Documente Academic
Documente Profesional
Documente Cultură
vols. Volumes
ft. foot
Feb. February
Dr. Doctor
Initialisms are abbreviations made from the first letter of each of the words in a title or
name.
AL American League
Initialisms normally do not contain periods. If you think that the initialism may be
unfamiliar to one or more of your readers, spell out the full term followed by the initialism
in parenthesis the first time you mention that term. In subsequent references, you can
use the initialism alone.
Here’s an example:
The Uniform Resource Locator (URL) for his Web Site is somewhat uninviting. His URL
is <www.dontbotherme.com >.
Acronyms are words formed from the first letters of major words in a title or phrase.
Acronyms that are used as words do not require periods. Note that words such as laser
and scuba are no longer capitalized because they have been accepted as words in their
own right.
Use the abbreviation for the title in the inside address to a letter.
Ph.D MS MA BA BS DDS
NOTE: Place academic titles before a name and academic degrees after a name,
but do not use both at the same time.
Use technical, government, or other such abbreviations when you are sure that your
readers understand what they stand for. If you are unsure, follow the advice in 2., and
spell out the term first followed by the abbreviation in parentheses.
GHz Gigahertz
Not: The meetings are usually held on the first Mon. of each month. In Sept.,
however, we will meet on the third Mon.
But: The meetings are usually held on the first Monday of each month. In September,
however, we will meet on the third Monday.
Use abbreviations when the words that stand for weights and measures appear with
numbers.
However, when such words appear without numbers, write them out.
He wanted to know how many miles per gallon my new car gets.
Generally, do not use abbreviations in formal writing when mentioning places. For
example, you should write Fifth Avenue, not FifthAve., in the body of your paper.
However, you can use abbreviations for place names in addresses, lists, bibliographical
references, and other specialized cases. Here are a few examples:
U.K.
Mt. (Ranier)
St. (Augustine)
Terms used in street names should also be spelled out in the text, but abbreviations can
be used in addresses:
Ave. (Avenue)
St. (Street)
Pkwy. (Parkway)
Rd. (Road)
Rte. (Route)
State/Possession Abbreviation
ALABAMA AL
ALASKA AK
AMERICAN SAMOA AS
ARIZONA AZ
ARKANSAS AR
CALIFORNIA CA
COLORADO CO
CONNECTICUT CT
DELWARE DE
DISTRICT OF COLUMBIA DC
FLORIDA FL
GEORGIA GA
GUAM GU
HAWAII HI
IDAHO ID
IOWA IA
KANSAS KS
KENTUCKY KY
LOUISIANA LA
MAINE ME
MARSHALL ISLANDS MH
MARYLAND MD
MASSACHUSETTS MA
MICHIGAN MI
MINNESOTA MN
MISSISSIPPI MS
MISSOURI MO
MONTANA MT
NEBRASKA NE
NEVADA NV
NEW HAMPSHIRE NH
NEW JERSEY NJ
NEW MEXICO NM
NEW YORK NY
NORTH CAROLINA NC
NORTH DAKOTA ND
OHIO OH
OREGON OR
PALAU PW
PENNSYLVANIA PA
PUERTO RICO PR
RHONE ISLAND RI
SOUTH CAROLINA SC
SOUTH DAKOTA SD
TENNESSEE TN
TEXAS TX
UTAH UT
VERMONT VT
VIRGIN ISLANDS VI
VIRGINIA VA
WASHINGTON WA
WEST VIRGINA WV
WISCONSIN WI
WYOMING WY
Military “State” Abbreviation
Use the appropriate abbreviations for elements in books, magazines, journals, and
other publications:
vol. (volume) vols. (volumes) ch. (chapter) bk. (book) sec. (section)
In general, avoid symbols in academic writing. Some symbols, however, are acceptable.
For example, the dollar sign ($) should be used if followed by a number.
Avoid using both the dollar sign and the word dollar.
But
Answer: c. On the third Friday in October, Jamestown will hold its annual Harvest Fair.
Answer: c. We pay over $140 for an encyclopedia of classical mythology and a copy of
Homer’s Iliad.
ADJECTIVES
The bright yellow lights on the large suspension bridge shone through a thick
mist hanging over the tired city.
Adjectives answer questions such as What kind of? Which one? What color? What
size? and How many? Adjectives can come before nouns or can act as .
Complements are words that describe subjects through linking verbs such as is, are,
was, have been, or will be.
NOUNS AS ADJECTIVES
The science book lay on the kitchen table as the mathematics teacher looked
over her class notes.
CAUTION: When you use a noun as an adjective, make sure the noun is singular even
when the word it modifies is plural.
Still another type of adjective is a ; particles are adjectives formed from verbs. They
end in –ed, -t, en, or –ing.
jump + ed = jumped
lose + t = lost
break + en = broken
roll + ing = rolling
Like other adjectives, participles can be used before or after the word they describe.
Adjectives follow a certain general order when they appear in a sentence. In general,
place adjective before, not after, the noun.
However, participles can come before or after the nouns they describe, depending on
meaning.
Adjectives can be used to make comparisons. For example, if you want to compare
three runners, you can say the first is fast, the second is faster, and the third is fastest.
Here are three ways to use adjectives in comparisons:
Add –er when comparing two nouns or pronouns; this form is called the comparative
form.
Add –est when comparing more than two; this form is called the superlative form.
With adjectives that end in –y, first change the –y to –I and then add –er or –est.
CAUTION: Always use –er when comparing two nouns or pronouns; use –est when
comparing more than two.
You can also put more/most or less/least before the basic form of the adjective to form
the comparative and superlative.
Irregular adjectives change their spellings (some even become new words) in the
comparative and superlative.
Rule 1: Use the comparative, the –er ending, only when comparing two things; use the
superlative, the –est ending, only when comparing more than two.
Rule 2: Use more/less when comparing two things, most/least when comparing more
than two things.
Not: Of the two dancers, Gene Kelly was the most talented.
Gene Kelly was the more talented dancer in the company.
But: Of the two dancers, Gene Kelly was the more talented.
Gene Kelly was the most talented dancer in the company.
Not: In 1932, the electorate believed Roosevelt would make a more better
president than Hoover would.
But: In 1932, the electorate believed Roosevelt would make a better president
than Hoover would.
Rule 5: In general, don’t add –er or –est to an adjective of more than two syllables.
Instead, use more/most or less/least.
Not: dangerous, dangerouser, dangerousest
But: dangerous, more dangerous, most dangerous
Participles are adjectives made from verbs. Present participles end in –ing. Past
participles of regular verbs end in –cl, -ed, -en, -n, and –t.
Present participles of all verbs end in –ing. Past participles of irregular verbs must be
learned individually. You may want to print out the list of the principal parts of common
irregular verbs that follows.
Past participles of regular verbs end in –d, -ed, -en, -n, and –t. Past participles of
irregular verbs must be learned individually. (See the table above.) Use past participles
to show what is done to a noun or pronoun.
Participles are adjectives. To avoid confusing them with nouns and verbs, make sure
you have used the proper ending.
ADVERBS
William Butler Yeats (1865 – 1939) energetically supported a revival in Irish literature.
An extremely talented poet and dramatist, Yeats is still associated with Dublin’s Abbey
Theater.
His poems, plays, and Celtic tales are still very widely read.
MASTER ADVERBS
Adverbs describe , adjectives, or other adverbs. Adverbs answer questions such as
When? Where? How? Why? Under what conditions? and To what extend? Many
adverbs end in –ly. However, soon, very, fast, seldom, often, and well are also adverbs.
Use an adverb, not an adjective, when you describe a verb, adjective, or other adverb. If
you are not sure whether a word is an adjective or an adverb, check the dictionary.
Not: Vladimir Ashkenazy played the two Rachmaninoff piano concertos skillful
and passionate.
But: Vladimir Ashkenazy played the two Rachmaninoff piano concertos
skillfully and passionately.
COMPARING ADVERBS
Like adjectives, adverbs can be compared. That is, they can be put into the comparative
and superlative forms. Use the comparative form to compare two things; use the
superlative form to compare more than two things. For example:
To compare adverbs that end in –ly (there are many of these), add more/most or
less/least to the adverb.
NOTE: With adverbs that do not end in –ly (there are only a few of these), use the –er
and –est endings or use more/most or less/least. If you don’t know which method to
use, check the dictionary for the correct comparative and superlative forms.
