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Analysing the Model r ir r,.r!icn ca.agraph{s) has ihe u.rriter:

- glye- ueia, s o: the 1ob he is applying for? ...

42 a. Read the letter of appliration for a job, beloW - n,.enr;oie0 academic quaiifications?
then ciiscr.iss the questions that follow. - i,rriiten ;co'ui r,,.;or( experienceT
- described {lersonai qrialities/suiiabiIity?

b. Read the letter again and replace the underlined

information with details - real or imaginary *
about yourself (the job you would like to do,
Dear Urs Blake, your work experience, personal qualities, etc).

I am -rarti:rg to
appiy for the j Letters of Complaint
position o.[
Saler-Mauager
rn jlllr_Ealls! lf you write a ietter af compiaint, it is imporiant to
office, 4s keep to the facts. Your letter wiil not be effective if your
advertised i4
lrriting is too emotional. You should say exactly vrhat your
the Herald
complaint is, giving all the reievant details such as times,
nen'spaper on iith il{4v.
places, rames, etc. A letter of complaint should contain:
As outlined in my curriculum r"itae, I graduated from
.
the University oI Brighton n{th a BSc in an introduction, in l,vhich you state your complaint,
Business
providing detaiis of place, time, etc.
&Udigs_ed &asomics in 2003. M
Follou.ing m). &radualion from unir.ersit,t. I moveLE
. a main body, in which you give ihe exact details of your
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Nerv York, r,r,here I trained as a Sales Consuitant for complarnt. Narratiye techniques (tenses and time
the Seabrook Companl. for three )'ears. On m)- words/phrases) will be necessary where the reason for. 4t
1qq1n 1q England, I cQntinued to *.ork as a sales the complaint involyes references to iime.
@ I obtained m\: currenr r a conclusion, in lvhich you summarise the main bool
po.sftlSn. and/or make r-eference io future action. ln some cases,
Atpresentlam@ !a-qcf it is appropriate to ask for compensation.
at Deerfield Enterprises. u.here I am le-spanqble {aI
the organisation of staff and stock, as *.e11 as the
ailocation of the budget ttithin the saies department.
L{1. duties also include planning net' sales strategies. Vocabulary
and I am gengrall,y noted for my organisational and
bgginess skills, as rvell as m), initiatiyg. 43 a, Put the rlords given into the tabie beiow. Son:.
I of them may be used more than once. Add
I
would be an ideal candidate for the
believe that
position vou have outlined, as I have had extensive more of your o\ryn.
training *.ith a vrell-knorvn American firm. The time . faLrlt), o 5l6ir., r (in)attenirve . (rn)capabie
u . iL;de . defecti'le . (cirs)corrrteous
obtained a valuable insight into American culture and
busi[ess practices.. I a]so have several professional
' (r-in)damageci . iin)competent . (un)availai: =
. (rn)experrenceo . cbsolete r (irl)patrenr
contacts in America. which could pleye to be . careless . Crscorrtnirecj . (Lrn)siritable
.=.€ Finaliv, I am
extremely useful in my future career.
. (iin)iloitte . ciar-rgeious . fiai,'',ecl
rvilling and able to relocate at short notice. rvhich I
understand to be a requirement of the position.
Product/
Please find enclosed my curriculum r.itae and nr.o
references from previous emplorers, as requested. I goods
wouid be h"ppl, t0 supply )'ou uith further
inforrnation should ir be rquired. I thank you for
considering mv application and am u'illing Service/
to attend
an inteniery at artv time. staff
Yours sincereh',
i",; r'Y i-i"it':1..
Davld Huntlel'