Contained within three notebooks, below you can see parts of the working draft for one

of Virginia Woolf's most famous novels, Mrs Dalloway. Dating from 27 June 1923 and
originally titled 'The Hours', it was published two years later as Mrs Dalloway: nn Britain by
the Hogarth Press on May 14, 1925 with a dust jacket designed by Vanessa Bell, and in
the United States by Harcourt, Brace & Company on the same day, with the same dust
jacket.

Woolf is acclaimed as an innovator of the English language. Here, in her own handwriting,
one can see her explore a new style of writing called 'stream of consciousness', in which
the imprint of experience and emotion on the inner lives of characters is as important as
the stories they act out. By featuring their internal feelings, Woolf allows her characters'
thoughts to travel back and forth in time, reflecting and refracting their emotional
experiences. This device, often known as 'stream of consciousness’, creates complex
portraits of the individuals and their relationships.

At the end of each notebook we find notes and drafts for The Common Reader. The
essays were published by The Hogarth Press in 1925.

The character of Mrs Dalloway had already appeared in Woolf's first novel, The Voyage
Out, as the wife of a Member of Parliament. By 1923, Woolf had conceived the idea of
writing a new story built around her. ‘I want to give life and death, sanity and insanity,’
Woolf enthused in her diary, ‘I want to criticise the social system, and show it at work, at its
most intense’.
She criticised: in Clarissa, the repressed social and economic position of women, and in
Septimus, the treatment of those driven by depression to the borderlands of sanity.

During her life, Woolf consulted at least twelve doctors, and consequently experienced,
from the Victorian era to the shell shock of World War I, the emerging medical trends for
treating the insane. Woolf frequently heard the medical jargon used for a “nervous
breakdown,” and incorporated that language into her novel Mrs. Dalloway. With the
character Septimus Smith, Woolf combined her doctor’s terminology with her own unstable
states of mind. When Woolf prepared to write Mrs. Dalloway, she envisioned the novel as
a “study of insanity and suicide; the world seen by the sane and the insane side by side.”
When she was editing the manuscript, she changed her depiction of Septimus from what
read like a record of her own experience as a “mental patient” into a more abstracted
character and narrative. However, she kept the “exasperation,” which she noted, should be
the “dominant theme” of Septimus’s encounters with doctors.

Mrs. Dalloway (1925) is one of Woolf's two most loved and most written-about novels, the
other being To the Lighthouse (1925). Set on a single June day in 1923, the novel tracks
the parallel lives of two very different Londoners, Clarissa Dalloway and Septimus Warren
Smith. Clarissa is a 51-year old socialite who is giving a party that night for her husband,
Richard Dalloway, a Conservative member of Parliament. She moves in the upper reaches
of British society (the prime minister will attend her party), but she is not a titled aristocrat,
and she is thrilled about the prime minister's actually showing up at the party. Woolf knew
lots of people like Clarissa, though they were not among her best friends. Most people say
Woolf modeled Clarissa on Kitty Maxse (1867-1922), who had been a close friend of
Woolf's two older sisters, Stella and Vanessa.

Although characters related to each plot pass each other on the streets of London during
the course of the novel, the novel achieves its real unity only in its conclusion, when Mrs.
Dalloway learns of Septimus’s death from his psychiatrist (one of the guests at her party)
and feels a strange sympathy for him. It seems that the knowledge of his death prevents
Clarissa from committing suicide herself. This conclusion is troubling. Mrs. Dalloway does
suggest that the poor soldier’s suffering and death somehow redeem the apparently trivial
life of the hostess, who entertains nobility and politicians, the “old men” that post-war
society held responsible for the war.

Yet Woolf also seems to be criticizing the logic that would justify Septimus’s death as
worthwhile, a fair price to pay for “civilization.” Woolf called her novel an “elegy,” that is, a
lament for the dead, but she was skeptical of the traditional elegy’s consolations, which
she suspected of falsity. In her novel, the living go on living, and they must recognize that
the civilization that permits them to do so is the same one that allowed millions to die in the
war.

In the only introduction Woolf wrote for any of her novels, she says that she originally
intended that Clarissa would die in the novel, perhaps by suicide (this is in the Modern
Library edition published by Random House in 1928). At some point, she decided to create
another character who would be the one to die. This new character was Septimus Warren
Smith, a 30-year-old, shell-shocked WWI veteran whom we first meet in the street that
Clarissa Dalloway is walking down.

Paralleling Clarissa and Septimus thus allows Woolf to play out a range of themes, while
exploring the big topics that obsess her in all her works, namely love, death, and the
meaning of life.

Mrs. Dalloway and Joyce's Ulysses

In setting her novel on a single day in a city in June in a city through which various
characters walk while we listen in on their thought, Woolf is obviously alluding to
Joyce's Ulysses, which had been published in 1922 and which she was reading that
summer that Mrs. Dalloway began to take shape.Ulyssesis set on June 16, 1904, in
Dublin, and is told primarily through the thoughts of two main characters, Leopold Bloom
and Stephen Daedalus, whose lives intersect in complicated ways. Daedalus is a young
man much like Joyce himself, and Bloom may be seen as a father figure for him.
Woolf didn't much like Ulysses, or at least didn't appreciate what Joyce was after. In her
diary entries for August 26 and September 3 and 6, 1922 she says it's “pretentious, very
obscure, tricky, and that a good writer doesn't get so into doing stunts.” But something
about the structure must have struck a chord with her, perhaps somehow giving her
license to indulge her gift for detail.

Narrative Technique
free indirect discourse is a term scholars use to describe the way narrative point of view
shifts in novels like Mrs. Dalloway and To the Lighthouse. It's a modification of two
standard modes of discourse we all use:
direct discourse: Mrs. Dalloway said, “I'll by the flowers myself.”
indirect discourse: Mrs. Dalloway said she would buy the flowers herself.
free indirect discourse when an author weaves a character's thoughts into the narrative in
such a way that it is hard to tell whether they are the character's thoughts, someone else's
thoughts about the character, or the narrator's comments. In a single passage, such as the
opening page of Mrs. Dalloway, Woolf may quickly shift from one character's perspective
to another.
what Woolf called “tunneling.” going deeply into each character's mind, there is a point
when the mind of one character and the minds of all characters become one. The term
tunneling comes from two diary entries written while Woolf was writing Mrs. Dalloway
Victorian Treatment of Mental Illness and Woolf's Perception of it in Mrs. Dalloway

•For many years, the dominant belief was that women were more likely to suffer from
pathological grief than men.

•The "rest cure" was prescribed for Woolf many times. Physicians believed that by
focusing on physical ailments, they could heal the mind.

•In MD, Woolf explores the harmful effects of "feminizing and medicalizing grief."That
leaves Septimus devoid of avenues to express his sorrow. In Freud's terms, he suffers
from "melancholia."
•Dr. Holmes, and Sir William Bradshaw, refuse to acknowledge Septimus's illness; they
ask him to deny his self-consuming delusions.