I’ve told them a hundred times. 10. Telephone and fax numbers

• Figures should be used in dates, times, 8. Use commas with numbers of four digits and • Leave a space between the area code and
sums of money, ages, percentages and over in general text. the individual telephone or fax number.
measurements.
• Numbers that start a sentence should be Example: • Use brackets around the area code.
written as words. • 19,650
• Thousands should be separated with • 12,000,000 Example: (03) 9205 5555
a comma.
9. Money • Mobile phone numbers, information
5. Percentage numbers, and free call numbers do not
• There is no need to add extra zeros after the need brackets.
• Use figures with percentage sign, decimal point. Cents should be formatted
not per cent. without the dollar symbol, using ‘c’. Example:
—— 0470 343 042
Example: 7%, 8.2%, between 5 and 15% Example: —— 13 22 800
—— Wilderness Society t-shirts cost $25 each.
• The percentage sign should always be —— Less than 78c. 11. Numbers can get tricky sometimes. When in
preceded by a figure. doubt, just try to express things consistently
within a single document.
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3.7 TWS-specific 5. Where appropriate, we replace ‘The 2. When talking about another organisation,
Wilderness Society’ with ‘we’ or ‘us’. we always spell out their name correctly and
terminology in full in the first instance, and include their
6. We never manipulate our logo to include the acronym — if they have one — in brackets. The
name of a state. acronym alone is sufficient after that point.
3.7.1 Talking about ourselves
7. We capitalise every word in the names of our Example: The Australian Conservation
The organisational structure of TWS can official Wilderness Society campaigns. We try Foundation (ACF) has been a valuable partner
be difficult to grasp but when producing to speak about campaigns in a consistent way in the Tasmanian forest negotiations. We plan
communications materials there are a couple of (i.e. ‘Kimberley Campaign’ rather than ‘Gas to continue working with ACF in the future.
important points to keep in mind: Hub Campaign’).
3. The name of an organisation should be
1. We comprise of a number of separately 8. We use ‘newspaper’ headings (only the first capitalised when used in full, but not
incorporated organisations within each state, word plus any proper nouns are capitalised). capitalised when shortened.
plus two ‘national’ bodies (The Wilderness
Society Ltd and The Wilderness Society 9. Where possible, we try to frame our work in a Example:
Australia). In most cases, we like to forget all positive and progressive way. • The Department of Human Services
this and present a ‘united front’ to our external or the department
audience. Example: • Swinburne University of Technology
• The Wilderness Society is working to or the university
2. For legal reasons, we must state somewhere protect Tasmania’s forests. (preferred)
on each piece of communications material • We’re trying to prevent the destruction of 4. Gender
which specific organisation of TWS has Tasmania’s forests. (not preferred)
produced that document. But in general We should avoid sexism in language.
text we simply refer to ourselves as ‘The Accordingly, we should:
Wilderness Society’. 3.7.2 Talking about others
• substitute spokesman with spokesperson
3. We use an uppercase ‘T’ for ‘The Wilderness 1. At The Wilderness Society, we often work • where possible, avoid using gender-
Society’ even if it appears in the middle of a with others to achieve our goals, but our exclusive terms such as fireman
sentence. independence should never be seen as (use firefighter) or man-made (use
compromised. When talking about other manufactured)
4. We never use the acronym ‘TWS’ for an organisations (including governments) we • avoid stereotyping people according to
external audience. always express the nature of our allegiance in their gender.
a careful and accurate way.
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3.7.3 Talking about the government as opposed to specific politicians or 4. We avoid hyphens in animal names.
political parties.
1. We use a lower-case ‘g’ when referring to Example: The region is home to many Spotted
governments in general. Tailed Quolls.
3.7.4 Talking about plants
Example: Representatives from many levels of and animals 5. When talking about forests, we hyphenate
government will be attending the meeting. clear-felled, old-growth, land-clearing and
plantation-based, but spell rainforest and
2. When referring to a specific government, we 1. Talking about plants and animals is a great grassroots as one word.
use a capital ‘G’. way to help audiences connect with our
message, and encourage them to support our 6. When talking about threatened animals and
Example: campaigns. plants, we use ‘threatened’ as a generic term,
• The Gillard Government has been while ‘endangered’, ‘rare’ and ‘vulnerable’
supportive of the campaign. 2. When talking about plants or animals in have specific meanings, and are only used in
• The project was a State Government general, we use lower-case, but when their correct context.
initiative. talking about a specific species, we use
capital letters. 7. When talking about plants and animals, we
3. We capitalise the names of government try to ‘value-add’ and provide extra context.
departments if referring to them using their Example:
full title, but a capital letter is not required for • The chirping of birds can be heard Example: The smallest marsupial on the
a shortened name. throughout the forest. Australian mainland.
• Fewer than 1,000 Leadbeater’s Possums
Example: remain in the area.
• The Federal Court of Australia ruled in 3.7.5 Talking about places
favour of The Wilderness Society or The 3. We try to avoid scientific names when
court will reconvene next Tuesday. addressing a general audience. If we must Protecting nature is our core business. It’s our
• The Environmental Protection Authority is use scientific names, we capitalise just the job (using words and pictures) to iconise the
yet to approve the project or The authority first word. Australian landscape so that people — even
has indicated it will hold off on approval. people who may never have been to a particular
Example: The forest was populated with spot — can experience an emotional connection
4. As an independent not-for-profit organisation, Eucalyptus regnans. to it.
we’re aware that we must always be seen
to be endorsing environmental outcomes
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1. We capitalise the names of official places. 5. If an Indigenous place name is known, we use
it alongside the non-indigenous name.
Example:
• We need to protect James Price Point. Example:
• The forests of south-west Tasmania are • They travelled to Gulaga
under threat. (Mount Dromedary).
• James Price Point (Walmadan) will be
2. We also capitalise the names of places that we spoilt forever if the gas hub project is
have dubbed with an ‘official name’ as part of approved.
a campaign.
6. When referring to the planet, Earth, we use a
Example: The Great Western Woodlands are a capital letter. We use lower-case when talking
national treasure. about the world, the planet or the globe.

