UNIVERSITY OF DAR ES SALAAM

RESEARCH PROPOSAL FOR PARTIAL FULFILMENT OF MASTERS OF SCIENCE IN COMPUTER SCIENCE BY COURSEWORK AND DISSERTATION

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NAME OF CANDIDATE:

KIYAO, Fadhili. 2009-06-00193 B.Sc. in Computer Science (UDSM-Tanzania)

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NAME OF SUPERVISOR:

Dr. Godfrey Justo

COLLEGE/DEPARTMENT:

College of Information and Communication Technologies / Computer Science and

Engineering Department 4. 0
Development of SMS based platform for counseling and access to information about HIV/AIDS in Tanzania

PROPOSED DEGREE:

M.Sc. in Computer Science

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Development of SMS based Counseling platform for HIV/AIDS in Tanzania.

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Introduction General Introduction

The human immunodeficiency virus (HIV) infection, which can cause acquired immunodeficiency syndrome (AIDS), has shown a high degree of prevalence in populations all over the world. According to the World Health Organization (WHO) reports, about 33.4 Million people were living with HIV/ AIDS in the world where 22.4 Million were from Sub-Saharan Africa (World Health Organization [WHO], 2009).

Knowledge of HIV status has always had the potential for benefiting an individuals health and wellbeing and for helping to prevent the further transmission of HIV. Knowledge of HIV status has been especially beneficial when it has enabled people to access care, support and treatment, in the form of psychosocial support; home based care; nutritional support; palliative care; treatment for opportunistic infections, tuberculosis and sexually transmitted infections; and antiretroviral therapy (WHO, 2002).

Knowing HIV/ AIDS status is only possible if an individual undertakes HIV/ AIDS testing, which is initiated by voluntarily counseling which prepares the individual to be ready willingly to undergo the testing and know his or her HIV status.

HIV testing has also been problematic in the context of clinical care. This is because, in many places, HIV testing has reportedly either not been conducted at all as part of clinical care or has been conducted without consent, confidentiality, counseling, the provision of results or any follow-up care to benefit health. Even in places where people with AIDS occupy more than 50% of hospital beds, almost none of these people have been diagnosed as HIV positive or told that they have AIDS. Although this phenomenon may result from fear that these patients will face discrimination or be denied health 2

insurance, etc., if they are diagnosed as having AIDS, it also appears to be a form of medical denial that ultimately does not serve the best interests of these people or their families or communities (WHO, 2002). Development of mobile communication technology has created a new possibility for information exchange capable of reaching great number of people than traditional wired methods and internet. This technology has high potential to increase access to public services in areas where infrastructure constraints exist (World Bank Conference, 2007). Due to widespread mobile network coverage in Tanzania, many people possess mobile phone and mobile devices are easier to learn and use. This provides an opportunity to incorporate mobile services into the everyday lives of people. ******WHY SMS and MOBILE PHONES****** This study aims to investigate the current procedures and operations of voluntarily counseling for HIV/AIDS and how Information and Communication Technology can be utilized to support Counseling and testing for HIV/AIDS. From this investigation a framework that utilizes Information and Communication Technology shall be proposed to improve access to information on counseling and testing services of HIV/AIDS. This framework will be implemented as a SMS based online HIV/AIDS counseling system and evaluated against the gaps that face to face counseling system is experiencing. 6.2 Statement of the Problem

Every person has the right to access Counseling services and receive information about HIV/ AIDS without consideration of its geographical position, economic status or education background.

Community Based organizations (CBOs), Non Government organizations (NGOs), Government and other Volunteering organizations have introduced various counseling and various mode of access to information about HIV/ AIDS but they face various 3

constraints like physical locations, time barriers to visit councilors offices or disability constraints.

Tanzania Youth Alliance (TAYOA) introduced phone calls counseling services and access to information about HIV/ AIDS, but this service is not guaranteed if there is any network failure or the clients phone is not available. Whereas introduction of SMS counseling and access to information about HIV/ AIDS services will guarantee delivery of service and information provided there is a network failure or either clients phone or counselors phone is not available and they will be delivered once the network is up or the phone is switched on.

