Documente Academic
Documente Profesional
Documente Cultură
in the
Workplace
GROUP 1: ARACELY VALDEZ, STEPHANY
RIOS, PRISCILLA HERNANDEZ, JACOB RUBIO
Concise v. Wordiness
Concise Wordiness
Consequently:
Mr. Coyote sought compensation from the company
ACME lost $38,750,000
Mr. Coyote acquired ACME Industries after winning the product
liability lawsuit
Mr. Coyote wishes to improve his employees’ workplace writing skills.
Potential Impacts
Personnel
Decrease in productivity and performance
Poor internal communication
Reputation
Documents that lack conciseness will exhibit how work is completed in
their professional setting
Poor writing diminishes the potential trust customers had
Finances
Discursive writing can lead to a loss in business relationships and
sales
Interpretation of poorly written language results in wasted work hours
and loss of money
How to Correct the Problem
Avoid:
Redundant adjectives that precede nouns
Adverb combinations with similar meanings or no contribution
Hollow adverbs and adjectives that pad sentences
Weak words of little meaning
All-purpose words
Vague sentences
Unmodified nouns and adjectives that are interpreted categorically
Excessive use of adjectives, adverbs, abstract nouns, and prepositions
Phrases that slow the reader and add no meaning
Redundant Meanings
Adjectives with meanings in the nouns they precede
Foreign imports, first priority, group meeting, personal opinion, future
plan, etc.
Adverbs with the same meaning as the verb they are used with.
Repeat again, perfectly clear, cooperate together, etc.
Words that Contribute Nothing
Adverbs that contribute nothing and weaken accompanying words.
Decidedly, admittedly, needlessly, basically, undoubtedly, etc.