3. Wherever possible, we spell out state names 7. When talking about protected areas, we use
in full. capital letters for ‘World Heritage Area’ and
‘Heritage Listing/Listed’, ‘National Parks’, and
Example: The Government of New South ‘Marine Sanctuaries’.
Wales will meet on Thursday.
8. When talking about our amazing natural
4. We use lower-case for points of the compass, places, we try to ‘value-add’ and provide
unless they are part of an official place name. extra context.
We hyphenate split direction.
Example: Much-loved tourist destination
Example:
• The situation is worse in
north-west Australia.
• The Kimberley boasts Western Australia’s
most spectacular coastline.
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3.7.6 Talking about the and boundaries: www.aiatsis.gov.au/asp/ • Don’t talk as if Indigenous people are the
Indigenous culture map.html. ‘other’. Use inclusive language — remember
your audience may include Indigenous people.
• Do check spelling of people and group names
The Traditional Owners of Australia’s land deserve
with The Wilderness Society’s Indigenous • Don’t be patronising.
our respect. That’s why we strive to use the most
Conservation Team or online at www.nntt.
sensitive and appropriate language when talking • Don’t generalise.
gov.au. Some spelling has changed over time.
about Indigenous people and Indigenous culture.
Example: Rivers are important to Indigenous
• Do be sensitive to the place of totemic animals
people is not as good as The Wenlock river
1. General do’s and don’ts in traditional communities (Example: don’t
is important to its Indigenous Traditional
use traditional Aboriginal symbols) and ensure
Owners, including the northern Kaanju,
• Do use the most precise and inclusive language is not offensive.
Thaepithiggi, and Thanakwithi.
collective reference for Indigenous Australians
Example: The Wilderness Society supports
— ‘Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander Example: This area is home to Indigenous
kangaroo culls is not as appropriate as The
peoples’. This is also the term used by the groups is not as good as This area is home to
Wilderness Society supports sustainable
Australian Human Rights Commission. the Mirrar.
management of the kangaroo population.
• Do spell Indigenous with a capital ‘I’. • Don’t use acronyms unless you are writing for
• Do be sensitive to historical/political issues.
Indigenous is a short generic reference a very knowledgeable audience.
Some Indigenous audiences might find
covering all Aboriginal and Torres Strait
a reference to ‘celebrating Australia Day’ • Don’t use names or images of deceased
Islander peoples.
offensive; many Indigenous audiences people, or use a warning/disclaimer if you
• Do use a capital ‘A’ when referring to recognise that day as ‘Invasion Day’. do. Bereavement has definite cultural forms
‘Aboriginal’ communities or people, as we and protocols in Indigenous communities,
• Do use people in pictures. Wild natural
would when referring to ‘Australian’ people. and seeing images or hearing the name of a
landscapes invoke the concept of terra
recently deceased person can cause serious
• Do use a capital ‘T’ and ‘O’ when referring to nullius — an uninhabited land — which was the
offence. Please see Section 2.2 in the visual
‘Traditional Owners’. justification for colonising Australia without
style guide for the image disclaimer.
any form of treaty or agreement with the first
• Do: when talking about Indigenous Culture,
peoples. Also, we need to show that people
ensure that all content is signed off by
are a part of the solution rather than putting
The Wilderness Society’s Indigenous 2. Communicating with Indigenous audiences
forward a ‘people versus environment’ frame.
Conservation Team.
• Do remember, a general audience may well • When creating communications products
• Do check which group is associated with a
include Indigenous readers/viewers so your for an Indigenous audience, think about
place you want to talk about on the map of
language and imagery should take this into the specifics of the audience you want to
Aboriginal Australia, showing language groups
account. reach. There is a great deal of variation in
image: Indigenous handcrafts in Cape York, Queensland | Kerry Trapnell
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types of Indigenous audience — a ‘one size OR peoples rights and interests, consistent with
fits all’ approach won’t work. An audience national and international standards; not
may include many different segments of an “I would like to respectfully acknowledge the endorse conservation outcomes that infringe or
Indigenous audience or a mixed audience. [insert name of local Indigenous group] as the inadequately address the rights of Indigenous
Traditional Owners of this land where we are peoples; and seek opportunities for and commit
Are the people you want to communicate
meeting today. I pay respects to the elders past to Indigenous conservation outcomes (including
with remote or urban? Are they educated
and present and those Traditional Owners who new tenure and management models such as
or not? Are they literate? Do they have
are with us here today.” Indigenous Protected Areas, Joint Management
access to computers and the internet or
and Homelands Development).”
not? Are their values and lifestyle more
In situations where Traditional Ownership
traditional or contemporary? All these will
is unknown or controversial, we use a
affect the channels and messaging of your
statement like:
communication.
• Consider also whether it is communication “The Wilderness Society respectfully
to an Indigenous only audience or a acknowledges the Traditional Owners
diverse audience. of this land.”
• Acknowledgement of Country (if a Welcome
• Statement of recognition
to Country is not available)
If you would like to put a statement on the
When commencing formal public meetings or website or product of your choosing that
any official event, we formally acknowledge provides an overview of TWS recognition of
the Traditional Owners using a statement like: Indigenous Rights and our commitments. In
2011 NCC and NCT signed off on the following
“The Wilderness Society respectfully ‘Indigenous Imperative’ as part of our National
acknowledges the [insert name of local Campaign planning process:
Indigenous group] as the Traditional Owners
of this land where we are meeting today. “The Wilderness Society acknowledges that
I pay respects to the elders past and present ‘Aboriginal sovereignty was not ceded’ and
and those Traditional Owners who are with this principle underpins our Indigenous
us here today.” engagement and conservation strategies.
Indigenous rights and interests will be built
into all campaigns, policies and procedures.
The Wilderness Society will seek conservation
outcomes that address and advance Indigenous
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3. Specific language

