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Written, edited and produced by Basic Education Assistance for Mindanao, January 2009
BASIC EDUCATION ASSISTANCE FOR MINDANAO
SECOND YEAR ENGLISH
GATHERING AND ORGANIZING INFORMATION
MODULE 6 MAKING OUTLINES
• Demonstrate the ability to activate background knowledge (e.g. use advance organizers,
illustrations, comprehension, questions, titles, etc.) to better understand a text
• Relate ideas from previous readings to a given text
Writing
Objectives
Use a spider map to activate background knowledge.
Write an autobiography.
Number of the groups may vary depending upon the size of the class.
Multiple Intelligences
Interpersonal
Verbal/Linguistic
Skills
Recall of information
Use information
Understanding information
Multiple Intelligences
Interpersonal
Verbal/Linguistic
Skills
Knowledge of major ideas
Organization of parts
Use information
Understanding information
Multiple Intelligences
Interpersonal
Verbal/Linguistic
Visual
Skills
Grasp meaning
Use information
Understanding information
Multiple Intelligences
Interpersonal
Verbal/Linguistic
Logical
Skills
Knowledge of major ideas
Grasp meaning
Use information
Understanding information
Text Type
Narrative
Multiple Intelligences
Interpersonal
Verbal/Linguistic
Skills
Knowledge of major ideas
Grasp meaning
Recall of information
Use information
Text Type
Narrative
Multiple Intelligences
Interpersonal
Logical
Verbal/Linguistic
Skills
Knowledge of major ideas
Use information
Understanding information
Text Type
Narrative
Multiple Intelligences
Body/Kinaesthetic
Interpersonal
Verbal/Linguistic
Skills
Use methods, concepts, theories in new situations
Multiple Intelligences
Interpersonal
Verbal/Linguistic
Skills
Mastery of subject matter
Organization of parts
Use information
Multiple Intelligences
Interpersonal
Verbal/Linguistic
Skills
Use methods, concepts, theories in new situations
Organization of parts
Scoring Rubric
Oral Reporting
Mind Map
The Mind Map displays the organization and relationship among the competencies, concepts and
activities in this Learning Guide in a visual form. It is included to provide visual clues on the
structure of the guide and to provide an opportunity for you, the teacher, to reorganize the
guide to suit your particular context.
Stages of Learning
The following stages have been identified as optimal in this unit. It should be noted that the
stages do not represent individual lessons. Rather, they are a series of stages over one or more
lessons and indicate the suggested steps in the development of the targeted competencies and in
the achievement of the stated objectives.
Assessment
All six Stages of Learning in this Learning Guide may include some advice on possible formative
assessment ideas to assist you in determining the effectiveness of that stage on student learning.
It can also provide information about whether the learning goals set for that stage have been
achieved. Where possible, and if needed, teachers can use the formative assessment tasks for
summative assessment purposes i.e as measures of student performance. It is important that
your students know what they will be assessed on.
Topic
3. Ask them to brainstorm as many ideas about a successful person. Follow these steps:
• At the center of the spider map, write the topic (A Successful Person).
• Then, think of at least four main ideas you would like to discuss about the topic
(e.g. What are the qualities of a successful person, How to become a successful
person, etc.) Write these ideas on the diagonal lines attached to the oval.
• For each main topic, add at least two supporting details. Write your ideas on the
horizontal lines attached to the diagonal line. (You may add more lines if needed.)
4. Give them time to finish the task.
5. Call each group reporter to discuss their output to the class. (Answers maybe published
on a manila paper.)
6. Facilitate discussion on the usefulness of outlining ideas.
Formative Assessment
Use assessment 1 Observation Checklist for “Map your Ideas” on page 20.
Roundup
To sum up students' learning, let them share their learning insights about the activity.
2. Let them stay in the same teams in the previous activity and give each group a piece of
bond paper/intermediate paper.
3. Have them revisit the spider map they have completed in the previous activity.
4. Instruct the groups to organize the information in the map into an outline. Use the guide
below:
• On top of the paper, write the title of the topic “A Successful Person”.
