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Wednesday, August 18, 2010

IELTS Writing Task 2: full essay
Usually I suggest writing 4 paragraphs for task 2. However, sometimes it might be better to write 5 paragraphs. The
following essay question has three parts, so I've written three main body paragraphs (5 paragraphs in total).
Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do
to address these problems? What can individual people do?
Humans are responsible for a variety of environmental problems, but we can also take steps to reduce the damage that we
are causing to the planet. This essay will discuss environmental problems and the measures that governments and
individuals can take to address these problems.
Two of the biggest threats to the environment are air pollution and waste. Gas emissions from factories and exhaust
fumes from vehicles lead to global warming, which may have a devastating effect on the planet in the future. As the
human population increases, we are also producing ever greater quantities of waste, which contaminates the earth and
pollutes rivers and oceans.
Governments could certainly make more effort to reduce air pollution. They could introduce laws to limit emissions from
factories or to force companies to use renewable energy from solar, wind or water power. They could also impose ‘green
taxes’ on drivers and airline companies. In this way, people would be encouraged to use public transport and to take fewer
flights abroad, therefore reducing emissions.
Individuals should also take responsibility for the impact they have on the environment. They can take public transport
rather than driving, choose products with less packaging, and recycle as much as possible. Most supermarkets now
provide reusable bags for shoppers as well as ‘banks’ for recycling glass, plastic and paper in their car parks. By reusing
and recycling, we can help to reduce waste.
In conclusion, both national governments and individuals must play their part in looking after the environment.
Note:
This essay is exactly 250 words long. I've tried to make it as simple as possible, but it's still good enough to get a band 9.
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Hi, Simon
It is really a fantastic essay. It is a simply great. I have one question like You have just written only one sentence in conclusion, that is
excellent without doubt, but do we need to tell something about first part of question like some of the ways in which we are damaging
the environment? or it is alright to mention only about solutions from government and individuals in conclusion?
please do not mind, I am just asking not assesing your work.

Thanking you,

Jay

Posted by: Jay | Wednesday, August 18, 2010 at 13:56

Hi Jay,

I´m glad you like the essay. Don´t worry - your question is really useful.

You are right that it would be a good idea to mention the problems in the conclusion as well as the solutions. However, this wouldn´t
change your score. The conclusion is much less important than the main body paragraphs. If you´re in a hurry at the end of the exam, a
one-sentence conclusion will be fine.

All the best,

Simon
Posted by: Simon | Wednesday, August 18, 2010 at 20:40

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Thanks kindly, Simon

Posted by: Jay | Thursday, August 19, 2010 at 04:41

No problem Jay
Posted by: Simon | Friday, August 20, 2010 at 17:30
Hi Simon.

Just thought i would let you know how i went in my IELTS exam.
Got my results on 16th August. I got L8,R9,W8 S7.5.
I am happy overall, but disappointed with speaking. My examiner was very unfriendly. She did not smile even once during the exam. I
had feeling that i was talking to the brick wall. Very unpleasant experince indeed.

Well, it is all over now.

Regards,
Andre

Posted by: ANDRE | Saturday, August 21, 2010 at 06:15

Hi Andre,
I'm sorry to hear you had an unpleasant speaking test, but your scores are excellent!
Well done, and good luck for the future.

Simon

Posted by: Simon | Saturday, August 21, 2010 at 12:43

thanks

Posted by: Hend | Saturday, August 21, 2010 at 22:46

No problem Hend

Posted by: Simon | Sunday, August 22, 2010 at 11:32

Hi, Simon.
i have a question" Is it Ok if I use the following template in answering the problem-solving type of questions ?

A little background + In this essay, I would like to analyze the reasons for this problem and propose some possible solutions.

I am not sure if I can use the " I would like to " structure in this IELTS writing.

Thanks

Posted by: adverb | Monday, August 23, 2010 at 11:42

Hi Adverb,

Yes, it's fine. Personally, I'd just write "I will" (I'd probably use "I would like to" at the start of a spoken presentation) but it's not wrong.
All the best

Posted by: Simon | Monday, August 23, 2010 at 12:30

I have a mania for your lessons, Simon. Thank you.