Identity In conversations
Correct usage Incorrect usage Reason Correct usage Incorrect usage Reason

• Aboriginal person • Aborigine • Aborigine has a racist • NSW: Koori, Goorie, Koorie, • Don’t use identifiers in any • Traditional Owners often
history. Coorie, Murri publications. use these identifiers for
• Aboriginal people(s) • ‘Aboriginals’ for all other Indigenous peoples
Indigenous peoples. • Write peoples instead of • VIC: Koorie • Don’t use identifiers in in different parts of the
• Aboriginal preferred in people where appropriate conversation unless you
South Australia • SA: Nunga, Nyungar, country.
because there are often really know the background.
different groups that will Nyoongah • This is for information
• Indigenous peoples • Don’t refer to a person with
have different identifiers. • WA: Nyungar, Nyoongar, purposes only — not for use
• Use Aboriginal and Torres an identifier. in publications.
• We don’t want to exclude Aboriginal peoples or
Strait Islanders when Indigenous peoples
speaking about all of Torres Strait Islanders. Example: A Murri might • Only in colloquial or spoken
Australia. • NT: Yolngu (top end), refer to him/herself as a context.
Anangu (central) Murri but might not want
you to address him/her as
• QLD: Murri Murri.
• TAS: Palawa, Koori
• Southern Australia
generally: Koori’s
• In general: Indigenous
Mob(s).
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General usage When talking about land and sea