Make sure you know what you are describing. If you are describing how a taco tastes,
you might write
NOTE: In the first sentence, a noun, taco, is being described; therefore, the adjective
good must be used. In the second, a verb, taste, is being described; therefore, the
adverb well must be used.
Answer: c. well
Answer: a. northeastern
Apostrophes
You can also use apostrophes to create special relationships between words: a night’s
sleep, two months’ pay.
Add –‘s to a singular noun that ends in –s or –z, as long as doing so does not make the
pronunciation of that noun awkward. If doing so creates awkwardness, add only the
apostrophe.
BUT
Rule 2: Use the apostrophe to show possession; add only –‘ if the noun is plural
and ends in /-s.
Rule 3: Use the apostrophe to show joint possession in a series; add –‘s only to
the last noun.
Rule 4: Use the apostrophe to show individual possession in a series; add –‘s to
each noun.
Rule 6: Use the apostrophe to form the of a hyphenated word; add –‘s after the
last letter.
Answer: b. It’s time to stand up for what you believe, because if you don’t, you’ll be left
behind.
are short words that point to a noun. The points to specific persons, places, and things.
A and an do not point to something specific.
Rule 1: Use a or an for general reference. When you use a or an, you mean any item.
Al owns a car. [This is the same as saying any car.]
an atom atoms
a building buildings
a cell cells
a Canadian dollar Canadian dollars
an Indian elephant Indian elephants
Rule 3: Place a or an before nouns that can be counted. Don't use a or an before nouns
that cannot be counted.
Count
The mountain climber used a tank of
oxygen.
They marveled at the many cultural
wonders of France.
Jason was a hero.
Noncount
Oxygen and hydrogen combine to from
water.
They learned to speak French.
Jason had courage.
Rule 6: In most cases, don't use articles with abstract nouns, such as words that name
attitudes, diseases, emotions, holidays, languages, philosophies, religions, sports, and
studies.
Henri loves art history.
There are laws against sexual harassment.
Marion had recovered from pneumonia.
Enzo's only vice is gluttony.
Our vacation ends on Labor Day.
Paul studied Sanskrit.
My friends follow Buddhism.
Ernie believes excessive pride is a sin.
the United States of America, the Netherlands, the People's Republic of China
f. Wars
the Russian Revolution, the Boxer Rebellion, the Second World War (But: World
War II)
g. Buildings, canals, bridges
Blessed are the meek, for they shall inherit the earth.
Consider the lilies of the field; they toil not, neither do they spin.
Rule 3: Capitalize proper . Proper adjectives are made from proper nouns.
NOTE: Some abbreviations are capitalized even though the words they stand for
are not.
NOTE: Articles (such as a, the), prepositions (such as of, with), and conjunctions
(such as or) of fewer than five letters do not get capitalized unless they
begin a title.
I’m not sure what I did to offend you, but I’ll surely make up for it.
BUT
Rule 10: Capitalize the name of a place, organization, or business only if you give
its actual title.
BUT
Rule 12: Capitalize a rank or title only when used with a name.
NOTE: If you can put the word any in front of a noun, that noun should NOT be
capitalized.
Rule 13: Capitalize the name of a specific institution, not of a type of institution.
BUT
Rule 14: Capitalize the name of an official academic course, not a branch of
learning.
BUT
Rule 15: Capitalize a sacred name, not a secular word made from it.
In the case of George Bush, Republican refers to an official political party and should be
capitalized. In the case of Jimmy Carter, republican refers only to a type of government
and should not be capitalized.
Answer: a. One friend of mine has seen The Rocky Horror Picture Show almost a
hundred times.
Colons
A colon (;) is a mark of punctuation that appears within a sentence. Never use a colon
at the end of a sentence.
USE A COLON
Sometimes, you can use an independent clause to explain, add to, or clarify the
meaning of another. You should separate these clauses with a colon.
Stephen King has been busy; he was written more than 27 novels since
1974.
You can place a colon after an independent clause to introduce information naming
sometime in that clause.
Alaska is rich in several natural resources: oil, gold, copper, and uranium.
Only one city is called “eternal”: Rome.
CAUTION: Don’t use a colon to introduce a direct quotation if that quotation is needed
to make the sentence you’re writing complete.
10:55 P.M.
3. Before a subtitle:
CAUTION: Do not use a colon to separate objects or from . A object is the receiver
of an action. A complement comes after the verb and describes the .
Object
Complement
Answer: a. The choir sang the minister’s favorite song: “Amazing Grace.”
A splice is an error similar to a fused sentence. A fused sentence joins two (main)
clauses without a and/or proper punctuation. A comma splice joins two complete
sentences with a comma. However, a comma is not strong enough to join two
independent (main) clauses. You can correct a comma splice by using the same five
methods used to correct fused sentences.
NOT: Mecca is Islam’s holiest city, Medina is also an important religious center.
BUT: Mecca is Islam’s holiest city. Medina is also an important religious center.
OR: Mecca is Islam’s holiest city, but Medina is also an important religious
center.
OR: Mecca is Islam’s holiest city; Medina is also an important religious center.
OR: Mecca is Islam’s holiest city; however, Medina is also an important
religious center.
OR: Although Mecca is Islam’s holiest city, Medina is also an important
religious center.
1. One of the following items contains a comma splice, another is a run – on (or
fused) sentence, and a third is correct. Click on the item that is correct.
a. My motorcycle wouldn’t start on Friday it had been hit by lightning.
b. My motorcycle wouldn’t start on Friday, for it had been hit by lightning.
c. My motorcycle wouldn’t start on Friday, it had been hit by lightning.
Answer: b. My motorcycle wouldn’t start on Friday, for it had been hit by lightning
2. One of the following items contains a comma splice, another is a run – on (or
fused) sentence, and a third is correct. Click on the item that is correct.
a. The forecaster said it would rain on Sunday it might be sunny.
b. The forecaster said it would rain; however, on Sunday it might be sunny.
c. The forecaster said it would rain, on Sunday it might be sunny.
Answer: b. The forecaster said it would rain; however, on Sunday it might be sunny.
Commas
A sentence contains two (main) clauses joined by a comma and one of the
conjunctions: and, but, for, nor, or, so, yet. An independent clause contains a and a
and expresses a complete idea. An independent clause is the heart of any sentence.
Some compound sentences begin or end with phrases. Other begins with dependent
clauses. Such phrases and clauses can also take commas.
Subordinate
(dependent) clause: As I walked through the crowd, someone picked my
pocket.
Phrase: In fact, all of my money was stolen.
Word: Fortunately, I was carrying only two dollars at the time.
NOTE: Remember that introductory elements
1. Begin .
2. Introduce clausess.
REVIEW THESE IMPORTANT DEFINITIONS
Subordinate
clause: Group of words with a subject and predicate (verb) that does
not express
a complete idea.
Mainclause: Group of words with a subject and predicate (verb) that expresses
a complete idea. The main clause is the heart of a sentence.
To keep the meaning of your sentences clear, use commas to separate , , , , , and
that come one after another in a series.
NOTE: In general, do not set off pairs of words, phrases, or clauses with commas.
Not: Children feared the man who wore the red hat, and
the funny suit.
But: Children feared the man who wore the red hat and the
funny suit.
Nouns: Tibet, Japan, Sri Lanka, and Nepal are countries in Asia.
Adjectives: A cold, rainy, windy day is no time to go camping in the Andres Mountains.
Adverbs: The pilgrims moved toward Mecca slowly, carefully, and devoutly.
• Commas Separating Phrases in a Series
: Lincoln wrote that “the government of the people, by
the
people, for the people shall not perish from the earth.”
: To be free, to care for children, and to worship God
are my
mother’s priorities.
: Running barefoot over rocks, climbing over barbed
wire,
and forging a stream, the young slave finally escaped.
A nonrestrictive modifier (adjective) helps describe a noun but does not define it and
is not essential to its meaning. If you left that modifier out of the sentence, the
sentence’s meaning would not change.
A restrictive modifier identifies a noun or distinguishes it from all other such nouns.
This type of modifier limits the noun meaning ot one particular person, place or thing.
A modifier that can be removed without affecting the meaning of the sentence is
nonrestrictive and needs commas.
Students, who can use campus services free of charge, must show
their IDs before entering the library.
The clause who can use campus services free of charge doesn’t restrict the meaning of
students to a specific group of students. The clause refers to all students.
