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FADE IN
SUSAN
Sales have been a little weak,
these last couple of months, so
I've decided to perk things up
a little by holding a sales
contest. First prize is a
$1,000.00 bonus. Second prize
is a set of steak knives.
Third prize is you're fired!
MOMENTS LATER...
The pace is fast, the mood is tense. We see JACK and BILL
showing the effects of prolonged tension. We see sales board
with telemarketer's names. Doug is in the lead, Bill is in
second place, and Jack is third. Doug is composed.
JACK
Hey Bill, look at that son of
a bitch.
(Jack glances at Doug)
He's so calm. I'll bet he's
just shipping the product.
How else could he sell that
much?
BILL
(glancing at Jack)
Dont' worry Jack, if he's
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BILL (cont.)
(glancing at Doug)
Hey Doug, don't worry about the
old man. He's worried that he's
going to be stuck on welfare.
What a loser. You and me, we're
the survivors. But don't count
your chickens before they hatch.
it ain't over 'till it's over.
DOUG
(glancing at Bill)
you're absolutely right Bill.
SUSAN
Before we get started, I just
want to say how much I appreciate
all the hard work you've all put
in. Here's the moment you've all
been waiting for. Congratulations
Bill, you're our first prize
winner. You'll be getting your
bonus check in the next couple
of weeks.
SUSAN
Jack, you're our second prize
winner. And as I promised,
here are your steak knives,
and a coupon for dinner for two
at the White Horse Inn. Thanks
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guys.
SUSAN
Doug, I need to speak with you.
SUSAN (cont.)
I'm sorry Doug. Business has
been a little slow, and you're
not performing up to our
standards. So, I'm going to
have to let you go.
DOUG
What happened? I was in the
lead. I was way ahead of those
guys, and I've been your top
salesman for months.
SUSAN
You know that big sale you made
to that old couple, that put you
in the lead? Those people don't
have any money, they're crazy.
they ust like to talk to
salespeople.
RAOUL
This has to be one of the best
burgers I've ever eaten.
DOUG
Thanks. I used to be a short
order cook when I was younger.
RAOUL
Well you sure make a good
burger. Here, keep the change.
DOUG
Thanks a lot. Come again.
RAOUL
Hey Doug, how're you doing?
This is my wife FATIMA.
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FATIMA
Hi, how are you?
DOUG
Good, nice to meet you.
RAOUL
And, my daughter ANGELA.
ANGELA
Hi.
DOUG
Hi, Angela.
RAOUL
My son MICHAELANGELO.
MICHAELANGELO
Just call me Mike.
RAOUL
And my youngest, MARIA.
DOUG
Nice to meet you all. Thanks
for comming.
RAOUL
You made such a good burger, I
decided to bring the whole
family.
DOUG
Thanks very much. et me take
your order.
Hamburger shop is full. Raoul and his family are among the
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DOUG
Hi, Sam.
SAM
Morning Doug. I got everything
you ordered. 250 lbs ground
meat, 1 carton napkins, 2 cartons
take out containers, and 1 carton
cutlery.
DOUG
Great. Boy I was sure lucky
to run into you. I would
never have been able to make
ends meet around here without
you. Smart and final wants
almost 50% more.
SAM
Glad to be able to help out
someone from the old meighborhood.
I hear your business has been
doing prettywell. I tried to
come in here for lunch once
and I couldn't find a seat.
DOUG
Yes, I've been lucky. I sure
hope this trend continues.
SAM
I'm sure it will. I think
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DOUG
Thank's. So I'll see you next
saturday?
SAM
O.K., see ya round.
Sam loads hand truck into rear of delivery truck, closes rear
gate of truck, climbs in and drives away.
It's late afternoon and some of the people from the lunch crowd
are still eating, but this crowd is thin. Susan walks in,
unaware that Doug, her former employee, is the chef. Susan sits
down in the center of the otherwise unoccupied counter. Doug is
flipping a burger, his back turned to her. He didn't see her
come in.
SUSAN
Can I get some service?
DOUG
(his back still
turned to her)
I'll be right with you ma'm.
DOUG
Yes ma'm, how can I help you?
SUSAN
Yes I'd like to get a double
cheeseburger, well done, with
fries and a cola.
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DOUG
That's a double cheeseburger
with fries and a cola?
SUSAN
Yes!
DOUG
(reluctantly)
Comming right up ma'm.
SUSAN
(sarcastically)
Wonderful! It loks like you've
done really well for yourself.
DOUG
(sincerely)
It sure beats the last job I
had. So how's business.
SUSAN
Slow. We had to let Jack and
Bill go. I've taken over their
accounts. I'm doing the whole
thing myself now.
DOUG
You don't say.
SUSAN
Oh, and by the way, the people
who gave you that big order
gave Bill the same order and
we didn't catch it until weeks
later. His adjusted figures
were lower than yours.
