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Annotated Bibliography
Adrian Antonescu
UWRT 1103 - H
15 October 2019
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Horrigan, Leo, Robert, S. Lawrence, and Polly, Walker. “How sustainable agriculture can address
the environmental and human health harms of industrial agriculture.” Academic Journal,
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC1240832/pdf/ehp0110-000445.pdf.
In this academic journal, Horrigan explains that industrial agriculture is a major cause of
environmental degradation. He and his colleagues make the point that industrial agriculture is
expensive inputs from off the farm (e.g., pesticides and fertilizer), many of which generate wastes
that harm the environment; it uses large quantities of nonrenewable fossil fuels; and it tends
toward concentration of production, driving out small producers and undermining rural
communities.” They go on to list in bullet form the more precise ways that industrial agriculture
harms the environment. The lead author of this journal, Leo Horrigan earned his Master of Health
Sciences in Health Policy from Johns Hopkins Bloomberg School of Public Health. Horrigan
worked in the newspaper industry for 20 years. Horrigan’s co-authors included Robert S.
Lawrence, who was a member of the Global Health Advisory Committee, as well as the board of
Trustees. He also graduated from Johns Hopkins Bloomberg School of Public Health. The final
co-writer is Polly Walker, an associate of the 2 other authors. The journal is backed by some
incredibly reliable authors, which ads to its integrity. The source itself is a little dated, but its
thoughts still echo today. Not much has changed in industrial agriculture from the 2002’s to now.
The authors of this document have formatted and written it very neutral, but it is obvious that they
believe industrial agriculture needs a large change for the environment to stop its degrading. Their
opinion is more based on facts from their research rather than biases beforehand. One of the many
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ways the journal describes some of the possible changes for industrial agriculture is in a quote
saying, “Sustainable agriculture systems are based on relatively small, profitable farms that use
fewer off-farm inputs, integrate animal and plant production where appropriate, maintain a higher
biotic diversity, emphasize technologies that are appropriate to the scale of production, and make
the transition to renewable forms of energy” This quote illustrates a more environmentally clean
way to farm. This source is a reliable source due to the achievements and history of its writers,
and its worth as an academic journal. The journal is professionally written and has relevant
information for my essay. I will be using this journal to back up the main points of my essay. This
source describes the threat of industrial agriculture, which is an effect from the demand of
vegetables and fruits going up. This itself is caused by the popularization of vegetarianism. Since
the article solely contains facts from research it is a wonderful source to use in my final essay.
Mitloenher, Frank. “Yes, eating meat affects the environment, but cows are not killing the
http://theconversation.com/yes-eating-meat-affects-the-environment-but-cows-are-not-
Miltoenher explains how the United Nations Food and Agriculture Organization (FAO) made an
inaccurate assessment of livestock emissions, and ever since then scientists around the would
have been trying to fix the mess with actual information. The article also uses other certified
sources to support their argument that livestock are not the prime factor for climate change. The
author of this article is Frank Miltoenher, he is a professor in animal sciences and an air quality
extension specialist. He teaches and researches at the University of California. He is reliable due
to his resume. The article is not even a year old, making the information on it still relevant. The
information loosely fits into my topic, it is good background information. Its main idea is not spot
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on with my question. Miltoenher cites multiple professional and reliable sources, many of which
are government agencies. “For example, a 2009 analysis published by the Washington, D.C.-
based Worldwatch Institute asserted that 51 percent of global GHG emissions come from rearing
and processing livestock.” The author is biased towards livestock not being a major cause of
climate change. He makes his point very clear throughout the article with lines like, “A key claim
underlying these arguments holds that globally, meat production generates more greenhouse gases
than the entire transportation sector. However, this claim is demonstrably wrong, as I will show.”
And its persistence has led to false assumptions about the linkage between meat and climate
change.” cement the authors bias. Use of words like demonstrably illustrate the annoyance the
author has to the false claims of livestock changing the climate on its own. Miltoenher’s bias
allows me to view his point of view only, so all I have taken from this article is that there are
many more reasons climate change is occurring, and animals have a very low interference rate
with it. This is a respectable and reliable source, which is written well. I would like to use it in my
essay, but as of now I am not entirely sold on the idea, since the article itself does not describe my
With farm’s many benefits, come some downsides. These include an increase of methane, nitrous
oxide and carbon dioxide in the atmosphere, while pesticides and fertilizers are also released into
the environment. Methane, nitrous acid, and carbon dioxide are all harmful to the atmosphere in
large concentrations. “The most significant climate change associated with agriculture is brought
about by methane, nitrous oxide and carbon dioxide, all of which are greenhouse gases released
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into the Earth’s atmosphere from farming.” (Wanza) The increase of said greenhouse gases are
the leading cause of climate change. Other compounds like pesticides and fertilizers can cause
pollution and contamination of water or soil. “The widely used are pesticides and fertilizers,
which end up as pollutants in water run-off from the soil. This run-off can adversely affect more
people and animal wildlife.” (Wanza) Farming can also cause deforestation and degrade in soil
quality, which causes erosion. Erosion is when soil becomes loose and nutrient poor and becomes
loose in the ground. This leads to the loss of a large amount of soil, uprooting plants and
destroying habitats. Farming may have some unfortunate side effects, but we also must remember
that without it, everyone on earth would starve. The consequences of farming are unavoidable,
and until we discover a way to diminish them, we will just have to live with the damage to our
planet. The author of this article is Serah Wanza, she is a writer for WorldAtlas. WorldAtlas is an
organization that’s job is to map the world and document its findings. The company is a
professional organization that has been around since 1994. It is a website that has made it its goal
to inform readers about geography. The article is about 1 and a half years old, so it is relatively
new. It was updated in May of 2018, indicating that the article is being edited with current
information in the topic. The article is incredibly useful for my paper since it exhibits information
that is crucial for a lot of my points. I plan to incorporate it into my essay as a main contributing
source of backup information. However, the author is biased towards agriculture harming the
environment. In the article, she barely mentions any of the positives of farming. This is unfair to
readers since she only has an argument, with no counter argument. This proves that the author is
more focused on her agenda, rather than making a fair argument. She explains the problems with
farming, but names none of the pros of it. The article itself is here to explain the harm agriculture
inflicts on the environment, so it is solely based on the consequences of agriculture. This bias
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influences my evaluation of the article by assuming that agriculture causes more harm than good,
which is arguably not true. The article is a good source of information, but it is one-sided to say