Correct usage Incorrect usage Reason Correct usage Incorrect usage Reason

• Traditional Owner(s) • Capitalise this term. • Indigenous land and sea • Aboriginal lands • When referring to Torres
country Strait lands then Aboriginal
lands is not be appropriate.
• Homelands
• Use specific group names if • The native people or native • Colonial
possible. local people
• Land and sea rights • Depends on context but
must remember the concept
• Full names rather than • Surnames — ‘Claudie’ or • Full names are more
of sea rights.
surnames ‘Pearson’ respectful for TWS.
Example: ‘David Claudie’
‘Noel Pearson’. • Country • Traditional Owner’s usually
speak about their ‘people’
• Land and sea country (aka ‘mob’) and their
• Indigenous groups • Tribes, native groups, • Sometimes the use of • Sea country ‘Country’.
Aboriginals ‘tribes’ is okay. Please check
• Language groups • Saltwater country • These ‘countries’ are often
with the groups prior to
separated by geological
• Clan estates (subset of using the term or use safe • ‘on Country’ (only use in or ecological features but
language groups) — linked language. reference to Traditional can only be mapped by the
to parts of Country. Live on Owners who are on their Traditional Owner’s.
Country. specific country)
• Within each ‘Country’ there
• Speaking for Country (only can be a number of ‘clan
in cases where Traditional groups’ or ‘skin groups’
Owners are speaking for and potentially different
their specific country) languages or dialects.
• Extended families are
defined by ‘kinship’ models.
• Contact between clans has
very strict protocols.
• When speaking of a specific
‘Country’, please capitalise.
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Definitions
Correct usage Incorrect usage Reason Correct usage Incorrect usage Reason

• Native Title (refers to title • It is a very specific legal • Indigenous ecological • Traditional ecological • Indigenous ecological
over land or sea) term. Only use it when you knowledge knowledge knowledge is evolving —
actually mean Native Title. it’s both traditional and
Alternatives are Traditional current.
Lands or Homelands.
• Indigenous people have
valuable benchmarks due
to traditional knowledge
• Wild Rivers in Queensland • ‘Queensland’s wild rivers’ • When written incorrectly
as well as the best current
it indicates possession by
knowledge from living on
the State.
country and observing
change.

• Be specific about • ‘Our’ river/forest etc. • When used incorrectly, it


Indigenous groups. can reflect dispossession.

• Before using following • ‘Elder’ for someone who is • Elder is a term indicating
Example: ‘X river is on the
terms please confirm with not an elder. seniority.
homelands of y group’
The Wilderness Society’s
Indigenous Conservation • Check with The Wilderness
Team. • ‘Law boss’ for someone who Society’s Indigenous
is not a law boss. Conservation Team. Know
— Elder who you are talking about
— Law boss and their status in law or
custom.
• Elder is not just an old
person. For example, a
50-year-old person can refer
to a 30-year-old as their
elder.

• Working together • Avoid paternalism • Indicates that our work is


and subservience. The in partnership and mutual
Wilderness Society works respect.
together with Traditional
Owner(s), not for them and
vice versa.
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Definitions (cont.)
Correct usage Incorrect usage Reason Correct usage Incorrect usage Reason

• Don’t speak as if Indigenous • Indigenous people are • Use the Indigenous name of • TWS has a role in promoting
people are intrinsically people like everyone else. a place, if known, alongside the use and recognition of
different from others. They do not have magical or the non Indigenous name. Indigenous place names.
mystical properties!
Example: Mount Warning
(Wollumbin) or Gulaga (Mount
• ‘The Wilderness Society’s • ‘TWS and Indigenous • Be accurate about the way Dromedary)
position is...’ people hold the view...’ we work with groups.
unless we actually have
a joint position in which • Don’t be presumptive about
case we will reference the speaking for Indigenous • Law • Lore • Law refers to Aboriginal Law in
Traditional Owner(s) with groups. Speak for TWS the context of law and justice,
whom we hold a joint not for Indigenous groups • Laws and customs etc.
position. — they can speak for
themselves. • Instead of ‘lore’ use: traditional
knowledge, customs etc.
• Avoid sanctimonious tones
that convey ‘We represent • Native Title terminology
Indigenous interests better includes ‘in accord with the
than someone else’ or laws and customs of...’
that we are defending
Indigenous rights/interests.
• Partnerships • Only talk about partnerships
when it is actually a partnership.
• Working together to • Anything that suggests we • TWS is about protecting
protect Country are speaking for Traditional environment. We work
Owner(s) and their rights. with Traditional Owner(s) • Indigenous Protected Areas • Use great consideration when
to protect country — we speaking of protected areas.
respect their rights.
• National parks have been used
as tools of dispossession and/or
• Use direct quotes from • Paraphrasing: “Murrandoo • Indigenous people need injustice in the past.
Indigenous people. Yanner likes rivers…” to speak for themselves. • A lot of Traditional Owners’
Murrandoo Yanner says: Otherwise, adopt a remember being forced off
“Healthy rivers are the ‘reporting’ style so that their land because of a
lifeblood of our people.” things can be objectively wilderness protection model
communicated. or national park.
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Correct usage Incorrect usage Reason Correct usage Incorrect usage Reason