Coordinate adjectives are two or more describers that follow one another and describe
the same noun.
Sometimes, adjectives you think describe the same noun really describe a larger term,
which contains an adjective and a noun.
High describes school, but old does not. Old describes the larger term highschool.
If placing the word and between the adjectives makes sense, they are coordinate and
can be separated by a comma.
Coordinate: The barn, which was old and red, sat on a hill.
Not Coordinate: The school, which was old and (?)high, was torn down.
CAUTION: Don’t separate two coordinate adjectives with both a comma and and.
In a sentence, use a comma to separate the street address from the city.
However, when addressing an envelope, place the street address on one
line and the city on the next. In this case, do not follow the street address
with a comma.
BUT
Bertrand Bong
10 Willow Drive
Eugene, Idaho 00000
Always place a comma between city and state or city and country. When
writing a sentence, use a comma to separate the state or country and any
information that follows.
Use commas in units of more than three digits, setting off every third digit as you count
from the right.
The
dog
was
frightened
,
tired
,
And
hungry.
OR
The
dog
was
frightened
,
tired
,
Hungry.
You can even use a comma to replace several words, thereby streamlining your writing
and giving it variety and emphasis. This practice is especially useful in sentences that
express a contrast.
You can sometimes make sentences clearer by placing commas between words that,
when set side by side, might be misleading, confusing, or unintentionally humorous.
Not: Whenever he cooked the cat climbed onto the counter.
But: Whenever he cooked, the cat climbed onto the counter.
Not: A bird with large, red wings and a bright yellow tail, perched on my window.
But: A bird with large, red wings and a bright yellow tail perched on my window.
Complements are adjectives that come after the verb and describe the subject.
Not: The Romans built roads across their empire, because their armies needed to
move quickly from one province to another.
But: The Romans built roads across their empire because their armies needed to
move quickly from one province to another.
NOTE: For easier reading, you may put a comma before a participial phrase that
ends a sentence:
Answer: a. I try my best, but I still cannot understand the metric system.
Answer: b. Originating in ninth – century China, the story of Cinderella has many forms.
CONJUNCTIONS
(and, but, for, nor, or, so, yet) join words or ideas of the same importance.
(such as although, because, rather than, since, though, unless, while, and
whenever) join ideas by showing that one is less important than the other. Such
conjunctions introduce subordinate (dependent) clauses.
Virginia is one of the original thirteen states, but West Virginia became a state in 1863.
Although Texas declared its independence from Mexico in 1836, that state did not
enter the Union until 1845.
Answer: b. yet
Answer: a. Although
Dangling Modifiers
Modifiers must point clearly to the words they describe. Otherwise, sentences may
seem illogical. This happens if you forget to mention the word a modifier is supposed to
describe. In such cases, the modifier is said to “dangle”; it has nothing to hang on to.
Say you wrote
Dangling: Walking across the field, the river came into view.
Your reader would surely know that you – not the river – were walking. But that’s not
what the sentence says. To correct dangling modifiers, add the word(s) you forgot. To
do so, however, you might have to rewrite the sentence.
You might create a dangling modifier if you follow a modifier with a main clause whose
subject is it and whose verb is was or another form of to be.
Dangling: Concerned about the rain, it was decided that the picnic
should be canceled.
Revised: Concerned about the rain, our club decided to call off the
picnic.
You can create a dash ( -- ) by typing two hyphens with no space in between ( -- ). A
dash is used to
George Bush became the first incumbent vice president -- since 1836 -- to win election
to the presidency.
The strengthening of the Western alliance, the Persian Gulf War, and the signing of
several arms reduction treaties with the Soviet Union -- these were the great successes
of President Bush’s foreign policy.
1. Paying attention to the correct use of dashes, choose the best written item.
a. Yosemite, Mount Rainier, and Grand Canyon these are three -- of my
favorite national parks.
b. Yosemite, Mount Rainier, and Grand Canyon -- these are three -- of my
favorite national parks.
c. Yosemite, Mount Rainier, and Grand Canyon -- these are three of my
favorite national parks.
Answer: c. Yosemite, Mount Rainier, and Grand Canyon -- these are three of my
favorite national parks.
2. Paying attention to the correct use of dashes, choose the best written item.
a. William Shakespeare, John Keats, William Butler Yeats -- these are my
favorite poets.
b. William Shakespeare -- John Keats -- William Butler Yeats -- these are my
favorite poets.
c. William Shakespeare, John Keats, William Butler Yeats these are my
favorite -- poets.
Answer: a. William Shakespeare, John Keats, William Butler Yeats -- these are my
favorite poets.
Hyphens
1. Use hyphens to join compound – words that work together to describe a noun.
Make sure these words come before, not after, the noun.
anti – Communist
pre – Colombian
un – American
3. Use hyphens to connect prefixes such as all-, ex-, post-, pro-, and self- to some
words.
all – inclusive
ex – husband
pro – family
self – absorbed
midterm
online
premarital
postmortem
4. Use hyphens with two – word numbers from 21 (twenty – one) to 99 (ninety –
nine):
Answer: a. Thirty – five employees were honored at the company’s annual awards
banquet.
Answer: b. The fifty – year – old company has begun an ongoing review of its plant’s
equipment needs.
Italics
Italic style uses letters that slant upward and to the right. If you are not using a
typewriter or computer that makes italics, underline words that would appear in italics.
When underlining is not possible (such as in a text – based email message, often an
underscore character ( _ ) is used to indicate italics or emphasis.
The speaker said, “The U.S. owes its lenders three trillion dollars. Now
that’s a deficit.”
The speaker said, “The U.S. owes its lenders three trillion dollars. Now that’s a
_deficit_.”
3. Write the title of a book, magazine, play, film, television show, long poems, or
newspaper.
Answer: c. The New York Evening Post was founded by Alexander Hamilton.
Answer: a. Life magazine bought us vivid pictures of wars, floods, famines, and other
international tragedies when there was no television.
Misplaced Modifiers
adjective noun
An honest politician is a treasure.
adjective noun
Towering above the city, the cathedral shimmered in the sunlight.
verb adverb
Questioned by the police, the suspect responded nervously.
[Before he entered the navy tells when father worked; automotive describes engineer.]
Place the modifier as close to the word it describes as you can. If you don’t, your reader
may have difficulty telling which word in the sentence you want to modify.
Misplaced: When only a boy, Joe’s aunt took him to the rodeo.
Revised: Joe’s aunt took him to the rodeo when he was only a boy.
Modifiers cause confusion when they refer to words that come before and after them at
the same time.
Confusing: She claimed Friday she saw a UFO. [Did the UFO appear on Friday, or
was Friday when she claimed to have seen it?]
Revised: Friday, she claimed she saw a UFO. [Friday is when she made the claim.]
OR
Revised: She claimed she saw a UFO Friday. [Friday is when she saw it.]
Placing the Words Only, Even, and Just
Where you place the words only and just in a sentence can change the meaning of a
sentence.
NOTE: These three sentences are correct, but they mean different things.
Only modifies worked, a verb. The sentence means “Sam did nothing but work in
Phoenix for three years.”
Only modifies in Phoenix. The sentence means “Sam worked nowhere but in Phoenix
for three years.”
Only modifies three. The sentence means “Sam worked in Phoenix no more than three
years.”
Modifiers must point clearly to the words they describe. Otherwise, sentences may
seem illogical. This happens if you forget to mention the word a modifier is suppose to
describe. In such cases, the modifier is said to “dangle”; it has nothing to hang on to.
Say you wrote
Dangling: Walking across the field, the river came into view.
Your reader would surely know that you – not the river – were walking. But that’s not
what the sentence says. To correct dangling modifiers, add the word(s) you forgot. To
do so, however, you might have to rewrite the sentence.
Dangling: Concerned about the rain, it was decided that the picnic should be
canceled.
[Concerned about the rain has nothing to modify except the word it, which refers to no
word in the sentence.]
Revised: Concerned about the rain, our club decided to call of the picnic.
[Now, Concerned about the rain clearly refers to club, a subject the reader can identify.]
MAINTAIN PARALLELISM
The first sentence contains a series that is not consistent. The first two items are nouns,
but the third – purchased a scarf – contains a verb. In the second sentence, all three
items – tie, shirt, and scarf – are nouns.
Not parallel: The mountains of the West are younger than the East.
