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Introduction(Overview of figure 1 and 2) : Figure 1 indicates the number of visits to 3 music websites
by teenagers in August whilst Table 1 represents the promotional activities of the 3 music websites in
the same month.
Content(Analysis) : In Figure 1, Music Connect’s visitors peaked in Week 2 at 35,000 visitors and
55,000 visitors in Week 4. On the other hand, Era Music had the lowest number of visitors with
10,000 visitors in
Week 1 and 4 and 15,000 visitors in Week 2 and Week 3 respectively. In Table 1, Music Connect held
free music CD and concert ticket giveaways as their activities in Weeks 2 and 4 respectively whilst Era
Music only held one promotional activity in Week 2. Music Connect had 35,000 visitors in Week 2 and
55,000 visitors at Week 4 when they held free giveaways as their activities in those weeks. On the
other hand, Era Music had the lowest number of visitors in Week 1 and 4 at 10,000 which increased
to 15,000 visitors when they held their promotional activity in Week 2.
Conclusion: The number of visitors to the music websites shown in Figure 1 was influenced by the
promotional activities hosted by the website in Table 1. The most number of visitors for August was
during a free concert ticket giveaway by Music Connect as it’s promotional activity, with 55,000
visitors.
Words: decrease/ Dip/ go down/reduce/slump/Dramatic/Sharp/Huge/Enormous(huge)/Significant/
Moderate/Slight/
Example: There was dramatic decrease/ rapidly increase/ Production sales increased gradually/ There
was a decline of…/ The figures increased by/Decreased by.
IF two market have similiraties and differences: Introduction- similarities- differences- conclusion
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General point: It is often said that/ There are many who say that/ A common opinion is that/ Many
professional are of the view that
Present on point of view: My personal Point of view/ I believe that/ I would argue that/
Example: For example/ For instance/ A good illustration of this is/ We can see this when/
Explaining: One reason for this is/ Immediate cause of this is/ As a result/ As a consequence
Introduction: Do you agree? Make a choice/ GIve reason to support point of view/ Support with
reason and example/ Explain why in detail/ Provide details/Discuss- give pros and cons.
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