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Objective
Today we will write a persuasive essay.
Organization
The persuasive composition has a specific organizational pattern: Thesis Argument Counterargument Rebuttal Conclusion
The Prompt
What is the best sport for children to play? In this writing test you will write a persuasive essay to convince the reader of your position. Give convincing reasons that support your positions and address the concerns of those who would argue against your position.
Outline
Thesis = Soccer is the ideal sport for children
argument
teaches teamwork
counter
Conclusion
Paragraph One:Thesis
Hook + History+ Thesis Statement Hook- Parents often wonder what is the best sport for children to play. History/Background- Sports are an important part of growing up. Thesis-Although there are many sports, I believe soccer is an ideal sport for children
Soccer: An Ideal Sport for Children Sports are an important part of growing up. Parents often wonder what is the best sport for children to play. Although there are many sports, I believe soccer is an ideal sport for children. One reason is that soccer teaches teamwork. Each position has a specific job. Forwards have the responsibility of scoring goals. The fullbacks job is defense, and the halfbacks assist both forwards and fullbacks. Defense of the goal is the duty of the goalie. In order to win all must do their jobs well and rely on each other for help. Certainly, team sports can intimidate children. Some children may be physically smaller than others. Age group teams are meant to solve this problem, but it is not unusual to see large differences of height and weight in children of the same age. Others may not be as athletic as other team members. Children are particularly sensitive about how they compare to their peers. When they cannot run as fast as other team members or are not as agile, they fear ridicule. However, learning to work as part of a team is essential to success in many other areas. Children have to learn to cooperate both at school and home. In school students are expected to work together without conflict. Many teachers use cooperative groups to teach. At home children are expected to be part of the family team and help with chores that need to be done. When they are older, these children may have a job that requires teamwork. Only rarely does a person work in job that does not require working with others. Office workers have to work together to accomplish the tasks given to them. Construction workers have to be part of a team effort to finish buildings on time and on budget. Therefore, I believe parents should encourage their children to play soccer. While some children may feel intimidated at the beginning, by learning to be part of a team, they will be preparing themselves for future success.
Evaluate
A clear thesis statement? Obvious organization? Strong transitions? Specific examples & evidence? A memorable conclusion?
Closure
What are the 5 parts of a persuasive essay? Thesis, argument, counter- argument, rebuttal, and conclusion Give examples of transitions for each part:
Outline
Thesis =
argument
Reason/Fact/Detail
elaborate
counter
Reason/Fact/Detail
elaborate
rebuttal Reason/Fact/Detail
elaborate
Conclusion