LETTERS

Positive:

February 28, 2020

Madison Burch
Sherwood High School
Class of 2020

Dear Madison,

I appreciate the initiative you have taken in reaching out and filling out our recruiting
questionnaire. I was able to watch you play this weekend, February 22, and was encouraged by
what I saw.

Your technical skills, as well as your visible team chemistry, was a joy to watch. You mentioned
in a past email that you will be attending our upcoming ID camp on March 7. I am excited to see
you play again and would like to sit down with you afterward and discuss committing to play at
George Fox and what your next steps would look like.

Feel free to email or call with any questions. I look forward to speaking again soon.

Sincerely,

Brooke Jones 
 
Brooke Jones
Recruiting Coordinator
George Fox Women’s Soccer
bjones@georgefox.edu
503-123-4567
Negative:

February 28, 2020

Madison Burch
Sherwood High School
Class of 2020

Dear Madison,

Thank you for reaching out and including your team’s game schedule. I was able to make it out
to two of your games in the past week and watch you play.

You have great potential as a player but have some areas to grow. Specifics including passing
accuracy, communication, and positive body language on and off the field. At this time we will
not be pursuing recruitment further. If you feel you have more to show I suggest you sign up for
our ID camp on March 7.

Feel free to email or call with any questions. Best of luck in all your endeavors.

Sincerely,

Brooke Jones 
 
Brooke Jones
Recruiting Coordinator
George Fox Women’s Soccer
bjones@georgefox.edu
503-123-4567
Persuasive:

February 28, 2020

Madison Burch
Sherwood High School
Class of 2020

Dear Madison,

In the past few months, our coaching staff has watched you play on a number of occasions.
George Fox is a Division 3 school located in beautiful Newberg Oregon in the suburbs of
Portland.

We believe you would be a wonderful fit on our team and at the school as a whole. Your
attack-minded play and goal-scoring ability is a desirable attribute that we would love to add to
our team and program. We have an ID camp coming up on March 7 and would love to see you
there. Additionally, we would love to invite you to campus and stay overnight with one of our
current players on an official recruiting visit.

Feel free to email or call with any questions. I look forward to speaking again soon.

Sincerely,

Brooke Jones 
 
Brooke Jones
Recruiting Coordinator
George Fox Women’s Soccer
bjones@georgefox.edu
503-123-4567