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Paul Sutton
To cite this article: Paul Sutton (2012) Conceptualizing feedback literacy: knowing,
being, and acting, Innovations in Education and Teaching International, 49:1, 31-40, DOI:
10.1080/14703297.2012.647781
In this paper I seek to reflect upon the process of becoming feedback literate.
Feedback literacy is conceptualised as an integral component of a broader aca-
demic literacy that has three interrelated dimensions: the epistemological, the
ontological and the practical. Learners experience and respond differentially to
each of these dimensions which can render becoming feedback literate a com-
plex and challenging process. The acquisition of feedback literacy, I argue, is
also mediated by learners’ perceptions of their university teachers’ educational
identities.
Keywords: feedback literacy; knowing; being; acting; educational identity
Introduction
This paper uses empirical data from a research project funded by the Higher Educa-
tion Academy, Centre for Sociology, Anthropology and Politics. The project con-
sisted of semi-structured interviews conducted during 2008–2009 with twenty-one
learners and eight academics from two social science departments, (one in Scotland
and one in England). Interviews consisted of open-ended questions framed by the
topics that had emerged from the literature review: those of meaning identity and
power. Participants were encouraged to discuss their experience of assessment and
feedback in the light of these topics. The interviews aspired to be a form of pur-
poseful dialogue between the research participants and were analysed using a sim-
plified version of Fairclough’s (1992) model of Critical Discourse Analysis.1 The
model of Critical Discourse Analysis was deployed as it compatible with the theo-
retical framework of the Academic Literacies approach.
In this paper selected extracts from the data are used in an illustrative fashion to
develop a conceptual argument concerning the nature of feedback literacy – the
ability to read, interpret and use written feedback. Synthesising the Academic Liter-
acies approach with the congruent work of Barnett & Coate (2005), and Barnett
(2007a, 2007b), becoming feedback literate, I argue, is experienced by some learn-
ers as both a complex and challenging process.
The relationship between feedback literacy and academics’ educational identi-
ties is also addressed in this paper. Educational identity refers to modes of being
in higher education contexts, which shape the social relations of teaching and
learning and which appear to either enable or constrain the acquisition of feedback
literacy.
*Email: psutton@marjon.ac.uk
back on knowing and could see why a mark was awarded. They also engaged with
the confidence boosting dimension of feedback on knowing (see below).
Feedback literacy also requires that learners engage with feedback for knowing,
which is formative in character. As Batchelor (2006, p. 790) argues in the context
of analyzing the vulnerability of student voice, the term for indicates: ‘openness to
the possibility of movement and development’ and a ‘process to be activated’.
Feedback for knowing offers guidance on how an academic performance can be
improved. This aspect of feedback consists of guidance concerning how learners
can enhance the form and content of their mode of knowing. It consists of judg-
ments concerning how knowing can be expressed more clearly (for example,
through improving sentence structure and the staging of an argument); how more
critical modes of knowing can be developed (for example, through enhancing the
evaluation of knowledge); and how such guidance may be fed-forward into other,
and possibly unrelated, assessments. As one academic commented: ‘Feedback is a
resource for students to understand the grade which they have received against the
criteria we’ve used and it should be a resource to enable students to improve’.2
The idea of feedback as a valuable learning and teaching resource is one worth
emphasising. Indeed, recognition of the real value of feedback would require a sig-
nificant change in educational practice. It would necessitate the creation of more
time and space for feedback within the curriculum. This would help raise the status
of feedback, enabling it to become a highly valued resource by both academics and
learners, and also help feedback to become more securely embedded in institutional
structures and strategies (Hounsell, 2007).
Whereas learners appear to be able to engage with feedback on knowing,
engagement with feedback for knowing is more challenging. This research study
suggests that the grade is the prism through which feedback is read (Sutton & Gill,
2010). However, grades are polysemic: they signify different meanings to different
students. As Havnes and McDowell (2008) argue, learners are social agents who
actively construct the meaning of and response to feedback. This is illustrated in
the following statements: a year three learner observed: ‘If I get a good mark I’m
more inclined to read the feedback’; whereas a year two learner from the same
institution observed: ‘Well, if I get a pass, and it’s not the mark I was expecting,
then it would make me read the feedback a lot more in depth to see where I went
wrong.’
The grade then can be a powerful form of feedback to learners. Concentration
upon the grade can be interpreted by academics as a lamentable sign of a surface or
strategic approach to learning. Whilst acknowledging learner instrumentality, I con-
sider it to be only part of the complex process in which learners engage with both
feedback on and for learning. Learners inhabit a learning environment in which
grades are powerful signifiers not only of success and failure but of educational
identity. Furthermore, economic imperatives, particularly the need to undertake
employment to finance studying, impel learners to adopt an instrumental strategy.
Increasingly learners are enrolled as full-time but are in reality studying part-time
(Gibbs, 2006).
A competitive graduate job market also inclines the learner to view studying as
a means to an end rather than an end in itself. In my view, adopting a strategic
approach is a coherent and rational response to the socio-economic conditions
which structure many learners’ experience of higher education. However, the ten-
dency for learners to privilege feedback on knowing does not necessarily mean they
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adopt a simple strategic approach to feedback. This research study suggests that
learners combine elements of a strategic approach with a deep approach to feedback
which engages with feedback for knowing.
In sum, feedback literacy requires learners to engage with the epistemological
dimension of feedback. Some learners find feedback for learning challenging as it
can require them to change their mode of knowing the world and themselves.
I think if we are critical in a more destructive way we’ve really got to watch out.
Some people can handle it. Some people cant, so I think we have to use constructive
language even when we’re giving bad news.
And:
It’s about building people up not knocking them down, and you can knock people
down very easily in your assessment feedback, you can actually damage confidence if
you are not careful.