Posted by: CAPTAIN BEAR | Thursday, November 25, 2010 at 17:13

I'm glad you like them Captain.

Posted by: Simon | Thursday, November 25, 2010 at 23:13

hey simon really liked it helped me a lot. i have one question you should mention someways globalwarming affects plants and animals.
Posted by: vishaal shah | Sunday, February 20, 2011 at 09:09
Hi Vishaal,

You can mention global warming, but you don't have to. The question just says "explain some of the ways..." so you can choose which
problems to discuss.

Posted by: Simon | Monday, February 21, 2011 at 11:05

hi simon
The world’s human population has passed 6 billion and continues to increase. The growth in the human population and the increase in
the standard of living are putting strains on the global environment.

what do u think, is it good introduction for this essay?

Posted by: julia | Tuesday, August 16, 2011 at 15:28

You've got the right idea Julia.

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Posted by: Simon | Tuesday, August 16, 2011 at 15:58

Can i ask you what kind of essay is this??????????

Posted by: wael | Wednesday, November 09, 2011 at 17:49

Hi Wael,

We call this a "problem / solution" question. You have to explain the problem (damaging the environment) and suggest solutions (what
can governments and individuals do?).

Posted by: Simon | Thursday, November 10, 2011 at 10:58

Word 297

People are harming the environment in many ways because lack of awareness or negligence. As a result many negative consequences
like global warming, landslide are happening. In such worsening condition the government and individual must take action to solve the
problem.

The main reason of the environmental pollution is increasing trend of transportation and industries. The smokes from the vehicles are
the main reason of the environmental pollution in major cities like Kathmandu. These old vehicles emit harmful chemicals and gases
like nitrogen oxide and carbon monoxide, which are harmful to living beings and also destroys the earth protecting ozone layer. In
addition the chemicals are being highly used in the industries; as a result those harmful chemicals are left into the rivers and land,
which is being the major cause of water pollution in Kathmandu. And the usage of plastics and plastic products cannot be neglected.
The government must organize awareness programs for public. People must be aware of the causes of environmental pollution; so they
could avoid mistakes in the future. In addition, the government should take action immediately to stop deforestation by strict law and
monitoring. Furthermore, sewage management is the biggest problem in Kathmandu Valley, it should be well organized. Moreover, law
in the sector of industry and transportation should be implemented strictly.
On the other hand, individuals should take responsibility to save own community. Firstly they need to keep their own society neat and
clean. In addition waste management should be considered seriously. Secondly they need to think of alternative natural resources
rather than using chemicals like bio gas, solar energy.
To sum up, pollution in environment is increasing day by day in most of the part of the world. So, governments and public should join
hands together to solve the problem.

I would be really grateful, if anyone could point the problem in my essay?

Posted by: Nirmal | Friday, April 27, 2012 at 14:31

It is true that people are the major cause of environmental consequences. To maintain the damaging environment governments and
individual people should work together to overcome the problem.
Human are destroying the environment in several ways. Firstly, human made factories, industries and vehicles are the major causes for
air pollution. The emission and exhaustion of fumes from industries and vehicles are destroying the ozone layers. For instance
accumulation of carbon dioxide in the environment is creating the global warming. Secondly, people are cutting trees for land and
furniture. Such deforestation of rainforest is the major cause of flooding and droughts. Finally, people are using non-biodegradable
plastic bags for packing of fast food and many various consumer products. That is also another considerable factor.
Governments must make strict law to protect the environment. They need to limit the emission of harmful chemicals by industries and
vehicles. Promoting public transport, trains can be the better solution to reduce increasing transport pollution. Condition of vehicles
must be assessed properly very often. Moreover, public awareness campaign can be fruitful to aware people about serious issues like
global warming.
Along with governments, individual people should take this case seriously. They can use public transportation rather than using single
private car for office and other works. They also have to use less flight for holidays to protect the environment. In addition they can
plant some trees in their garden to make environment green. Using biodegradable bags like paper bags can help to reduce further
damaging of the environment. In addition, they can make rubbish bin to separate different types of waste in their home.
In conclusion, humans are mainly responsible for damaging environment. So, government and individual people should collaborate to
protect from further destruction.

