-I went to Mexico, Cancun(.

) I was there two days, I think it's a beautiful place to visit

with your family like me.

-We've arrived at 9:00 am and it's an amazing place it was my first impression (and the
first thing I thought was that it is an amazing place). My mom told me in Mexico the
weather was cold (the weather was cold in Mexico). We took a taxi, the driver and the
people in that place are (were) very friendly. First, we decided to went (go) to a Xplore
( a Famous park) but there was a huge traffic jam,. in Xplore we Swam with the dolphins
and we took somo photos with the animals. We didn't have a lot of money so we
thought to only took one taxi to went to the hotel and another to went to park, the other
places we need to took a bus. (Ideas are unclear / We didn’t have much money so we
decided only to take taxis to go to the hotel and the park. To go to the other places we
decided to take a bus)

-Me and my sister had hungry (My sister and I were hungry) so we decided to went to
ate (Be careful with this !!!! Mistakes with Past simple / Present simple should not
happen at this level – We decided to eat / try) some ti(y)pical food,(.) we arrived at the
restaurant and chose to ate (ordered) tacos. We only had a one (a one ??) big problem
I didn't buy souveniers because I didn't have (enough) foreign currency (pesos – foreign
currency is an uncountable noun) (for them. I ) only (had money) for important things
like transport, (and) food. We were in Principe Azul(hotel) (why is it in brackets?) it's
expensive but (it) is beautiful,. (A)also, we swam in the beach and visited some
museums to undestand the culture.

-In my opinion, it's a perfect place to visit maybe if Ihave the possibility to return I go (If
I had the chance to go back I would), I only hated one think(g) (which is the fact that) I
didn't have time to do all (I wanted) so I only did somo(e) things but (overall / in general)
that (it) was a good experience.