[This sentence compares things that are not alike: the mountains and the East.]
Parallel: The mountains of the West are younger than the mountains of the
East.
Parallel: The mountains of the West are younger than those of the East.
Some pairs of words can help make sentences parallel. These are correlatives: either
… or, neither ... nor, and not only … but also.
When you use these pairs, remember to join the same kinds of elements.
Not Parallel: In December, the weather is either cool, or we get a warming trend
with rain.
Parallel: In December, the weather is either cool or warm and rainy.
You can use the relative pronoun that to introduce a subordinate clause. But be
consistent if you use more than one subordinate clause. Make sure each is introduced
the same way.
Not Parallel: I knew that I wouldn’t get there and my friends would be worried.
Parallel: I knew that I wouldn’t get there and that my friends would be
worried.
NOTE: In the first example, one subordinate clause is introduced by that; the
other isn’t. In the second example, both subordinate clauses are
introduced by that; the sentence is parallel.
The of a verb is the time a verb expresses. If not done logically, shifting from one tense
to another in the same sentence can cause problems. The following sentence uses both
the present tense (drives) and the past tense (took) to express things happening at
different times. Therefore, in this case shifting from present tense to past tense is
logical.
present past
Usually he drives to work, but yesterday he took the bus.
Shifting verb tenses logically can serve a purpose; to show actions occurring at different
times. But shifting verb tenses illogically – without a good reason – can make a
sentence hard to read and understand.
past present
Illogical shift: Whenever visitors approached, our dogs barks loudly.
Approached is in the past tense; barks is in the present. But the logic of the sentence
demands that both verbs be in the same tense. After all, the sentence begins with
Whenever, so the dog must be barking at the same time the visitors approach.
Verbs take various tenses. They also come in active voice or passive voice. A verb in
the active voice takes a subject – person, place, or thing – that does an action. A verb in
the passive voice takes a subject that is acted upon.
NOTE: Verbs in the passive voice always contain at least two words: a
form of the verb to be (is) and the participle (admired).
CAUTION: Shifting from one voice to another in the same sentence often makes the
sentence hard to read. Shifting the voice also makes your messages less
direct and emphatic.
The first example begins in the passive voice and then shifts to the active. In the second
example, both verbs are in the active voice.
Answer: a. In the summer of 2006, Donna, a graduate of my high school, made a film
about hurricanes.
Answer: b. His DVD player, which his wife had bought him, proved hard to program.
NOUNS
A names a person, place, or thing. There are two types of nouns: common and
proper. Proper nouns name specific persons, places, or things. Proper nouns are
capitalized.
Common Proper
continent Africa
country Zimbabwe
religion Islam
desert Kalahari
island Madagascar
ocean Indian Ocean
Concrete nouns name things we can see, hear, smell, feel, and taste. Abstract nouns
name ideas, emotions, and subjects.
are nouns that end in –ing and that show activities, such as asking, driving, living,
moving, reading, seeking, and writing.
Nouns act as subjects and objects. A subject is the person, place, or thing that does an
action or that the sentence is describing. An object is a person, place, or thing that
receives an action.
CAUTION: To be complete, a sentence does not need an object, but it must have a
subject. For example, The speaker was well prepared has no object, but it
is a complete sentence.
Answer: b. stapler
Answer: a. Mathematics
Numbers
As a general rule, spell out numbers from one through nine. Use for all others.
BUT
However
2. Spell out times unless you are giving the exact time; always use numerals with
A.M. and P.M.
BUT
3. Use numerals with units of measure and percents, but follow the general rule for
units of time.
BUT
4. Use numerals – not words – for dates, exact sums of money, scores of games,
addresses, page numbers, exact times of the day, and miles per hour.
CAUTION: Never begin a sentence with a numeral. Write out a number that begins a
sentence or rewrite the sentence so that the numeral appears later.
Not: 170 people attend the fund – raiser.
But: One – hundred – seventy people attended the fund – raiser.
Or: The fund – raiser was attended by 170 people.
Answer: c. Fifty thousand tickets to the concert were sold on the first day; the price of
the tickets ranged from $35 to $60.
Parallelism
MAINTAIN PARALLELISM
The first sentence contains a series that is not consistent. The first two items are nouns,
but the third – purchased a scarf – contains a verb. In the second sentence, all three
items – tie, shirt, and scarf – are nouns.
Not parallel: The mountains of the West are younger than the East.
Parallel: The mountains of the West are younger than the mountains of the East.
Parallel: The mountains of the West are younger than those of the East.
Some pairs of words can help make sentences parallel. These are correlatives:
either … or; neither … nor; and not only … but also.
When you use these pairs, remember to join the same kinds of elements.
You can use the relative pronoun that to introduce a subordinate clause. But be
consistent if you use more than one subordinate clause. Make sure each is introduced
the same way.
Not Parallel: I knew that I wouldn’t get there and my friends would be worried.
Parallel: I knew that I wouldn’t get there and that my friends would be
worried.
NOTE: In the first example, one subordinate clause is introduced by that, the
other isn’t. In the second example, both subordinate clauses are
introduced by that, the sentence is parallel.
Answer: a. The house’s new owners fixed the porch, planted three pine trees, and the
bedrooms were repainted.
Answer: b. In the winter, Sal plays hockey; in the summer, baseball is played by him.
Parentheses
USE PARENTHESES [( )]
Parentheses [( )] enclose important words that would interrupt the flow of the .
Ishmael (he is the speaker in Melville’s Moby Dick) takes his name from a biblical
character who was cast into the desert.
Five countries (Somalia, Kenya, Sudan, Eritrea, and Djibouti) border Ethiopia.
Somalia, Kenya, Sudan, Eritrea, and Djibouti name the five countries.
Before becoming president, George Bush was (1) a member of the House of
Representatives, (2) U.S. ambassador to the United Nations, (3) chief liaison officer to
China, (4) director of the CIA, and (5) vice president.
Answer: a. Jupiter (easily the largest planet in the solar system) was named after the
Roman king of the gods.
Phrases & Clauses
subject verb
The president resigned.
Subject verb
My mother was born in Nigeria.
subject verb
Lenin’s revolution was successful.
A clause has a subject and verb but does not express a complete thought. A
dependent clause must be joined to an independent clause. Otherwise, the lone clause
will be a sentence fragment – an error. Also known as a clause, a dependent clause
expresses an idea less important than (subordinate to) an idea expressed in a main
clause.
Below, the words in bold are dependent clauses. They are attached to independent
(main) clauses in complete sentences:
PHRASES
Phrases are groups of words without subjects. Like dependent clauses, phrases
express incomplete thoughts and cannot act as sentences. Phrases must be attached
to independent (main) clauses to avoid being fragments.
According to the Old Testament, Abel was the second son of Adam and Eve.
Cain, Abel’s older brother, murdered him out of jealousy.
2. Identify the independent (main) clause(s) in the following sentence. The Greeks
defeated the Persians at the Battle of Marathon.
a. The Greeks defeated the Persians
b. at the Battle of Marathon
c. the Battle of Marathon
A comes before a noun or pronoun and shows how that word relates to other words in
the sentence.
In the First World War, Turkey fought against Britain and the Allies.
Prepositions
about before for out
above behind from over
across below in through
after between inside to
against beyond into toward
along by near under
among despite of upon
at during on with
Answer: b. across
2. Identify the preposition(s) in the following sentence. Between the sixteenth and
nineteenth centuries, 15 million Africans were shipped across the Atlantic in
slave ships.
a. Were
b. between/across/in
c. sixteenth/nineteenth
d. million
Answer: b. between/across/in
PRONOUNS
replace nouns. A pronoun stands for a person, place, or thing. There are five types of
pronouns: personal, relative, demonstrative, indefinite, and reflexive.
pronouns can act as subjects or objects. They can also show possession.
Madagascar lies in the Indian Ocean, which is the world’s third – largest body of water.
Relative pronouns
that whichever whom
whatever who whomever
which whoever whose
“This country has been made better because of your example,” said the speaker.
Demonstrative pronouns
this that
these those
pronouns point to places and things that are not specific. They act as subjects or
objects, or they show possession.
Everyone in my tour group class wanted to visit the ancient Mayan city.
No one knew much about the Yucatan people who built it.