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Objectives of the Research General objective

The objective of the study is to design and develop a SMS based tool to enhance voluntarily counseling, access to counseling services and access to HIV/ AIDS information.

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Specific Objectives To investigate operations of the normal face to face counseling services for HIV/ AIDS and propose SMS based framework for counseling services for HIV/AIDS

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To implement the proposed framework by developing a SMS based online virtual HIV/AIDS Counseling System and evaluate its effectiveness in enhancing counseling and access to counseling services

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Research Questions

The following are some research questions that will be answered by this study:i. ii. What are the problems of face to face counseling system for HIV/AIDS? How can ICT be used to enhance/ compliment counseling services for HIV/ AIDS?

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Significance of the study

This research will address the importance of using Information and Communication Technology tools as one of the way to improve access to information relating to HIV/ AIDS. Hence encourage people to attend the newly designed voluntarily counseling and testing for HIV/ AIDS since most people are avoiding visiting counseling and testing centers due to forbear of people to think that there are infected since these services will be available anywhere 6.6 6.6.1 Literature Review AIDS Counseling services in Tanzania (Limitations faced)

Provisions of HIV/AIDS counseling services in Tanzania started in 1988. In 2001, ANGAZA Program received a grant from USAID to enhance counseling and testing services in the country. However, Tanzania indicator survey of 2003-2004 showed that 15% of people aged 15 to 49 years tested HIV. A national HIV testing campaign was realized as one of the approaches for scaling up counseling and testing services as entry to HIV prevention, care and support services. ANGAZA Program supported launch of campaign in mid July 2007 and scaling up the campaign in the country.

The number of Voluntarily Counseling and Testing (VCT) sites has increased considerably during 2003 2007 implementation period. There were 1,027 VCT sites by the end of 2006, compared to 289 in 2003. This number includes sites in health facilities 5

and stand alone sites. The geographic distribution of VCT sites is still inequitable, with an urban bias, although all districts have at least 4 sites. The number of clients counseled and tested has increased to 680,520 in 2006, up from about 140,000 in 2003.

Despite this considerable roll-out of service availability, the uptake of VCT in the country is still quite low. According to the Tanzania HIV/AIDS Indicators Survey (THIS) 2003/04, only about 15% of men and women are reported to have ever undertaken an HIV test. Women and men living in urban areas are two to three times more likely to have been tested than those in rural areas. One of the reasons for the low uptake is related to limited access to VCT services, particularly in the rural areas. Low public awareness about the benefits of knowing ones HIV status, insufficient human resources with skills in counseling and fear of stigma are also barriers to increased VCT utilization and the lack of care and support after HIV testing. The recent National voluntary HIV testing campaign aimed at increasing the number of Tanzanians who know their HIV status and thus to take action to protect themselves and others

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Computer Technology as a tool to improve Social Services

It is a good time to consider the power of current technological advances. Increasingly, communication and information technologies have become part of our everyday lives. The use of computers is increasing day by day, because they are used in many fields to make our lives easier (Bayhan, Olgun, and Yelland, 2002). Computers can present crucial information and offer effective tutorial (An instructional book or program that takes the user through a prescribed sequence of steps in order to learn a product) instruction (Cammarata, 2006). Computers also connect us with other people, store vast amounts of data, and provide us with access and entertainment (Yelland, 2002).

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Computer Technology in Education and Learning

Computer technology has important transformative effects on society (Logan, 1995). It provides concrete experiences, helps children control the learning experience (Papert, 1998), and supports children's development in all domains, as they use computers to investigate questions, solve problems, explore, and manipulate objects on a screen (Dodge, Colker, and Heroman, 2003). For example, children can use computers to investigate questions by using a program that teaches number concepts. Such a program might allow children to create "monsters," for example, by adding the right number of body parts. Also, children can explore with computers, using software programs that label vocabulary with pictures, written words, and spoken words. Such software programs often verbally identify an object when the child clicks on it. Some software programs allow children to match pictures of images to their beginning letters (Dodge et al., 2003).

