Can men always be better parents than women? According to many statistics, half of the worlds population is men.

It is believed that men often take important roles in society and family. However, it is not true to say that men can always do better than women in bringing up children. In this essay, there will be two points in terms of work lives and family relationship which support that opinion. First of all, in workplaces, men are often more aggressive and too ambitious. Many people think that men contribute predominantly for the society. They talk about the strong-minded characteristic of men which can lead them to certain targets in life. The situation may be worse when men focus too much on chasing their targets without considering for what they probably pay. Consequently, they may lose friends or family, thus, this is really harmful to teach children to do so. Moreover, in family, a large number of males refuse to help their family with housework such as cleaning or cooking. Obviously, it is not a good habit for children to follow because those children who easily copy from their parents in their early ages will be lazier and dependent. Some people argue that men have to work hard all day so they need to relax at home. It is not always the case in modern society when women also go to work and earn money. Therefore, a father who lacks of responsibilities in sharing housework can not be a good example for children. To be brief, men should think carefully before taking any step in their career and being more thoughtful in the family. Although, it is undeniable that men play a significant role in the society, there are still some problems they have to face and try to reform in order to be better parents. Another one There is a quote: Men make A house, women make A home and it tends to be HAVE BEEN precise throughout the history until now. This idea does not mean that men are not important in raising children but as we look over daily familial life, women are closer to children than men. When children are in danger, the first wordS they shout is : Mommy, help me. In fact, women have usually proven themselves to be superior parents as a result of those reasons. First, women obtain more familial condition than men. /Since/FROM WHEN/ they are very young, females enjoy learning about nurturing. They love to play with dollS, feed them, pretend that they are their mothers and sing them a lullaby. Later, they take care of younger brothers or sister. Girls SHOW sympathize WITH the essential role of their mothers(,) and they often consider those activities, housework AS BEING feminine DUTIES. CompareD to boys, they have so many differences. Boys like virile things such as: football, guns, and vigorous heroes in movies. And While boys dream to be as strong as Popeye the sailor man, or to conquer THE Red planet, girls just want to be doctorS to help the poor, AND TO HAVE A warm and happy family. Thus, girls have propensities in raising children. Second, girls are less aggressive, and their stamina is much better GREATER than THAT OF men. As we see, every war involveSin men. Men are JUDGED TO BE the leaders(.) 85% OF soldierS IN THE Department of DefenCe are men(.) That is meanS men are usually proveN to be aggressorS in crime and war. Moreover, the New York Times has just reported that it would be better if you raise your children with calmness, sweetness but sometimes with sternness. Women are considered as sensitive, therefore, they know how to conduct flexibly, aware when to support the children or when to teach them. Having offspring is hard, but raising them to become good citizen is much harder.

And The final reason why I think women make better parents than men is women have better communication skill. In 1992, Swan made a survey about the differences BETWEEN THE brains of girls and boys. After some tests, he finally discovered that almost ALL girls HAD A better score in oral skills. Communication skills are one of the most important skillS NEEDED to become good parents(,) because your children inherit everything from their Mom and Dad such as: behavioUr AND character Thus, verbal skillS influence children a lot. Although, There are many opponents about this issue. They said men could make better parents than women. Men are usually stern, harsh and straightforward and children need these characters to become good citizenships. Nowadays, A social issue is EMERGING; many youths are arrested because of using heroine AND sexual abusE Therefore, to protect children, parents must be stern and force children to follow their disciplinary ruleS. That is also meanS there are not any existences INSTANCES of sweetness OR calmness IN THEIR LIVES. This idea has some merit on the surface. Nevertheless, should we always follow these boring and nonsense rules? Children change their physical bodIES and their soulS everyday. Parents should listen to their children, do the best things for them, support them to stand up when they are fell off HAVE FALLEN. In short, parents must be flexible, and willing to change. Being good parents does not mean just coerce your children to follow your words. In conclusion, I advocate the idea that women make better parents than men. Women not only have many natural skills, such as: good stamina, calmness but also some appropriate condition to become good parents(,) and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: You write well H. You need to pay attention to subject/verb agreement. This was a good essay, and if you were to review the edited version closely, then I'm sure you would improve your work even more. Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that this is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies.Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Write an essay expresing your point of view. The view that women are better parents than men has shown itself to be true throughout history. This is not to say that men are not of importance in childrearing indeed, they are most necessary if children are to appreciate fully the roles of both sexes. But women have proven themselves superior parents as a result of their conditioning, their less aggressive natures and their generally better communication skills. From the time they are little girls, females learn about nurturing. First with dolls and later perhaps with younger brothers and sisters, girls are given the role of carer. Girls see their mothers in the same roles and so it is natural that they identify this as a female activity. Boys, in contrast, learn competitive roles far removed from what it means to nurture. While boys may dream of adventures, girls' conditioning means they tend to see the future in terms of raising families. Girls also appear to be less aggressive than boys. In adulthood, it is men, not women, who prove to be the aggressors in crime and in war. Obviously, in raising children, a more patient, gentle manner is preferable to a more aggressive one. Although there certainly exist gentle men and aggressive women, by and large, females are less likely to resort to violence in attempting to solve problems.