Indefinite pronouns
any each few nothing
anybody either many some
anyone everybody nobody somebody
anything everyone none someone
both everything no one something
1. Identify the pronoun(s) in the following sentence. His photographs are beautiful.
a. His
b. photographs
c. are
Answer: a. His
Answer: a. Everyone
Quotation Marks
Quotation marks (“ “) identify words you have taken directly from someone else. They
tell readers these words are exactly as your source spoke or wrote them.
“We don’t know a millionth of one percent about anything,” said Thomas
Alva Edison.
“Toots Shor’s restaurant,” claims Yogi Berra, “is so crowded nobody goes
there anymore.”
CAUTION: Don’t put quotation marks around an indirect quotation, which tells what
someone said without using his or her exact words.
Benita said, “I told Julio, ‘Don’t swing on that branch,’ but he ignored me
and told me to ‘get lost.’”
The writer quotes Benita, who is quoting herself and Julio. ‘Don’t swing on that branch’
and ‘get lost’ are quotations within a quotation.
“He who hesitates is not only lost but miles away from the nearest exit”;
now that’s the kind of line stand – up comics dream about.
Use quotation marks around titles of newspaper, magazine, and articles; poems; short
stories; songs; and episodes of TV programs.
Answer: a. Robert Frost ends his short but lovely poem “Pasture” with an invitation to
the reader: “You come too.”
Answer: b. Both “Night and Day” and “Stardust” were recorded by Frank Sinatra and the
Tommy Dorsey Orchestra in the early 1940s.
Run – on sentences
A sentence, also called a run – on sentence, joins two (main) clauses without a
and/or proper punctuation. A fused sentence combines two complete sentences without
indicating where one stops and the other begins.
1. End one independent (main) clause with a period. Capitalize the first word of the
next.
2. Place a comma (,) and a coordinating conjunction (and, but, for, nor, or, yet, so)
between the independent clauses.
Not: Peter supported his parents and siblings only he had been able to
find a job.
But: Peter supported his parents and siblings, for only he had been able
to find a job.
Not: Thomas Hardy is remembered chiefly for his novels he also wrote
poetry.
But: Thomas Hardy is remembered chiefly for his novels; however, he
also wrote poetry.
1. One of the following items is a run – on (or fused) sentence, another contains a
comma splice, and another is correct. Choose the item that is correct.
a. We parked in front of a fire hydrant, for it was the only space available.
b. We parked in front of a fire hydrant it was the only space available.
c. We parked in front of a fire hydrant, it was the only space available.
Answer: a. We parked in front of a fire hydrant, for it was the only space available.
2. One of the following items is a run – on (or fused) sentence, another contains a
comma splice, and another is correct. Choose the item that is correct.
a. Kasia is a wonderful woman, she always goes out of her way to help
others.
b. Kasia is a wonderful woman; she always goes out of her way to help
others.
c. Kasia is a wonderful woman she always goes out of her way to help
others.
Answer: b. Kasia is a wonderful woman; she always goes out of her way to help others.
Semicolons
Like a comma, a semicolon (;) tells the reader to pause. However, the semicolon is a
stronger mark of punctuation. It separates and that are closely related or that receive
the same emphasis.
1. (main) clauses.
2. Independent (main) clauses joined by words and phrases.
3. A series of items that contain commas.
Use a semicolon to connect two independent clauses that are closely related and are
not connected with a conjunction. An independent clause has a subject and a verb
and expresses a complete idea. The coordinating conjunctions are and, or, but, nor, for,
so, yet.
Woodrow Wilson was the president of the United States; he followed William Howard
Taft.
In the middle of sentences, come in two forms: adverbs and transitional phrases.
Both emphasize and clarify the relationship between the independent clauses they join.
Conjunctive Adverb:
It’s a good thing Columbus came to America; otherwise, the Italians would never have
learned about the tomato.
Transitional Phrase:
People before Columbus knew the world wasn’t flat; in fact, Eratosthenes accurately
measured the earth’s circumference in the third century B.C.
NOTE: Use a comma after a conjunctive adverb or transitional phrase.
THE SEMICOLON BETWEEN A SERIES OF ITEMS THAT CONTAIN COMMAS
Use a semicolons to separate items in a series when some or all of the items in that
series contain commas.
Eleanor of Aquitaine (1122 – 1204) was the daughter of William X, duke of Aquitaine;
the wife of Louis VII, king of France; and later the wife of Henry of Normandy, who
became Henry II of England.
There are three items in this list: (1) the daughter of . . . ; (2) the wife of . . . ; and (3)
later the wife of . . . If the semicolons were replaced by commas, readers might not be
able to tell where one item ends and the next begins. After all, each item already
contains a comma of its own.
LEARN FOUR USES FOR THE COLON (;)
A colon (;) is a mark of punctuation that appears within a sentence. Never use a colon
at the end of a sentence.
Use a colon
Sometimes, you can use an independent clause to explain, add to, or clarify the
meaning of another. You should separate these clauses with a colon.
Stephen King has been busy; he was written more than 27 novels since 1974.
You can place a colon after an independent clause to introduce information naming
something in that clause.
Alaska is rich in several natural resources: oil, gold, copper, and uranium.
Only one city is called “eternal”: Rome.
CAUTION: Don’t use a colon to introduce a direct quotation if that quotation is needed
to make the sentence you’re writing complete.
10:55 P.M.
3. Before a subtitle:
CAUTION: Do not use a colon to separate objects or from . A object is the receiver
of an action. A complement comes after the verb and describes the .
Object
Complement
Quotation marks (“ “) identify words you have taken directly from someone else. They
tell readers these words are exactly as your source spoke or wrote them.
“We don’t know a millionth of one percent about anything,” said Thomas Alva Edison.
“Toots Shor’s restaurant,” claims Yogi Berra. “is so crowded nobody goes there
anymore.”
CAUTION: Don’t put quotation marks around an indirect quotation, which tells what
someone said without using his or her exact words.
Not: She said that “she was going to the party.”
But: She said that she was going to the party.
Benita said, “I told Julio, ‘Don’t swing on that branch,” but he ignored me and told me to
‘get lost.’”
The writer quotes Benita, who is quoting herself and Julio. ‘Don’t swing on that branch’
and ‘get lost’ are quotations within a quotation.
“He who hesitates is not only lost but miles away from the nearest exit”; now that’s the
kind of line stand – up comics dream about.
Use quotation marks around titles of newspaper, magazine, and articles; poems; short
stories; songs; and episodes of TV programs.
B.R. Jerman’s article, “Browning’s Witless Duke,” is about Robert Browning’s poem “My
Last Duchess.” The story “Guests of the Nation” is set in Ireland.
Gershwin’s “Summertime” and “I Got Rhythm” are classics of American song.
“Who Shot J.R.?” was the most watched episode of Dallas.
You can create a dash ( -- ) by typing two hyphens with no space in between ( -- ). A
dash is used to
The strengthening of the Western alliance, the Persian Gulf War, and the signing of
several arms reduction treaties with the Soviet Union -- these were the great successes
of President Bush’s foreign policy.
USE PARENTHESES [( )]
Parentheses [( )] enclose important words that would interrupt the flow of the .
Ishmael (he is the speaker in Melville’s Moby Dick) takes his name from a biblical
character who was cast into the desert.
Five countries (Somalia, Kenya, Sudan, Eritrea, and Djibouti) border Ethiopia.
Somalia, Kenya, Sudan, Eritrea, and Djibouti name the five countries.
ENCLOSING BRIEF DEFINITIONS
Before becoming president, George Bush was (1) a member of the House of
Representatives, (2) U.S. ambassador to the United Nations, (3) chief liaison officer to
China, (4) director of the CIA, and (5) vice president.
You can also use apostrophes to create special relationships between words: a night’s
sleep, two months’ pay.
Monrovia, Liberia’s capital, was named after U.S. president James Monroe.
Add –‘s to a singular noun that ends in –s or –z, as long as doing so does not make the
pronunciation of that noun awkward. If doing so creates awkwardness, add only the
apostrophe.
Rule 2: Use the apostrophe to show possession; add only –‘ if the noun is plural
and ends in /-s.
Rule 3: Use the apostrophe to show joint possession in a series; add –‘s only to
the last noun.
Rule 4: Use the apostrophe to show individual possession in a series; add –‘s to
each noun.
Boston’s and San Francisco’s waterfronts are interesting, but I prefer Seattle’s.
Rule 6: Use the apostrophe to form the of a hyphenated word; add –‘s after the
last letter.
