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Evaluation score – refer to NSW QTM Classroom Practice Guide for each element
Comments incl. evidence for evaluation score (2 sentences)
1 Intellectual quality
1.1 Deep knowledge
1 – 2 – 3 – 4 – 5 Comments: This lesson plan provides a deep knowledge of notation and recognising pitch. This
lesson then incorporates those ideas into melody writing.
1.5 Metalanguage
1 – 2 – 3 – 4 – 5 Comments: The lesson plan uses technical terms to describe musical concepts. This lesson includes
visual diagrams of musical staff and keyboards.
1.6 Substantive communication
1 – 2 – 3 – 4 – 5 Comments: Apart from the brief composition at the end of the lesson, there is no opportunity for
students to elaborate on their understanding of musical concepts.
2.2 Engagement
1 – 2 – 3 – 4 – 5 Comments: The lesson is designed so that the students are partaking in multiple exercises
throughout the lesson. The activities are short to keep students engaged.
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1–2–3–4–5 Comments: The only time students exercise direction over their learning is the five-minute
composition that the end and the notating words exercise.
3 Significance
3.1 Background knowledge
1 – 2 – 3 – 4 – 5 Comments: The beginning of the lesson has a 5 min summary of the last lesson. However, there is
no opportunity for students to incorporate their own background knowledge.
3.5 Connectedness
1 – 2 – 3 – 4 – 5 Comments: The only time this lesson provides an opportunity for students to share their work is
through the composition at the end of the lesson.
3.6 Narrative
1–2–3–4–5 Comments: This lesson plan does not incorporate Narrative to teach the concept of pitch and
notation.
Identify the four NSW QT model elements you are targeting for improvement.
QT model
1) Student Direction 2) Inclusivity
3) Cultural Knowledge 4) Narrative
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Lesson Plan
Whiteboard /
Keyboards
(Every student has access to a
keyboard) / tuned percussion /
Work sheet that has a diagram
of keyboard (2 octaves) and
blank staff lines.
Teoria.com
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Rhythm dictation: Play some examples and have students write what they
hear (using teoria.com).
Encourage students to make their own clapping exercises. Select a few students to
perform exercise in front of class, while fellow students notate what they think the
rhythm is.
Shortened the time of this activity to provide more time for final activity.
5 Teacher explains the Staff, and explains the Treble Clef dictates what
min notes are presented on the staff.
Explain that there are 7 “white” notes in music and these are arranged in a
repeating pattern.
Have students write down the names of the notes onto the sheet paper. There is a diagram
of a keyboard provided on the sheet paper.
10 Give acronym “Every Good Boy Deserves Fruit” and “FACE” for
min remembering notes on the staff. Ask students to come up with their own.
In addition to this exercise, I would get the students to work in small groups and play the
words on keyboards. For example, if the word was DEAF, students would have to find
the musical notes D, E, A and F.
Explain the concept of comparing pitch in terms of Higher and Lower. Play
two notes on an instrument, have students decide whether the second is
5min higher or lower. Repeat a number of times for clarity.
Explain the concept is presented on the staff. The higher the note on the
page, the higher the pitch.
Students raise hands for higher and point to ground for lower notes
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10 Using a keyboard diagram on whiteboard explain where notes on the stave
mins are located on the keyboard.
Shortened time of the activity to provide more time for final activity.
Play the melody and ask students to raise hands when pitch gets higher
and point to the floor when it becomes lower.
Students compose, perform and notate their own simple melody and
perform to class
Teacher provides an example of own 8 bar composition with lyrics. Teacher tells a
story as to why they have chosen these lyrics.
Students are to work together and write an 8-bar melody. Students are then going to write
lyrics, one word for each musical note played. The lyrics should incorporate student’s
own experiences and values. Students then share compositions to the class. They do not
have to sing, instead speak each word.
Pack up
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How am I measuring the outcomes of this lesson?
After reviewing the quality teaching model, some of the weaknesses of the learning plan include,
Cultural Knowledge, Inclusivity, Student Direction and Narrative. The first change I have made is
included a compositional exercise that incorporates the concepts of Cultural knowledge and
Inclusivity. Cultural Knowledge deals with the question of, how can a lesson be used to explore a
student’s cultural background? Inclusivity involves getting a diverse range of students involved and
participating in classroom activities. In the composition exercise, students have the freedom to write
their own lyrics however, they should be encouraged to write songs about their unique cultural
backgrounds. I have made this exercise group work, this provides students the opportunity to share
their own unique backgrounds with other students. Gore (2007) has suggested that providing students
with diverse cultural perspectives enhances their views on the world, while also avoiding one
dominant cultural perspective. By altering the composition exercise, students become the ones
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providing diverse cultural perspectives. The Year 7 – 10 Syllabus for Music states, one of the aims
of teaching music in school is to “allow a range of music to have a continuing role in their lives”
(Board of Studies, 2003, p. 10). Students are more likely to have an appreciation of music, if the
students, should be recognised as a tool for self-expression. In Music 1 Stage 6 syllabus, it is expected
that students understand, “music is a medium of personal expression that enables the sharing of ideas”
(Board of Studies, 2009, p. 6). The new composition exercise can foster ideas of expression for
The original lesson plan had a focus on the teacher presenting information, followed by students
doing an exercise. There were only brief opportunities for students to engage in Student Direction. I
have extended the time frame for the final composition exercise, as well as provided opportunities
for students to notate words and make their own clapping exercises. In an article by Hellmer (2012)
she discusses student autonomy, she makes the statement that, “the teacher seems to be increasingly
used as a substitute … instead of as a compliment; we are thereby probably losing important issues
like … analytical and critical thinking” (p.51). In the original lesson, students were only given brief
opportunities to implement autonomy over their learning. By extending the timeframe of the
composition exercise and giving students more artistic freedom, they are given more opportunities to
critically think for themselves and problem solve within a group context. The original lesson plan
might not be the most effective way to assess if students have correctly implemented Student
Direction. The echo clapping exercise and the recognising pitch exercises, work on imitation based
learning, the teacher does an exercise and the class follows. By having the students notate onto sheet
paper and perform their songs to the class, followed by collecting sheets at the end of the lesson. The
teacher has a better way of assessing if his/her class can critically think and interpret musical
concepts. Doubet & Virginia (2015) reinforce this idea by stating that informal assessment “informs
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and illuminates the teacher’s preconceptions and beliefs about individual students” (p. 60). With a
physical copy of students work, there is a better way of tracking Student Direction.
The concept of Narrative within the original lesson plan depends on how the teacher teaches the
lesson. In my updated version, I have incorporated the concept of Narrative into the learning plan.
The teacher provides an example of an eight-bar melody with lyrics, then explains why they have
chosen the lyrics, through the form of a short story. This is to be used as an example to prompt
students to think for themselves. Davies (2007) discusses the idea of storytelling within a classroom
context, stating that it can be used as a tool to develop student’s “ability to interpret and understand
events beyond their immediate experience” (p.5). It is highly likely some students in stage four have
not had prior experience in composing. Therefore, they may feel uncomfortable with sharing musical
ideas with peers. Davies (2007) has suggested that storytelling can also make tasks seem more
relatable to students. With these ideas in mind, Narrative can be used as a tool to break down the
barriers between, getting the task done and the students who feel uncomfortable sharing their own
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