Approaches to the use of ICT in education are presented within the context of education for a multidisciplinary human services workforce. A range of approaches are considered predominantly using a blended approach of ICT and face to face delivery. These include creating and sustaining community in a virtual environment to develop interprofessional skills. A focus of skill development is on reflective practices using online role-plays and group work principles and processes in virtual situated learning environments. Issues for professional practice cultures in the online environment are considered within a global context (Martin, Jennifer and Hawkins, and Linette).

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Computer Technology in Health

Information and communication technologies have changed the face of the world we live in. ICT enables people to communicate with family, friends and colleagues around the 7

world instantaneously, gain access to global libraries, information resources, and numerous other opportunities. ICT may also bring an improvement in health care delivery systems. So, we may define Information and Communication Technology as one of the driving forces of globalization ICT encompasses the broad spectrum of communication technologies from radio, film, television, press, and telephone along with more participatory forms such as theatre, video or storytelling. It also focuses on the electronic end of the spectrum such as e-mail, the Internet, mobile phones and digital video.

The science and practice of health or medical informatics changed radically in the late 1970s and early 1980s when computer use began to become increasingly common in healthcare environments (Shortliffe and Blois 2006). Since then, improvements in the speed and processing power of computers, computer networks, and the Internet has led to increased accessibility and availability of information for healthcare professionals to support their decision-making processes (Vimarlund et al 2008; Rose 2005; Winkelman and Leonard 2004; Chamorro 2001). According to Hassett (2002): A health information system (HIS) encompasses a wide array of applications and information systems that are linked or interfaced. A HIS supports the provision of care to patients and the business aspects of the healthcare organization by communicating information. It is now hard to imagine healthcare without information and communication technology (ICT) based applications for both the accumulation and interchange of clinical information (Ammenwerth et al. 2004). This is in part because ICT-based applications have been recognized as enablers. This means that they are tools that offer solutions to the problem of the increasing accumulation of patient data (Timpka et al 2007; Andersen et al. 1994; Friedman 1996). Due to their central role in enabling ubiquitous access to information,

ICTbased systems ensure a more efficient use of healthcare organizations scarce resources (Harrison et al. 2007; Rahimi et al 2008; Pardes et al. 2006).

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Trust Management in online counseling services

For the Internet it is necessary to establish a foundation of trust among the participants, in order to be accepted as a viable platform, where the big companies can migrate their current desktop software applications. Trust is often mentioned in the context of ecommerce and has been developed over time through the formation of appropriate policies, procedures and practices to safeguard transactions and company assets (Furnell, M. S et al, 1999). The objective of security should be to manage risks by anticipating what is probably going to happen and limiting the risk exposures that could injure an organization's reputation. Perfect security is hard to achieve, infinitely expensive and often not a rational goal (Singhoi, A, 2000)

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Computer Technology in HIV/ AIDS Fighting (Related works)

This section reviews some of the existing ICT services that are available which relates in one another to the campaign against HIV/AIDS. The following are some of the exiting services:-

6.6.6.1 Online counseling platform for Mexican University It integrates the database and communication tools needed to administer access and dissemination of information between Course tutors and their students. The student screen contains a number of features like a calendar where students can solicit and then program personal sessions with their tutors. Aims at providing students with the opportunity to reach their personal and professional growth and contribute to their ultimate success. 9

6.6.6.2 Grace Tree Counseling services Provides counseling services on Grief and loss issues, Survivors of family suicide, Depression and anxiety, marital and relationship issues, separation and divorce recovery, sexual abuse and incent and sexual addiction and abuse.

6.6.6.3 Ask the internet therapist services Have therapists who are committed to working with people who are interested in improving their overall mental health, reducing anxiety, and enhancing relationship skills. The online counselors are skilled in the areas of relationship counseling, love addiction, codependence, stress, assertiveness, dysfunctional family counseling, and chemical dependence counseling.