• Write the Roman numerals I, II, III, IV spread apart down the left side of your
intermediate paper.
• To each Roman numeral, write the main ideas or main points that you have
discussed about the topic. (Refer to your spider map.)
• Under each Roman numeral, write A and B down the left side of your paper.
• Next to each letter, write the facts or information that support that main idea
(The details found in your spider map).
7. Allow enough time to complete the task. Let them published their answers on a manila
paper.
8. Call group representative to discuss their output to the class.
9. Facilitate class discussion by asking these questions:
• What have you outlined?
• How did you outline your ideas?
• What did you consider in outlining the ideas?
Formative Assessment
Sort and Sequence
1. Use the same teams in the previous activity.
2. Designate an area for each team and direct each team to proceed to the assigned area.
3. Cut into strips Student Resource Material “Sort and Sequence” on pages 24 to 25.
(Prepare 3 sets for topic A and another 3 sets for topic B. You may write these on strips
of paper.)
4. Place the strips in random order and give each team one set of it.
5. Ask them to come up with an outline of the assigned topic.
6. Present the rubric on page 26.
7. Give them time to finish the activity. Let them publish their answers on a manila paper.
8. Ask the groups to post their outputs on the wall and let each group representative
discuss it.
Roundup
To sum up, ask the students this question: “Why do we make outline?”
Background or purpose
In this stage, students will read the selection entitled “Bulacan's Barefoot Millionaire”. This is a
story of a poor boy who became a millionaire because of hard work, and industry.
The students will be engaged in an interactive reading using DR-TA (Directed Reading-Thinking
Activity). Making and proving predictions are parts of the students' activities. The comprehension
check will be done through the use of graphic organizers.
The activities provided in this stage allow the students to predict outcomes from events
described in the story, and to listen in order to determine if their predictions are borne out.
Making outline is part of the post reading activity. Furthermore, the role playing enables the
students to develop their speaking skills through telephone conversation in making inquiries.
Strategies
Vocabulary Web is a graphic organizer created to gather and connect facts, ideas, concepts
and/or words.
Directed Reading-Thinking Activity (DR-TA) is a strategy that encourages readers to engage
actively in a three-step comprehension cycle: 1. Sample the text, 2. Make predictions, 3. Sample
the text to confirm or correct previous predictions. Sample questions represent the directional
and motivating influences that get readers started, keep them on course, and produce the vigor,
potency and push to carry them through to the end. Students generate hypotheses as they read
from the text and from their own experiential backgrounds.
Story Web is a graphic organizer which enables students to map the setting, characters, problem
and solution of the story.
Flowchart diagram is a type of graphic organizer that visually displays a chain of instructions
used to complete an algorithm or other complicated process.
Character Map is a graphic organizer that helps the students identify the traits of characters by
looking at events surrounding the character in the text.
Outlining is a general plan of the material that is to be presented in a speech or a paper. The
outline shows the order of the various topics, the relative importance of each, and the
relationship between the various parts.
Role playing is a method of portraying human interaction in imaginary situations in such a
manner that realistic behavior is elicited.
Materials
Student Activity Sheet 3 “Vocabulary Quest” on page 27
Student Activity Sheet 4 “Chunk and Predict” on page 28
Reading Text “Bulacan's Barefoot Millionaire” on pages 29 to 31
Student Activity Sheet 5A “Story Web” on page 32
Student Activity Sheet 5B “Flow Chart” on page 33
Student Activity Sheet 5C “Character Map” on page 34
Assessment 3 Rubric for “Let me Check” on page 35
Student Resource Material “Dial the Phone” on page 36
Assessment 4 Rubric for “Dial the Phone” on page 37
intermediate papers
manila papers
pentel pens
masking tape
3. Distribute to each group Student Activity Sheet 3 “Vocabulary Quest” on page 27 and
explain how to do the activity.
4. Allow few minutes for the students to complete the task.
5. Call the group's reporter to present their output to the class.
6. Check the accuracy of the students' answers.
Activity 4 (During Reading) “Chunk and Predict”
Motive Question: “Why is it an important decision for Ba Ramon to change from being a
rig driver to becoming an employee?”