Answer: a. He left the office after 10 P.M.; the next day he arrived early to finish his
work.
Answer: b. The elevators were not working; he had to walk up the stairs.
Sentence Fragments
Contain a verb.
Contain a subject.
Express a complete idea.
Add a verb:
Add a subject:
Look for adverbs, conjunctions, prepositions, relative pronouns and –ing words
(gerunds and participles) not followed by complete ideas.
Rule 1: Place –i before –e, except after –c or when sounded like –ay as in
neighbor and weigh
Rule 2: To change the ending on a word that ends in –y, first change –y to –i if the
–y follows a consonant (any letter but a, e, i, o, u).
attorney + s = attorneys
buoy + ed = buoyed
donkey + s = donkeys
Rule 3: Toadd –able, -ed, or –ing to a word ending in a consonant, double that
consonant only if the sound before it is short.
Rule 4: If the final –e in a word is not pronounced, drop that –e when you add an
ending that begins with a vowel (a, e, i, o, u).
But keep the –e when you add an ending that begins with a consonant (any letter but a,
e, i, o, u).
time + ly = timely
pave + ment = pavement
EXCEPTIONS
responsible + ly = responsibly
true + ly = truly
building buildings
flash flashes
machine machines
c. If a noun ends in a –y that follows a consonant, change the –y to –I and add –es:
society societies
treaty treaties
attorney attorneys
bay bays
knife knives
thief thieves
piano pianos
tomato tomatoes
g. Irregular nouns don’t follow the rules. Some even change their spellings in the
plural:
child children
woman women
Some are spelled the same in the plural and the singular:
deer deer
CAUTION: In made with not, put the apostrophe between the n and the t:
Not But
could’nt couldn’t
are’nt aren’t
Answer: a. Gettysburg is famous because more American lives were lost in the Civil
War battle fought there than in any other single battle.
WHAT IS AGREEMENT?
As you know, when words agree they are of the same number. This concept means that
take singular . subjects take plural verbs. Singular means one; plural means more
than one.
To decide whether to use a singular or a plural verb, first determine whether your
subject is singular or plural. Most plural nouns end in –s or –es.
With singular nouns, use verbs that end in –s or –es. Otherwise, use the simple form of
the verb.
Subject Joined by OR
Use singular verbs with subjects joined by or if both subjects are singular.
Bill or Sam has [not have] been elected to feed the pig.
Use plural verbs with subjects joined by or if both subjects are plural.
I can’t remember whether the Marx Brothers or the Three Stooges are [not
is] her favorite comedians.
If one subject is singular and the other is plural, the verb agrees with the one that is
closer to it.
A complement is a noun or adjective that describes the subject but comes after the
verb. When a compound subject is followed by a complement, the verb is plural even if
the complement is singular.
Overeating and forcing yourself to vomit are [not is] a symptom of bulimia.
When the parts of a compound subject name the same person, place, or thing, the verb
is singular.
The commander of the colonial army and our first president was [not were]
George Washington.
CAUTION: When the subjects are considered separate items, the verb should be
plural.
Peas and carrots grow [not grows] in the garden by the window.
When a relative pronoun (that, which, who, whom, or whose) refers to compound
elements, the verb following that pronoun is plural.
Spanish and Portuguese, which are [not is] Romance languages, are both
spoken in Europe and South America.
If separate are used to distinguish two types of the same noun, the verb is plural even
if the noun is singular.
College and professional football share [not shares] many of the same
rules.
MASTER SPECIAL SUBJECT/VERB AGREEMENT PROBLEMS
When a pronoun – who, which, or that – is a subject, make the verb agree with its ,
the word to which a pronoun refers.
The subject of who wins the lottery is who. The antecedent of who is woman. Woman is
singular; therefore, who takes a singular verb, wins.
GERUNDS AS SUBJECTS
A is a noun that ends in –ing and that stands for an activity: running, writing, studying,
working, reading, understanding. Deal with gerunds as you would other nouns.
If a sentence begins with there or here, the subject comes after the verb. Look for it
there.
Once there were [not was] two men who claimed to be the true pope.
Here are [not is] your two choices: either get a job or get out!
If the verb comes before the subject, read the whole sentence and find the subject
before deciding whether the verb is singular or plural.
Some singular nouns end in –s. These include academic subjects such as mathematics,
statistics, and physics. News, mumps, tennis, politics, and acoustics are also singular.
Such nouns take singular verbs.
Words that name quantities, such as majority, number, dollars, and years, are singular
or plural depending on their use. If you are considering items together in one group, use
a singular verb. If you are considering separate items within a group, use a plural verb.
Words that come between the subject and verb can sometimes hide the real subject of
a sentence.
In the first sentence, the writer mistakenly assumes that the subject is city, which would
take the singular verb includes. But the real subject is attractions, a plural noun that
takes the plural verb include.
To find the true subject of a sentence, first look for the sentence’s verb. The verb is the
word that conveys action or that helps describe another word by linking it with an
adjective.
Shows action: Students sitting in the last row never ask questions.
Describes: Our hopes of winning the game were dead.
After finding the sentence’s verb, ask the question, Who or what does the action? Or
Who or what is being described/identified? That word will be the true subject.
noun name groups of persons or things. They include words such as family, tribe,
nation, list, flock, pair, and team. Usually, collective nouns are singular and take singular
verbs no matter what words come between.
Not: Every night, a family of raccoons attack my trash cans.
NOTE: The subject of the sentence is not raccoons; it is family, which is singular.
Therefore, the verb must be singular.
An pronoun stands for a noun that is not specified in the sentence. An easy way to
remember indefinite pronouns is to place them into four categories.
When checking agreement between indefinite pronouns and verbs, ignore words that
come between; focus on the subject. Try setting off the words that come between.
subject verb
No one living in the neighborhood fears a break – in.
subject verb
Anyone who hikes in these hills has to watch for bears.
Don’t let phrases that begin with of and that come between the subject and verb
confuse you. Focus on the indefinite pronoun to decide whether a subject is singular or
plural.
subject verb
Each of the cars were stolen in a different city.
subject verb
Some of the cars are antiques.
WORKING WITH SUBORDINATE CLAUSES THAT COME BETWEEN SUBJECTS AND VERBS
pronoun – that, which, who, whom, and whose – introduce subordinate , which refer
to and describe a or . Ignore those subordinate clauses when you make the subject
and verb of the clause agree.
subject verb
Anybody who studies Russian knows the Cyrillic alphabet.
Joining nouns and pronouns with and creates compound subjects, which are plural. But
this situation isn’t true when you use or and nor between subjects. Or and nor tell us to
consider subjects separately, not together. The joining word helps us determine whether
a verb should be singular or plural.
BUT
Either/or and neither/nor constructions make us consider the two subjects separately,
not as a pair. Therefore, if both subjects are singular, the verb must be singular:
NOTE: The subjects is Thailand or Sri Lanka, not Thailand and Sri Lanka. Since
both subjects are singular, the verb must be singular: was, not were.
You learned that if both subjects in an either/or or neither/nor sentence are singular, the
verb is singular. By the same token, if both subjects are plural, the verb is plural
Not: Neither the cats nor the dogs has torn the screen.
But: Neither the cats nor the dogs have torn the screen.
USING EITHER/OR AND NEITHER/NOR WHEN ONE SUBJECT IS SINGULAR AND THE OTHER IS
PLURAL
When one subject is singular and the other is plural, the subject closer to the verb
determines whether the verb is singular or plural.
BUT
When either or neither comes immediately before a noun, the noun is singular.
Therefore, the verb that follows is also singular.
A noun names a single unit. It stands for a group of people or things. Although
collective nouns seem to be plural, they are usually singular. Collective nouns usually
take singular verbs.
Locate the verb in the sentences above. In each case, it comes directly after the
subject.
Sometimes collective nouns refer to individuals in a group rather than to the group as a
whole. In such cases, use a plural verb:
subject verb
Singular: The union of masons and artisans organized in 1892.
BUT
subject verb
Plural: A majority of voters think their taxes are high.
CAUTION: Subordinate clauses begin with relative pronouns such as that, which,
who, whom, and whose. Don’t let such clauses distract you when making
verbs agree with collective nouns.
Not: The club, which were once open only to men, now recruit women.
But: The club, which was once open only to men, now recruits women.
Some nouns of quantity, though plural, really suggest just a single unit. They always
take singular verbs.
