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by Amira ISMAIL
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ESSM14 Final Crit eria 3
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ESSM14 Final Crit eria 4
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ESSM14 Final 4,000 word Case Study
ORIGINALITY REPORT
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SIMILARIT Y INDEX
9%
INT ERNET SOURCES
5%
PUBLICAT IONS
12%
ST UDENT PAPERS
PRIMARY SOURCES
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Submitted to University of Sunderland
St udent Paper 5%
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sophia.stkate.edu
Int ernet Source 2%
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gendocs.ru
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churchillcollegebiblio.wikispaces.com
Int ernet Source 1%
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Submitted to University of Northumbria at
Newcastle
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St udent Paper
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www.scribd.com
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Submitted to University of Nottingham
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decisionsciences.org
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Submitted to University of Wales College,
Newport
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ucheg.ru
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Submitted to Higher Ed Holdings
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Chung Kwan Lo, Khe Foon Hew, Gaowei Chen.
"Toward a set of design principles for
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mathematics flipped classrooms: A synthesis of
research in mathematics education",
Educational Research Review, 2017
Publicat ion
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webg.bjypc.edu.cn
Int ernet Source <1%
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"The Nature of Technology", Springer Nature,
2013
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Publicat ion
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Submitted to Flinders University
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www.frontiersin.org
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fablearn.stanford.edu
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education.stateuniversity.com
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ocs.editorial.upv.es
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es.scribd.com
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ipgkik.com
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"Modeling and Measuring Competencies in
Higher Education", Springer Nature, 2013
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Publicat ion
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telrp.springeropen.com
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Instructor
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Amira,
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practice and associated critical analysis:
Final Comment:
T his study has clearly impacted upon your practice
and I can see how hard you have worked to
implement the f lipped classroom. I am sure other
staf f will benef it f rom your research too, Amira.
Grade: 64%
Moderator's comment
Michael Hepworth
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Comment 1
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Comment 2
T his states a clear intent, Amira. Good.
Comment 3
pref er a?
Comment 4
T his of ten results in discarding...
Comment 5
these
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a
Comment 7
You have set out the context f or your study by identif ying the tensions which exist between
taking a product and a process based approach, which is good to see.
Comment 8
constraint, a
Comment 9
T he
Comment 10
is
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Comment 11
who stated
Comment 12
Yes. T his does need to be addressed.
Critical analysis is evident as you discuss the tension between a product or a process driven
approach.
Comment 13
As f rom this point, I will not highlight common grammatical 'slips' unless they hinder the overall
cohesion or comprehension of the text, Amira.
Comment 14
and stated
Comment 15
Omit 'By'
Comment 16
'and' joins the phrases, so this is not a new sentence.
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Comment 17
It is good to see alternative perspectives being presented.
Comment 18
Omit.
Comment 19
Yes. Now make a direct link to your own f lipped learning classroom here to relate theory to
practice.
Comment 20
and outside of school?
Comment 21
is
Comment 22
Good point.
Comment 23
T his is not a new sentence.
Comment 24
T his may be a usef ul point to make as you evaluate the impact of the f lipped classroom upon
the Year 8 students' learning.
Comment 25
A usef ul link to make to your practice.
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Comment 26
means
Comment 27
Yes. You have touched upon reliability and validity here.
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Comment 28
Good. Well done.
Comment 29
You have taken a mixed methods approach in order to triangulate your data, so well done.
T here is some justif ication of why data collection methods were used.
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Comment 30
Very good.
Very good.
Comment 31
Good point.
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Comment 32
T here is a lack of cohesion evident here and I am not sure who the subject of the sentence is.
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Comment 33
I am sure you were delighted by this outcome.
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RUBRIC: DR 16 /17 POSTGRAD
RELEVANCE 60 – 69%
86% - 100% T he work examined is exemplary and provides clear evidence of a complete grasp of
the knowledge, understanding and skills appropriate to the Level of the qualif ication.
T here is also unequivocal evidence showing that all the learning outcomes and
responsibilities appropriate to that Level are f ully satisf ied. At this level it is expected
that the work will be exemplary in all the categories cited above. It will demonstrate a
particularly compelling evaluation, originality, and elegance of argument, interpretation
or discourse.
50- 59% Some attempt to address the requirements of the assessment: may drif t away f rom
this in less f ocused passages
40% - 49% Some correlation with the requirements of the assessment but there are instances of
irrelevance
35%- 39% Relevance to the requirements of the assessment may be very intermittent, and may
be reduced to its vaguest and least challenging terms.