1. Use the same groupings in the previous activity.
2. Assign them a part of the story to be read. Please refer to the reading text “Bulacan's
Barefoot Millionaire” on pages 29 to 31. Tell them to wait for the go signal before
starting to read.
3. Post on the board an enlarged copy of Activity Sheet 4 “Chunk and Predict” on page 28
and let the students make similar chart on their paper.
4. Write on the board (in bold) the title of the reading text “Bulacan's Barefoot
Millionaire”. Then, ask them these questions:
• Can you predict what the story is all about?
5. Let the groups write their predictions/guesses in the first column of the activity sheet. In
the second column, have them explain what led them make that prediction.
6. Read the title and the first part of the story and have the students prove their
guesses/predictions.
7. Before calling the first group to read the second part of the story, ask questions that will
help students to predict.
8. Call the first group to read the second part of the selection.
9. Ask the students to listen to determine if their predictions are borne out. Then, ask
them again few questions to monitor their understanding.
10. Repeat the process until the whole story is read.
11. Process the activity by asking the students to answer the motive question.“Why is it an
important decision for Ba Ramon to change from being a rig driver to becoming an
employee?”
Activity 5 (Post Reading) “Let me Check”
1. Divide the class into six groups (two groups may have the same task). Have them choose
their leader, recorder and reporter.
2. Distribute the following Activity Sheets, 5A, 5B, 5C on pages 32 to 34 to the respective
group and explain to them how to do the activity.
Group One Story Web
Group Two Flow Chart
Group Three Character Map
3. Give them enough time to do their task.
4. Call the group reporters to discuss their outputs to the class.
5. Check the accuracy of the students' output.
6. Process the activity by asking them these questions:
• What did you learn from the story?
• What positive values can you single out from the selection?
• What other stories have you read that you can relate to the readings today?
• Before placing a caller on hold, ask his/her permission first and thank him/her.
• Always use a pleasant, congenial and friendly tone.
• Never interrupt the person while he/she is talking to you.
• Do not answer the phone if you are eating or chewing gum.
• Do not give the impression that you are rushing.
• Be enthusiastic and respectful.
• Return calls promptly.
• If there is a problem, be concerned, emphatic, and apologetic.
• Thank the caller for calling.
2. Instruct them to stay in the same group in the previous activity. Have them choose their
Group Director.
3. Cut into strips Student Resource Material “Dial the Phone” on page 36. Roll the strips and
call the Group Director to pick one.
4. Tell the groups to role play the situation they have chosen. Encourage them to be
creative on their presentation. Maximize participation of the members in the group.
5. Give them time for practice and rehearsals.
6. Call each group to present their role play to the class.
7. Allow group interaction after the presentation by letting them give their comments and
observations.
8. Process the activity by asking them the importance of the telephone etiquette in making
telephone conversations.
Formative Assessment
Use the following assessments to evaluate the following:
Assessment 3 for “Let me Check” on page 35
Assessment 4 for “Dial the Phone” on page 37
Roundup
To sum up, ask the students to share their significant human experiences in making telephone
conversation.
Strategy
Expressive Writing is a kind of writing you do when when your purpose is to explore and/or
communicate ideas, your personal experiences, your opinions about things, or your response to
the world.
Materials
Character Map (revisited)
Teacher Resource Material 2 “Character Sketch” on page 38
Assessment 5 Rubric for “Sketch and Scribe” on page 39
Formative Assessment
Use Assessment 5 Rubric for “Sketch and Scribe” on page 39.
Roundup
Ask the students to share their learning insights about the activity.
Background or purpose
The ability to make outline is one of the vital skills that students should acquire. It helps them
organize their thoughts and ideas. In this stage, the students will apply their learnings as they
create an outline for an autobiography.
This activity will give them a chance to hone their skills in making outline. As the saying goes,
“Constant practice makes perfect”.
Strategy
Autobiographical Sketch-is an outline of a literary work about the writer's own life.
