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Title: Cyberbully is worse than physical abuse. Yes or No?
Introduction Intro  Nowdays,internet without bridge and gaps among us
(Hook) bring worse disease in our world society.This disease is
called new kind of bully in internet as cyberbully.
 As with face-to-face bullying, both boys and girls
cyberbully, but tend to do so in different ways.
 Physical bullying – includes hitting, kicking, or
pushing you (or even just threatening to do so), as well
as stealing, hiding, or ruining your things, and hazing,
harassment, or humiliation.
 Cyberbullies use digital technology to harass, threaten,
or humiliate you. Unlike traditional bullying,
cyberbullying doesn’t require face-to-face contact and
isn’t limited to just a handful of witnesses at a time. It
also doesn’t require physical power or strength in
numbers.

Thesis Is that Cyberbully is worse disease in our era rather than

statement physical abuse?
Background History/  According to survey Vodafone commissioned the
Issue/ survey from internet-based market research firm
Source YouGov.
 Stated The survey of 4720 teenagers around the world
found that people – particularly young people – can
find it tough to show support for friends who are being
cyberbullied, given that they’re afraid of being bullied
themselves or simply struggle to find the right words.
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