6.6.6.4 ICT based HIV/AIDS education ICT-based HIV/AIDS education and counselling services have been developed in various African countries, such as Uganda and Tanzania (Bloome 2001; Duveskoq 2008). The existing e-learning approaches for HIV/AIDS education provide limited educational services to children with most solutions presenting static online content, carton-based stories and social networks using email as a means of communication (Bada and Suhonen 2008). There is need to have a conceptual and pedagogical design of e-learning

environment, which is aimed to provide a fresh perspective to the HIV/AIDS education and counselling services for Tanzanian.

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Technological requirement

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On their study on Pedagogical and Conceptual design of An E-Learning Environment for HIV/AIDS in Uganda (NetAIDS), Bada and Jarkko (2008) proposed the following conceptual design framework for NetAIDS environment

Figure 1: Conceptual design Framework for NetAIDS (Bada and Jarko, 2008) 6.6.8 Different Approaches to Systems Development

6.6.8.1 Systems Development Systems analysis is all about getting a detailed understanding of information relating to a proposed system collected previously (Avison and Shah, 1997). The phases of systems development are feasibility study, analysis, design, implementation, testing and maintenance. These phases of project development are the standard phases used more or less in all texts on systems analysis and software engineering. It is generally referred to as the Linear Life Cycle (Pressman, 1992). 6.6.8.2 Alternative methods of Systems Development There have been many criticisms of the Linear Life Cycle. Thus, the Linear Life Cycle is

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looked on as way too simplified for the complexities of the real world. The following are some of the alternatives available to the simple Linear Life Cycle model. 6.6.8.2.1 Prototyping Gerri (1999) define a Prototyping as the process of building a model of a system. In terms of an information system, prototypes are employed to help system designers build an information system that intuitive and easy to manipulate for end users. Prototyping is an iterative process that is part of the analysis phase of the cycle (Gerri, 1999). With prototyping the user feedback gained from developing a physical system that the users can touch and see facilitates an evaluative response that the analyst can employ to modify existing requirements as well as developing new ones (Gerri,1999). There are number of the advantages of the prototyping but some of them are reduced time of system development and decreases of cost in development process. Prototyping results in higher user satisfaction and expose developers to potential future system requirement (Gerri, 1999). The negative side of the prototyping includes the dangerous of the system being left in insufficient analysis. According to (Gerri, 1999) argues that now there is widespread use of prototypes of its advantage of inherently increase the quality and amount of communication between the developer/analyst and the end user. 6.6.8.2.2A Spiral Model This model aims to combine the best elements of the Linear Life Cycle and Prototyping but adding the new element of risk analysis (Pressman, 1992). 6.6.8.2.3Object Orientation (OO) Object orientated systems development requires the developer to think in terms of objects and object classes (Avison and Shah, 1997). This means that every attribute of a system is modeled just like it is in reality. 12

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Methodology 7.1 Methods

The following are techniques which will be used in the analysis of the current system for the flow and processing of information on HIV/ AIDS Counseling services. 7.1.1 Primary source of data. Observation The observation will be made on how the face to face voluntarily counseling for HIV/AIDS is conducted how it can be modeled to cover distance counseling services. The main advantage of this method is that subjective bias is eliminated, if observation is done accurately. Secondly, the information that is obtained under this method relates to what is currently happening; it is not complicated by either the past behaviour or future intentions or attitudes. Thirdly, this method is

independent of respondents willingness to respond and as such is relatively less demanding of active cooperation on the part of respondents as happens to be the case in the interview or the questionnaire method (Kothari, 2008). Interview The general questions will be asked from client that will help in collecting the user requirements. Most of prepared questions are open-end question in order to explore as much as information from the client. Also unstructured interview technique will be used as it is characterized by flexibility of approach to questioning. Unstructured interview do not follow the system of pre-determined questions and standardized techniques for recording information. In a non-structured interview, the interviewer is allowed much greater freedom to ask, incase need, supplementary questions or at times he may omit certain questions if the situation so requires (Kothari, 2004). 13 To analyze the data

