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Planning Business
Messages
In this age of mass information and
communication, being able to write
clearly is fundamental to business success.
Crucial decisions may depend on the
written words in letters, reports and
e-mails.
Understanding the
composition process
Some of your tasks will be routine,
needing little more than jotting a few
sentences down on paper or into an email; others will be more complex
requiring reflection, research, and
careful document preparation.
Understanding the
composition process
The composition process varies with the
situation, the communicator and the
organization. So the various stages do not
necessarily occur in 1-2-3 order, communicators
often jump back and forth from one stage to
another. The composition process may be
viewed in 10 separate stages that fall into 3
categories.
Understanding the
composition process
For your messages to be effective
follow the 3 categories:
Well planned
Well organized
Well constructed
Understanding the
composition process
Planning:
Define purpose
Analyze audience
Establish main idea
Select channel and medium
Understanding the
composition process
Composing:
Organize message
Formulate message
Select illustrations and details
Understanding the
composition process
Revising:
Edit message
Rewrite message
Produce message
Proof read
Understanding the
composition process
In some occasions the process of
preparing a message is a team effort,
with more than one person writing,
this is called Collaborative Writing.
For efforts of this type, the review
and revision stages might be
repeated several times.
Understanding the
composition process
In fact allocating your time properly is
an important consideration, you need
time
for
thoroughly
planning,
composing and revising your message.
Roughly the time should be used for
planning, gathering material, a for
composing and for revising.
Common Pitfalls
There are several common pitfalls that you should avoid
when writing:
Large or uncommon words that draw the readers
attention away from the documents information.
Sexist or derogatory language that offends the reader.
Ambiguous expressions that do not convey the
message effectively.
Jargon that can make readers feel you are trying to
talk over their heads.
Clichs that might seem unprofessional
Inattention to details
Contradicting statement that give confusing messages
Communication through
writing
Communication through writing is helpful
when providing information to several
individuals.
Writing is beneficial when you have a large
amount of information that needs to be
communicated.
When the information you want to share is
difficult to understand, putting it in writing
allows the reader to review it as often as
needed.
Writing guidelines
When
the following
guidelines in mind:
Be
specific:
Direct
language
avoid
potential
misunderstanding
Remain focused: Concentrate on one point at a time and
give only information the reader needs.
Relate obscure facts to known facts: Help the reader
understand your message by relating unfamiliar ideas to
familiar ones.
Emphasize your main points:
Use words, style and
formatting to focus the readers attention on the main
points of your message
Step 1: Planning to
write
The first step of the writing process is planning
what you will communicate.
Planning your messages enables you to outline
exactly what you need to say.
It reduces the risk of sending unnecessary
information.
The following steps will help you:
Determine your purpose
Analyze the reader
Choose a style
Determine your
purpose
Having a clear purpose helps you identify what
information you want to share with the reader.
What you want the reader to learn from the
message.
When developing the purpose of the message,
consider:
Contents
Organization
Style
Tone
Format
Determine your
purpose
The purpose must be worthwhile, readers quickly
disregard any information that does not seem
important.
The purpose must be delivered at the right time.
Make sure you deliver your message when the
reader is able to view and understand the
information with an open mind.
The purpose must be relevant to the
organization, your document should reflect and
reinforce your organizations goals and mission.
Organizing your
thoughts
The second step of the writing process is to organize your
thoughts.
Properly organizing your thoughts before writing enables
you to communicate information in a systematic and
logical format that will help the reader understand the
message.
Logically organizing your thoughts provides:
Your main point will be emphasized and properly supported with
evidence
You can identify areas where you lack information
You save the readers time by providing information in a clear and
easy to follow format
Organizing a written
outline
You need to:
State the main topic:
Immediately identifying your
intentions keeps the reader focused on the main points of
the document.
Explain how you will present the information: Briefly
explaining at the outset how your message is presented
helps the reader follow your train of thoughts through the
document. Listing the items you need to discuss in a
systematic, logical, and sequential manner allows the
reader to identify your reasons for sending the message
Include all your evidence: Supporting your ideas with solid
evidence will help the reader understand why you are
sending the message.
