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Usecolloquialwordsandclichés
with caution 6
• The engineers left no stones unturned to construct the
bridge in time.
• The engineers worked very hard to construct the bridge in
time.
• In this day and age, websites are one of the most
significant public faces of any organization.
• Today, websites are one of the most significant public faces
of any organization.
• At the end of the day, it is the minister himself who has to
make the decision.
• Ultimately, it is the minister himself who has to make the
decision.
• This ain't working.
• This is not working.
• It is kind of cold outside.
• It is rather cold outside. 7
•A significant loss •A 70% loss
•Good attendance record •100% attendance record
• When one needs service, one has the right to ask for it.
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Avoid words with a masculine origin
Sexist Gender- Neutral
Man-made Manufactured, of human origin
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Avoid words that lower one’s status
by gender
authoress author
actress actor
poetess poet
sculptress sculptor
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Other stereotypes to avoid
• Race • Disability
➢ A generous Jew ➢ Deaf and dumb
➢ A Chinese manager ➢ Crippled
➢ A hardworking African American
• visually impaired, Hard-
of-hearing, Person with a
physical disability
• Age
➢ Old people- Appropriate words are:-retired, -experienced, veteran
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• There are over 300 customers served by our help
desk each day. The help desk personnel’s main tasks
are to answer questions, solve problems, and
educate the callers about the software. Without
their expert work, our customer satisfaction ratings
would be much lower than they are.
Eg.
My first visit to Boston will always be remembered
by me.
I will always remember my first visit to Boston. 25
What happens when active sentence
becomes passive
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• The office will be inspected by Mr. Hall.
• All the necessary precautions were taken by them.
• The profit and loss statement is prepared by the treasurer each month.
• The new process is believed to be superior by the investigators.
• This policy has been supported by our union.
• The policy was enforced by the committee.
• A gain of 30.1 percent was reported for hardware sales.
• A complete reorganization of the administration was effected by the
President.
• Our action is based on the assumption that the competition will be taken
by surprise.
• Mr. Hall will inspect the office.
• They took all the necessary precautions.
• The treasurer prepares the profit and loss statement each month.
• The investigators believe that the new process is superior.
• Our union supported this policy.
• The committee enforced the policy.
• Hardware sales gained 30.1 percent.
• The President completely reorganized the administration.
• We take this action because we believe that it will surprise our 29
competition.
Passive voice is better
• When the doer of the action is not important
Eg: The package was delivered this morning.
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Avoidoveruseof Camouflagedverbs
• Elimination of the surplus was effected by the staff.
• The staff eliminated the surplus.
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Action Verb Noun Form Wording of
Camouflaged Verb
• Acquire • Acquisition • Make an acquisition
• Appear • Appearance • Make an appearance
• Apply • Application • Make an application
• Appraise • Appraisal • Make an appraisal
• Assist • Assistance • Give assistance to
• Cancel • Cancellation • Make a Cancellation
• Commit • Commitment • Make a commitment
• Discuss • Discussion • Have a discussion
• Investigate • Investigation • Make an investigation
• Judge • Judgment • Make a judgment
• Liquidate • Liquidation • Effect a liquidation
• Reconcile • Reconciliation • Make a reconciliation
• Record • Recording • Make a recording
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Prefer strong verbs to verbs
turned into nouns.
Verb turned into noun Strong Verb
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• Bill Jones is a drill press operator. He has been employed
by Allied Manufacturing. He has been employed for 15
years. He is retiring. He is retiring on June 15.
• Bill Jones, a drill press operator who has been with Allied
Manufacturing for 15 years, will be retiring on June 15.
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Use short sentences
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Limit sentence content
• We can see from the above list that though the average
number of customers per day is small, the turnover is
maximum because at other restaurants the main items
of sale are tea, coffee, and snacks, whereas at this
restaurant meals are also available.
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Eliminate surplus words
• It will be noted that the records for the past years show a
steady increase in special appropriations.
• The records for the past years show a steady increase in
special appropriations.
• There are four rules that should be observed.
• Four rules should be observed.
• His performance was good enough to enable him to qualify
him for the promotion.
• His performance was good enough to qualify him for the
promotion.
• The machines that were damaged by the fire were
repaired.
• The machines damaged by the fire were repaired. 45
Avoid roundabout constructions
• The president is of the opinion that the tax was paid.
• The president believes that the tax was paid.
• The department budget can be observed to be decreasing each
new year.
• The department budget decreases each new year.
• He criticized everyone he came in contact with.
• He criticized everyone he met.
• The union is involved in the task of reviewing the seniority
provision of the contract.
• The union is reviewing the seniority provision of the contract.
• During the time he was employed by this company, Mr. Sharma
was absent once.
• While employed by this company, Mr. Sharma was absent once.
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Avoid unnecessary repetition of words or ideas
• We have not received your payment covering invoices
covering June and July purchases.
• We have not received your payment covering invoices for June
and July purchases.
• Please endorse your name on the back of this cheque.
• Please endorse this cheque.
• If you are not satisfied, return it back to us.
• If you are not satisfied, return it to us.
• One should know the basic fundamentals of writing.
• One should know the fundamentals of clear writing.
• In my opinion, I think the plan is sound.
• I think the plan is sound.
• Our new model is longer in length than the old one.
• Our new model is longer than the old one. 47
Giving the Sentences Unity
Avoid the unity error- Unrelated Ideas
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• Our production increased in January, and our equipment
is wearing out.
• Even though our equipment is wearing out, our
production increased in January.
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• I am happy to report…
• You will be happy to know…
• We are pleased to have your new account.
• Your new charge account is now open for your
convenience.
• “We make Kodak digital cameras for three levels: beginner,
intermediate, and professional.”
• “So that you can choose the one camera that is just right
for you, Kodak makes cameras for you in three models:
basic, standard, and full- featured.”