TARGET AUDIENCE FEEDBACK

• By definition of a category I do not mean ‘age is

defined by the year at which the audience
become interested and lose interest in a media
text’

• Rather ‘the age of my target audience is 16-24’

• Need more detail with relevance – many

responses are not sophisticated and therefore
will not get marks. Ask yourself the question
‘HOW WILL MY FILM BE RELEVANT TO THIS
GROUP OF PEOPLE?’
 A COURSEWORK AMNESTY
Amnesty (from the Greek amnestia, oblivion) is a
legal act by which a country restores those who
may have been guilty of an offense against it to the
position of innocent people. It includes more than
pardon, in as much as it eliminates all legal
remembrance of the offense.

THIS AMNESTY IS ONLY IN EFFECT UNTIL

TODAY AT 8PM (SCRIBD IS NOT AN
ACCETABLE EXCUSE IN THIS CASE)
AFTER THIS ANY INCOMPLETE, UNIMPROVED
OR MISSING WORK WILL BE COMPLETED
AFTER SCHOOL TOMORROW
 MISSING/NEEDS WORK
Fereshte
Missing – Target Audience
Needs Work – Questionnaire Results need better analysis and final 5 points
Bryant
Missing – 3 Textual Analysis, Target Audience & T.A.
Nikki
Needs Work – Make the word audience smaller in your T.A. sheet, Need your final 5 points for Questionnaire Analysis, Change label for budget
(Bugdet!), Media Law still needs re-formating
Fox
Needs Work – T.A. Gender, Political Views, Hobbies, Interests needs some more work, Need a wider range of responses for Questionnaire
Results (Qualitative) + final 5 points
Dilraj
Missing – Follow Button!!! Questionairre Analysis
Needs Work – Target audience and appeal needs more sophisticated definition
Jodie
Missing – Video for Supersize/Superskinny
Needs Work – Could add to final 5 points for questionnaire
Gervaise
Missing – 1 textual analysis and other two need to be laid out better in blog (Video P1, P2
Needs Work – Need to actually define you target audience, not just appeal, Final 5 points for questionnaire need more detail as do comments
on results
Eren
Missing – Video for first textual analysis, Questionnaire Results/Analysis, Target Audience
Needs Work – Other textual analysis are very brief
Sarah
Missing –
Needs Work – Don’t need to define terms but DO NEED to define the group of people in Target Audience.
Abdi
Missing – Questionnaire Analysis, Target Audience
Needs Work – Need videos for all 3 textual analysis
Ninthujah
Missing –
Needs Work – Questionnaire: Don’t need to copy in your analysis – having it in the graph section is fine. Do need to include a range of quotes for
each qualitative answer and also include 5 points at the end summarising what you’ve found out.
Harpreet
Missing – Budget, Textual Analysis, Questionnaire Results, Target Audience

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