DOUG
I'll bet he was dissappointed
not to get the bonus.
SUSAN
He sure was. That's one of
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DOUG
(slamming down the
plate)
Here's your food!
SUSAN
By the way Doug, you were our
best salesperson, and I will
have to hire at least one person
to be my assistant. You can
have your old job back, if you
want it.
DOUG
Thank's, but I think I'll try
this for a while.
SUSAN
Suit yourself. Thanks for lunch.
DOUG
(satisfied he has
the last word)
Thank's, come again.
DOUG
Hi, sam.
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SAM
Morning Doug. You must really
be doing well here. 350lbs
groung meat, 2 cartons napkins,
4 cartons takeout containers,
and 2 cartons knives and forks,
just like you ordered.
DOUG
Yeah, Sam. Looks like things
may turn around yet!
SAM
Glad to hear it! Keep up the
good work!
DOUG
O.K., Sam! Same next week
unless I call you, O.K.?
SAM
O.K., Doug. See ya round.
Sam loads hand truck into rear of delivery truck, closes rear
gate of truck and drives away.
Traffic is stalled.
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10:30 comes, and Sam still doesn't show up. Doug walks into the
kitchen to turn on the grill. He leaves the closed sign in the
window and decides to call Sam's home. Doug picks up the phone
in the office and calls Sam's home. He just gets the answering
machine.
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DOUG
Hey Sam! This is Doug. I'm
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Doug hangs up, redials, and decides to let the phone RING this
time. It keeps RINGING. After about 15 - 20 RINGS an old woman
answers. This is SAM'S WIDOW. She is a little slow, and not
much help!
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UPSTAIRS BATHROOM
SAM'S WIDOW
(very screechy)
Hello.
INTERCUT
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DOUG
Hello ma'm?
SAM'S WIDOW
Yes Hello?
DOUG
I'm trying to reach Sam. Is
he there?
SAM'S WIDOW
You're trying to reach who?
Can you speak up? I'm a little
hard of hearing, you know.
DOUG
(louder)
I'm trying to reach Sam. Is he
there?
SAM'S WIDOW
I said I was hard of hearing,
not deaf! You don't have to
shout.
DOUG
(not as loud)
O.K. ma'm. I'm trying to
reach Sam. Is he there?
SAM'S WIDOW
Oh, Sam. Sam passed away last
week honey. Didn't you know?
DOUG
No, ma'm.
SAM'S WIDOW
What did you say your name was?
DOUG
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Doug.
SAM'S WIDOW
Did you say Doug?
DOUG
Yes, ma'm.
SAM'S WIDOW
Oh, Doug. You left a message.
DOUG
Yes, ma'm.
SAM'S WIDOW
I was going to call you back,
but I haven't gotten a chance.
Everybody's calling now you
know.
DOUG
Yes ma'm.
SAM'S WIDOW
Nice talking to you, young man.
DOUG
Yes, ma'm. Thank you.
DOUG'S WIDOW
You're welcome young man.
Sam's widow hangs up. Doug with receiver still in his hand,
slowly hangs up. He is dumbfounded. His friend is dead, and he
doesn't know where he's going to get his supplies. Doug is
going to have to pay more for supplies, and this is going to
break him unless he raises prices. But, many of his customers
come to him in part because he charges less. If he raises
prices, he may lose his clientele.
Doug closes the shop for the day. He puts the closed sign in
the window, turns off the grill and fryer, and starts cleaning
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up. He finally makes his way back into his office and picks up
the yellow pages. He has to find a new supplier, that will
deliver before opening on sunday morning. He is out of ground
meat and most of his supplies. We see the supplier he finds,
with a full page ad. He picks up the phone to call (Smart and
Final Iris).
It is lunch and the shop has just started to fill. This is the
first day that the menus, with the new higher prices, are out.
Doug's friend Raoul is there durring lunch.
RAOUL
(examining menu)
Hey Doug, I see you've raised
prices. Is all this success
going to your head?
DOUG
You know better than that man.
I had to change suppliers, and
they charge a lot more. I have
to raise prices or I'm going to
lose the place.
RAOUL
I see. Hey, I'm your friend
man. I don't mind paying a
little extra, but alot of these
people acn't afford it. I think
you're going to lose a lot of
customers.
DOUG
Yeah, you're probably right. I
can see it already. People are
starting to order fries and a
coke, when they were getting
burgers also. I'm going to have
to keep prices high, unless I can
find another supplier, but I've
already called around. So far
I haven't had any luck.
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RAOUL
Hey man, tough break. So give
me the usual.
IRATE CUSTOMER
Hey buddy, do you call this
burger cooked? I told you to
make it medium rare. This meat
isn't cooked at all. Fix this!