Materials
Teacher Resource Material 3 “How to Write an Autobiography?”on pages 40-41
Assessment 6 Rubric for “My Auto-Sketch” on page 42
English Journal
intermediate papers
6. Closure
This stage brings the series of lessons to a formal conclusion. Teachers may refocus the objectives
and summarize the learning gained. Teachers can also foreshadow the next set of learning
experiences and make the relevant links.
Background or purpose
In this stage, the students are encouraged to view and reflect their learning experiences from
different perspectives. This activity requires the students to write their reflections about the
experiences they had while outlining and writing an autobiography.
The purpose of this is to let the students analyze situations and events happening within the
classroom.
Strategy
Plus-Minus-Interesting (PMI) is used for affective processing to talk about the pluses, minuses
and interesting points felt about the lesson, concept or issue.
Materials
Student Activity Sheet 6 “What's the PMI?” on page 43
Teacher Evaluation
(To be completed by the teacher using this Teacher’s Guide)
The ways I will evaluate the success of my teaching this unit are:
1.
2.
3.
ASSESSMENT 1
Observation Checklist for “Map your Ideas”
CRITERIA
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What is it?
An outline is a general plan of the material that is to be presented in a speech or a
paper. The outline shows the order of the various topics, the relative importance of
each, and the relationship between the various parts.
Order in an Outline
There are many ways to arrange the different parts of a subject. Sometimes, a
chronological arrangement works well. At other times, a spatial arrangement is best
suited to the material. The most common order in outlines is to go from the general to
the specific. This means you begin with a general idea and then support it with specific
examples.
Types of Outlines
The two main types of outlines are the topic (phrasal) outline and the sentence outline.
In the topic outline, the headings are given in single words or brief phrases. In the
sentence outline, all the headings are expressed in complete sentences.
1. Indicate the major divisions by Roman numerals I, II, III, IV, etc.
2. Indicate the major divisions under the Roman numerals by capital letters A, B, C,
etc.
3. Indicate the subdivisions by arabic numerals 1, 2, 3, etc.
4. Indicate the further subdivisions by small letters a, b, c, etc.
5. There should be at least two items under each subdivision; otherwise, no letters
are used.
6. Avoid excessive details. Don't include minor details in the outline.
7. Indent properly.
8. Place a period after each complete sentence.
9. Be consistent. Do not mix up the two types of outlines. Use either whole
sentences or brief phrases, but not both.
The following illustration shows the form and arrangement of the items in an
outline. (Note that there are at least two main divisions and at least two
subdivisions in any level.
__________________________
Title
I.________________________________________
A.__________________________________
1._____________________________
2._____________________________
B.__________________________________
1._____________________________
2._____________________________
II._______________________________________
A.__________________________________
1._____________________________
2._____________________________
B.__________________________________
1._____________________________
2._____________________________
III._______________________________________
A.__________________________________
1._____________________________
2._____________________________
B.__________________________________
1._____________________________
2._____________________________
Examples
Topic Outline
Thesis: The decisions I have to make in choosing college courses, depend on larger
questions I am beginning to ask myself about my life’s work.
Sentence Outline
Thesis: The decisions I have to make in choosing college courses, depend on larger
questions I am beginning to ask myself about my life’s work.
I. I have two decisions to make with respect to choosing college courses in the
immediate future.
A. One is whether to elect a course in art history or in chemistry.
1. One time in my life, I planned to be a chemical engineer
professionally.
2. On the other hand, I enjoy art and plan to travel and see
more of it.
B. The second decision is whether to continue a third year of French
beyond the basic college requirement.
1. French might be useful both in engineering and travel.
2. Furthermore, I am eager to read good books which are
written in French.
3. How necessary are these considerations in the light of other
courses I might take instead?
II. My problem can be put in the form of a dilemma involving larger questions about
my whole future.
A. On the one hand I want to hold a highly-trained position in a
lucrative profession.
B. On the other hand I want to lead a certain kind of life, with
capacities for values not connected with the making of money.
III. I will have to make a decision balancing the conflicting needs I have described.
A. I will hold open the professional possibilities by electing chemistry.
B. I will improve and solidify what cultural proficiency in another
language I have already gained, by electing French.
