四、作业

（一）举例论证
要求：以中心句为开头，按照对应的论证方式，将每个分论点补充完整，
要求字数不低于 120 字。
1.Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study in a group. Which
do you prefer?（个人经历）
中心句：
A study group enables the members to get a wide range of information through
group discussions.
A study group enables the members to get a wide range of information through
group discussions. Myself, as the example, was once participated in a physical study
group. To be honest, my physics was quite poor at that time, and I had no idea how
to improve it. So I went to ask my nest friend Tony for help since his physics was
pretty good. Tony invited me to join a physical study group. In the group, we studied
together, and classmates in it helped me to solve the problems I faced, and taught
me how to build a theoretical framework of Physics which refresh my understand of
Physics. After studied with them for a couple weeks, I got an ‘A’ in my final exam of
Physics. Without the help of everyone in the group, I can’t get such a great
advancement in Physics.
例子还不错，可以用。

2.Universities should require every graduation students to take public speaking

courses.（个人经历）
中心句：
Finally, students equipped with sophisticated speaking skills will become more
competitive candidates in future job markets. Nowadays, competitions in jobs
become more and more fierce. The confidence and bravery gained from public
speaking courses become the indispensable conditions of being a competitive
candidate. That’s why students with abundant public speaking experiences are more
popular among others when finding a job. My sister is a pertinent example. She was
once be elected as the host of the New year party in the university and prepared a
lot for this party. After graduated from the university, she wrote this precious
experience into her resume as a plus, which made her got her dream offer.
题目讨论的是 public speaking courses ，但是举的例子与题目毫无关系，没有谈
到 public speaking courses。修改建议：比如上了演讲课，并且精心准备参加了某
个演讲比赛，得了第一名，后来把这个写进了简历里，获得了好工作等。

3.For a business to be successful, men must spend a lot of money on advertising.

（名人名事）
中心句：
Also, enterprises need to improve their products and services for which
customers pay essentially. Nowadays, consumers are more careful about the
merchandises’ quality and their feelings of consumption. Keeping improving the
products and services is a more effective way for an enterprise to earn a good
reputation than spending a large sum of money on advertising. Steve Jobs, the
founder of Apple, is a good case in point. While he was still alive, he always uses his
brilliant talent to polish every product of Apple instead of putting a lot of attention at
advertising. And that’s why Apple can now become a worldwide leading company so
quickly.

这一段还不错，有说理，有举例，而且都很有说服力。

（二）开头结尾段
要求：针对每个题目各写出一个开头段和结尾段。
1.Parents have spent too much time helping determine the future of their
children, children should make their own decisions.
When taking about interference of children’s future from parents, some people
argue that parents should spend their time helping plan the future of their children.
However, others may hold a totally different opinion that children should choose
their ways by their own. From my perspective, letting children to make their own
decision might be better for their future development.

In conclusion, because of several reason discussed above, children’s future

should be determined by their own. 写不出来了 结尾段好难写

2.In many countries, people are no longer permitted to smoke in public places
and places of work. Do you support or oppose this rule?
As we all known, smoking is harmful to both the smokers and the people
surrounding them. Under such circumstance, whether to ban people smoking in
public and places of work arouses a lot of discussion. In my opinion, banning people
from smoke in public and work place is really urgent.
3.Only movies that teach us something about real life are worth watching.

When talking about the preference of movies, people vary from each other.
Some people argue that only movies that teach us something about real life are
worth watching. However, other may hold a different opinion that other types of
movie also have their unique meanings to real life. From my perspective, I would like
to appreciate movies with different meanings not just the movies with some real life
truths.
这个开头段写的可以。