• Customary Tenure • Very specific, not for general • Aboriginal Owned and • If it’s Aboriginal owned and • Aboriginal owned land jointly
audience. jointly managed jointly managed National managed with the state.
Park then call it that, don’t The more we promote this
• Relates to traditional ownership just call it a National Park. as a real outcome, then the
under cultural law and custom more accepting Traditional
— not formalised under Native Owner(s) will be of the idea
Title or other commonwealth of National Parks. Remember
mechanism but is understood in that there is a lot of history to
Aboriginal law and custom (like get past and this is one way
Aboriginal common law). to help.
• A way of mapping out peoples
‘Country’.
• Homelands Development • People on Country building
on traditions, etc. which have
• Co-management • Joint management • Public protected areas (such as been adjusted to the needs
national parks) jointly managed of modern times. Before use
by Indigenous groups and state please contact The Wilderness
departments. Society’s Indigenous
Conservation Team.

• ‘Hand back-lease back’ • A land justice policy measure


referring to protected areas like • unspoilt • pristine • Means untouched and
national parks where they are without people.
• perfect • wild
handed back to their Traditional
Owner(s). Then the protected • beautiful • wilderness
area is leased back from
Indigenous owners by the state. • natural and cultural

• Lease arrangements include • pure


co-management boards and • wonderful
Indigenous ranger jobs.
• inspirational
• Limited tenure protected areas
which need to be renegotiated
periodically.

Example: Uluru.
image: Mungo National Park, New South Wales | Dennis Harding
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4 Annexes Commonly break up (verb)


businessman
misspelt words by-law
by-line

C
This is an alphabetical list of some common problem capacity building
words and expressions. If a word is not in this list, capitalise
consult the Macquarie Dictionary. If you don’t have a caregiver/caregiving
case study
print version and need a subscription to access the cash for work (CFW)
online version; you can refer to the Oxford Dictionary, catalyse
www.oxforddictionaries.com. categorise
CD-ROM
The most important point to bear in mind is ceasefire
central Africa
that usage should be consistent throughout a Central America
manuscript. central Asia
central Europe
A centralise
ad hoc (not italic) centre
advertise/advertisement century: from first to tenth century, number spelt out;
advice (noun) thereafter in figures: 11th century, etc.
advise (verb) Chancellor Merkel but the chancellor said...
ageing changeover (noun)
analyse change over (verb)
anti-personnel childbirth
apprise child care
arise childcare centre
Pacific Ocean but the Pacific and the Atlantic oceans coastguard
audiovisual coexist
authorise/authorisation coexistence
awareness-raising co-management
community-based first aid (CBFA)
B comprise
backup compromise
bilingual computerise
billion = thousand million cooperate/cooperation
blood donor but blood-donor centre coordinate/coordination
break-up (noun) criticise
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D etc. (with full stop and followed by a comma in the middle G


