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Module 16
Revising
Revising means making changes in content, organization, and
tone that will better satisfy your purposes and your audience.
Evaluating your work and measuring it against your goals and the
requirements of the situation and audience. The best evaluation results
from re-seeing your draft as if someone else had written it. Will your
audience understand it? Is it complete? Convincing? Friendly?
Getting feedback from someone else. Is all the necessary information
there? Is there too much information? Is your pattern of organization
appropriate? Does a revision solve an earlier problem? Are there obvious
mistakes?
Adding, deleting, substituting, or rearranging. Revision can be
changes in single words or in large sections of a document.
Active Voice
The customer
widgets.
received
500
The
state
agencies
will
Passive voice has at least three disadvantages:
implement the program.
If all the information in the original sentence is retained, passive voice
makes the sentence longer. Passive voice takes more time to
understand.
If the agent is omitted, its not clear who is responsible for doing
the action.
Using much passive voice, especially in material that has a lot of big
Better
Weak
Better
Weak
Faulty
: Errors can be checked by reviewing the daily exception report or note the
number of errors you uncover when you match the lading copy with the file
copy of the invoice.
Parallel
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