And, I want a new bun and fries
too. I don't want the same soggy
bun or cold fries.
DOUG
I'm sorry sir, I'll fix it right
away.
Doug takes the plate with burger and fries and opens the
sandwich and places the burger back on the grill.
IRATE CUSTOMER
Don't put that same old stinking
patty back on the grill and
reheat it. I want a fresh burger.
I want a whole fresh meal. I'm
paying good money for this. I
want you to respect me!
DOUG
Don't worry sir, I'll fix it.
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IRATE CUSTOMER
You better
(to his friends)
Fuckin loser. This worthless
old man can't even get a simple
order right. And, he's gonna
treat me like a punk by reheating
that undercooked patty. He's
lucky I come in here at all.
DOUG
I want you, and that pack of
juvenile delinquints you came
in here with, to get the fuck
out of my store right now.
IRATE CUSTOMER
O.K. man, if that's the way
you want to be, I won't come
back. And none of my friends
will come back either.
DOUG
Just get out. And take that
superior attitude of yours
with you.
Irate customer and his friends leave. Doug feels better, but an
already bad situation has become worse. He knows, in the back
of his mind, that he's lost most of his repeat business and will
probably not be able to make the rent on time.
It's lunch and there are only three diners in the shop at this
time. The shop is usually full this time of day. Doug is
desparate. He's already two weeks late on his rent, and he has
to pay more for hi s supplies, since he's buying less.
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CARL
Hi Doug, Business a little slow?
DOUG
Yes it sure has been. I'm sorry
about the rent. With the downturn
in business, the last couple of
weeks, I've only been able to pay
for the supplies. I'm sure this
is only temporary though.
CARL
Wel it does look like you have
a problem here. You're already
two weeks late. Are you sure you
can't pay me now?
DOUG
I can give you half now, but it's
going to take me at least another
two weeks to get the rest.
CARL
I'm dissapointed in you Doug. When
I leased you the diner you assured
me that the rent would be your first
priority, and I trusted you. Now
` you're doing just what you told me
you wouldn't do. I really thought
you were different.
DOUG
I'm doing the best I can. I'm
having trouble with suppliers.
The man I usually buy from, passed
away last month. I haven't been
able to make ends meet since.
I need just a little more time
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CARL
I don't know what I'm going to
do about you Doug. I'd like to
believe you, but it seems to me
you have a real problem here.
(cont.)
CARL (cont.)
I'll give you two weeks, but
that will put you a month behind.
When are you going to get caught
up?
DOUG
Thank you sir. I'll have the
money for you in two weeks, and
I'll get caught up just as soon
as I can.
CARL
I hope so Doug.
DOUG
Yes sir, thank you.
LAURA (over)
(on intercom)
Carl?
CARL
Yes, Laura?
LAURA (over)
(on intercom)
The courier has just brought
the checks. CanI bring them
in for you to sign?
CARL
Yes, come in.
Laura walks into Carl's office and brings three large envelopes
with payroll checks, for him to sign. The first envelope is
labled Commercial Realty, Inc. The second envlope is labeled
Commercial Landscaping. The third evvelope is labeled; "Humane
isposal Industries, Inc." Carl opens the first envelope and
reviews payroll.
DOUG
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(to Carl)
Thanks for the extra time. I've
got the money for you now. Just
as soon as I get finished with this
order I'll write you a check.
CARL
(very reassuring)
It's O.K., take it easy. You're
having a pretty tough time right
now aren't you?
DOUG
Sure, things are a little rough
right now. But I've got the
money now. I can pay you.
CARL
I said, take it easy. Don't
worry about it. You seem like
an honest guy. Just hang onto
your money for now. I might
even be willing to help you.
If you'll hear me out.
DOUG
Sure, but I don't understand.
CARL
I've seen how packed it was in
here once. And I believe you
might even make a success of
place. I think all you need
is an even break.
DOUG
Thanks, but I don't understand
how that's going to happen...
CARL
Doug, I thought you were going
to hear me out?
DOUG
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Sorry.
CARL
I believe in you Doug. And I
might even be willing to waive
the rent entirely, in return for
a share of the profits. Are you
interested?
DOUG
Yeah! Of course I'm interested,
but look at this place; there's
not a soul in here. Since I've
raised prices, I can't get any
regular customers.
CARL
I've got a friend in the restaurant
supply business, who might be
able to help you. His name is
JIM. He works with businesses
like yours, and his prices are
very competitive. Let me give
you his card.
Carl removes Jim's card from his wallet, and extends is hand to
give the cad to Doug.
DOUG
(taking card)
Gee, thanks. I don't know what
to say.
CARL
I don't know what he's going to
charge you, but it should be
reasonable enough for you to get
your old customers back.
CARL (cont.)
(Carl extends his hand
seeing that Doug has
already agreed)
So, do we have a deal?