Instructions: Prepare three sets for each topic. Write these on strips of paper and give one set to each
group. (Note: Do not include the Roman Numerals, Arabic numbers and letters when you write these
topics on the strips of paper. These information are your guide when checking the students' output.)
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III. Being Determined 1. deal problems with tolerance
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A. Don't give up your dreams 2. accept failure as part of life
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1. Have faith in your abilities and III. Humility
talents
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A. Be humble
2. Hold on to your dreams and
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aspirations
1. Remain unaffected by the
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rewards and success.
B. Don't get discourage
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2. Never indulge in pretentious
1. work hard enough to meet your display
goals
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B. Keep your feet firmly on the ground
2. pick up yourself each time you
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fail.
1. Be source of inspiration to others
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IV. Making your goals a reality
2. Be sincere in your relationship
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A. Review your list of goals
IV. Faith
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B. Look at the best way to make it happen
A. Believe in yourself
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1. Have a healthy and positive
attitude to yourself.
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2.Free yourself from dependence to
others
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B. Have faith in God
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1. Believe in His Word
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2. Act out your Faith
ASSESSMENT 2
Rubric for “Sort and Sequence”
1 1 1 1 1 1
2 2 2 2 2 2
3 3 3 3 3 3
4 4 4 4 4 4
5 5 5 5 5 5
6 6 6 6 6 6
7 7 7 7 7 7
Rating Scale:
5= Excellent; 4= Very Good; 3= Good; 2= Fair
The members of this group.............. G-1 G-2 G-3 G-4 G-5 G-6
follow directions
TOTAL SCORE
Instructions:
1. Write the vocabulary word in the space provided.
2. Look for the meaning from the dictionary.
3. Draw a symbol or picture of the word.
4. Construct a sentence using the vocabulary.
Drawing or symbol
Vocabulary of the word
Meaning
Sentence
Directions: Take a look at the title before reading and make some guesses/predictions
about what the story is all about.
READING TEXT
Bulacan's Barefoot Millionaire
Emilio Bautista
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1) A 74 year-old man walks the dusty streets of Bulacan, barefoot, dressed in
cheap shorts fashioned from flour sackcloth dyed a sober blue or brown. He wears a
wide-brimmed balanggot to shade him from the summer sun, a salacubang hanging from
his shoulder. To a stranger, he looks like a peddler, but to the townsfolk of Bulacan, he is
the well-known Ba Ramon Meneses, one time cochero, now millionaire.
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How do you think Ba Ramon's life began?
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2) Ba Ramon's life story began in Bambang, Bulacan, the hometown of the national
heroes, Marcelo and Gregorio del Pilar. His father, Anacleto Meneses, supported his wife
Trinidad, Ramon, and his six children, first, as a street laborer, and later, as an overseer
in a fishpond until he was arrested by the Spaniards for taking active part in the
revolutionary movement.
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At the age of 14, how do you think Ramon lived his life?
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3) Ba Ramon's schooling started with the caton. His elementary schooling was cut
short when he had to help earn the family income. At fourteen, he was sent to live with
an uncle who owned a prosperous turkey farm in Tanay, Rizal. After a few years, he
returned to Bambang to work as a rig driver. He fondly recalls, “the carretela and calesa
were the most modern vehicles even in Manila at that time!”
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What do you think the major decision he has made in his twenties?
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4) In his twenties, Ba Ramon took a step that changed his life. He gave up being
an independent cochero and sought employment under someone, this time, as overseer
of a fishpond, just as his father had been. He learned the secrets of managing a
fishpond, and soon dreamed after some years of owning his own ponds. He had married,
by then, the former Maria Carmen Rodriguez, also from his town, and they had six
children.
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What venture do you think did Ba Ramon undertake that made a turning point of his
career?
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How do you think his employees look up Ba Ramon?
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10) His more than eighty employees at his fishponds all look up to him as an ideal
employer who treats them with fatherly solicitude. With characteristic humility, he
thinks that there is nothing unusual about his life worth writing about. “Anyone with
industry, perseverance, and thrift,” he says “can do what I did.