collected from open-end questions, qualitative analysis methods will be used where data will be examined and compared. The meaningfulness of the data will be determined by established goals and objectives of the research. 7.1.2 Using a secondary source of Data The review of the literature from previous research on how other countries process their online counseling services will be conducted. Other document for HIV/AIDS counseling services will be reviewed. 7.1.3 Software requirement analysis This will involve the following activities; develop the understanding of the application domain and interact with the stakeholders in the system like Ministry of Health and Social welfare, Tanga region Medical Officer, Counselors and the community as whole to know their requirements. 7.2 Materials On designing the system, MySQL DBMS will be used to implement the database schema, the PHP scripting language for creation of the user interface and link to database. Apache will be used as a web server. The reason for choosing the above tool is because they are open source. (i.e. free to use) 7.3 System Testing The unit test will be done first and after integration of different units, the whole system will be also tested. The system testing will be conducted to identify the correctness, completeness, security and quality of developed computer software. Testing will be performed on behalf of the stakeholders that are intended to reveal quality related information about the product with the respect to the context in which it is intended to operate. 8.0 Research Gap

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Online counseling provides an alternative to traditional face-to-face counseling at a time when traditional methods are inaccessible, inconvenient, or not preferred. Online counseling may be a useful alternative for people, unable to make it to a counselors office, live in a remote area, have a disability, limited time constraints, or would like to get an idea of how counseling works before seeing a counselor face to face. This research is expected to cover the gap which is not covered by face to face counseling. 9.0 Research Contribution

This research is expected to contribute not only in the field of computer science but also to the community and other fields. 9.0.1 Contribution in the field of Computer Science

A new tool will be developed which will be used as a platform for other computer scientist to do other researches based on it. 9.0.2 Contribution to other fields

This research is expected to produce much contribution to other field like Health Science and counselling area as it will provide them with a new tool for their daily activities

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11.0 Other Relevant Information 11.1 Estimated Budget Item No 1 2 3 4 Items Data collection, Analysis Design and implementation Dissertation Report Writing Stationary Transport (Dar es Salaam Tanga Dar es Salaam) and Accommodation 5 6 Internet Modem (1 Unit) and Internet Access Contingence Total Budget Costs 400,000/200,000/3,080,000/Cost(Tshs) 1,200,000/500,000/300,000/480,000/-

Table 1: Estimated budget 11.2

Activity Jun Jul Aug

Research Schedule
2011 Sep Oct Nov Dec Jan Feb 2012 Mar Apr May

Data collection Data Analysis System Design System Implementation Report write up and submission Table 2: Research Schedule

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Date .. Kiyao, Fadhili (2009-0600193) SUPERVISOR COMMENTS: . . Signature:Date:

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Comments from the first presentation held on 01/12/2010

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Research title ICT as a tool to enhance voluntarily counseling and testing for HIV/ AIDS in Tanzania; A case of designing an online TAWG HIV/AIDS Counseling System needs to be rephrased as the term ICT is a more general term rather be specific whether it is a web based, sms based or any other ICT

Dr. Justo Dr. Lungo Dr. Mercy

Title rephrased to Web based tool for enhancing HIV/ AIDS voluntarily counseling. A case of Tanga AIDS Working Group (TAWG)

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component No methodology/ or shallow details thereof Statement of the problem does not clearly state the problem you want to solve or there is no direct link from the title to the problem to be

Dr. Justo Dr. Mercy Dr. Justo

Methodology part has been reviewed Has been reviewed to focus the problem to be covered (Section 6.2 of the proposal)

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solved Some observations on HIV/AIDS statistics included seems to be old, try to find current

Dr. Justo

Now the proposal includes current updated literature reviews

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status and statistics The proposed architecture in the Section 7.5 (Software Architecture) Should be included in the literature review and state where you have

Dr. Justo

and statistics Has been included in the literature review

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inherited from Schedule of activities and Budget should include relative expenses and real time we have; should

Dr. Lungo

Budget (item 11.1) and Research Schedule (item 11.2) has been

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not be imagined References need to be straightened; use of Comma in citations and uniformity in using and and & 22

Dr. Lungo

updated to include real situation and has been used instead of & and uniformity and the use of comma in citation has been

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