Definition paper

by Ryan Ruvalcaba

Submission date: 31-Oct-2018 11:57AM (UT C-0700)

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ORIGINALITY REPORT

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Eveline A. J. van Rein, Said Sadiqi, Koen W. W.
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GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

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Ryan,

Nice work here. You provided a good def inition of

your term. T hat said, you also needed to include
images in order to help augment your def inition.

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Furthermore, you needed to be a bit more intentional
with your organization. Overall though, well done.

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RUBRIC: 30 1 DEFINITION RUBRIC

RHET FOCUS Developing

Rhetorical Focus: Write f ormally and inf ormally, in-class and out-of -class, f or a variety of audiences and
purposes.

ABSENT

BELOW BASIC

DEVELOPING

PROFICIENT

ADVANCED

ORGANIZ AT ION Prof icient

Organize, f ocus, and communicate one’s thoughts clearly and ef f ectively to address a rhetorical situation.

ABSENT

BELOW BASIC

DEVELOPING

PROFICIENT

ADVANCED

LANG & DESIGN Prof icient

Academic Language and Design: Recognize, evaluate, and employ the f eatures and contexts of language
and design that express and inf luence meaning and that demonstrate sensitivity to gender and cultural
dif f erences.

ABSENT

BELOW BASIC

DEVELOPING

PROFICIENT

ADVANCED

CIT AT ION Advanced

Use your major’s customary citation style to ethically cite and communicate inf o f rom a variety of
appropriate sources

ABSENT

BELOW BASIC
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PROFICIENT

ADVANCED