Setting: Characters:
Title:
Author:
Conflict: Solution:
Directions: Trace the series of events in the life of Ba Ramon. Write your answers in
the boxes below. (You may add boxes if necessary.)
Trait 1 Trait 2
Proof Proof
Character
Proof Proof
Trait 3
Proof Proof
ASSESSMENT 3
Rubric for “Let me Check”
TOTAL SCORE
Task One:
Assume that you are interested to put up a fishpond of your own and you
need more knowledge on the science of fish culture. You have planned to
conduct a seminar about “Raising Fishponds” with Ba Ramon as your Resource
Speaker. Contact his office in Bulacan through a long distance call to invite
him.
Task Two
Pretend that you are a business tycoon. You are engaged particulary in
exporting and importing different fishes. You want to expand your business and
propose a join-venture with Ba Ramon on exporting bangus, tilapia, etc,. Dial
his number and set your appointment with him to discuss the business proposal.
Task Three
Imagine that you were Ba Ramon. Your son requested you to make a formal
proposal of marriage to the parents of the girl he wanted to marry.
Before your visit, you dial the phone and inform the parents of the girl
about your visit.
Task Four
Pretend that you were the father of the girl that Ba Ramon's son
wanted to marry. Unimpressed by the appearance of Ba Ramon during his
visit for the marriage proposal, you decided to postpone indefinitely the
wedding. Dial his phone to inform him of the postponement.
ASSESSMENT 4
Rubric for “Dial the Phone”
1 6 1 6 1 6 1 6
2 7 2 7 2 7 2 7
3 8 3 8 3 8 3 8
4 9 4 9 4 9 4 9
5 10 5 10 5 10 5 10
Rating Scale:
5= Excellent; 4= Very Good; 3= Good; 2= Fair= Needs Improvement
CRITERIA RATING
TOTAL SCORE
Liz is not only a great supporter. She also trusts me to give her my honest
opinion and to say what I feel. When she was upset with her sister one time,
she asked what I thought about it and I said she should wait and then she
would find out the real reason why her sister was mad at her. And it happened
that way. She knew she could trust me.
Liz can be a barrel of fun when she is in the mood. I really like when she does
silly things. One night, we rented three movies and watched all three while
we ate popcorn, cheese and crackers, and a whole box of chocolates. We
gabbed about everything and even imagined what it would be like to live like
some of the characters in the movies.
Since my best friend is now living over 500 miles away, I miss all the laughter
she brought to my life and the times I could ask her opinion on things that
troubled me. But I can still hear the sound of her voice and ask her opinion on
the telephone!
ASSESSMENT 5
Rubric for “Sketch and Scribe”
Instructions: Use Rubric A to evaluate the outline and Rubric B for the character sketch.
Work has no erasures. Work has one or two Work has more than
erasures. three erasures.
Neatness
When writing an autobiography, you focus on three major things: who you are in life,
what life means to you and what your outlook on the future is.
"Autobiographies have been written since A.D. 400 when an early Christian leader, Saint
Augustine, wrote his." An autobiography is information about one's own life written by
that one person. It tells what that person's life is all about. When writing your own
autobiography, use interesting facts to explain as much about yourself as you can.
The first thing you do when writing an autobiography is start off with a lot of facts about
your life; for example, when and where you were born, where you live (city and state),
where you go to school and who you live with. You have to give a lot of information so
your reader can clearly understand what is going on. Once you have written this
introduction, you are ready to start your first paragraph of the autobiography.
Who you are in life?
The best way to start an autobiography is to state your name. When you are writing this
paragraph, you usually explain the type of person you are; use facts about yourself such
as: have you won any awards? What types of awards have you won? Did you finish school?
Do you plan on going to college?
What life means to you?
This is now your second paragraph. In this paragraph you should state how you see life--
what does life mean to you. Are you happy or sad? Do you have a lot of friends or just a
few? How do you make your school days go by? Do you have a boyfriend/girlfriend? What
are your favorite places to go on dates? How long have you been dating? If you are
involved in a relationship, do you think it will last forever?