I get a buzz from giving feedback to students because you can see them open up. It’s
really important for them to hear good things from you . . . then they are confident to
go onto the next step.
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The development of feedback literacy demands, first and foremost, that learners
develop confidence in their own academic ability. As one academic commented:
If you’re encouraging them to have more confidence then it will have an impact on
both what they are saying in class and what they’re thinking about, but also in their
written work because then they may have more confidence to have an opinion.
I don’t think you necessarily develop as a person through the feedback you are given.
You develop as a person through some of the academic staff you meet. There are defi-
nitely two or three people that I can safely say I am a better person for having met
them.
In short, as one academic commented: ‘they’re human beings and it’s about devel-
oping them as human beings’.
In sum, feedback literacy requires learners to engage with the ontological
dimension of feedback. For some learners, developing their mode of educational
being constitutes a challenging and anxiety-provoking experience.
I think for some students it’s about vocabulary, and lexicon as well. Not only do they
not have the words to express themselves, they do not have the words to think. If they
do not have the language ability to deal with complex ideas, I think that holds them
back as well. And then you end up trying to cure all this with feedback. You’re not
just marking an essay you’re trying to develop these different aspects of their cogni-
tive abilities, so it becomes huge.
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Feedback literacy then demands learners acquire the academic language necessary
for understanding, interpreting and thinking with complex ideas. The challenge for
learners is to comprehend and use what may initially appear to be a ‘foreign’ aca-
demic language. As one year two learner commented, learners face ‘language barri-
ers’. This learner perceived that these barriers were not simply created by teachers:
they were the product of class relations, and institutional and disciplinary processes
and practices. He acknowledged the presence of an academic language barrier but
realised ‘it is there for a purpose: for raising people’s language’ and ‘to get others
to actually understand’. But, he continued, ‘I don’t think you have to set the stan-
dard lower’. The challenge then for teachers in today’s mass higher education sys-
tem is to make academic language accessible to learners from increasingly diverse
backgrounds, without denuding it of its power to signify, to analyse, to criticise.
Acknowledgement that the responsibility for learning to read, interpret and act
upon feedback is, in part, the learners’ was expressed by learners in the following
manner: ‘If you want to do well then you have to work out a way of doing well’
(year three learner). Some learners saw this as a process in which ‘you learn what
they want then you incorporate that into the next piece of work’ (year four learner).
This was elaborated upon by other learners who thought that feeding forward feed-
back involved teasing out the tacit expectations of academics: ‘it all depends on the
lecturer’s personal interest, so you have to work out what angle they come from, as
to what angle you take’ (year three learner).
Academics were also seen to have an obligation to provide clear guidance upon
what and how to feed forward feedback: ‘Don’t tell me not to do something without
telling me what I can do to improve it’ (year 4 learner). Enabling learners to develop
the skill of effectively acting upon feedback requires academics to provide more than
feedback on knowing. Feedback for knowing must also be provided otherwise learn-
ers will have nothing to work with to improve their feed forward skills.
In sum, feedback literacy requires learners to engage with the practical dimen-
sion of feedback. For some learners reading, interpreting and acting upon feedback
is a significant challenge.
they are teaching’ (year two learner), then learners generally feel more cared about
and care more about the feedback they receive.
Caring for learners is manifested in a number of ways:
There are different ways of being supportive, obviously the written feedback, but then
it’s always nice when you see one of them and they say “I really enjoyed reading your
essay” or “I’ve never had somebody look at it from this perspective before”. (year
four learner)
This was substantiated by a comment made by one academic: ‘I think they value
the verbal off the cuff responses to what they’re saying just as much as they do the
written feedback.’ An explicit, informal verbal valorization of learning can be a
very important type of feedback.
Formal written and informal verbal feedback contain an articulation of educational
identity. As Lea and Stierer (2009) argue, university teachers everyday writing, and I
would add everyday speech too, is part of the discursive construction of identity.
When academics signify in writing and speech that they care about their learners then
it would appear that the possibility of learners engaging with feedback is enhanced.
In sum, the way in which academics articulate their educational identities within
the social relations of learning and teaching appears to have the potential to either
enable or constrain the development of feedback literacy.
Conclusion
The acquisition of feedback literacy is a complex process which presents learners
with epistemological, ontological and practical challenges. Engagement with each
of these dimensions of feedback presents different challenges for different types of
learner. Each learner negotiates and balances the demands they experience from
feedback in different ways.
Feedback literacy can be facilitated through the provision of feedback that explic-
itly addresses its epistemological, ontological and practical dimensions. This involves
giving feedback for knowing as well feedback on knowing so that learners have
something to work with to improve their performance. It also involves providing feed-
back that enhances learner self-confidence without assuming that learners possess vul-
nerable, diminished educational identities. Therapeutic approaches to feedback are
condescending and may act to undermine the development of learner agency and
autonomy. Feedback literacy also requires learners and teachers to address the lan-
guage barriers which inhibit the capacity for learners to understand, interpret and act
upon feedback.3 Finally, I have suggested that some learners believe that feedback lit-
eracy is mediated by academics’ educational identities. The development of feedback
literacy may therefore be enhanced when learners experience the social relations of
teaching and learning as being characterised by an ethos of care.
Notes
1. See Sutton and Gill 2010 for further details of the research method and analysis.
2. In a future research project, I intend to examine written feedback provided to learners in
order to determine the extent to which it actually provides feedback for knowing.
3. I have argued elsewhere (Sutton, 2009) that making feedback more dialogic goes some
way to overcome such barriers.
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Notes on contributor
Paul Sutton is senior lecturer in Sociology. Current research interests: the scholarship of
learning and teaching, particularly feedback, assessment and curriculum design. In my
research and scholarly activity I seek to develop imaginative ways of using social theory to
develop androgogic practice.
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