Finally, women tend to be better communicators than men. This is shown is intelligence tests, where females, on average, do better in verbal communication than males. Of course, communication is of utmost importance in rearing children, as children tend to learn from and adopt the communication styles of their parents. Thus, while it is all very well to suggest a greater role for men in raising children, let us not forget that women are generally better suited to the parenting role. Sources : various websites (IELTS WRITING TASK 2)

Are Women Better Parents Than Men? Women - by nature, they have feminine qualities for nurturing children. As such, they are found to be better parents than men. However the role of men in child-rearing cannot be undermined. Men are most necessary if children have to be fully aware of the roles of both genders. But women have proved themselves superior parents thanks to their feminine qualities, soft skills, less aggressive nature and their generally better communication skills. From an evolutionary psychological perspective, children are more important to their mothers than to their fathers, and, as a result, their loss would be more devastating to their mothers than to their fathers. It is not difficult to find abundant evidence for the fact that mothers are more dedicated to their children than fathers. For example, when married couples with children get divorced, chances are that the children stay with the mother, not the father, especially if they are young. According to the 1992 March/April Current Population Survey in the United States, conducted by the US Census Bureau on a nationally representative sample, 86% of custodial parents are mothers. Further, many of the noncustodial fathers who have agreed to pay child support, either voluntarily or via court order, default on their commitment or become deadbeat dads." The first national survey of the receipt of child support, conducted in 1978, reveals that less than half (49%) of women awarded child support actually received the full amount due to them, and more than a quarter (28%) of them received nothing. The percentages have remained more or less constant since. In 1991, 52% of custodial parents awarded child support received the full amount; 25% of them received nothing. There is a quote: Men make house, women make home and it tends to be precise throughout the history until now. This idea does not mean that men are not important in raising children but as we look over daily familial life, women are closer to children than men. When children are in danger, the first word they shout is: Mommy, help me. In fact, women have usually proven themselves to be superior parents as a result of those reasons. First, women obtain more familial condition than men. Since they are very young, females enjoy learning about nurturing. They love to play with doll, feed them, pretend that they are their mothers and sing them a lullaby. Later, they take care of younger brothers or sister. Girls sympathize the essential role of their mothers and they often consider those activities, housework are feminine. Compare to boys, they have so many differences. Boys like virile

things such as: football, guns, and vigorous heroes in movies. And while boys dream to be as strong as Popeye the sailor man, or to conquer Red planet, girls just want to be doctor to help the poor, a warm and happy family. Thus, girls have propensities in raising children. Second, girls are less aggressive, and their stamina is much better than men. As we see, every war involve in men. Men are the leaders, 85% soldier of Department of Defences are men that is mean men are usually prove to be aggressor in crime and war. Moreover, the New York Times has just reported that it would be better if you raise your children with calmness, sweetness but sometimes with sternness. Women are considered as sensitive, therefore, they know how to conduct flexibly, aware when to support the children or when to teach them. Having offspring is hard, but raising them to become good citizen is much harder. And the final reason why I think women make better parents than men is women have better communication skill. In 1992, Swan made a survey about the differences among brains of girls and boys. After some tests, he finally discovered that almost girls have better score in oral skills. Communication skills are one of the most important skills to become good parents because your children inherit everything from their Mom and Dad such as: behaviour, character Thus, verbal skill influences children a lot. Although, there are many opponents about this issue. They said men could make better parents than women. Men are usually stern, harsh and straightforward and children need these characters to become good citizenships. Nowadays, social issue is in emergency, many youths are arrested because of using heroine, sexual abusing Therefore, to protect children, parents must be stern and force children to follow their disciplinary rule. That is also meaning there are not any existences of sweetness, calmness. This idea has some merit on the surface. Nevertheless, should we always follow these boring and nonsense rules? Children change their physical body and their soul every day. Parents should listen to their children, do the best things for them, and support them to stand up when they are fallen off. In short, parents must be flexible, and willing to change. Being good parents does not mean just coerce your children to follow your words. In conclusion, I advocate the idea that women make better parents than men. Women not only have many natural skills, such as: good stamina, calmness but also some appropriate condition to become good parents and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies.