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Nowadays, technology is important to our lives.

Technology can immediately


done our works and become productive. It helps us in different ways like
communication, we communicate to our friends, family, relatives and etc. by the
used of internet we can easily communicate them. For applying in the university
so that it is not hassle to enroll, for applying job through email, for booking in
reservations to hotels, for travels and for occasions. It also helps in our education
so that we cannot have a hard time to look for references in our study.
Technology is very useful instruments in our generation that are more on
technologies.

The disadvantages of not having internet and not having technology in many
houses (like computer) we cannot easily access the important informations that
we want to know. We cannot communicate to our relatives because of lack
access in internet and modern technology. Having lack in technologies in job can
make hard time for the employee to work productively. Some people in different
places that do not have the modern technology is big impact to them because
they cannot compete international in terms of production and services to their
job. This generation, technology is the one powerful equipment to produce a
product and less the manpower. For example in Japan, robot is the one who
teach to the students, to produce improved products and give an efficient
services.

Technologies can make equity all over the world. Having internet and
technologies to the places that cannot access, if they are having this the skills will
improve in different ways and can compete international they can easily find
ways to their problems, easily to apply jobs, for booking reservations in travels
and for the occasionally and easily to study for looking informations. If we have
this, we are equal to compete by technology and it helps our country to boast in
production.

According to Zlatko Stojanov, we are living in an era of advanced technology,


where every part of our daily lives is related to the science of craft in one way or
another. There’s no doubt that over the years technology has been responsible
for creating amazingly useful resources which put all the information we need at
our fingertips. The development of technology has led to so many mind-blowing
discoveries, better facilities, and better luxuries, but at the same has dramatically
changed our daily lives. Various highly-developed gadgets, connected to the
Internet, have changed the way we communicate, use humor, study, work, shop,
play, and behave.

According to Kirsty S. Hughes, The article analyses the structure of trade


and trade performance of the largest six OECD economies in the 1980s. The
article is concerned in particular with the role of technology and innovation and
the relationship between specialization in sectors of high, medium or low
technology intensity and trade performance. It assesses the argument that the
maintenance of international competitiveness requires the advanced economies
to become internationally competitive, and to specialize, in higher technology
sectors, given that there is increasing competition, especially from newly
industrializing countries in low technology products. Section I considers the
theoretical basis of this hypothesis; Section II assesses whether it is compatible
with data on manufacturing trade performance in the 1980s.

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It assesses the argument that the maintenance of international competitiveness requires


the advanced economies to become internationally competitive, and to specialize, in
higher technology sectors, given that there is increasing competition, especially from
newly industrializing countries in low technology products. Section I considers the
theoretical basis of this hypothesis; Section II assesses whether it is compatible with data
on manufacturing trade performance in the 1980s.
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There’s no doubt that over the years technology has been responsible for creating
amazingly useful resources which put all the information we need at our fingertips. The
development of technology has led to so many mind-blowing discoveries, better
facilities, and better luxuries, but at the same has dramatically changed our daily lives.
Various highly-developed gadgets, connected to the Internet, have changed the way we
communicate, use humor, study, work, shop, play, and behave.
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It assesses the argument that the maintenance of international competitiveness requires


the advanced economies to become internationally competitive, and to specialize, in
higher technology sectors, given that there is increasing competition, especially from
newly industrializing countries in low technology products. Section I considers the
theoretical basis of this hypothesis; Section II assesses whether it is compatible with data
on manufacturing trade performance in the 1980s.

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30% -
https://www.researchgate.net/publication/24082743_Technology_and_International_Co
mpetitiveness

61% - http://www.tandfonline.com/doi/abs/10.1080/758539006

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