Analyzing your
audience
Take a good look at your intended audience:
Who are the members
What are their attitudes
What do they need to know
The answer to these questions will indicate
something about the material you need to
cover and how to cover it.
Determine audience
size and composition
Oral presentations are affected by the size of
audience, so is written communication, it is
also affected by the diversity of backgrounds
and interests.
You need to look for the common denominator
that ties them together.
Be sure to include a variety of information that
touches on everyones area of interest
Estimate probable
reaction
If you are expecting a favorable answer,
you can be straightforward about
stating
your
conclusions
and
recommendations. On the other hand,
if you are not sure, you may have to
introduce your recommendations more
gradually and provide more proof.
Define your
relationship with the
audience
If you do not know them, you will need
to gain their confidence before you can
win them to your point of view. If you
are communicating with a familiar
group, your credibility has already been
established so you can get down to
business immediately.
Anticipate unstated
questions
Try to think of information that your
audience may not even be aware of.
Imagine, a new person has joined your
company and you are writing a letter to
welcome them, what could you add to
anticipate any questions this person
might have?
Emphasize ideas of
greatest interest
When you are deciding on how to
respond, remember that some points
will be of greater interest and
importance than others. Remember
that your main goal as a business
communicator is to tell your audience
what they need to know.
Prewriting techniques
Identifying the main idea often requires
creativity. The best approach is to
brainstorm, letting your mind wander over
the possibilities and testing various
alternatives against your purpose, your
audience and the facts at your disposal.
Some of the prewriting approaches are:
Techniques to establish
the main idea
Storytellers tour
Random list
FCR worksheet
Journalist approach
Questions and answer chain
Storytellers tour
Pretend that you just run into a friend
in the street, and you are giving him an
overview of what you have been doing
lately, focus on your main point, explain
your reasons, your major points, your
rationale and the implications.
Random list
On a clean sheet of paper list
everything that pops into your head in
relation to your message, study the list, sort
them into groups, look for common
denominators. Regardless of what
categories finally emerge, the sorting
process will help you sift through your
thoughts.
FCR worksheet
If your subject involves the solution to
a problem you might want to use an FCR
worksheet to help you visualize
between your:
(f) Findings
(c) Conclusions
(r) Recommendation
Journalistic approach
For informational approach, the
journalistic approach might be the best.
The answer to six questions:
Who, what, where, when, why and who,
should clarify the main idea.
Business Letters
Headings
Date
Inside address
Salutation
Letter body
Closing
Signature block
Headings
Also called the letterhead, this part of
the letter is placed along the left and
starts about 13 lines from the top of
the page.
It includes your organization name,
full address, and telephone number.
This is pre printed stationery
Date
Place the date two lines below the
heading.
When writing dates, start with the
full name of the month, then the
day in numerals, followed by a
comma, and then the year.
Inside address
This identifies the letters recipient.
You should place the inside address two lines
below the date.
Always address the reader as Mr. or Ms.
Specify the readers position or title after their
name.
If you do not know the name of the person to
whom you are writing, address it to the
relevant department or a specific position
within the department.
Salutation
The salutation should be placed two lines
below the inside address.
It should include the recipients name followed
by a colon.
If you do not know the name of the reader, the
proper salutation is To Whom It May
Concern.
Letter body
This part contains your message, and
begins two lines below the salutation.
Most letters are single spaced with a
double
space
between
each
paragraph for clarity.
Closing
The closing should be two lines
below the body of the letter.
Traditional letter closings include,
sincerely, and cordially.
Ideally the closing should reflect
your relationship with the leader.
Signature block
This part of the letter contains your
signature, and your typed name.
To make room for your signature, leave
three blank lines between the closing
and your typed name.
If you include your companys name, it
should be in capital letters.
Attention Line
This can be used when you only know
the last name of the letters recipient,
or you want to direct the letter to a
position title or a department.