30%- 34% T he work examined provides insuf f icient evidence of the knowledge, understanding
and skills appropriate to the Level of the qualif ication. T he evidence provided shows
that some of the learning outcomes and responsibilities appropriate to that Level are
satisf ied. T he work will be weak in some of the indicators.
15%- 29% T he work examined is unacceptable and provides little evidence of the knowledge,
understanding and skills appropriate to the Level of the qualif ication. T he evidence
shows that f ew of the learning outcomes and responsibilities appropriate to that
Level are satisf ied. T he work will be weak in several of the indicators.
KNOWLEDGE 60 – 69%
86% - 100% T he work examined is exemplary and provides clear evidence of a complete grasp of
the knowledge, understanding and skills appropriate to the Level of the qualif ication.
T here is also unequivocal evidence showing that all the learning outcomes and
responsibilities appropriate to that Level are f ully satisf ied. At this level it is expected
that the work will be exemplary in all the categories cited above. It will demonstrate a
particularly compelling evaluation, originality, and elegance of argument, interpretation
or discourse.
50- 59% Adequate knowledge of a f air range of relevant material, with intermittent evidence of
an appreciation of its signif icance.
40% - 49% Basic understanding of the subject but addressing a limited range of material
30%- 34% T he work examined provides insuf f icient evidence of the knowledge, understanding
and skills appropriate to the Level of the qualif ication. T he evidence provided shows
that some of the learning outcomes and responsibilities appropriate to that Level are
satisf ied. T he work will be weak in some of the indicators.
15%- 29% T he work examined is unacceptable and provides little evidence of the knowledge,
understanding and skills appropriate to the Level of the qualif ication. T he evidence
shows that f ew of the learning outcomes and responsibilities appropriate to that
Level are satisf ied. T he work will be weak in several of the indicators.
ANALYSIS 50-59%
86% - 100% T he work examined is exemplary and provides clear evidence of a complete grasp of
the knowledge, understanding and skills appropriate to the Level of the qualif ication.
T here is also unequivocal evidence showing that all the learning outcomes and
responsibilities appropriate to that Level are f ully satisf ied. At this level it is expected
that the work will be exemplary in all the categories cited above. It will demonstrate a
particularly compelling evaluation, originality, and elegance of argument, interpretation
or discourse.
50- 59% Signif icant analytical treatment which has a clear purpose
40% - 49% Some analytical treatment, but may be prone to description, or to narrative, which
lacks clear analytical purpose
30%- 34% T he work examined provides insuf f icient evidence of the knowledge, understanding
and skills appropriate to the Level of the qualif ication. T he evidence provided shows
that some of the learning outcomes and responsibilities appropriate to that Level are
satisf ied. T he work will be weak in some of the indicators.
15%- 29% T he work examined is unacceptable and provides little evidence of the knowledge,
understanding and skills appropriate to the Level of the qualif ication. T he evidence
shows that f ew of the learning outcomes and responsibilities appropriate to that
Level are satisf ied. T he work will be weak in several of the indicators.
ARGUMENT 60 – 69%
86% - 100% T he work examined is exemplary and provides clear evidence of a complete grasp of
the knowledge, understanding and skills appropriate to the Level of the qualif ication.
T here is also unequivocal evidence showing that all the learning outcomes and
responsibilities appropriate to that Level are f ully satisf ied. At this level it is expected
that the work will be exemplary in all the categories cited above. It will demonstrate a
particularly compelling evaluation, originality, and elegance of argument, interpretation
or discourse.
60 – 69% Well supported, f ocussed argument which is clear and logically structured.
50- 59% Generally coherent and logically structured, using an appropriate mode of argument
and/or theoretical mode(s)
40% - 49% Some attempt to construct a coherent argument, but may suf f er loss of f ocus and
consistency, with issues at stake stated only vaguely, or theoretical mode(s) couched
in simplistic terms
35%- 39% A basic argument is evident, but mainly supported by assertion and there may be a
lack of clarity and coherence
30%- 34% T he work examined provides insuf f icient evidence of the knowledge, understanding
and skills appropriate to the Level of the qualif ication. T he evidence provided shows
that some of the learning outcomes and responsibilities appropriate to that Level are
satisf ied. T he work will be weak in some of the indicators.
15%- 29% T he work examined is unacceptable and provides little evidence of the knowledge,
understanding and skills appropriate to the Level of the qualif ication. T he evidence
shows that f ew of the learning outcomes and responsibilities appropriate to that
Level are satisf ied. T he work will be weak in several of the indicators.