What is your outlook on the future?
In this paragraph you should explain what you think the future will be like. Pick a year
and explain how it will be but explain it through your eyes. Where will you be? How will
you be living? Will you be married? Will there be any kids? Who will you be married to?
What is he/she like? How long will you have been together?
Conclusion
The conclusion is the last paragraph of your autobiography and an important one, too. In
the conclusion you usually try to re-word the introduction and add some type of closure
to bring the whole autobiography together.
(http://www.sarasota.k12.fl.us/bhs/bryan/bryan_auto.html)
Example of Autobiography
I was born on a warm, sunny day in June in Sarasota, Florida. I still live in Sarasota,
Florida, and I go to school at Booker High School. I live with my mom,Kate; my brother,
Jake; and my Aunt Molly. When I was born, my bother was fifteen-months-old and hid
under the table from me. Jake is a sweet kid and he would do anything for me, but like
all brothers and sisters we fight like cats and dogs. Sometimes when no one was around,
Jake would come up to me and bite my toes for no reason. I still love him but only
because he is my brother.
Who I am in life.
My name is Sally Friday. I started school when I was six-years-old. I went to kindergarten
through fifth grade at Booker Elementary and while I was there, I won an award for
perfect attendance. I also won an award for honor roll all four terms. Then I attended
Booker Middle School, and there I also won a couple of awards: one for perfect
attendance and two for being named Student of the Year--one in sixth grade and the
other in eighth grade. I am now a senior at Booker High School. I plan on finishing school
and maybe going to a community college.
What life means to me.
Life to me means friends and family who you can trust and who trusts you. I am pretty
much on the happy side of life, but like all teens I do I have my "days of." That means I
do have some sad days or depressed days. I have a few friends here that sort of look out
for me and when I am having a bad day, I have someone here at school to talk to. I make
my school days go by thinking of either the next hour or what I will do when I get home
or on the weekend. I'm not seeing anyone now but when I did have a boyfriend, our
favorite places to go were the movies and out to dinner. Sometimes we went to the
beach. Only once we went to an amusement park: Universal Studios. We were together
for twenty-nine days and then we broke-up; so no, I don't think it was forever.
What's my outlook on the future.
The year 2018 will make twenty years since I graduated from high school. I think I will
probably be still living here in Sarasota. I will be quite comfortable with my living
situation, meaning that I will be married to Paul Smith. We will have one child: Linda
Teresa Smith, who at that point will be three-years-old and a little devil. Paul is a sweet
guy; he will do anything for anyone. He is six feet tall and built well. He has baby blue
eyes and blond hair. We will have been together for five years and will be happy
together--this is forever.
Conclusion
As I said in the beginning, I was born here in Florida and I've lived here my whole life. I
would like to see more of the USA but unfortunately, I don't have any money to leave
Florida to go anywhere right now. I hope you have enjoyed reading my life story as much
as I have enjoyed writing it for you. Try to get as much as you can out of school; you're
only there for twelve years and when you graduate, you're home free. Here's a tip for
you to live or try to live by: If you think it, it can be done.
References
"Autobiography " The World Book Encyclopedia.
1992 ed. Volume A
Written by Erika Baker
ASSESSMENT 6
Rubric for “My Auto-Sketch”
Sequencing of Ideas are placed in Ideas are placed in Some ideas are not
Events logical order and logical order and in logical order,
the way they are the way they are and this distracts
(Organization)
presented presented the reader.
effectively keeps somewhat interest
the interest of the the reader.
reader.
TOTAL SCORE
What I like about outlining What I didn't like about it? What is interesting about it?
and writing autobiography?
For the Teacher: Translate the information in this Learning Guide into the following matrix to help you prepare your lesson plans.
Stage
1. Activating Prior 2. Setting the 3. Learning 4. Check for 5. Practice and 6. Closure
Learning Context Activity Sequence Understanding Application
Strategies
Materials and
planning needed
Total time for the Learning Guide Total number of lessons needed for this Learning Guide