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Video
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sn393RfhZ6I
What can you guess with what was happening in the video?
How did the video make you feel?
Did it give some ideas for what you might write about your
own home?
Think-pair-share these ideas.
Samples from Winners
https://meaningofhome.ca/winners/what-home-means-to-me-2/
essay style
https://meaningofhome.ca/winners/when-i-think-of-home/
winner - poem
Requirements/Ideas for Essay:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1a16bKbXMCpnlcvBf
yM_wyylxVxLSb5ZQZQmO70DWXY4/edit?usp=sharing
Editing your draft: Yourself & a friend
● Paragraphs indented
● Are any words used too
● Capital letters at starts of
many times?
sentences and for names of
● Check for spelling
people and places
● Will the reader
● Use short and long
understand what home
sentences
means to you?
● Many different words used
● Is there a good title of
● Descriptive words?
your work?
Sharing
● Share an idea or two of what you might write about.
● Share any new feelings/ideas you may have learned
today.
● Share how you are feeling about the draft so far – how
much more time just to write out the ROUGH draft is
needed?
● Share what you have for your draft so far?
Goal:
Get good feedback on your writing!
*Use a different
coloured pen for editing
Editing:
Peer Feedback: After I’m Done Peer
Feedback:
(Use editing symbols) ❏ Make changes to my essay
❏ Title ❏ Finish my essay
❏ Check-in with Miss Schlitz
❏ Introduction makes sense
to go into the hallway to
❏ Capitals read essay out loud to
❏ Punctuation self. (Does my writing flow
❏ Paragraphs indented and make sense?)
❏ Descriptive words ❏ Make changes to my essay
❏ Spelling ❏ Start typing good copy on
google docs
❏ Details & Explanations ❏ Work on crossword
❏ Conclusion wraps up essay ❏ Decorate Folder
Sharing
● Share how you are feeling about the draft so far –
how much more time just to write out the ROUGH
draft is needed?
● Share what you have for your draft so far!
● What great feedback did you get?