Posted by: Nirmal | Friday, May 25, 2012 at 12:47

hi simon
Can I improve my ielts writing ability by memorizing your essays ?

Posted by: wzheng | Sunday, October 27, 2013 at 03:39

Here is my first two paragraphs, wish someone who can see it give me some comments. Cheers!
Recent years, many examples of extreme weather such as the snow in the North America and the flood in the Pacific countries alert the
awareness of the public. Many human activities should take the responsibility for the environmental problems and it is necessary to
figure out solutions both from social and individual perspective.

The main reason causing environmental problems is the traffic. Numerous cars running on roads generate tons of carbon dioxide which
is a major component of the greenhouse gas. The emission of carbon dioxide along with other incomplete burning gases from the

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exhaust tube can prohibit the earth’s heat losing. As a result, the inevitable temperature increase will lead to the world climate change.

Posted by: Shawn Lee | Monday, January 13, 2014 at 12:04

i am glad.

Posted by: saiful | Tuesday, February 11, 2014 at 02:48

It's an useful website for learning Ielts. Tks Simon
Posted by: Han Chubby | Friday, March 07, 2014 at 02:10
It is really a fantastic essay.. Thank u so much.
Really eminent
Thank u so much.. I'd need it urgently

Posted by: Navu dhillon | Sunday, August 24, 2014 at 06:54

Hey,Simon is it ok if i print this out and use put it in my school project?

Posted by: sean murphy | Monday, October 20, 2014 at 14:46

Hi Sean,
Yes, that's fine.

Posted by: Simon | Wednesday, October 22, 2014 at 10:58

I hv difficulty in speakng section...could u plz help me

Ann

Posted by: ann | Tuesday, January 13, 2015 at 15:51

Dear Simon,

I have a question regarding the fourth paragraph of this essay. In the second sentence , you used "they" to address "individual people",
while in the last sentence, "we" was used instead.

Does it mean that in this kind of essay, "we" and "they" can be used interchangeably?

Thank you in advance, I'm using your website on a daily basis to prepare my IELTS exam, it is really really helpful.

Regards，
Yishu

Posted by: Yishu Siow | Wednesday, March 18, 2015 at 11:03

Hi Yishu,

Yes, both words can be used in this context.

I'm glad you like the website!

Posted by: Simon | Friday, March 20, 2015 at 08:34

Hi Simon,
thank you for your essays.
In December I tried to take IELTS test and for writing I've got 6.5, I need 7.5 for each part.
My Task 2 topic was: Nowadays environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual persons or individual countries. In
other words, it is an international problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
I couldn't find any ideas what to write about.
Please advise, if I'd used ideas from your essay above, would I answer the question of my topic?
thank you in advance

Posted by: Tina | Friday, April 01, 2016 at 12:13

Hi simon ,
I need some ideas regarding the topic traffic pollution has become a major threat to waste the time of people. Why it happens? What
steps can be to reduce it? What alternative can be used?
Please advise me if u have some ideas
I m very thankful to you in advance

Posted by: Sonpreet | Wednesday, August 31, 2016 at 12:38

Nice post Simon. Glad to be here.

Thanks a lot for sharing.

Posted by: Spark | Monday, December 05, 2016 at 05:56

its nice to see and helps us to write essay on same topic if it arrives in ielts exams

Posted by: eriag donib nepalese | Friday, January 20, 2017 at 09:25

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Dear Simon Thanks a lot for your incredible efforts.

I noted you used problems three times in the introduction. Can we use other synonyms such as matter issue or something else to ensure
higher scores.

Posted by: Farooq Hussain | Friday, February 03, 2017 at 15:45

Hi Farooq,

Well noticed - yes, you could use "issues" for example.

Posted by: Simon | Monday, February 06, 2017 at 19:39

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Posted by: . | Friday, July 07, 2017 at 13:26

Hi Mr Simon could you post STRUCTURE OF OPPONION ESSAY please!

Posted by: FEEROOTH | Wednesday, December 13, 2017 at 12:12

All means of travel should be made more expensive in order to help protect the environment. Do you agree ?

Posted by: Brian | Wednesday, August 07, 2019 at 15:56

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