Just as a verb agrees in number with its subject, a pronoun agrees with an , the word it
refers to. Antecedents are nouns or other pronouns.
RULE 1: If the antecedent is singular, the pronoun that refers to it is singular. If the
antecedent is plural, the pronoun that refers to it is plural.
Singular: The Dow Jones Industrial Average surged; it rose more than 200 points.
Plural: Both the investor and her broker were jubilant; they both made money.
RULE 2: Use singular pronouns to refer to nouns joined by or, either … or, and
neither…nor if both the nouns are singular. However, use plural pronouns
if both nouns are plural.
Singular: Neither Fred nor Bill has paid his [not their] dues.
Plural: Neither sea otters nor seals make their [not its] home in the Caribbean.
RULE 3: Use a singular or plural pronoun to refer to a collective noun depending on
the sense of that noun.
INDEFINITE PRONOUNS
RULE 5: Use singular pronouns when referring to each, either, and neither, even
when these words are followed by of phrases that end with plurals.
RULE 6: Use singular pronouns when referring to singular nouns that end in –s.
These nouns include mathematics, physics, economics, and politics.
One way to avoid sexism is by using both masculine and feminine pronouns:
A second way to avoid sexism is to replace the pronoun with an article: a, an, or the.
A third way to avoid sexism is to replace the indefinite pronoun with a plural noun.
Most nouns in English are generic -- – they are considered neither female nor male.
Included are words such as teacher, engineer, nurse, and judge. Nongeneric nouns
identify the sex of a person; they include grandmother, father, and aunt.
One way to avoid sexism when referring to generic nouns is by replacing a masculine
pronoun with both a masculine and feminine pronoun.
Sexism: A candidate for Senate should reveal his income tax returns.
Revised: A candidate for Senate should reveal his or her income tax returns.
A second way to avoid sexism when referring to generic nouns is by replacing the
pronoun with an article: a, an, or the.
A third way to avoid sexism when referring to generic nouns is to replace a singular
generic noun with a plural noun and then use a plural pronoun.
NOTE: Words that end in –ing cannot act as verbs unless they are paired with
helping verbs, such are, is, was, and were.
A Verb
PRESENT TENSE
In the present tense, a verb tells what is happening right now. The present tense also
shows action that happens over and over again. Therefore, you can write
OR
NOTE: The third person singular is the only exception to the rule. It ends in –s.
The irregular verb to be significantly changes its spelling in the present tense.
Singular Plural
PAST TENSE
Verbs in the past tense relate action or events that have been completed. To form the
past tense of a regular verb, add –d or –ed to the verb’s basic form:
The past tense of irregular verbs is formed in various ways. These verbs don’t follow a
pattern. That’s why they are called irregular. A list of irregular verbs appears below. You
will want to make a copy and study it.
Once you know the past tense of an irregular verb, you can apply it in all cases.
Singular Plural
Singular Plural
NOTE: The first and third person singular are different from all the rest.
FUTURE TENSE
The future tense tells us what will be true or what will happen at a later time. To form the
future tense, attach the helping verbs will, is going to, or are going to to the basic form
of the verb:
The present perfect uses the helping verb have or has with the past participle of a verb.
The past perfect uses the helping verb had with the past participle. To form the past
participle of regular verbs, add –d or –ed to the basic form of the verb.
NOTE: The present, past, present participles, and past participles of irregular
verbs do not follow a pattern. You must learn each of them individually.
Use the present perfect to talk about actions that begin in the past and continue into the
present. Verbs in present perfect use the helping verb have except in the third person
singular. Then they use has.
Use the past perfect to talk about actions that happened in the past and that came
before other events that happened in the past. Verbs in the past perfect use the helping
word had, the past tense of have, in all cases.
The of a verb is the time a verb expresses. If not done logically, shifting from one tense
to another in the same sentence can cause problems. The following sentence uses both
the present tense (drives) and the past tense (took) to express things happening at
different times. Therefore, in this case shifting from present tense to past tense is
logical.
present past
Usually he drives to work, but yesterday he took the bus.
Shifting verb tenses logically can serve a purpose: to show actions occurring at different
times. But shifting verb tenses illogically – without a good reason – can make a
sentence hard to read and understand.
past present
Illogical shift: Whenever visitors approached, our dog barks loudly.
Approached is in the past tense; barks is in the present. But the logic of the sentence
demands that both verbs be in the same tense. After all, the sentence begins with
Whenever, so the dog must be barking at the same time the visitors approach.
The tense of the verb refers to time. Keep verb tenses consistent. You don’t have to
stick to one tense in a sentence or paragraph. However, when you change tenses, you
must do so logically and only when necessary. Choose a main or controlling tense and
switch to other tenses only when you want to discuss events happening at other times.
Let’s say you begin a paragraph with the following sentence, which uses verbs in the
present tense:
I study Spanish two hours a day, but I still have trouble passing tests in that
class.
You can write a second sentence that compares your college Spanish class with one
you took in high school:
In high school, I barely studied Spanish two hours a week, yet I got good
grades.
You might even use of the future tense in a third sentence:
However, knowing Spanish will help me with the career I will pursue after
graduation.
I study Spanish two hours a day, but I still have trouble passing tests in that
class. In high school, I barely studied Spanish two hours a week, yet I got good
grades. However, knowing Spanish will help me with the career I will pursue after
graduation.
CAUTION: Do not shift from one tense to another without purpose. For example, DO
NOT write the following:
I study Spanish two hours a day, but I still had trouble passing tests in
that class.
Sometimes you will need to talk about things happening at different times in the same
sentence, and you will have to use more than one tense. Just make sure you move from
tense to tense logically:
The present perfect uses the helping verb have or has with the past participle of a main
verb. To form the past participle of regular verbs, add –d or –ed to the basic form of the
verb. A list of participles for irregular verbs can be found in this chapter.
The progressive tenses combine forms of the verb to be with present participles.
Present participles always end in –ing. Use the progressive tense to show continuing
action.
The present progressive shows continuing action in the present. It combines the present
tense of the verb to be with the present participle.
I am watching you!
The past progressive shows continuing action in the past. It combines the past tense of
the verb to be with the present participle.
The future progressive shows continuing action in the future. It combines will be, which
is the future tense of the verb to be, with the present participle.
Prof. Martinez will be attending a symposium for three days.
Linking verbs do not show action. Instead, they help describe a subject by connecting it
to a , , or . Linking verbs include am, are, is, was, and were.
Helping verbs are used with main verbs to form the future, the perfect, and the
progressive tenses. They include forms of the verbs to be, such as am, are, be, been,
being, is, was, and were. They also include will and shall and forms of the verbs to have
and to do.
Sometimes leaving out needed helping verbs can cause a sentence fragment, that is, a
sentence that is not complete, or can create a subject/verb agreement error.
Modals are helping verbs. Unlike most helping verbs, however, they cannot act as main
verbs. They are used before main verbs to create special meanings.
What is Mood?
Verbs come in various tenses. They also come in four : indicative, imperative,
subjunctive, and conditional. A verb’s mood helps show the writer’s intention or
purpose.
The imperative mood gets its name from “imperial,” an adjective describing empires. It
is natural that the imperative be used to give commands. However, it is also used to
make requests and give directions.
Demand: The police demanded that the thief drop [not drops] the gun.
Contrary to If Sam were [not was] patient, he would master the computer
fact: easily.
NOTE: In the subjunctive mood, the past tense is expressed with the helping verb
had.
If she had gone [not went], she would have enjoyed herself.
The conditional and the indicative forms are the same. The problem comes in
distinguishing the conditional from the subjunctive.
The conditional says he will lose weight, but only if he exercises. The subjunctive says
that he is not exercising and that he is not losing weight. In many cases, the second
clause of a conditional sentence contains will; the second clause in a subjunctive
sentence contains would.
A gerund is an –ing noun formed from a verb. A gerund names an activity and is used
the same way any other noun is.
An infinitive is the basic form of a verb preceded by to. Infinitives can be nouns,
adjectives, or adverbs.
Some verbs can be used with both and with no change in meaning:
However, other verbs mean one thing when used with a gerund and another when used
with an infinitive:
Verbs have tenses and moods. They also have voices. The voice is the form a verb
takes to indicate whether the subject of the sentence does an action or is acted upon.
A sentence in the active voice uses a subject, person, place, or thing that does an
action. A sentence in the passive voice uses a subject that is acted upon.
