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9 February 2019
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My essay will explore the theory that learning to cook is the factor that made us human.
It will also explain the other factors and theories that may have led to an increase in brain size of
homo erectus. Considering all the evidence, I will attempt to argue that learning how to cook is
the theory that makes the most sense. Lastly, I will explain that the nature of evidence and time
period at hand causes a lot of uncertainty and lack of agreement on this theory.
Mott, Nicholas. “What Makes us Human? Cooking, Study Says.” National Geographic News, 26
October 2012,
https://news.nationalgeographic.com/news/2012/10/121026-human-cooking-evolution-raw-food-
This is an article called “What Makes us Human? Cooking, Study Says” written by
Nicholas Mott from National Geographic News that claims that cooking allowed homo erectus to
develop a bigger brain, but at a cost. The opportunity cost of learning to cook food was
ultimately choosing brains over brawn. Unlike ape ancestors, homo erectus was significantly
smaller as they lost a lot of physical mass in exchange for a bigger brain. This is related to the
smaller gut bigger brain theory, which claims that the gut size shrank as a result of the increase
in brain size. The article goes on to discuss whether these changes attribute to evolution or
devolution. Some believe that a raw diet is healthier and more favorable overall, so cooking
was a mistake. The author negates this with facts proving that consumers actually get more
nutrients out of their food when it is cooked, rather than in raw form, thus maximizing food
efficiency.
The writer’s purpose is to analyze human development regarding cooking. Mott does a
good job of assessing all the benefits and disadvantages of learning to cook. The audience of the
piece includes subscribers of the National Geographic News or anyone who wants to learn about
human evolution or the history of our diet. It was published in 2012, based on a study conducted
by two neuroscientists at the Institute of Biomedical Sciences at the Federal University of Rio de
Janeiro in Brazil. This is relatively current as research in this field develops pretty slowly.
The author is a writer for National Geographic Magazine. The author is credible because
he works for an accredited science and wildlife organization. It employs teams of scientists and
editors to accurately inform people. The author gained their information from neuroscientists
who conducted a study in Brazil. This source is reliable because National Geographic funds
I will use this article to go into detail about the benefits and disadvantages of learning to
cook. My research question answers why cooking makes us human, and this article will help
give details as to the various aspects of humans that are a result of cooking. It also explains how
humanoid species that did not learn to cook compare. This will give me a more well rounded
perspective of the topic. There is also information about raw food arguments that the opposition
Standage, Tom, and George K. Wilson. An Edible History of Humanity. [Electronic Resource].
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“An Edible History of Humanity” by Tom Standage delves into the ways that the
evolution of both humans and food are interconnected. The first chapter looks at food as a
technology. Corn, originally teosinte was small, hard, and could barely be called edible. As
hunter gatherers intervened, the recessive tgai g ene in corn that allowed kernels to show on the
outside became common, but otherwise it would have disappeared due to natural selection. The
second chapter focuses on the development of agriculture. It seems that farmers were
significantly less healthy than hunter gatherers, as skeletal remains show evidence of various
diseases. The shift to agriculture does seem logical evolutionarily, but due to a combination of
factors like climate change, it happened before humans could consciously make an effort to go
back to hunting and gathering. Early agriculture relied heavily on the grains mentioned before,
and with time, they evolved in important ways. Corn, a prominent cereal grain, became reliant
Tom Standage wrote this book to inform readers about how important food is to the
history of humans. People do not realize how much of an impact humans have made on the
world in different ways that are highlighted in this book, such as the evolution of corn. The
audience of this piece is the general public, but it is more targeted to anthropologists. The book
was written in 2009 which means that the information presented in the book may not include all
the latest information, but very little is known about history about this time period, and new
This source is Tom Standage, an acclaimed writer who graduated from Oxford
University. He has a very good reputation, editing for the Economist and writing for the New
York Times, making him credible. Tom has adequate information to write the book through
research and help from resources provided to him by the organizations that he works for. This
book is credible and has been praised by many scholars, including anthropologists.
I will use the first two chapters of this source to assess the opportunity cost of humans
learning to cook. It shows the disadvantages and full impact of learning how to cook. Cooking
and its physical effect on humans caused a lot of disease and malnutrition in agricultural
communities. This will help me look at the topic more objectively, by citing all of the
ramifications that cooking had on the evolution of humans. It helps to explain that even though
cooking may not have been the most beneficial course of action, it still makes us human in more
EBSCOhost,
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Paul Raeburn talks to Wrangham about his new book, “Catching Fire: How Cooking
Made Us Human,” on National Public Radio in 2009. Wrangham argues the theory that cooking
makes us human. It starts by explaining that human prehistory dates back to a time that is hard
to gather information about. There is limited or indirect evidence other than bone structures,
which do show the evolution between humanoid species. As anthropologists tried to piece
together what caused differences in physical structure, they became engrossed with homo
erectus, whose brain became larger. It seemed like there was something missing, and cooking is
one theory for these changes. Wrangham goes on to explain that the meat eating theory does not
make sense because of difficulty and inefficiency of chewing raw meat, even with modern
chimpanzees. The amount of nutrients that are actually digested has a great impact on
The purpose of this podcast is to inform and persuade the public about Wrangham’s book
and theory about cooking making us human. His book also helps to give more credibility to this
theory versus other theories that have been proposed. The audience of this piece is the public
and probably other anthropologists and related scientists. This piece was put on the radio and in
podcast form to inform and persuade people to believe this theory, which could cause a bias.
