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WRITING WORKSHOP a journal entry

Friday August
8
I’ve been looking for a job for two
months now, but I haven’t had any luck.
I’m starting to feel really discouraged!
I’ve already contacted most of the big
companies in my area, and I’ve had
several interviews, but no offers. So what
have I been doing wrong? Why can’t I
get a job? My dad thinks I don’t seem
A Read the journal entry and answer the questions. very self-confident in my interviews.
1 How long has the writer been looking for a job? I have good qualifications, so maybe he’s
2 How many job interviews has she had? right. Maybe my interview skills aren’t
3 How many job offers has she had?
very good. I have an idea – I’m going to
4 What does she think she’s doing wrong?
ask my dad to role-play some interviews
5 Who is she going to ask to help her?
with me and give me some tips. First tip
B Read the journal entry again and answer the to myself – be positive!
questions.
1 What feelings and emotions does the writer express?
2 Are the writer’s questions addressed to herself or HOW ARE YOU DOING?
someone else? Look back at your writing and check the
3 Does the writer use a formal or informal style of writing? statements that are true.
I have described my feelings and emotions
C Choose one of these topics, or think of another about the event or experience.
topic to write a journal entry about. Make notes I have used rhetorical questions.
about what you want to include. I have used a chatty, informal style of writing.
• a recent event or experience Now, ask a partner to look at your writing and check:
• a problem that you have solved, or need to solve Does the diary entry clearly describe an event, a
• a current event that you have a strong opinion about situation, or a person?
• a family member or other person who is important to you
Good job! Almost! Think again!
D Write your journal entry in your notebook. Look at the Ask your teacher
Use your notes from Exercise C to help you. unit again. for help.

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