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WP1: “After seeing Rachel: The thesis “Op-eds are a I incorporated the
the movie, I wanted needs work, add why common genre in reason for why I
to know if other you picked op-eds today’s society, so I chose op-eds which
people felt the same and be explicit on took this as an gave more context to
way I did about it, so why you selected opportunity to learn the reader. I also
I chose to look into your favorite why they are effective changed my original
three different op-ed in catching the thesis which changed
pieces on the movie. Samantha: After the reader’s attention. the whole structure of
The article that I quarter, I do not agree The article that I the essay.
enjoyed the most is with my original enjoyed the most is
“The Grudge is a opinion “Review: Once it gets
perfect case study in going, ‘The Grudge’
Hollywood franchise is terrifying” because
rot” by Adam the points presented
Epstein.” differ from the typical
reasons an author
gives on a movie
review”
WP1: Did not have Samantha: Add “However, Murray’s The analysis helps to
any. analysis for why the op-ed is the best strengthen my
best source is the best because it doesn’t argument and to
necessarily uphold support my thesis.
the standards of what
a horror movie is. The
author’s perspective
is new, refreshing and
because of this, the
op-ed’s success is
unexpected. The
author diverges from
the typical
expectations on
horror movies and
focuses on aspects
that make the movie
unique. In doing this,
his own voice shines
through his writing.
His formatting and
goals remain
consistent with any
op-ed, but his
approach is so distinct
that it captures the
reader’s attention. It
was also the most
persuasive because of
the personal
connection that
Murray established. It
is difficult to disagree
with someone’s
opinion when they
touch on points that
are terrifying in your
own life. It is
interesting to realize
that sometimes the
most successful
articles are ones
written by authors
who use the basic
foundations of a
genre as a starting
point, but eventually
incorporate their own
individuality to
separate their
opinions from the
rest”
WP1: “In my opinion, Samantha: Delete the Deleted it. This analysis no
Epstein’s op-ed was analysis for the longer supported my
the best because it previous thesis since I new thesis, so
resonated most with changed the thesis removing it
the type of reading I strengthened my new
enjoy. It is the most argument.
entertaining read.
There is clear logic
throughout the article,
the data is
convincing, well
explained and
unbiased. Meanwhile,
the exaggerated word
choice makes the op-
ed humorous and the
sample feels shorter
than it is because it is
such a quick read. It
was also the most
persuasive op-ed
because the
combination of the
thesis, claim and
reasoning was so
effective. I think the
author’s voice really
showed through the
piece, and the text felt
almost
conversational. While
the author did stick to
the constraints of the
genre, his
individuality was
what shined through.
His piece felt unique
while the other two
did not. While this is
my opinion, it is
important to
remember that
everyone’s likes and
dislikes are different”
WP2: “The Rachel: Move this to Moved from Moving the sentence
psychology report, another paragraph paragraph 2 into allowed for more
“Beyond Cultural paragraph 5. clarity because in the
Factors to Understand other draft, the text
Immigrant Mental seemed irrelevant in
Health: the paragraph it was
Neighborhood Ethnic located since I didn’t
Density and the touch on that article
Moderating Role of until the second half
Pre-migration and of the essay. By
Post-migration moving it, my paper
Factors” is written by had better
Sandra P. Arevalo, organization.
Katherine L. Tucker,
and Luis M Falcon. In
their report, the
authors claim that
assimilating into a
host country
negatively impacts
immigrants’ physical
and mental health.”
WP2: “Even though Rachel: Delete I deleted the sentence. The sentence
the audience knows introduced ideas that I
by this point that the did not touch on nor
authors hold a PhD, expand on, so
we don’t know in removing it allowed
what, so their for my essay to be
familiarity with APA more concise and
begins to show that cohesive.
the authors are
familiar with the
sciences”