0- 14% T he work examined is unacceptable and provides almost no evidence of the
knowledge, understanding and skills appropriate to the Level of the qualif ication. T he
evidence f ails to show that any of the learning outcomes and responsibilities
appropriate to that Level are satisf ied. T he work will be weak in the majority or all of
the indicators.
86% - 100% T he work examined is exemplary and provides clear evidence of a complete grasp of
the knowledge, understanding and skills appropriate to the Level of the qualif ication.
T here is also unequivocal evidence showing that all the learning outcomes and
responsibilities appropriate to that Level are f ully satisf ied. At this level it is expected
that the work will be exemplary in all the categories cited above. It will demonstrate a
particularly compelling evaluation, originality, and elegance of argument, interpretation
or discourse.
50- 59% May contain some distinctive or independent thinking; may begin to f ormulate an
independent position in relation to theory and/or practice.
40% - 49% Sound work which expresses a coherent position only in broad terms and in uncritical
conf ormity to one or more standard views of the topic
35%- 39% Some evidence of a view starting to be f ormed but mainly derivative.
30%- 34% T he work examined provides insuf f icient evidence of the knowledge, understanding
and skills appropriate to the Level of the qualif ication. T he evidence provided shows
that some of the learning outcomes and responsibilities appropriate to that Level are
satisf ied. T he work will be weak in some of the indicators.
15%- 29% T he work examined is unacceptable and provides little evidence of the knowledge,
understanding and skills appropriate to the Level of the qualif ication. T he evidence
shows that f ew of the learning outcomes and responsibilities appropriate to that
Level are satisf ied. T he work will be weak in several of the indicators.
86% - 100% T he work examined is exemplary and provides clear evidence of a complete grasp of
the knowledge, understanding and skills appropriate to the Level of the qualif ication.
T here is also unequivocal evidence showing that all the learning outcomes and
responsibilities appropriate to that Level are f ully satisf ied. At this level it is expected
that the work will be exemplary in all the categories cited above. It will demonstrate a
particularly compelling evaluation, originality, and elegance of argument, interpretation
or discourse.
60 – 69% Well written, with standard spelling and grammar, in a readable style with acceptable
f ormat
50- 59% Competently written, with only minor lapses f rom standard grammar, with acceptable
f ormat
40% - 49% A simple basic style but with ignif icant def iciencies in expression or f ormat that may
pose obstacles f or the reader
35%- 39% Numerous def iciencies in expression and presentation; the writer may achieve clarity
(if at all) only by using a simplistic or repetitious style
30%- 34% T he work examined provides insuf f icient evidence of the knowledge, understanding
and skills appropriate to the Level of the qualif ication. T he evidence provided shows
that some of the learning outcomes and responsibilities appropriate to that Level are
satisf ied. T he work will be weak in some of the indicators.
15%- 29% T he work examined is unacceptable and provides little evidence of the knowledge,
understanding and skills appropriate to the Level of the qualif ication. T he evidence
shows that f ew of the learning outcomes and responsibilities appropriate to that
Level are satisf ied. T he work will be weak in several of the indicators.
86% - 100% T he work examined is exemplary and provides clear evidence of a complete grasp of
the knowledge, understanding and skills appropriate to the Level of the qualif ication.
T here is also unequivocal evidence showing that all the learning outcomes and
responsibilities appropriate to that Level are f ully satisf ied. At this level it is expected
that the work will be exemplary in all the categories cited above. It will demonstrate a
particularly compelling evaluation, originality, and elegance of argument, interpretation
or discourse.
60 – 69% Critical appraisal of up-to-date and/or appropriate literature. Recognition of dif f erent
perspectives. Very good use of a wide range of sophisticated source material.
50- 59% Uses a good variety of literature which includes recent texts and/or appropriate
literature, including a substantive amount beyond library texts. Competent use of
source material.
40% - 49% Evidence of use of appropriate literature which goes beyond that ref erred to by the
tutor. Frequently only uses a single source to support a point.
35%- 39% Barely adequate use of literature. Over reliance On material provided by the tutor
30%- 34% T he work examined provides insuf f icient evidence of the knowledge, understanding
and skills appropriate to the Level of the qualif ication. T he evidence provided shows
that some of the learning outcomes and responsibilities appropriate to that Level are
satisf ied. T he work will be weak in some of the indicators.
15%- 29% T he work examined is unacceptable and provides little evidence of the knowledge,
understanding and skills appropriate to the Level of the qualif ication. T he evidence
shows that f ew of the learning outcomes and responsibilities appropriate to that
Level are satisf ied. T he work will be weak in several of the indicators.