Place it two lines below the inside
address, or immediately following the
companys name in the inside address
Subject Line
This line briefly informs the reader of the
subject of the message and usually follows
the salutation.
You can also place the subject line at the
very top of the first page or immediately
before the salutation.
Subject lines are usually aligned with the
left margin, but they can also be centered
Requesting routine
information and action
When making a routine request, state:
What you want to know
Why do you want to know it
Why it is in the readers interest to help you.
Exactly what do you want the reader to do
as result of reading your request for action?
Requesting routine
information and action
Despite their simple organization, routine
requests deserve a tactful touch. The
potential for creating a positive
impression is second only to
the risk of causing ill will through badly
chosen words and/or discourteous tone.
Requesting routine
information and action
When writing a routine request, keep
the purpose of your message in mind. Ask
yourself what you want recipients to
understand or do as a result of reading the
message. As you prepare the request,
remember that even the briefest note can
create confusion and hard feelings.
Writing persuasive
messages
To write persuasive messages you can
consider four strategic elements:
1. Needs and appeals
2. Emotion and logic
3. Credibility
4. Semantic
Writing persuasive
messages
Needs and appeals: Everyones needs differ,
therefore, you need to analyze the members of
your audience and then construct a message that
appeals to their needs.
Emotion and logic: Emotional reactions may result
when an audiences need are overlooked. Not
even the best crafted, most reasonable message
will persuade someone who is emotionally unable
to accept it. Emotion and logic together are more
powerful than either alone.
Writing persuasive
messages
Credibility: Your credibility is your
capability of being believed because
you are reliable and worthy of
confidence. Enhance your credibility
by supplying evidence that is objective
and specific. Other ways of gaining
credibility include the following:
Writing persuasive
messages
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Being enthusiastic
Being objective
Being sincere
Being an expert
Having good intentions
Being trustworthy
Writing persuasive
messages
Semantics: Semantics is concerned with
the meaning of words and other symbols.
The words you chose to state your
message say much more than their
dictionary meaning, for instance, useful,
beneficial and advantageous may be
considered synonyms. Yet these three
words are not interchangeable.
Writing persuasive
messages
He suggested a useful compromise. (The
compromise allowed the parties to get to
work)
He suggested a beneficial compromise.
(The compromise not only resolved the
conflict but also had a positive effect)
He suggested and advantageous
compromise. (The compromise benefited
his company more than it benefited the
other party)
Organizing persuasive
messages
Persuasion requires what is called the
AIDA plan:
Attention
Interest
Desire
Action
Organizing persuasive
messages
Attention: Convince the audience
that you have something
interesting to say.
Interest: Explain how your message
relates to your audience. Continue
the theme you started with,
painting a more detailed picture.
Organizing persuasive
messages
Desire: In the desire phase you
back up your claims and, thereby,
increase your audiences
willingness to take the action you
will suggest.
Action: The secret of the action
phase is to make the action easy.
Proposals
At its core, a proposal is a document
offering a service or a product to a client.
The purpose of a proposal is to
demonstrate to a client that you are the
best company to answer their needs or
solve their problems.
What is a proposal?
Because the basic purpose of proposals is to sell your
product or service.
Proposals can greatly benefit your company by generating
the business your organization needs to compete and
succeed in the market.
If an external party writes a proposal, the group is
considered a vendor.
If an employee writes it, he is considered a member of the
organization who has identified a way to improve the
company in some way.
Types of proposals
Informal proposals
Formal proposals
External proposals
Internal proposals
Solicited proposals
Unsolicited proposals
Informal proposals
They are relatively short documents, ranging from one
to four pages in length, and are often submitted as a
memo or letter.
Informal proposals are often used for internal
purposes and do not use detailed segmentation.
Although formal and informal proposals are used for
different purposes, they both contain the same basic
information.
The primary focus is on what you can do for the client.
Formal proposals
These are usually longer than informal proposals.
Formal proposals are segmented, and include a
variety of elements, including:
Cover letter
Table of contents
Executive summary.
Formal proposals also require a formal style of
writing.