DOUG
(taking Carl's hand)
Thanks, you bet!
CARL
Don't worry about it. Just
take the money and get this
place and yourself cleaned
up. I'll bring the papers
over tommorrow.
Carl leaves. The audience still doesn't know about the meat
source, although some have guessed it.
DOUG
Hi Carl.
CARL
Doug, now this is more like it!
I might have been right to take
a chance on. This might work
after all. If this keeps up,
I'll make my money back in no
time.
DOUG
I sure hope so. I'm just happy
to get people back in here again.
CARL
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CARL
(turning to leave)
See you later Doug.
DOUG
Right! See you later Carl.
WAYNE
(to Doug)
Hi, I'd like a "to go order."
Can I look at a menu.
DOUG
(taking another order)
I'll be right with you sir.
Menus are by the register.
WAYNE
(moving to pick up
a menu)
O.K., thanks.
Wayne reads the menu, while Doug takes the next two orders.
Doug finally gets to Wayne.
DOUG
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WAYNE
Yeah. I'll have a double cheese
burger, with pickles, onion, and
no lettuce.
DOUG
O.K., you said you wanted it to
go?
WAYNE
Yes, that's right.
DOUG
(finally recognizing
him)
Hey, aren't you that guy from
the tommorrow show?
WAYNE
No, that's not me, that's my
evil twin. Hi, I'm Wayne
Brazil.
DOUG
Nice to meet you sir.
WAYNE
Yes I know. The pleasures all
yours.
WAYNE (cont)
Just kidding. But if you could
hurry up with that sandwich I'd
appreciate it. I don't want to
be late for the taping.
DOUG
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(hesitantly)
Sure, comming right up.
WAYNE
I didn't realize you were right
down the block. Normally, I have
my assistant get lunch for me,
but she called in sick today and
I have to get out on my own once
in a while anyway. Can I take
some of these menus with me to
distribute aroud the office?
DOUG
(recognizing the
opportunity)
Yeah, Go right ahead.
WAYNE
(dryly)
Thank you. It looks like you
could use a little more business
in here.
DOUG
Yeah, sure I can.
WAYNE
Do you think you can handle
some large volume take out?
DOUG
How large are we talking about?
WAYNE
We've got 300 people working
at the studio, not to mention
production crews and extras.
DOUG
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WAYNE
Relax, you're not going to get
the whole studio, just like that;
but, sometimes we have to feed
large groups of people, and some
of us don't liketo eat off the
catering trucks.
DOUG
Oh, sure, I can handle about 50
to 75 take out lunches, but I'd
need about an hour lead time, if
you call in.
WAYNE
You should probably get a fax
machine. That's how we usually
order.
DOUG
O.K., I cando that.
WAYNE
(dryly)
Great.
(looking at menu)
The selection looks good and
the price is right, but you
need a hook.
DOUG
What do you mean?
WAYNE
A gimmick, an angle, something
to get people's attention, so
they remember you. Something
like Lion Burger," makes you
want to roar," or Gorilla Burger,
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DOUG
(considers this)
Oh, I see.
WAYNE
Oh, I've got it! MEL, my
executive producer, hates
children and animals. How
about something like "Kitty
Dog," or "Baby Seal Burger."
Mel will get a kick out of it.
DOUG
(floored, but going
along with it)
Oh, sure.
WAYNE
Oh, good. You just might end
up with more business than you
can handle. I can't wait to see
the look on Mel's face. It'll
kill him.
Wayne
(turning to leave)
See ya!
CARL
Hey, this place looks great.
And, look at all the customers.
How did you do it?
DOUG
I started getting some studio
business, fom up the street.
It sure has helped.
CARL
Great! New furniture, new
silverware, new paint... Those
sure are some interesting murals
you have there.
DOUG
Hey Carl!
Hey Carl!
Carl
What?
DOUG
Hey man, whats the matter?!
Are you O.K.?
CARL
Oh, yeah sure.
DOUG
Hey Carl, relax man! I hope
you're not too offended. It's
just gag. Oe of the studio guys
suggested it, to get the lunch
crowd from the studio. Business
has really picked up in here.
DOUG
Hey Carl, snap out of it! It's
just a gag O.K.?! No harm done
right?!
CARL
(waking up suddenly)
Yeah, right.
DOUG
(extending his hand
holding check)
Oh, by the way man, here's
your check.
Carl takes it and examines it. The color returns to his face.
MONTAGE:
END MONTAGE
ROB
(speaking into mic)
I'll take two kitty dogs, two
large fries and a cola.
MIKE
(speaking into mic)
Yeah! And I'll have a baby
seal burger, with extra blubber
sauce and a chocolate shake.
WOLFGANG
(to movers)
Hey, be careful with that!