The people involved are Dr. Wrangham and Paul Raeburn, the host. The author of the
book is credible because he is a famous British primatologist. He has won awards for his
research and writing and graduated from Oxford and Cambridge Universities. He has adequate
information from his own research and expertise on the subject and from others in his field. This
source is reliable because it interviews a professional in the topic and is done through a credible
I will use this source to cite the meat eating counter argument and negate it. I will also
use it to explain the origins of why this is an anthropological question. I will give a little bit of
context as to where there are discrepancies with evolution and why all the other theories have
been proposed. I will also state why the cooking theory is the most obvious explanation even
Did Cooking Make Us Human? [Electronic Resource]. New York, N.Y. : Films Media Group,
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This video is narrated by a few people from BBC that was produced in 2010. It claims
that cooking made us human and follows an experiment that tries to recreate human teeth and
stomach to try to prove it. First, a group of people were asked to eat a raw diet that
australopithecus would have eaten for a few weeks and they lost weight. Then the ancient jaw
expert, Peter Ungar, demonstrates the way that teeth from earlier humans crushed a raw carrot
easily but not raw meat. Later human species however, did crush the meath easily with sharper
teeth. The documentary then goes on to explain that the origins of cooking is debatable. Many
argue that it started with homo erectus as seen by evidence of tools and animal bones found in
sites in Africa. However, cooking cannot be proven at this site because there are no butcher
marks on any of the animal bones. Another study was done that shows that mice that ate cooked
yams gave them more energy over uncooked yams. A model of a stomach that stimulates
digestion showed that cooked potatoes released a greater amount of sugar into the bloodstream
over uncooked potatoes. Molecularly, vegetables release starch molecules that contain more
energy are released when heated, explaining why more nutrients are released when food is
cooked. The energy needed to undergo the process of digestion is reduced by a quarter when
food is cooked according to a study done with pythons. The theory of smaller gut, bigger brain
was developed by Peter Wheeler. Brain activity consumes 20 percent of our energy, almost
double of the average of all other animal brains. Now, people have trouble controlling their diets
because humans are programed to seek energy rich foods, usually involving sugar.
The audience for this piece is the general public. BBC appears on general television and
people especially interested in this topic can watch videos if they are subscribed to the channel
on their website. This piece was made shortly after the release of Wranham’s theory. It shows
multiple other studies that have been done that support his theory, bringing all the evidence to
support it in one place. The piece was written by a British network in 2010. There may be more
There is no one author, but BBC produced this video. This team is credible because
BBC, the trusted organization that makes scientific documentaries draw upon recent studies and
brings them to the public. They work closely with experts in the related field of the
documentary. For example, there were five different experiments shown in this video that had
been conducted by professionals. It also aims to be objective as it does a well rounded analysis
of the effects of cooking and mentions the weaknesses of the evidence. The theory cannot be
I will use the studies mentioned in this documentary for facts about how the theory has
been tested in the present day. For example, I will talk about how the animals were used to show
just how much cooking can reduce the energy it takes to digest food and give extra calories. I
can also explain the way that cooking molecularly activates foods to give the consumer more
sugar, and thus energy. The scientific process of eating raw versus cooked food is thoroughly
explained by the modern experiments. The speculative evidence comes from bones and the
changes between australopithecus, homo habilis, and homo erectus. The changes in brain and
gut size are also quantified in these studies, which will be helpful information to use.
Alianda Maira Cornélio, et al. “Human Brain Expansion during Evolution Is Independent of Fire
doi:10.3389/fnins.2016.00167/full.
2019.
Alinda and other neuroscientists are the authors of a new study “Human Brain Expansion
during Evolution Is Independent of Fire Control and Cooking.” that appeared in Frontiers in
Neuroscience. This experiment focused on the calorie differences from consuming raw meat and
cooked meat with mice. They found that it did not make a difference. In the introduction
section, the hypothesis expensive tissue hypothesis is mentioned, which is the idea that a tradeoff
between body and brain size occured. The experiment also showed results supporting the idea
that maintaining a large number of neurons was dependent on foraging efficiency, rather than
cooking meat. The hypothesis that fire control led to brain growth is seen as very unlikely.
Furthermore, the period of large brain growth happens in a period where there is little to no
evidence of fire control. Periods of weak and strong evidence of fire control show fossils with
similar brain volumes. In the discussion section, the experiment is summed up by explaining
that the unproportional increase in brain size compared to body size is unlikely due to energy
intake but rather an increase in foraging efficiency or finding more calories of food with 5-6
hours a day. It does conclude that more direct and indirect evidence needs to be collected to
strengthen any of the theories as there are still many unknown factors.