External proposals
Are sent to parties outside the organization
such as clients or potential clients.
They are also sent to recruit the help or
assistance of other organization for projects
and others.
Internal proposals
They are sent to parties within your
organization.
For example, your employer might ask for
new product ideas or suggestions for
organizational changes.
Business plans proposals are a common type
of internal proposals.
Solicited proposals
They come from clients who have a need
or problem that they would like to address.
Proposals written in response to Request
for Proposals
are considered solicited
proposals.
Unsolicited proposals
These are sent to potential clients to initiate
contact and generate business.
A common example is a brief sales letter
pitching a new product or service.
For example, if you have developed a
solution to a problem
within your
organization, you might send an internal,
unsolicited proposal to upper management.
Purposes of proposals
Proposals are often used to compare vendors
and determine the quality of the product or
service and its suitability.
After the best vendor for the project is
identified, they are hired for the job.
The key to writing a competitive proposal is
to align your competitive edge with your
clients organization goals.
Body of a letter
proposal
Identify the steps you will take to complete
the project.
Identify the amount of time it will take to
complete the project.
Identify how much it will cost to complete
the project.
Include specific technical issues
Closing of a letter
proposal
Compare the cost and benefits
Offer your credentials
Motivate your client to take action
Components of formal
proposals
The sections that you must include in a formal
proposal are:
Cover letter
Title page
Table of contents
Executive summary
Body
Appendix
Title page
In a short report this may simply be the
front cover. In a long one it could also
include Terms of Reference, Table of
Contents and so on.
Table of contents
When creating the table of contents, you
should make it as easy to read as possible.
You want the client to be able to access any
areas of your proposal easily.
A well developed table of contents provides
the client with the road map that they need
Summary
Give a clear and very concise account of the main
points, main conclusions and main recommendations.
Keep it very short, a few percent of the total length.
Some people, especially senior managers, may not
read anything else so write as if it were a stand-alone
document. It isnt but for some people it might as well
be.
Keep it brief and free from jargon so that anyone can
understand it and get the main points.
Write it last, but do not copy and paste from the
report itself; that rarely works well.
Introduction.
This is the first part of the report proper. Use it
to paint the background to the problem and
to show the reader why the report is important
to them.
Give your terms of reference (if not in the Title
Section) and explain how the details that
follow are arranged. Write it in plain English.
Main Body.
This is the heart of your report, the
facts. It will probably have several
sections or sub-sections each with its
own subtitle.
It is unique to your report and will
describe what you discovered about
the problem
Conclusions.
Present the logical conclusions of your
investigation of the problem.
Bring it all together and maybe offer
options for the way forward. Many
people will read this section.
Write it in plain English.
Recommendations.
What do you suggest should be done?
Dont be shy; you did the work so
state your recommendations in order
of priority, and in plain English.
Appendices.
Put the heavy details here, the
information that only specialists are
likely to want to see.
As a guide, if some detail is essential to
your argument then include it in the
main body, if it merely supports the
argument then it could go in an
appendix.
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Origin
Subject
Timing
Distribution
Purpose
Probable reception
Establishing a basic
structure
In addition to deciding on a format and
length, you have to decide on the basic
structure of your report, this involves
three issues:
1. What information will you include?
2. What approach is best?
3. What method of subdivision will you use?
Developing structural
clues
Four tools are particularly useful for giving
readers a sense of the overall structure of
your document and for keeping them on
track as they read:
The opening
Headings and lists
Smooth transition
Ending
The opening
A good opening accomplishes three things:
Introduces the subject of the report
Indicates why the subject is important
Gives readers a preview of the main
ideas and the order in which they will be
covered
Transitions
Such phrases as to continue analysis,
on the other hand, and an additional
concept are a type of structural clue.
Those are examples of transitions,
words and phrases that tie ideas
together within a report and keep
readers moving along the right track.
The ending
Research shows that the ending or the
final part of the report leaves a strong
and lasting impression. Use the ending
to emphasize the main objective of
your message. The ending ties up all
pieces and remind readers how the
pieces fit together.