The restaurant is not open, but Doug and Carl have finished
moving in. They have arrived! There is a bar inside. Carl is
behind it pouring Doug and himself a drink. We see a tlevision
set in the corner of the bar, suspended from the ceiling. It is
on. They are watching restaurant critic KATIE CUSTER on her
show, "The Best of Southern California." Katie is wrapping up
the current segment and announcing future segments.
KATIE
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(on videotaped
segment)
Overall our dining experience
was very pleasant.
(cont.)
KATIE (cont.)
The restaurant
is cozy and intimate. The service
was great. The menu could have used
a few more seafood dishes, but the
fare was delicious. We give Pete's
Bistro four stars, out of a possible
five.
DOUG
Good morning sir. we're all
ready fo you. Would you like
to begin with the food prep
area, or the dinning room first?
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MAX
I think I'll start with the
dinning room.
(sarcastically)
If that's all right with you.
DOUG
(confidently)
Of course.
Max places his breifcase on one of the tables, opens it, and
removes a metal clipboard, and begins his inspection. He
inspects the floor, walls, under and above the tables. He seems
satisfied with the dinning room, and makes notes on the
clipboard.
MAX
I'm done here. Let's move to
the food prep area.
DOUG
Right this way sir.
Doug leads Max to the food prep area and introduces him to Carl.
DOUG (cont)
(to Max)
This is Carl, my partner. He'll
help you in here.
CARL
(to Max, extending
his hand)
Pleased to meet you.
MAX
(not returning the
gesture)
Let's get started, shall we?
MAX
I'm done here. Now let's
check dry stores, and walk-in.
Carl leads Max to dry stores. Max gestures toward boxes stacked
in corner.
MAX
Can you move these boxes? I
want to see behind them.
CARL
Certainly.
MAX
(cooly)
Thank you.
Max checks the wall and floor behind the boxes, and makes notes.
He seems satisfied.
MAX
O.K., now let's check the
walk-in.
MAX
(to Doug)
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Max then walks past Doug and replaces his clipboard into his
briefcase and leaves without ceremony.
KEVIN
(to diner sitting
at outside of table)
Let me know if you need anything
else sir.
DINER 1
Yes, thank you.
KEVIN
Good evening sir.
WOLFGANG
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KEVIN
Coming right up sir.
KEVIN
Here you are sir.
(hands menu to Wolfgang)
The specials tonight are...
WOLFGANG
So, you look like you're doing
pretty well here. The place
doesn't look too bad.
KEVIN
No, it's a good job, essentially
the same clientele. Hey Wolfgang,
I'm sorry about going to work for
the competition, but these are my
customers, they know me. Tough
break with the frozen dinner line.
Who could have known? So how are
things going for you?
WOLFGANG
Could be better, but you could
help.
KEVIN
Sure Wolfgang, anything...
WOLFGANG
I want you to help me get the
restaurant back...
KEVIN
Hey Wolfgang, you know I can't
do that.
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WOLFGANG
Can't or won't?
KEVIN
I know I owe you, but what you're
asking is unethical. Besides
I like these guys. Look Wolfgang,
if you need some help, just let
me know.
WOLFGANG
Are you still trying to be an
actor Kevin?
KEVIN
You know I am Wolfgang. What's
you're point?
WOLFGANG
I've got connections. I could
make it easy for you.
KEVIN
I don't even want to hear about
it. Are you going to have
something to eat, or not?
WOLFGANG
Yes, I'll have a ceasar salad
and a glass of white zinfandel.
KEVIN
Thank you, Ill be right back with
you're wine sir.
(Kevin turns and
leaves abruptly)
WOLFGANG
Just let me know if you change
your mind, Kevin.
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ACT II
Kevin is called.
CASTING AGENT
Which part are you reading for
me?
KEVIN
{made up name, part is for a
movie. "HERO ON MARS," etc.}
CASTING AGENT
Slate your name.
(raises hand and
lowers it pointing
index finger at Kevin)
And, begin.
KEVIN
(monolouge from "HERO ON MARS"}
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CASTING AGENT
(interrupting Kevin)
Thank you.
KEVIN
Can I start again?
CASTING AGENT
No.
(with emphasis)
Thank you.
We see Kevin right away, ready for his reading. He looks great.
He's well groomed, fit, enthusiastic, he looks like a winner.
We see intense confidence in his eyes.
CASTING AGENT
(sarcastically)
So what part are we doing today
Mr. Kevin
(he sucks his teeth)
KEVIN
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CASTING AGENT
Begin.
KEVIN
{monolouge from, "HERO ON
HORSEBACK."}
CASTING AGENT
(interrupting Kevin)
Thank you.
(giving Kevin a
dissapproving look)
KEVIN
What's wrong.
CASTING AGENT
You're reading was fine. We're
just looking for more of a
BRAD PITT/DANNY DEVITO type.