databank/database of a sentence) galvanise
death toll euro (currency) generalise
debt relief (noun) but debt-relief process (adjective) Eurocentric goodwill (of a firm) but good will (virtuous intent)
decision-maker/decision-making excise grassroots
demise exercise guideline(s)
dependant (noun)
dependent (adjective) F H
despise far-reaching haemorrhage/haemorrhagic
destabilise feedback half-hour but half an hour
devise fertilise handbook
diarrhoea finalise hand-picked
disenfranchise first aid but first-aid courses (never First Aid with initial hardline
disguise capitals) hardest-hit countries but the hardest hit are....
firstborn harmonise
E first-class health care
East (the) (but the earthquake struck the east of the first-hand high-income countries
province) first-rate high-quality products but the product is of high quality
East Africa floodgate(s) high-risk areas but the community is at high risk
eastern Africa flood plain hi-tech material
east Asia flood waters HIV-positive
Eastern (of or relating to the East) ...fold (as in twofold, tenfold) Human Development Index (HDI)
Eastern bloc (historical) focused, focusing (not focussed, focussing) Hurricane Katrina but a hurricane hit the region
eastern Europe food security (FS)
e-commerce follow-up (noun) I
economise follow up (verb) i.e., (with full stops and followed by a comma)
e.g., (with full stops and followed by a comma) foothold ill-advised
email forego (to precede) ill health
emphasise forever immunise
en bloc (not italic) forgo (to relinquish, give up) improvise
enfranchise formalise incise
enquiry (Note: use enquiry for the act of asking formulas (but scientific or mathematical formulae) industrialise
a question, especially of a person; use inquiry forums (never fora) inquiry (Note: use inquiry when referring to an
when referring to an investigation, especially front line but front-line operations investigation, especially an official one; use enquiry for
an official one.) fulfil/fulfilment the act of asking a question, especially of a person.)
en route (not italic) full time but full-time job in so far as
enterprise fundraise, fundraising, fundraiser institutionalise
equalise interact/interaction
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intergovernmental M O
internally displaced people (IDPs) macro-economics offshore
internet (lower case i) man-made ongoing
interpersonal manpower online
interracial marketplace organise
interrelate market research overrate
interstate materialise
intertribal maternal and child health worker P
intranet (lower case i) maximise Pacific islands (but a Pacific Islander)
medium-sized organisation but a small organisation, a Pacific Ocean (but the Pacific and Atlantic oceans)
J large organisation paralyse
jeopardise memorise patronise
micro-credit peace talk(s)
K micro-economics peacetime
know-how middle-income countries per cent: use % sign. (Note: percentages are always
minimise written in figures: 6%, 17.5%)
L Ministry of Health, Ministry of External Affairs (but the policy-maker/policy-making
labour-intensive ministries of health and external affairs) politicise
laissez-faire (not italic) mobilise postnatal
landlocked multicultural post-traumatic stress disorder
landmine multidisciplinary postwar
landslide multilateral practice (noun)
large-scale operation; but on a large scale multinational practise (verb)
Latin America multiracial premise
learnt (not learned, as in lessons learnt) prenatal
leukaemia N Prime Minister Morgan Tsvangirai (but the prime minister
licence (noun) nationwide agreed...)
license (verb) needs-assessment survey but a needs assessment was prioritise
lifesaving/lifesaver carried out… privatise
lifestyle non-governmental organisation (NGO) problem-solving
like-for-like (as in like-for-like comparison) no one (no hyphen) program
localise North (the) (but the people live in the north of the programmer
long-term country) promise
loophole North Africa -prone (as in a disaster-prone area)
low-income countries North America pro rata (but on a pro-rata basis)
lowland northern (of or relating to the north) publicise
low-tech northern Europe
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starting point wartime


R state(s) (but New York State, the State of New South water and sanitation (write out in full, not WatSan or
radioactive/radioactivity Wales) watsan)
raise stationary (not moving) web
realise stationery (paper, envelopes, etc.) website
real-time subcommittee wellbeing
recognise subcontinent well-established program (but the program is well
regionalise subregion/subregional established)
-related (as in pregnancy-related diseases) sub-Saharan Africa well-known organisation (but the organisation is well
represent (but re-present (to present again)) subsidise known)
-resistant (as in drug-resistant tuberculosis) substandard West (the) (but the program was carried out in the west of
revise subtotal the country)
revitalise summarise West Africa
rise supervise western Africa
River Thames (but the Yarra and Fitzroy rivers) surmise western Europe
round table (but round-table talks) worldwide
T
S task force X
scaling up team-mate X-ray
schoolchild/schoolchildren (but a pre-school child) team spirit
search and rescue (but a search-and-rescue team) teamwork
Second World War (not World War II) televise
secretariat think-tank
Secretary General Bekele Geleta (but the secretary- traumatise
general said) tsunami (as in Indian Ocean tsunami)
self-interest turnout
Senator Jones (but the senator said…)
sensitise U
short-term losses (but in the short term) undergrowth
small-scale project (but on a small scale) underrate
South Africa (the country) but southern Africa (the region) under way (as in negotiations are under way...)
South America up-to-date information (but the information is up to date)
South Asia urbanise
South (the) (but the south of the region was flooded) utilise
South-East Asia
southern (of or relating to the South)
southern Africa V
specialise visualise
stabilise
standardise W
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