correction tips 081219

- leave one new line after heading

- only split stentences if you can (ex: There are several ways to electrify your
existing bike and start climbing up those hills. -> cannot split)
- use POINT (.) and new sentence instead of ;
- split paragraphs each 4 to 8 rows approx
- new line after paragraph of 4 to 8 lines
- try to do it in a way that when pasted into grammarly stays like that
- title should be same as mine (ex: Convert Bicycle into Electric -> Convert
Bicycle to Electric)
- use more transition words at the beginning of each sentence
- headings under heading must be very clear about what they are talking about
- on text you always have to know what IT, THIS, etc refers to (for example you can
mention the name instead of IT or THIS etc)
- change passive to active voice if possible (is best suited for -> it is best for)
- convert one sentences into two or more if possible (ex: Friction Drive is best
for riders who often go off-road on steep/loose tracks, besides, on the passengers
who are happy to feel the ride and get more. -> Friction Drive is best for riders
who often go off-road on steep/loose tracks. Besides, passengers are happy to feel
the ride and get more.)
- is very important that everythign has meaning (ex: to feel the ride and get more.
-> to feel the ride and get more FUN.)
- remove or rewrite sentence if no meaning (ex: The combination of more motors,
wheel maintenance, there is no possibility of internal hub gears mean increased
overall maintenance. -> With wheel maintenance, there is no possibility of damage
on internal hub gears.)
- heading with upper case each first letter (The best electric mid-drive hub -> The
Best Electric Mid-Drive Hub)
- match heading meaning/description with what the text talks about
- convert all unoriginal text to not unoriginal by rewriting or using synonyms
- move heading/text more related to topic up on article, and less related to topic
down on article
-use topic keyword always you can
(ex: There are many advantages to going ebike conversion kits.
There are many advantages to Convert Bicycle to Electric)
- if a text is very related to topic and can be used as introduction, then move to
introduction OR put after introduction
if introduction is already long
- mantain topic keyword if grammarly says is an error
- example: The kit (we do not know which one), so better: Kits (in general)
- do not say prices (ex: Voilamart is just for around $150 that makes it the
foremost reasonable choice. -> Voilamart makes it the foremost reasonable choice.)
- lists better if converted to sentences