Kevin is stunned!
We see the casting agent behind his desk. There are papers
stacked high on both ends of the desk. He is a balding 58 year
old white male, with what hair he has left slicked back into a
duck-tail. He has a large thick mustache, glasses, and a
cigarette dangling from his mouth. He is wearing a "Memeber's
Only" windbreaker and a fake Rolex. He looks sleazy.
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The casting agent greets him warmly and shakes his hand. He has
a screechy voice. He is cordial and seems to be doing his job,
but his appearance makes us feel that he must be incompetent.
Kevin's attitude toward him mirrors our prejudice.
CASTING AGENT
(shaking Kevin's hand)
I've been looking over your
resume. You've done some pretty
good work. You're background
looks pretty strong.
KEVIN
(sarcastically)
Thank you.
CASTING AGENT
(oblivious to Kevin's
sarcasm)
` Let's hear what you've got.
KEVIN
{monolouge from, Everyday Hero}
CASTING AGENT
What did you say you're name
` was kid?
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Kevin senses that he has won the audition, when he was really
trying to sabotage it. He looks stunned.
KEVIN
(sheepishly)
Kevin.
CASTING AGENT
You're look is perfect. You're
just what we're looking for.
And you're reading, it was so
full of angst and sarcasm, it
destroys the cliche'. I can't
promise anything, but I think
you've got it kid.
KEVIN
Thank you.
CASTING AGENT
Excuse me while I get that.
The casting agent picks up the phone. It's STAN the producer.
CASTING AGENT
Chin up kid. I like you. Keep
in touch. You never know when
we might have something. Good
luck, huh?
KEVIN
Thank you.
Kevin removes his wallet from his left hip pocket, and finds the
number on a business card. He removes .35 cents from his right
front pocket, along with a pen, keys, and a ball of lint. He
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WOLFGANG (OS)
(not expecting a
call in the middle
of the day.)
Hello?
KEVIN
Hey Wolfgang, this is Kevin.
WOLFGANG
Hello Kevin, what can I do for
you?
KEVIN
The last time we spoke you asked
for my help.
WOLFGANG
Yes, I remember.
KEVIN
Do you still want me to help you?
WOLFGANG
Yes, yes I do.
PREP COOK
Manana, Senor Kevin.
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KEVIN
Good night.
(Kevin waves)
Prep cook exits through front door. We hear the car door of the
Prep Cook's Wife SLAM, and the car drive away. (OS) She has
been waiting for him outside. Kevin finishes the ticket he's
working on, then waits several seconds to make sure the Prep
Cook doesn't return. He walks back into the food prep area, and
enters the walk-in with a rag and a can of acetone visible. He
opens the can and soaks the rag with acetone.
He opens the door of the walk-in and peeks out, to make sure
Doug isn't waiting outside, then exits the walk-in, replaces the
can of acetone under the deep-sink, washes his hands, then walks
back into the dinning room. He picks up his tickets, binds the
stack with a rubber band, and brings them to Doug's office. He
hands his tickets to Doug, who turns around to face Kevin, just
barely enough to take the packet of tickets.
KEVIN
I'll see you tommorrow Doug.
DOUG
Ok Kevin, see yah.
Kevin leaves the office, re-enters the dinning room, and exits
through the front door.
The employees are preparing for the lunch crowd. Max, the
health department official, enters the dinning room. Max tells
BUS BOY to get Doug.
MAX
(to bus boy)
I need to see Doug.
BUS BOY
(hollers to backgroud)
Hey, Senor Doug, someone here
to see you.
DOUG (OS)
I'll be right there.
Doug enters the dinning room and sees Max. Doug recognizes Max
as the health department official, who inspected the restaurant
before it opened. Doug reacts with surprise.
DOUG
(to Max)
Good morning. Is everything
alright?
MAX
Surprise inspection. I need
to see your walk-in.
DOUG
Sure, right this way.
Doug leads Max to the walk-in. Max enters the walk-in first
followed by Doug. Max immediately takes the boxes of meat off
the shelves, stacks the on the floor, and checks the dates on
the boxes. We see the dates on the boxes, and they are current.
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MAX
(looking back at
Doug)
Everything seems to be in order.
You can put this away now.
Max steps over the boxes and leaves through the fornt door, in
the dinning room. Doug returns to his office, sits down, picks
up a pencil with his right hand, taps the pencil eraser end down
on the desk repeatedly, and looks up at the wall. On the wall
is a metal time card rack, with all the employee's names on
their respective slots.
KATIE
(to m'aitred)
I'm Katie Custer, can you
let Doug know I'm here?
M'AITRE'D
Yes of course m'am.
DOUG
Hi Katie, thanks for coming.
I prepared the table you requested.
KATIE
Wonderful.
DOUG
Right this way m'am.