1. Since the passive requires more words than the active voice requires, the former
can make a sentence wordy.
Problem: Going down in the elevator, the verdict was discussed by the lawyers.
Correct: Going down in the elevator, the lawyers discussed the verdict.
NOTE: In the first example, the modifier (adjective) going down in the elevator
seems to refer to the verdict. That, of course, would make the sentence
illogical.
WHEN TO USE THE PASSIVE VOICE: TWO EXCEPTIONS
1. Using the passive voice can help you emphasize the action over the doer of an
action.
The sentence above places more emphasis on Ann’s election than does the following
version:
2. Using the passive voice is also appropriate when you don’t know who did an
action.
Doors and windows had been left open; books, clothing, and small items
of furniture had been scattered across the room; and curtains, sheets,
and blankets had been torn to shreds.
AVOID ILLOGICAL VOICE SHIFTS
Verbs take various tenses. They also come in active voice or passive voice. A verb in
the active voice takes a subject – person, place, or thing – that does an action. A verb in
the passive voice takes a subject that is acted upon.
The first example begins in the passive voice and then shifts to the active. In the second
example, both verbs are in the active voice.
1. Choose the words that would correctly complete the sentence. Click on the right
choice. As a child, Susan did not like basketball, but …
a. she liked it now.
b. she likes it now.
c. she will like it now.
d. she had liked it now.
Answer: b. she likes it now.
Answer: a. Many people decide to buy digital cameras even though their film cameras
work perfectly.
Answer: a. learned/wrote
Word Choice
Sexist language can occur when he or she is used exclusively to refer to an indefinite
pronoun such as anyone, everybody, someone and nobody. It also occurs when a sex-
specific noun is used to name a group with both male and female members. For
example, calling mail carriers mailmen implies that only men deliver mail.
Indefinite pronouns, such as anybody, each, neither, and someone, can be general in
meaning and not refer to specific persons, places, or things. They are singular.
Unfortunately, writers sometimes use masculine pronouns – he, his, and him – to refer
to indefinite pronouns. Using only feminine pronouns to refer to indefinite pronouns is
less frequent, but it too is sexist.
1. Use both masculine and feminine forms or remove the pronoun of reference.
NOTE: To drop the pronoun, you might have to rewrite the sentence.
CAUTION: Make sure that the pronoun agrees in number with its antecedent – the
word it refers to. Use singular pronouns with singular antecedents; use
plural pronouns with plural antecedents.
Generic nouns do not refer to a specific sex. Most nouns in English are generic.
Exceptions include such words as mother and father. You can use the methods you just
learned to avoid sexist language when using pronouns that refer to generic nouns,
nouns that are neither male nor female.
Sexist: A student must show his identification card at the library.
Revised: A student must show his or her identification card at the library.
Revised: A student must show an identification card at the library.
Revised: Students must show their identification cards at the library.
Sexism also becomes a problem when you use female pronouns to refer to members of
a group that contains both men and women.
CAUTION: When correcting sexist language, make sure that pronouns agree with
their antecedents.
NOTE: Another way to avoid sexism is to replace sex – specific terms with sex –
neutral terms when appropriate. For example, you might easily substitute
firefights for firemen.
While it is important to edit for redundancy and repetition, it is also important to make
sure you have included all the words needed to make your writing clear, logical, and
complete.
Many verb forms contain more than one word. Sometimes you will have to add a
helping word or a participle (a short word following a verb) to make the tense or
meaning of your verb clear.
Incomplete: Soon after I eaten dinner, I began to throw bits of spoiled meat.
Complete: Soon after I had eaten dinner, I began to throw up bits of spoiled
meat.
Sometimes including that is necessary, especially when you rephrase what others have
said.
Not: The psychologist told the audience children need both love and discipline.
But: The psychologist told the audience that children need both love and
discipline.
The first sentence is illogical; it compares unlike things – mountains and Colorado. The
second is logical; it compares like things – mountains and mountains (those of
Colorado).
2. When you compare people, places, or things, show that they belong to the group
to which they are being compared. To do so, include words such as other or else.
Tone is the style in which you express yourself. Your tone may vary depending upon
purpose and audience. For example, if you are writing a letter to a friend, you might use
an informal tone and include slang, jargon, colloquialisms, and contractions. If you are
writing a college essay, on the other hand, you will want to use a formal tone.
To maintain a formal tone, avoid slang, jargon, and colloquialisms. Also, choose
language carefully and include only idiomatic expressions.
AVOID SLANG
Slang is language that has a private and often short – lived meaning. Slang can be very
powerful, but it is often inexact and is usually understood by only a select group.
For example, teenagers often use words and their parents have never heard of and that
are not found in contemporary newspapers, textbooks, and the like.
Slang: When the dude split, he left the chick with a kid and no bread.
Formal: When the man left, he abandoned the woman with a child and no money.
Jargon is language used by experts in a particular field. It includes technical words, new
compounds, and familiar words used in a unique way. Jargon is appropriate as long as
your readers are familiar with the field from which it comes. But jargon can make your
writing complicated and unclear to those who are unfamiliar with such language.
Jargon: After booting up the computer and activating the printer, Amie
made hard copies of his business correspondence.
Familiar: After turning on the computer and the printer, Amie printed his
business letters.
AVOIDING COLLOQUIALISMS
Colloquial expressions, while not always incorrect, are informal and more appropriate in
spoke conversation among friends than in formal writing.
An idiom is an expression whose meaning often has little to do with the individual
meanings of the words it contains. An idiom must be understood as a unit, and its
meaning can be learned only through experience.
Say you wrote, “I won’t put up with his rudeness.” You mean that you won’t tolerate his
rudeness. But this meaning cannot be arrived at by translating each of the three words
in the idiom putupwith. You can use idioms in formal writing, but you must use them
correctly.
NOT BUT
afraid on afraid of
agree to (an opinion) agree with (an opinion)
angry on angry at (a situation)
angry with (a person)
arrive to (a place) arrive at/in (a place)
at peace in (oneself) at peace with (oneself)
comply to comply with
conform on (a rule) conform to (a rule)
contend against contend with
content against content with
depend in depend on
die with (a disease) die of/from (a disease)
different than different from
equal with equal to
frightened of frightened by
get in (a car) get on (a car)
get in (a plane, bus, train)
get on (a plane, bus, train)
impatient at (a person) impatient with (a person)
inferior than inferior to
listen on/at listen to
live in (a street) live on (a street)
live in (an address) live at (an address)
live at (a city) live in (a city)
look to (a picture) look at (a picture)
married with (someone) married to (someone)
park on (a driveway) park in (a driveway)
park in (the street) park on (the street)
partake in partake of
participate on participate in
prior than prior to
report in report on
superior than superior to
tired with tired of
wait for (a customer) wait on (a customer)
wait on (a letter) wait for (a letter)
AVOID CLICHÉS
A cliché is an expression that has been overused. As a result, it sounds stale and dull.
In fact, as soon as you begin to hear or read a cliché, you can predict how it will end.
Read the following sentences and try to figure out how the cliché in them will end:
A cliché is an expression that has been overused. As a result, it sounds slate and dull.
In fact, as soon as
Watch for cliché as you rewrite the drafts of your papers. Make one last check for cliché
as you edit your final draft. Trust your instincts to come up with alternatives that are
clearer, more appealing, less wordy, and often more specific than cliché are:
A LIST OF Cliché
Sometimes writers use words whose meaning they don’t fully understand. This practice
can lead to sentences that are incorrect, unclear, or both. To make sure that the word
you are using means what you think it does, check its meaning in the dictionary.
accept The community college will accept any applicant who has a high
school diploma.
except My nephew likes all vegetables except broccoli.
are Before you leave this evening, check whether our hours are posted
hour on next week's schedule.
our
choose If you choose to study electronics, you must take several math
courses. [present tense]
chose Mary Beth chose to spend last weekend at the ocean. [past tense]
complement His flowered tie does not complement his checkered jacket.
compliment He complimented us on our performance.
desert Few animals can survive in the desert as well as the camel can.
dessert You can have ice cream for dessert.
than Jodi and Bill arrived earlier than the other ticket buyers.
then Read the instructions; then assemble the bicycle.
1. Choose the word or phrases that uses correct standard English to complete the
following sentence.
The child who had ______ was soon revived.
a. passed out
b. passed over
c. passed on.