MANY PEOPLE are WORRIED ABOUT YOUNG CHILDERN

PLAYING VIDEO GAME. WHAT PROBLEMS MIGHT THIS GAME

CAUSEDCAUSE; FOR CHILDERN SOCIETY AS THE HOLE: AND
COULD THIS PROBLEM BE REDUCED? STILL PROBLEM.

Video game has become a huge problem in our society. Many children and teenagers play
amount of hours of video games a day. in In 2010 the Kaiser Family Foundation surveyed
2,000 children ages aged 8-18 in 2010 and found children’s screen time totals an average
of 7 hours and 38 minutes per day. that’sThat is more than 53 hours per week in front of a
screen which caused a some problems such as violent behavior, mental health, social
isolation and etc. These are a few of many examples of problems young children face when
they have gotten to the point of addiction playing video game that make many parents
worried about it. Game videoVideo game is a part of technology that is growing up.
However, the fact that itnotwithstanding children’s entertainmenthelps them enjoy their
self, its it also gives many negative eaffects too and needs overcoming, it something that
need a consideration.

The first cause of video game addiction is isolation from social experiences. Video game
players are more comfortable to stay in homes or in iInternet cafés for a days. The effect of
this isolation caused incapability in their communication and socialization skill also. In any
case, they can still have communication with other through video game from virtual
communication that provide in the game.As a result, the social networking in these online
games often gives the users an impression that they are interacting socially, while their true
social lives and personal relations may suffer.

The second cause is about violent behaviour, as a human we always have a willingness to
be a winner and we will work hard to make it true but if it is not some of them might doing
something harm and give impact to other. Same as a player of video game, when they can
mastering the game they represent a good reaction like yelling but if it is not they become
aggressive such as hitting, kicking, punching, or throw the phone. Therefore, become
addicted to video game caused a emotional effect toward ourself that might be dangerous
for everyone around us .

The third is about mental health , children who are forced to stop playing for an extended
period of time may become irritable, anxious, or experience depressed mood. The effect of
this make children may spend much of their time thinking about how to regain access to
the computer, claim that all other activities are “boring”, and have difficulty concentrating
and focusing because they are daydreaming about the game.

In this case, parents have biggest responsibility to control their children playing their phone
expecillay about video game. The cause that make children better to chose playing video
games sometimes the factor is from the parents, they feel not accompanion and parents do
not care about what the children doing. Because they are busy of work parents give the best
facility to children like what they like such as video game but in the end they reall worried
because children get addicted. As a parent we can,t stop children immediately palying
video games but try to close with them,try to talk and get into their world, slowly give a
understanding and limit about the rule while they paling video games like one day only one
our if they not follow it the consequncy is tomorrow they can not play their phone also give
a specific impact about the advantage and disadvantages playing video game. Do not only
give explanation as a parents give our time to hang out with children in a park or beach to
make them undependency in a video game this activity also stimulated children in social
experiences.

NO conclusion.

OK Elly, I found that you have committed plagiarism, virtually all your ideas are not from
yours, but potluck from source to source. It’s against the rule that writing mustn’t undergo
by plagiarism. I more respect a simple writing but all are original from your own thoughts,
not chasing a fancy writing but it’s PLAGIARISM.

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