(Doug extends his
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arm)
KATIE
Thank you.
(Katie takes Doug's
arm)
Doug leads Katie to a large setee, that seats about six adults.
DOUG
Here it is. You can start
getting set up. If you need
anything let me know.
KATIE
Thank you.
DOUG
(turns to leave)
KATIE
(to camera crew)
Let's start getting set up.
DOUG
Nice to see you again Katie.
I'm glad you could make it back.
KATIE
Actually, I was hoping you'd
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DOUG
Yes, but I'm the boss, so I think
I can take a break.
KATIE
I'm fine.
DOUG
I've got a lovely 1970's
white zinfandel in the cellar.
Would you like to share a bottle
with me?
KATIE
That would be delightful!
Katie looks at Doug with interest. Kevin walks past, and Doug
taps him on the shoulder. Kevin turns toward Doug.
DOUG
(to Kevin)
Get us a bottle of the 1970
Berlinger white zinfandel. And
get me some bread.
KATIE
So what did you do before this?
You sure came from nowhere.
DOUG
I was a telemarketer, before I
started this. They had to get
rid of somebody, and they made
a mistake of the sales figures,
so they fired me.
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KATIE
How lucky for you.
DOUG
As things turned out, yes. But
you've goty no idea how close
I came to ending up on welfare.
KATIE
Well let's celebrate your good
fortune. So where's the food
you ordered.
KEVIN
(to MS. )
Here's your wine and desert.
MS.________
(she turns to Kevin
slowly, with a
threatening look, and
dissmissing him
abruptly)
Thank you, I'll let you know
if I need anything else.
Kevin turns to leave and approaches Doug and Katie with the wine
and bread.
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DOUG
(to Kevin)
We've been wondering where
you took off to. Got your
sights set a little high, don't
you.
KEVIN
(to Doug)
Very funny.
(to Katie)
Enjoy to wine m'am.
KATIE
(to Kevin)
Why thank you.
DOUG
Poor Guy.
KATIE
Can you turn the TV on? Our
segment is about to play.
DOUG
Sure. We'll have to go to
the bar.
Doug and Katie get up. Doug grabs the bottle and Katie grabs
the glasses.
Doug and Katie are seated at a booth in the bar, which is nearly
empty. Doug has the TV remote in his hand.
KATIE
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Channel Four.
Doug clicks on the remote and surfs to the correct channel and
turns up the volume. The segment comes right on. Doug and
Katie toast glasses.
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INT. PETBURGER BEVERLY HILLS – NIGHT
MAITRE’D
Right this way sir.
MOMENTS LATER…
MAITRE’D
(to Doug)
Douglas, this gentleman is here…
MAX
(to Maitre’d,
dismissing him abruptly)
Thanks. I’ll take it from here.
(to Doug)
So nice to see you again Douglas.
(with authority)
You are CLOSED!
DOUG
(stunned)
What are you talking about?
MAX
You disgust me.
MAX
I want this place cleared out.
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DOUG
But, everyone’s still eating?
MAX
NOW!
Max storms up to the stage, that the guitarist has just vacated.
He holds his badge for the diners to see, and speaks into the
microphone.
DINER
(sarcasticly)
No, you don’t say.
MAX
(to Doug)
I want this place cleared out.
If there’s anyone here in an hour,
I’ll have you arrested.
Max leaves. On the way out, he orders Maitre’d not to seat any
more customers.
MOMENTS LATER…
DOUG
It seems there’s been a little
Misunderstanding. We’re going
To be closing a little early this
Evening. Dinner’s on us tonight.
Thanks for coming.
The diners finish eating and slowly straggle out. Carl is still
in Doug’s office cowering. Doug turns to Carl.
DOUG
A lot of help you were. Do you
Know anything about this?
CARL
(babbling incoherently)
I’m finished. We’re finished.
We’re all going to jail. What
Are we going to do?
DOUG
What have you done?!…
CARL
You know the hamburger meat we’ve
Been using? I’ve been getting it
from the pound….
DOUG
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You what?!
CARL
It's just meat. It usually gets
turned into dog food anyway.
What's the difference?
DOUG
What's the difference?!… What's
the diffenece?!… I'll tell you
what the difference is. We're
all going to jail, that's what's
the difference.
CARL
How else do you think you could
have afforded to keep that first
restaurant open? You couldn't
have made a profit any other way.
DOUG
I could kill you! What are we going
to do? All the restaurants?
CARL
(nods)
Except this one.
DOUG
We have to get rid of all the meat
immediately. Start calling everyone
now! Let's dump the stuff.
Carl hesitates.
DOUG
Let's go!!!
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DOUG
That's the last one.
CARL
I hope we were in time.
DOUG
Yeah! Me too.
Max and his team from the Health Department are finishing the
inspection. The team leader hands his report to Max, who
studies it momentarily.
