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TITLE: CS1 Final Essay: The Future of Medicine is AI


REPORTID: F2092612-4073-4CD0-8282-7C65361C1062

ORGANIZATION:5
All of the basic sections were adequate and had the appropriate subheadings to
clarify each section of the text. The material was ordered in a very easy to follow
and logical way. The entire essay was fluid and easy to understand. Everything was
broken apart, as necessary and that made the essay easier to follow.

CITATIONS:5
The writer cited their sources well and as needed. The formatting followed the
guidelines that were provided. The citations were all listened in a separate
Reference section. All of the citations fit in well with the essay and provided
legitimate insight.

GRAMMAR AND STYLE:5


There were not any spelling or grammatical problems with this essay, except for a
few misplaced commas. But they did not detract from the essay. The writing style
was very simple and logical. The sentences and paragraphs were cohesive and allowed
the essay to be very clear.

CONTENT:5
The writer summarized the discussed the topic adequately. Each section was done to
specification and everything was discussed well. The prediction had a lot of good
justifications that were reasonable. From lectures to news, the writer used good
sources to justify their prediction.

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TITLE: CS1: The Experience Now, and the Impacts Later
REPORTID: 5DF345F4-FE1B-4D85-9AE6-A445D4621B9D

ORGANIZATION:5
All of the basic sections were adequate and had the appropriate subheadings to
clarify each section of the text. The content was separated into different
paragraphs, as needed. Everything was broken apart, as necessary and that made the
essay easier to follow.

CITATIONS:5
The writer cited their sources well and as needed in the prediction section. It was
not necessary for the other sections so it was fine that the writer did not use
them there. The formatting followed the guidelines that were provided. The
citations were all listened in a separate Reference section. All of the citations
fit in well with the essay and provided good insight.

GRAMMAR AND STYLE:4


There were not any spelling or grammatical problems with this essay, except for one
misspelled word ("travelling"). But they did not detract from the essay. The
writing style was too simple, but logical. It could have been more articulate, but
the sentences and paragraphs were cohesive and allowed the essay to be very clear.

CONTENT:5
The writer summarized the discussed the topic and summarized the content
adequately. Each section was written to specification. The prediction had
reasonable justifications, stemming from reliable sources that were cited.

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TITLE: Virtual Reality and the Impact on our Future Lives
REPORTID: BFC9DC60-99D3-4694-BDC9-21A04DA71837
ORGANIZATION:5
All of the basic sections were good and had the appropriate subheadings to clarify
each section of the text. The material was ordered in a very easy to follow and
logical way. The entire essay was fluid and easy to understand. Everything was
broken apart into different paragraphs, as necessary and that made the essay easier
to follow.

CITATIONS:5
The writer cited their sources well and as needed. The formatting followed the
guidelines that were provided. The citations were all listened in a separate
Reference section. All of the citations fit in well with the essay and provided
legitimate insight. The future prediction section benefitted greatly from all the
used citations.

GRAMMAR AND STYLE:5


There were not any spelling or grammatical problems with this essay, except for a
few incorrect prepositions. But they did not detract from the essay and its
understanding. The writing style was very clear and logical. The sentences and
paragraphs were cohesive and allowed the essay to be easy to follow.

CONTENT:5
The writer summarized the discussed the topic well. Each section was done to
specification and everything was discussed adequately. The first two sections
seemed a bit short, but it covered all the necessary information. The prediction
section was very well versed and had a lot of good and reasonable justifications.
The writer used credible sources and solid reasoning to justify their prediction of
a future immersion in VR.
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