The writer's purpose in writing this report is to share their experiment with other
scientists to continue to debate the theory of cooking. The audience of this piece include other
neuroscientists as well as scientists involved with anthropology and the theory of cooking. This
piece was written in response to the newly proposed theory that cooking led to brain growth and
evolution. It shows another experiment that supports disproving it. The things that were said in
the discussion section largely respond to negating the claim, but it does do it in an objective
manner, ultimately claiming that more research needs to be done to make it scientific fact.
The authors are credible because they are professional neuroscientists. The lab report
also references other studies and sources that relate to the topic as well as references for other
professionals that peer edited the study to make it valid. Peer reviewing by others in the same
field is part of the process that ensures that studies published in science journals are valid. The
authors are writing about their own experiment and also discuss other related experiments, so
This source will be used for my rebuttal. It shows a study that explains the alternate
theory that foraging efficiency led to an increased brain size. The data collected with mice
consuming cooked and uncooked meat in this experiment shows that fire control and cooking are
independent of evolution. Though in the discussion section of the paper, it does say that more
research needs to be done to prove anything. There are various indirect pieces of evidence and
studies that support and negate the theory of cooking being the main factor to an increased brain
size. Due to the nature of the evidence, there is still much discrepancy about why evolution
happened the way that it did. I will use this source to discuss the uncertainty that still remains as
well.
Bradt, Steve. “Invention of Cooking Drove Evolution of the Human Species, New Book
news.harvard.edu/gazette/story/2009/06/invention-of-cooking-drove-evolution-of-the-hu
species, new book argues We are what we eat, and what we cook” on the Harvard Gazette on
June 1, 2009. It discusses the main claim that Wrangham makes in his book “Catching Fire:
How Cooking Made Us Human”, which is that cooking is the trait that makes us human. In
other words, cooking is the factor that allowed homo erectus to branch off from other humanoid
species. The article talks about how learning to cook allowed for homo erectus to have more
efficiency in their food, allowing them to develop a bigger brain and smaller gut. It also allowed
them to have more time to do other things such as develop social skills, build tools, and develop
agriculture. The article also negates the claim that eating meat was the factor that makes humans
unique, as this marked the divergence from australopithecines to Homo habilis and jaw
developments in homo erectus do not match the effects of meat eating.
The author of this article intended to inform the science and technology scholar
community about the newest book in field of human archaeology. The Harvard Gazette is
Harvard University’s central location where scholars can be informed about new studies. This
means that information posted there is based on new scientific studies and research, meaning it
is credible. However, this is an article written about a book, so it could still have a bias.
Steve Bradt was previously a member of Harvard’s Faculty of Arts and Science, as a
media specialist. He now works for MIT, and continues to feature science articles in the media.
Prestigious colleges like Harvard and MIT make sure that their writers publish information that
is accurately reflecting the research of their colleges. It was also written in 2009, which is fairly
recent in terms of archeology, in which new discoveries come slowly. For these reasons, this
source is credible.
I will use this source to generate the points supporting my claim. It nicely outlines the
physical changes including a larger brain, smaller gut, and smaller jaw structure. It also
explains how humans were able to make more time to specialize in other developments like
agriculture and social structures. These will make good topics for paragraphs in my paper. I can
make the claim that none of these factors made us human first, because cooking led to these
other developments.
Adler, Jerry. “Why Fire Makes Us Human.” Smithsonian.com, Smithsonian Institution, 1 June
2013, www.smithsonianmag.com/science-nature/why-fire-makes-us-human-72989884/.
“Why Fire Makes Us Human.” is an article written by Jerry Adler published on June 1,
2013 for the Smithsonian website. First the article discusses the facts revolving around the
human brain. The brian takes about one fifth of humans’ calorie intake. It explains Carmody’s
experiment that shows that humans eating a raw food diet, even when intaking a normal amount
of calories, do not have enough energy to survive for very long. The article explains the
“expensive tissue hypothesis” and different views of it. This hypothesis is dependent on fire
control. Wrangham emphasizes cooking as the evolutionary edge while Aiello and Wheeler cite
meat eating. Opposition argues that cooking does not make sense because there is little data
proving that fire had been used by the time that homo erectus appeared. Either way, fire was a
The writer’s purpose in writing the article is to argue that fire makes us human. It also
takes into account four different perspectives on the topic, informing readers of each hypothesis.
In all the perspectives described, fire control was necessary. Adler emphasizes the use of fire as
This article was written by Jerry Adler, who is an author for the Smithsonian Institution.
He has adequate information to draw upon provided by the institution, which is the national
museum organization. The source is reliable because the Smithsonian an accredited national
institution that is an extension of the government. The piece was written a few years ago and
relates to fossils of human structures that are located at the Natural History Museum, which is
I will use this source to highlight the view that fire control is what makes us human.
Though many cite this as the factor that makes us human, this is only part of the story. As the
article explains, other theories suggest that cooking or eating meat is the second part of gaining a
bigger brain. Though it is clear that fire was important, it was not the direct factor that led to an
increase in brain size. The article also verifies facts that were mentioned in my other sources.