MAX
(to Doug)
I don't understand it. This
place is as clean as a whistle.
Everything seems to be in order
here. In fact it's exceptional.
I'm tempted to bring My family
here. I'm sorry sir. It
appears you've been the victim of
a hoax. You're free to reopen.
I'm very sorry.
DOUG
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CARL
No we can't…
DOUG
What do you mean? Aren't we
using legitimate supplies?!
What's the problem?
CARL
The problem is we can't afford
to pay what they're charging us.
(cont.)
CARL (cont.)
We'll be broke in a matter of months.
Besides, I've been getting calls
from a number of the stores. Our
customers notice the difference.
Apparently our customers don't
like the taste of beef as well as,
as well as, what they've been getting.
DOUG
So what are we supposed to do?
Go back to the pound again. I'm
sure they have it staked out. Is
that what you're suggesting?
CARL
No. Not exactly.
Carl walks up to a gated yard, opens the gate and removes the
family pet, and puts it in the truck. Doug does likewise on the
other side of the street. They're beginning to pick up speed.
They've managed to fill the truck, on just one street. We then
see the truck delivering it's cargo to "Jim" at his wood
chipper. Everyone's back in business!
Doug and Carl are getting bolder. They're taking pets that are
tied up at the beach and offering to walk dogs, for pretty
bikini clad beach bunny's.
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Doug and Carl are really picking up the pace. While the
personal approach was fun, it simply isn't meeting their needs.
They decide to take the operation into the big leagues. They
start robbing pet shops, in the middle of the night. They rob
the dog pounds in outlying cities.
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WOLFGANG
WEINERSCHNITZEL. Weinerschnitzel.
Come on boy.
(looking around his
living room, unable to
find his dog)
Weinerschnitzel???
(Who is this other man?) (Is this Carl? Do we need Carl here,
or would it be better to have Carl minding the restaurant?)
(Could this other man be The ZOO KEEPER, or a ZOO WORKER, that
was bribed by Doug or Carl?)
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INT PETBURGER BEVERLY HILLS – BAR – NIGHT
Doug and Carl are sitting at a booth in the bar eating, watching
an episode of Katie Custer's show, showing the Petburger
Restaurants doing land-office business and opening more stores.
This is interrupted by a news-flash reporting the daring
midnight theft of Shamu the whale.
NEWS ANNOUNCER
This just in. The owners of Sea
World have just reported the theft
of one of their star performers,
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COMMERCIAL ANNOUNCER
FOR PETBURGER RESTAURANTS
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Doug sits back down at his booth in the bar to finish his meal.
Carl has left. The Maitre'd approaches Doug with Katie Custer
in tow.
MAITRE'D
DOUG
(to Katie)
Katie, what a pleasant surprise!
Please join me.
(to Maitre'd)
Thank you.
(Maitre'd leaves)
(to Katie)
What brings you here tonight?
KATIE
You've been doing so well, and I
just wanted to see you again. I
hope you don't mind?
DOUG
No, not at all. I'm glad you
came.
KATIE
I was hoping we could interview
you again. Your restaurants have
been growing tremendously, since
the last time we interviewed you.
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DOUG
Let me think about it, ok?
KATIE
Ok, but don't think too long, ok?
The show's going on hiatus for the
next couple of weeks and I'm taking
some time off. I'm going to be
staying in Santa Barbara, and I was
hoping you'd come with me.
DOUG
Katie, I'd really love too, but
things are just real crazy around
here right now.
KATIE
That's not a brush-off, is it Doug?
DOUG
Uh, no. Don't take it like that.
I think you're gorgeous, and I'm
crazy about you. I just can't
tear myself away right now.
KATIE
Ok Doug, but don't keep a girl
waiting too long.
Maitre'd seats two gentlemen next to Doug & Katie's table. One
of them is the Comic who originally suggested the Petburger name.
COMIC
(points to Doug)
Hey, you're the guy.
DOUG
No, it's my evil twin.
(Comic laughs)
COMIC
You've done very well for yourself.
I'm very happy for you. Who's
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DOUG
Oh, this is a friend of mine.
COMIC
Oh, right. I know who you are.
The restaurant critic.
(shakes her hand)
(to Doug)
You're a lucky guy. I'm sorry
I can't remember your name.
DOUG
It's Doug.
COMIC
I'm really sorry.
DOUG
Don't worry about it.
COMIC
(to Doug)
I'd like to introduce you to
someone.
(pointing to the other
person seated with him)
This is Mel. He's the Executive
VP at TANTAMOUNT Studios, where I
tape my show.
DOUG
Pleased to meet you.
(shakes his hand)
MEL
The pleasures mine.
(waves at Katie)
Nice to see you again.
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KATIE
(waves back)
Hi Mel.
MOMENTS LATER …